Love Struck 2 A SwaRon Love Journey - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awosm pdate bro but 0.5 % kuch jyada hi kam nhi hai 😆😆
kuch toh rehm khao 😆😆😆
Superb waiting next chpter😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesomeee updatee👏👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys i know i haven't received 40 likes on Part 1 but still I am updating because i won't be able to update in next 4 days so consider this as bonus and now i will update next part only after 50 likes and trust me next time i wont update earlier. Thank you very much for all the lovely comments on Part 1 and i am overwhelmed with response i have got so far for this story. So here you go with Part 2.

Part 2 -The Beginnings & Contract

God how I wish I had said "No" to swayam at list it would not have been bitter as it is now. Unintentionally Di was hurt because of me, but Swayam also had point and was correct in his stand as Di had really done something which she should not have done in hurry.

I am not saying that Di was wrong entirely but she was the one who started by rejecting to be part of Swayam's crew. Swayam had this huge mountain size ego and that was for the first time challenged by someone so she had to pay for that but I didn't know Swayam would actually use me for that.

Though Swayam was correct in his stand, I was very angry with him because in no state I can ever think to hurt my Di. But he forced me to convince her and at the end she had to get hurt somewhere due to me. So I had to make up for that.

I knew Di better then Swayam for sure. I had an idea that Di will not go into auditions at any cost that to after being offered contract without any audition previously. But here the question was how much I am honest with myself and my Di, I could not even start work where my Di was forced to quit so I decided resign from that project for Swayam.

I went to Swayam's studio and gave him the resignation letter.

"What you are resigning?" Swayam said in a puzzled tone

"Yes I am resigning" I replied

"But what is the reason? Why are you resigning? Everything is ready and at last moment you cannot just back down like that" Swayam said

"Well about reason you know it very well and about backing down if you can back down on me anytime why can't I?" I asked

"Oh now I got it, you are firing a revenge on me, right?" Swayam asked

"No I am just being honest to myself Swayam, she took care of me always so I have to be with her when she is low" I replied

"Ok look I don't know how to be good guy and all but I am honest person I never back down from my work commitments I have seen your sister's dance and she is perfect for this" Swayam said

"Oh really she hasn't auditioned yet so how do you know?" I asked

He gave me a CD that he had and I was shocked to see that it was CD that was referred to Swayam by Shaimak Davar himself who was actually choreographing and directing the Video.

This was another new development that I didn't know. Actually not only me but Di also didn't have any idea about this development for sure. Shaimak and Swayam were working together and that was just amazing platform for Di to be launched.

I could not just believe that Shaimak actually referred Di knowing he will lose his best dancer after that. But I was really lost in all the thoughts when Swayam brought me back.

"Hey Sweetheart comeback to earth, it is reality" Swayam said

"You had seen Di's performance already and she was finalized then why the hell did you scare us last night?" I asked

"Surprise Sweetheart, Surprise looks sweeter when you have no expectations of getting a thing" Swayam said

"You are a devil, psychotic monster you know" I said

"Yeah I know and who the hell wants to be good guy Sweetheart" Swayam said blinking at me.

At that moment I was having both anger and love for him. The reason for double feeling was Swayam always pretended to rude and never affected but actually he was this sweet caring friend one can ever have. I have no idea why he never showed anybody that he cared for everybody around him, if you see him working you will realize that he is always aware of everybody on set and even a small little problem on somebody doesn't go un-noticed from Swayam.

But Swayam was somebody who would never get credit for helping somebody so every time he did that for some body not only my Di but he would do it for anybody whom he will find honest, I felt huge respect for him and loved him. But the same time I hated him because he had that habit of scaring the hell out of people before he solves their issues. But doesn't matter he was a cute little monster we had in our lives and now Di was going to meet the person who made me what I was.

"Oh not again Sweetheart comeback from your dreams and I am not accepting your resignation because now you have double responsibility of designing my costumes and my leading lady's costumes" Swayam said

"Ok you psychotic B*****d" I replied hitting him on shoulders

"Ouch you have become stronger in one night only. Ok now cut the crap and call your big attitude sister to sign the contract because Mr. MD and Shaimak would be here anytime" Swayam said

I was so happy that I didn't even say thanks to Swayam. I just ran away from there and called up Di.

"Hey Di where are you?" I said

"Calm down Shani where would I be, at home only" Di said

"Ok so leave whatever you are doing and just come to the address I am sending you. There is a big surprise for you in the store" I said put the phone down just to make her more puzzled

After that I just carried on my work of checking the designs that would suit the video and theme.

Di came there but I didn't realize she had reached the studio.

And then the most unwanted thing happened. I didn't want that to happen.

The two persons who were really important in my life were standing opposite to each other trying to recognize each other.

