Ariya::AASHIQUI-Tom & Jerry's Love Story(completed - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update arjun loving and caring for riya continue soonn
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a update
love it
so lovely
at last her parents understand her
soo passionate love
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...loved it. finally everything is fine between Riya and her parents, way to go Arjun 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such an amazing update :) loved it
love the way shree was teasing riya
ariya scenes were just so romantic ❤️😳
really loved the way arjun was talking to riya's parents
and love the way he made them understand everything :)
finally everything is fine between riya and her parents
awww riya was really so happy :)
loved riya's conversation arjun
their kiss was so hot 😳❤️
last part was so romantic
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
Love arjun caring side for riya.
He goes to her parents house and make sensen in their mind.
Finally her parents call her an talking her lovely.
Ariya kiss was hot.
And tere romance also.
Continue soon.
Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
its gud her parents realized and lovely part
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice yar loved it.. continue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late comments dr.

both the updates r really fantastic.

ariya moments r sweet, cute n romantic.

wow visal teased thm both.

finally arjun knocked some sence in riya's parents n caz of him thy realised their mistake. thts really thoughtful of him.

riya is happy to hv her parents love n care after all these yrs.

continue soon.
Edited by akanksha1371986 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arjun & Riya::AASHIQUI-Tom & Jerry's Love...

It's 6:00 am..

Arjun & Riya are both in hug of each other..

Suddenly the alarm clock of Arjun started ringing..

He open eyes irritedly..off the alarm..& close eyes again..but remember that he has meeting with commissioner..

Arjun(mutters):-what the hell..?

He is about to get up but his phone started ringing..he receive the phone irritedly..

Arjun:-haa Sam..pata he muze aaj meeting he..abhi uth hi raha hu..

Rathod:-are wahi toh tuze batane ke liye phone kiya he..ke aaj ki meeting cancel ho gayi he..

Arjun(angrily):-kya..?meeting cancel hi karni thi toh rakhi kyo thi..?

Rathod(who also irrited & angry):-tu toh aise bol raha he jaise meine hi meeting cancel ki he..

Arjun:-shit yaar..

Rathod:-accha ab tu bhi so ja aur muze bhi thodi der sone de..

He cut the phone..

Arjun try to sleep again..but sleep has gone far away from him..

Arjun look to Riya she has placed her head on his shoulder..& holding him to his bare chest..

He kiss her forehead..

Arjun(lovely voice):-Riya..uto na..

Riya:-umhh..

Arjun:-wifey utho na..

Riya:-aap uth jao aapko meeting me jana he..

Arjun:-are meeting cancel ho gayi he..

Riya(she pull blancket over her):-toh so jao aur muze bhi sone do..

Arjun(lovely):-muze nind nahi aa rahi wifey..

Riya(she is now get irritated..as he is disturbing her sleep):-toh mein kya karu..?

She move & turn to opposite side..now her bare back is facing him..

Arjun:-accha wifey..itani nind aa rahi he..abhi tumhari nind uda deta hu..

He come closer to her..hug her from back..put his one hand on her waist..pull her closer to him..& start kissing her back..passiontely..

There no place left on her back where he has not kissed..

All Riya's sleep vanishes..

She turn to face him..

Riya(angrily):-what is this..?aapko nind nahi aa rahi toh aap muze bhi sone nahi denge..?raat bhar bhi sone nahi diya..aur ab firse...

Arjun(pretended that he get angry):-ok..thik he..so jao tum..

He turn his back to her..

Riya(now feels guilty):-ok..I am sorry..

Arjun(rudely):-its ok..now go to sleep..& let me also sleep..

Riya hug him from behind..kiss his back litile bit..

Riya:-sorry bola na meine..

Arjun:-ha..toh thik he na..tumhe nind aa rahi he na..toh so jao..

Riya:-pehale muze aise tarike se jaga diya..aur ab muze sone ko bol rahe he..?ab muze nind nahi aa rahi..

Arjun:-toh mein kya karu..?muze toh nind aa rahi he..

