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'Dulhan wahi Jo Piya Mann Bhaaye'
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Part-44

Maan,after spending some time with dadi went to His room.he was unaware of what happened in his room.He thought that Sameera would have left to her room after he left, and he slept.

Savitriji only wanted to teach a lesson to sameera.In her eyes it was not decent to enter the room of a young boy so late.She was not that stone hearted, so after two hour he sent Nakul in rear yard on pretense of some work.Nakul went and came running back instantly-Maa ji.aapne jo almaari bahar rakhwayi thi usme se awaaz aa rahi hai.
Savitriji-Kya kah raha hai?how it is possible? abhi thodi der pahle hi to maine Maan ke kamre me usko lock kiya tha.Tala tod kar koi andar kaise jaa sakta hai? achcha ja sabko bula kar la,kahin chor to nahin ghus gaya?

Nakul went and called all up.All gethered in rear yard.Geet too came.

Ram-Maa kya baat hai.Ye cupboard yaha kya kar rahi hai.you gave it to Maan.

Savitriji-Haan.but I remembered that it was locked in my room for so many days. I thought to keep it in sun for one day taki termite na lage.Sameera ne hi kaha tha.arrey haan ! Sameera kahan hai.so rahi hai?maine to bus nakul ko kisi kaam se yahan bheja tha ussi ne bataya ki isme se awaaz aa rahi hai.Geet sameera ko bhi bula lo, aisa na ho ki ghar me ek se jyada chor ho aur wo Sameera ko akela dekh kar us par attack kar de

Nakul-I went to her room but she was not there.maine awaaz bhi di par unhone koi jawab nahin diya.

Again a knocking sound came from that cupboard.Maan told every one to move away what if that some one has some knife or gun

Ram-Open it

Savitriji-Opening just now.

Maan-dadi give me the keys I will open it, you move away.

Savitriji-Be careful Maan.

Maan unlocked it and all were shocked to see Sameera there .Maan's mouth was wide opened.Sam was coughing badly out of horror.dadi was smiling in her mind

Savitriji-Sameera what are you doing in it.Ek minute maine to ye cupboard maan ke kamre se nikalwaayi thi, aur maine hi isse lock kiya tha. iska matlab tum Maan ke kamre me thi and you hid in it after hearing My sound.tum itni raat ko wahaan kya kar rahi thi.Maan what were you doing with her.

maan-dadi what are you saying? and Sameera what was the need to hide in it? you could tell dadi that you came to my room because you wanted to talk to me?

savitriji-It's good that every servant except nakul are asleep otherwise what they would have think about maan and you?

Geet was shocked too to see her there.but kept mum.Priya was too sad seeing all this.

Savitriji-geet doesn't your sister has manners.itni raat ko koi kisi ladke ke kamre me jata hai kya.

Geet-sorry dadi.She will not do again,she signalled Sam to say sorry to dadi.

Sameera-I m so sorry dadi.I will not do this again.

Geet excused themselves she took Sam along with her to Sam's room-Are you out of your mind.kya zaroorart thi maan ke room me jaane ki. Aur agar gayi bhi to what was the need to hide in that closet.we are here to make dadi soft towards you but you are making things difficult Sam.

Sam-I know she did it intentionally.

geet-Come on Sam did she forcefully stuffed you in that cupboard?

Sam-ye dadi to mujhe zinda nahin chhodegi.Agar aaj main wahin band ho jaati to?


Geet-don't forget that you are in your room because of her only. What if agar wo nakul ko rear yard me nahin bhejti?be careful Sam.next time dhyan rakna ki galati na ho.

In her bedroom Priya was tensed-When this girl will understand. things are getting difficult day by day.geet kab tak uska saath degi?Ram I m very tensed how will we manage this issue?

ram-Sab theek ho jaayega.

In Savitriji's room Maan was watching her with suspecious eyes.he knew his devil dadi-You did it knowingly na.aapko pata tha ki Sam was in my room.right?dadi main usko samjha hi raha tha ki usko mere room me nahin aana chahiye aur aap ne kya kiya .Agar kuchh ho jata to? She is our guest.

Savitriji-Guest hai to guest ki tarah rahe.Geet to kabhi tere room me aise nahin jaati even though she has a right to do so?

Maan-dadi please.don't do it again please.

Savitriji-Ok.lekin agar wo galat karegi to main chup nahin rahoongi

Maan-chaliye ab so jaaiye.It's late .kal bhi aapke liye tiring hoga.good night.he kissed dadi and went to sleep.

Savitriji felt contended as she was happy to teach a lesson to Sam.(this scene is inspired by movie it self.In movie the old female servant loked the girl in the cupboard)

Morning

it was 10 in the morning and all were ready to go to Rahmaan's House. celebration were going to be for full day as it was Eid and silver jubili of their marriage too.Though Party was in the evening but Khuranas were a family for Rahmaan so they were going early.Eid is celebrated in the morning.They all kept extra dresses to change for the evening with them.sam and geet came out of their rooms and dadi again fumed to see sam in a modern dress.Sam was a beauty queen and Armaan and jia knew it so she was ready to present her self as the beauty queen.geet was dressed in Anarkali suit.

Savitriji-What are you wearing Sameera.Don't you have a decent treditional dress.Though I don't mind wearing these dresses but you should keep the occasion in mind while getting ready.rahmaan's family is a treditional family and you will look like stranger in this dress.go and change in some thing indian.