"Great welcome Miss Attitude Rai Prakash to my studio" Swayam said first

"Its Sharon, my name is Sharon Rai Prakash" Di replied

"Oh really then you should change it to Miss Attitude don't you think so?" Swayam said

"Arghhh look I don't want to fight you. I am just here to meet my sister who wants to see me" Di said

"Oh so you mean that I am the one who is volcano here?" Swayam said

"Yes of course, don't you have manners? Don't you know how to talk to girls, junglee" Di said

And I was like what she called Swayam jungle??? God please save this studio now. The two giant ego holders were going to clash. Please gods please do something…. Please….please….please….

"Did you just call me junglee?" Swayam said

"Yes I called you jungle" Di said

"This is my place where you are standing you know" Swayam said

"So what… it doesn't change the fact that you are a manner less junglee guy?" Di said

"You know what I was right you are…you are … you are…" Swayam was not finding any appropriate words.

"I am what?" Di asked

"You are a Big Brown Swine… yes you are swine" Swayam said

Everybody there was left mouth open at that time because they were literally shouting at that time…

And now Swayam was so dead I could sense it…

"You Jerk wait" Di said and both of them started fighting and they were literally pulling each other's hairs as if two school students were fighting. That was really wired to see both of them like that.

"Oh god Jesus guys you have to work together and Aa su thai rahyu che (means what is going on here?)" Shaimak said

Shaimak you know had this habit whenever he gets excited he starts speaking in Guajarati. And trust it looked so funny to see him like that because anger and Shaimak were two opposite poles but these two had cracked his nuts out.

"Oh sir he was the one who started" Di said

"No Shaimak she started to pull my hairs" Swayam said

"What the hell… who engrossed me to do it?" Di said

"Shut up you both" Shaimak shouted like a maniac

We all started to check if we hadn't gone blank or dumb then.

"We are here for an official meet for god sake and behave like professionals please" Shaimak said

"Ok let's just start this meeting and conduct the business because I cannot tolerate her more" Swayam said

"Even I cannot tolerate him, but wait what meeting? I don't know about any meeting here" Di said

And I was like run Shanaya otherwise she would kill you. Di didn't like surprises actually so I was on a ride now.

"Well Di actually I called up you here because Shaimak is directing and Choreographing this video and he wants you there with Swayam and it was finalized way before we called up Swayam" I said in one breath to save myself

"Oh so that's why this meeting is taking place. Wow cool now let me show you Mr. Swayam Shekhawat what attitude is all about" Di said

God not again, she came there for her biggest break but she was only interested in fighting with Swayam. God please do something.

They all went in to the conference room and I was with Di.

They explained the contract to Di and they informed her about the range of Remuneration. And also informed her that the shoot will be held in Kutch Gujarat where temperature is hotter than normal.

"Ok I don't have any issues with remuneration or terms of yours" Di said

"Ok that's nice. There is only one problem that place is very hot and special vanities are not that easily available so Swayam and you will have to share the Vanity in order to change and rehearse" Mr. MD said

"What the hell, no ways. I won't share anything with this Junglee" Di said

"Fine even I don't want to share anything with you Miss Brown Swine" Swayam said

"What the hell? I am saying that I will use that Vanity" Di said

"What?? Hurrr no ways I am the star here I will use the Vanity" Swayam said

"Get A** off from here you so called star. I will use the Vanity" Di said

"What If take of my A** form here then this launch pad of yours will be destroyed do you understand" Swayam said

"As if I am dying to be launched opposite you" Di said

"Oh really then why don't you tell this to Shaimak who thinks you have enough talent to match with me" Swayam said

"Shaimak this is seriously not done I am telling you. He may be famous but that doesn't mean that he won't respect girls working with him" Di said

"Shut up you both this is the last time I am saying, Hu tamara bane ne fodi nakhis agar shooting ni vache kai pan ghotado karyo to understand I will Screw both of you if you try to disturb my shoot. Both of you will share the vanity and whoever thinks he/she is a bigger star can come to me and I will show you how a star is to be ok" Shaimak said and left

"Swayam we have given you what you wanted. Why are you creating problems with shoot now?" Mr. MD said

"Swayam if you want our association to grow strong then please shoot this video without any interruptions now please" Mr. CEO said

"Ok fine I will shoot the video and share the Vanity but this is for this time only" Swayam said

Everybody nodded and left.

So finally everything was decided and Di was the female lead of Swayam's video. But this was not going to be easy as it thinks. Shaimak cannot handle these two and their eyes fight with each other.]

"See you in shoot Junglee let's see how will you match up with me" Di said

"Ha-ha don't be so proud of yourself Miss Brown Swine you haven't see me performing yet" Swayam said

"As if I care about how you perform, whatever you do you cannot match me" Sharon said

"Ok we will see that you Swine" Swayam said and left

"Shani trust me if this was not my launch pad then I would have broken his rib and he would also be sleeping next to Raj" Sharon Di said and left

I was really not having any idea about how the shoot will go and if it would ever complete seeing both of them behave with each other. You don't have any idea how Shaimak will deal with them when the shoot starts. God everything was so complicated and yet I was happy that two of the most special persons in my life would be working together.

