MG SS-Aashiqui, pt-11/pg-148/ June 4 +fhmmt update - Page 37

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

wow! how easily maan handled the entire situation..
ek engagement hone ke baja 2 engagement!!
and he also took his love with him!!
this tym is enough for him to make her fall in love..
wow!! rain bhi!!
seems like nature itself started to help maaneet!!



thanks a lot remu...
yup, he'll surely make her fall in love with him...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka

Superb update and thanks dear confusion clear krne ke liye



it's my pleasure dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ lil.mizz.smexii- thanks dear..

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@nahtani88-thanks dear...

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@Ru_21-thanks dear...

@khwaishfan-thanks dear, glad that ur confusion has been cleared...
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Posted: 12 years ago
@nihatri- ha ha ha, nice choice... but too hot for the situation...

@goldenmoon-thanks a lot dear... oops why like is not working..

@-Mishu--thanks a lot dear..

@.bloom.-thanks a lot dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Updating
koi hai yaha?
kisi ko chahiye update?

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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting..
net is in icu...thats y like is not working... :(
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Posted: 12 years ago




@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6- thanks a lot for ur postive response...,,reply at page-66

@dazzlingdivz-worry not... tere ko bhi koi aisa mil jayega...


I know some of you wants me to use Tum hi ho song from aashiqui 2, , I'll use that, actually all the songs of aashiqui 2 but now…. When the perfect situation will come then…… and now I didn't use that song because I wanted to convey geet's feelings also in that song and now maan's feelings for her not that strong, yeah he loves her but those deep feelings still yet to enter in his heart…….

I am very sad….. where my all readers went??? Not liking and not commenting…… Is this story that bad? And why this Like button not working?? Are you happy that I am getting little faster???




Aashiqui - A Musical Journey of Love

Part-6



maan at once called dadi and asked them where are they? Because they leaved from there little early from them….. dadi told them that in one hour they will reach to delhi……….. maan told them they'll be late as it's raining…. So don't worry……. And then disconnected…….



He at once put his phone inside the car, it's raining and phone can be destroy in rain na... Geet is standing little far from him feeling the rain on her face, on her finger tips, , raising her arms in air and rubbing the water of rain on her finger tips... Maan is smiling at her childishness , , the glow on her face, the drops on her face just made him feel jealous from those rain drops...

why those drops are feeling her skin not his lips... he groaned inwardly keeping his desires at the corner of his heart and just looking at her, actually lost in her beauty leaning on the bonnet of the car...



Where geet was just enjoying, jumping in rainy water removing her sandals, the road was deserted, , the flow of rain second by second increasing pouring from the sky drenching them fully………



That was also the rainy night like today when they met for the first time…. When she was searching her ring in the monsoon night sitting in the park and in that muddy grass…… but nothing happened… she didn't get her ring……. He lost in her leaning against his car bonnet while watching her enjoying fully………



*****Past*****



"tomorrow morning tell everything to him "... she nodded... "tomorrow evening at 5... same place... i want to know everything what all will happen..." he said to her and she smiled at him... it was her first smile that she gave to him... and then she disappeared in the darkness of night...



Maan watched her until she lost in the darkness….. the road seems so silent only sound of rain, , and her street, that was really seems a haunted street though there was a street lamp and that was working but at the end of the street, there was darkness and she lost there somewhere may be her house situated at the end of the street…… he sighed and sat in his car and drove to his mansion…….



Till he didn't reach home, he was lost somewhere, he didn't know may be thinking about her…….. will she tell to everything to her boyfriend? What will happen? he was tensed more than her….. like it was his exam not hers….. but she lost her ring not maan…… she has to pay for that not maan….. then why he was so worried…..?



It was late when she was standing in her room, , she was living as a PG and her landlord were good in the nature….. but late night out of the house, they didn't allow, , and she was scolded by them for coming late, though it was not that late but still heavily raining outside , no light, if something happen to her then who will be responsible? And she is girl top of that…… they have to manage everything……



Today for the first time, my landlord aunty scold me but later she showed concern too….. she is also not wrong, she was worried for me and my cell was also not working…….. she told me to change the clothes and she'll prepare ginger tea for me….. I apologized and went inside my room….. after around 10 minutes, she gave me my favorite ginger tea, , I took the cup and stood by the window looking outside……



It was still raining , , I sipped tea, it was amazing, my whole tiredness went away after sipping that tea….. aunty knows that how I like the tea….. I was watching outside and feeling the cool na….. icy breeze that gave chills to my spines……. Oops, , I felt hail that touched my face….. I took that and put in my tea….. I laughed and sipped…… I know that I should be sad for not finding the ring but seems that man did some magic that I am less worried now….. I'll try to tell everything to Rahul for sure……… at least I'll try……… I finished my tea and then grabbed my diary , sat beside of window pane…………. I opened the page, umm today's date…. Yeah……



16th December 2012

Today was the 3rd day that I went in that park for searching my ring but nothing got in my hand….. I searched that ring with all the sincerity but seems luck was not with me…… I know that I love rahul and he'll understand but what if he didn't….. and if he asked the money then…… babaji, , kuch karna please……..