Sam-but I don't have any treditional dress.Can I go to buy a dress.

Priya-no Sam we don't have time for that.do one thing, borrow one dress from Geet.

Sam-What? main air Geet ki dress.No way.

Savitriji-Why not.she is your sister.sisters can share their dresses.hum to apni bahan ki dress bade hi chaav se pahante the. Geet will you mind if Sameera wears your dress.

Geet could not believe it.She thought-Sameera aur meri dress.kuchh din pahle tak to main hi iske kapde pahanti thi.How will she wear my dress now

Maan-Good idea Maa.Sam go and wear geet's dress which you like.(he thought that it was the time for Sameera to teste her own medicine)

Seeing no other option Sam said-okey.She was cursing herself for not hearing geet to pack some treditional.

both went to Geet's room.

Geet-Sam you can take what you like.some dreses are new so you can take one of them.

Sam-You must be very happy geet seeing me getting scolded by dadi again and again.

Geet-how can you talk like this sameera.I told you to keep some indian dresses but you didn't listen to me.

Sam-Shut up Geet.nowdays you are talking to much.

Sam was selecting one dress,her eyes fell on white anarkali suit which priya gifted her when they visited Sam's house first time but she exchanged with geet.

Sam-I will wear it

geet-but Sam this one is quite old. and more over you didn't like it at that time

Sam-so what?Tha to ye mere liye aur it's favorite color of Maan.so I will only wear it.

Geet-okey.Be ready and come soon.

saying this she came out.sam took that suit and went to her room to get ready.After some time she came out.She was looking pretty nice

Sam-Maan tumhen yaad hai, this was the dress which you chose for me.this is your favorite color na

geet was watching them.dadi too was seeing this.

Maan-Yes I remember sam. and you were right that time. this dress looks wonderful on Geet.Tum par utni achchi nahin lag rahi hai.

sam was now shocked hearing it how can Maan be so rude.Geet ne sabko hi apne jaal me phansa liya hai.I will show you the reality geet.Just let me get that chance.I will not leave you

Priya-Chalo we are getting late.

ram-Maa,I want to say some thing.Please don't tell anyone there about Geet.She will not feel comfortable there.every one will ask her weird questions

Savitriji,seeing Geet-Okey.I will not say.

Geet was too relieved by this and she thanked Ram for this.

All left for the Eid celebration and anniversary party.

Precap-some thing unexpected,which will leave you all shocked




Edited by rashmivaish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

me first😃

nice part

dadi wanted to teach sam a lesson
she created a situation and made the cupboard open infornt of everyone
priya tensed about sam's behaviour
dadi wanted sam to wear traditional dress and she asked to wear geet's dress.
sam wearing geet's dress and maan's answer😛
after what ever happened sam will definitely plan something 😡
eargely waiting for next part
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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awesome update...

yes I guessed right...

Daadi will not have left her there for whole day in cupboard...

Priya is tensed as if Sameera is her daughter...as a mother she can't even see her son's affection towards Geet...even Salma also realized this who is first time seeing Geet and here Maan's mother don't even have enough brains to see what her son desire...

anyway uske janne na jaane se kya hota hai...when Maan and especially Geet will gather enough courage to declare their love then no body can stop them...Maan is not doing anything because of promise he made to Geet or else he is not bounded...it is only Geet who should realize her love...

precap is very scary but interesting...hope the shock is pleasent...

waiting for next part...

pm to tum bhej hi dogi so thanx in advance...


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice nd amazing dadi acttt
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wow lovely cute update.. te way sam in te cupboard oh god naught devl dadi but she is so cute.. te way priya too getting sad seeing sam ki behaviour and te way my maan asking dadi abt it was so lovely.. te way geet warning her and sam taking it easily was so lovely.. te way sam wearing geet ki dress now u came to know wat geet went through tis much year.. te way sam ki cunning mind and my maan open statement and te way sam shock was so lovely..i love te update
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Love you dadi make sam more cry and insult her ...what you are going to do ? do good for geet and bad for sam i wish dadi do some thing which no one knows 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
Edited by monikaseth - 12 years ago
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Lovely part
Maan knew dadi ne jaan bojke kiya...sweet dadi...
Wow...maan babu told sam doesn't look good in the white suit...
Precap...will sam disclose the truth of geet
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



awesome update...

yes I guessed right...

Daadi will not have left her there for whole day in cupboard...

Priya is tensed as if Sameera is her daughter...as a mother she can't even see her son's affection towards Geet...even Salma also realized this who is first time seeing Geet and here Maan's mother don't even have enough brains to see what her son desire...

anyway uske janne na jaane se kya hota hai...when Maan and especially Geet will gather enough courage to declare their love then no body can stop them...Maan is not doing anything because of promise he made to Geet or else he is not bounded...it is only Geet who should realize her love...

precap is very scary but interesting...hope the shock is pleasent...

waiting for next part...

pm to tum bhej hi dogi so thanx in advance...




Thanks Kiran for the like and update
yes you were right.
Priya mind is working only on the fact that Maan loves Sameera since his school time and Geet is his best friend,she never thought that that there might be something else.It's not neccessary that every mother can see it without telling what her son or daughter is desiring.Here Ram is doing that role.agar Priya jaan bhi jaati hai to kya hoga Like Ram She too can feel herself helpless.But the time is coming that Priya knows whom her son loves.



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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it

i love dadi

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