"Gosh they hated each other so much Masi" Tanya asked amused by the story

"Ya they could kill each other any second if one them had pistol" Shanaya said

"How did they fall in love then? Hold on I know the one who fight initially fall in love at later stage" Tanya said

"It is really unique how they fell in love. What just because one girl hates a boy that means she will fall him later no ways such things happen only in story books Tanya" Shanaya said

"Then how did Mom fell for Dad than" Tanya said

"Hold on I am not ending the story by saying you how they fell for each other" Shanaya said

"But why Masi, tell me please. I really want to know how they fell in love" Tanya said

"But you only said you want to know minute details of their love story then how can I just tell you the end directly" Shanaya said

"Let it be I don't want to know the minute details now, please just tell me how did they fall for each other" Tanya said

"No the story has to go in its flow and now it will be revealed only when it ends that how they fell for each other" Shanaya said

"That is really rude Masi" Tanya said

"I know sweetheart its rude, But you have to bear with me now. Now do one thing first keep this photographs in cupboard and then bring me some snacks after that I will tell you the story ahead" Shanaya said

"No Masi you are taking advantage of me that's not fair tell me the story ahead" Tanya said

"Everything is fair in love and war understand darling so go quickly and comeback so that we can start the story from where we have left" Shanaya said

Tanya left irritated.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOAH...this was one explosive update...nobody can portray SwaRon fights as cute as u do...awww...i m in love with this SS...

I loved shanaya here...she is sweet yet strong..and the best part is she respects her freind as well as her sister...her sister who never let her feel alone...


I loved this convo between Swayam and Shanaya

"But what is the reason? Why are you resigning? Everything is ready and at last moment you cannot just back down like that" Swayam said

"Well about reason you know it very well and about backing down if you can back down on me anytime why can't I?" I asked

"Oh now I got it, you are firing a revenge on me, right?" Swayam asked

"No I am just being honest to myself Swayam, she took care of me always so I have to be with her when she is low" I replied

The Swaron fght was just epic...junglee and brown swine...oh goshhh...really ...too much😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

"Did you just call me junglee?" Swayam said

"Yes I called you jungle" Di said

"This is my place where you are standing you know" Swayam said

"So what… it doesn't change the fact that you are a manner less junglee guy?" Di said



"You are a Big Brown Swine… yes you are swine" Swayam said

Ahaaa...when the chemistry is so awesome..sparks r bound to fly 😉😉😉😉

I loved the way u portrayed shaimak's character ...he speaks gujrati when he is angry,...acha ji😛😛😛

"Ha-ha don't be so proud of yourself Miss Brown Swine you haven't see me performing yet" Swayam said

"As if I care about how you perform, whatever you do you cannot match me" Sharon said

"Ok we will see that you Swine" Swayam said and left

"Shani trust me if this was not my launch pad then I would have broken his rib and he would also be sleeping next to Raj" Sharon Di said and left


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AMAZING PART Mr CA😳...


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Edited by deep_Tanha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Edited for all the parts! :P
Sorry for delaying this Pratik Bhai.. Was stuck up.
Love struck one was what I thoroughly enjoyed reading and when you said that you are beginning the second part of this FF, I was really amazed! I was happy that you are starting a story again even though apparently you said that you are not gonna write on SwaRon.
😕
Anyway, I liked the prologue (as I mentioned earlier) and their cute daughter is what comes as a mixture of Swayam and Sharon to me!! She's cute and surely the star of the series. 😆
The style of narrating this entire series is what makes the concept and plot all the more endearing and one has to continue reading it! It's addictive! :D
Although I hate reading long stories, I do read them when I absolutely love the concept! :D
Sharon's sis is a pleasant addition here and the story has a great flow till now!
Going to read the chapter you have recently updated! Continue soon!
Edited by tanha29 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Their first meeting and still they are fighting!!! Shanaya is such a sweet sister and friend. Can't wait to read the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Another great update
Wow super what a dhasu story first meeting me hi itni khatarnak fight
Well thanks for the pm
Do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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such a niceee update... wating 4 nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update 😊
Swaron fighting with each other from the first meet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res
unres
wow
itna jaldi update
impressed
iss baar bhi bada wala update... 😃
yipeee!!!!

amazing update tha
loved it
i really love the way you write...

and swaron first day se hi fighting...
yeh to expected hi tha...

akhir SWARON JO THEHRE...
loving this story...


jaldi update karna
cant wait
and do pm me

waiting...
Edited by spongy - 13 years ago

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