Today I met with a man, , umm I don't know his name but he helped me….. when he sat there beside of me on the bench, I know that I was annoyed and talked to him rudely but he was not less than….. he also talked to me rudely but geet u started first na…. ok… sorry…… I don't know why his words touched me so much and why he had the confidence that I'll get my ring? Why he pressurize me so much to tell everything to Rahul? But jo bhi he was a nice man…..



he helped me, he drop me till me my home….. he said to me that he wants to know everything what will happen when I'll tell everything to Rahul………….. and his words, , the deep meaning…… what was that.????...ummm…….yeah…………"pyaar kisi anjuthi(ring) mein nahi….. pyaar to aankho mein chamakta hai….."…………. sach hi to kaha………



she closed the diary and went to sleep……..



*****Past Ends*****

He felt someone is pulling him by his arm…… he come out from his thought, saw geet was trying to drag him from the car but she was not able….. he smiled at her efforts and stand up, , he saw naughtiness in her eyes, she wants to play in the rain with me and how can he deny that…..

He held her hand and twirl her round in rain and started singing the song…..



Ek Nazar Mein Bhi Pyaar Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai… (2)

Do Baaton Mein Bhi Ikraar Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai




She looked at him for understanding the meaning of his words….. did he really? She shrug off and held his hand jumping like dancing……. And maan smiled at her….. first time he is seeing her like this……

Sama Rangeen Sa Hone Lagta Hai

Jahaan Haseen Sa Lagne Lagta Hai

Koyi Dil Pe Chhaa Jaaye To Aisa Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai



Maan left her hand and then placed it on his heart and geet placed her ear above his hand i.e; placed on his heart,,,,,,,,,,, she was in her jovial mood, , doing fun a lot………



Ek Nazar Mein Bhi Pyaar Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai

Do Baaton Mein Bhi Ikraar Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai



Chamakte Hain Chehre, Chamakti Hai Duniya

Behekti Hai Saansein Mere Liye




Maan and Geet both started the dance like ball room dance and little jumping in rain water and maan was just blown away with her simplicity , innocence , thinking that how can anyone looks so innocent…..




Nazar Se Nazar Jo Mila Loon Agar

Phirakti Hai Dhadkan Bhi Mere Liye

Nasha Kuch Nigahon Mein Bhi Aisa Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai




Maan held her by her arm and pulled her towards himself, she collided with his chest leaning on his body completely like submitting herself in him…….



He cupped her face in his palms, removing the wet strands from her cheeks which were came on her face when he pulled her……




their eyes met with each other like speaking volumes, like talking to each other like she was asking to him why he is doing all this?



Ek Nazar Mein Bhi Pyaar Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai

Do Baaton Mein Bhi Ikraar Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai



Hawa Pe Jahan Dekhne Ko Chale Hain

Bani Badalon Se Hai Apni Zameen

Jo Udne Lage Aasmaan Tak Hai Jaana


Na Khushiyon Mein Apni Hai Koyi Kami

Pasand Kuch Hawaon Ka Bhi Aisa Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai




Just then they felt a strong gush of air which sent chills in their bodies, , heavy air started blowing and then her dupatta flew away in the air leaving her shocked…… Man ran behind her dupatta for catching it, Geet ran behind maan…………..



Ek Nazar Mein Bhi Pyaar Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai

Do Baaton Mein Bhi Ikraar Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai

Sama Rangeen Sa Hone Lagta Hai

Jahaan Haseen Sa Lagne Lagta Hai

Koyi Dil Pe Chhaa Jaaye To Aisa Hota Hai, Maine Suna Hai




And then….. she slipped because of the muddy & slippy road, she tried to grab maan's shoulder but fortunately or unfortunately she pushed him ahead and fell down on him, both landed on the road cuddling in each other arms……….






so did you like the update???
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and please pass this ss to others also... i am writing after quite a long time so didn't get much appreciation then i'll demotivate...
love ya
Neha



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

waiting..

net is in icu...thats y like is not working... :(



hmm because of that, likes are not increasing... 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
can anyone send pms behalf of me???
if yes then pls do let me know...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update Neha 😉
Lovely choice of Song 😳
superb one 👏
Continue Soon 😊

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