Riya:-aise kaise nind aa rahi he..?turn to me na..look to me..(she try to turn him..but he wont..& pretented that he sleep)

Riya(nerviously):-ok..then..

She broke off her hug to him..he feels her soft hands which are covering him now going away..he suddenly turned..& get over her body..

Arjun starts kissing her lips..they passionately kissed each other..

They parted away..both are breathing heavily..

Arjun:-kya keh rahi thi tum wifey..ke meine tumhe raat bhar sone nahi diya..(he started kissing her neck..)ya fir tumahri wajah se mein raat bhar so nahi paya..

She blush..

Riya:-chodiye..

Arjun:-kyo.abhi toh muze apne pas bula rahi thi..?

He started kissing her chest..

Arjun:-ab nahi choduga..

Riya(she bit her lower lip):-arjun sir..

Arjun:-sir..bulaya na tumne muze..fir ab toh bilcul bhi nahi choduga..

He put both his palm on her both palm..his finger clunched in her fingers..her finger also clunched in his..

Riya(breathing heavily):-Arjun..

Arjun:-Riya..plz..let me..

Riya:-Arjun..

Arjun(breathing heavily):-don't worry..raat ki tarah jayda parshan nahi karunga..

Its' 9:30 am..

Arjun is ready to go office..

arjun:-chalo..wifey..jaldi karo..

Riya:-oh..god..ek toh aapke wajah se der ho gayi he..aur upar se muze hi jaldi karne ko bol rahe ho..

Arjun:-excuse me..meri wajah se der ho gayi se tumhara kya matlab he..

Riya:-agar aapne subah..jane do..

Arjun(he pull her to him):-subah meine kya ?

Riya(blush):-kuch nahi..

Arjun:-wifey..kyo na Vishal ka idea use kare..?chalo na ham honeymoon pe chalate he..

Riya:-what(she blush)

Arjun(pulling her more closer to him):-hm..chalte he na..waha koi disturbance nahi hoga hame..nahi office..na meeting..aur nahi subah jaldi utane ka tension..

Riya(blush):-chaliye..ham late ho rahe he..

Arjun:-ha wahi toh mein keh raha hu..ke ham already kitane late ho chuke he honeymoon ke liye..toh fir mein aaj hi..

Riya:-mein office ke bare me baat kar rahi hu..

Arjun:-office..?oh..par pehale ye toh bata do ke ham honeymoon pe..

Riya(blushing):-ha baba..thik he..jayege..

Arjun:-gr8..toh mein shimla ke tickits book karwata hu..

Riya:-ek minute..Shimala?

Arjun:-yes..shimala..

Riya:-no..ham Kashmir jayege..

Arjun:-no my dear wifey..ham shimala jayege..

Riya:-no..no..plz..ham Kashmir jayege..

Arjun:-Riya..hame honeymoon pe jana he..waha terrorist se ladane nahi..

Riya:-toh..mein bhi toh wahi keh rahi hu..Kashmir me honeymoon ke liye jayege..

Arjun:-no way..shimala..its beautiful..

Riya:-no..kashmir na..its such a romantic place..

Arjun:-romance to ham shimala me bhi kar sakhate he..

Riya(pushing him..& breaking hug):-no way..agar ham honeymoon pe jayege toh Kashmir..warna muze nahi jana..

Arjun(angrily):-dekho..ham Shimala hi jayege & its final..mein abhi tickits book karawa raha hu..

Riya(angrily):-mein nahi aa rahi..apko jana he toh jao..

Arjun(angrily):-this is too much..
Riya:-are haa..bhul hi gayi thi honeymoon pe aap akele kaise jaoge na..now just cancel shimala..& book for Kashmir..

Arjun:-accha yaad dilaya..ke mein akele toh nahi ja sakta..aur tum mere sath Shimala aane ko tayar nahi lekin muze toh shimala hi jana he..toh soch raha hu ke kisi girlfriend se puch lu..

Riya(worrily):-aapki GF bhi he..aapne bataya nahi..

Arjun:-hm..tumne pucha hi nahi..well aur woh bhi aisi he ke mein jaha le jau waha jane ko tayar he..

Riya:-aapne zoot bola..aapne kaha ke aap sirf muzse pyar karte he..

He look her..pull her to him..

Arjun:-tumhe sach me aisa laga ke meri koi GF he..?

Riya:-aapne kaha na..

Arjun:-mein toh bas tumhe chidane ke liye keh raha tha..

Riya:-sach me..?

Arjun:-bilcul..

Riya:-you never leave me na..?

Arjun:-never..par ek shart pe..?

Riya:-shart..?

Arjun:-hmm..ham honeymoon ke liye Shimala hi jayege..bolo manjoor he..?

Riya nodded sadly..

Arjun:-aur shimala ke baad ham Kashmir jayege..

Riya(happily):-really..?

Arjun:-ofcourse..meri wifey ke liye kya mein itana bhi nahi kar sakta..

She hug him..he also hug her back..

After one year:-

Everybody from ETF & Sonali(with her son-soham) waiting to outside room of Riya..Arjun is worrily walking here & there..

Shree(whisper):-Chotu..yaar Arjun sir aur Riya ek dusare se kitana pyar karte he na..dekh na Riya ko sirf chakker kya aa gaye woh kitane pareshan ho rahe he..

Chotu:-ha woh toh he..hamare Arjun sir aur Riya bilcul Tom & Jerry ki tarah he..ek dusare se ladte he..par ek dusare se ek pal bhi alag nahi rah sakte..

Doctor comes from inside..

Arjun:-what happened doctor..?Riya thik he na..?usse kya hua he..?

Doctor:-calm down mr.Arjun..nothing to worry..actually it's a good news..she is pregent..& you are going to be father..

Arjun's face glow with his smile..

Doctor:-ye kuch medicines he jo unhe regularly leni he..ok..

Doctor leaves..

All run to congratulate him..Sameer hug him..sonali & all others congratulate him..

Arjun:-mein abhi aata hu..

Sameer:-par tum kaha ja rahe ho..

Arjun leaves hurrily..

All others go to congratulate her..

Sameer hug her..

Rathod:-oh..Riya..congratulation..lekin ab tumhe apna bahot khayal rakhna hoga..

She smile..

Sonali:-wow..cant belive..pata nahi Riya tumhe ladka hoga ya ladki par job hi ho..mein chahati hu woh aur soham dono bhi ..Arjun aur Sam ki tarah best friends bane..

Riya:-mein bhi yahi chahti hu..

Shree(mutters in Riya's ear):-bas woh apne dad aur mama jaisa khadoos na bane..bilcul teri tarah ho..

She give him naughty smile..

After sometime they all leave..& Riya is waiting for Arjun..

Arjun comes after sometime..when she was sleeping..

He kissed her forhead..she open the eyes..

Riya:-kaha the aap..?

Arjun:-Riya..are tumne muze itana accha suprized diya he..toh muze bhi kuch dena padega na..

Riya:-kya..?aap mere liye gift laye ho..

Arjun:-hmm..(he remove his shirt..near his heart he has tattooed "Riya")

Riya:-Arjun..ye kya..?

Arjun:-are bas tumhra naam.. jo hamesh mere dil me rehata he..

Riya(she hug him tightly):-bahot dard hua hoga na..

He make her face to him..& see tears in her eyes..

Arjun:-utana nahi jitana ke ab ho raha he tumhare aasu dekhkar..

Riya:-ye toh khushi ke aasu he..

He smile..& wipe her tears..she also smiles..

Arjun:-accha..dekho meine toh naam bhi soch liya he hamre bacche ka..

Riya:-kya..?

Arjun:-hmm..dekho..ladka ho ya ladki ham usaka naam "R" se suru hoga..

Riya:-nahi..usaka naam "A" se suru hoga..

Arjun:-are nahi.."R" for Riya ke naam se..

Riya:-no..no..no.."A" for Arjun ke naam se..

Arjun:-nahi ddekho..

(ohh..god.. you know our Tom & Jerry..they keep fighting..)

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey guys.. thank you for reading my FF..I am thinking to end this FF..& perhaps next update will be last part of this FF..

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