THE LOCKET (4) - Page 93

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I = Ek number ki kameeni for not updating this comment earlier. I am so sorry, Avi.

Can I interest you in a 'forgive me' rishwat? It's not HP wala Maan, I know, but not too shabby either 😉

Rishwat? You don't need to do that. I know you have a tough schedule. My apologies for not responding sooner. I did not realize the comment was updated.. Sowie...😊

Lovely picture! The Gorky pictures are amazing and even the expressions on Abhinav are amazing.
I can die peacefully now, knowing I have been immortalised to perfection. You already know how much I loved this part but haaye... thank you, Avi ji! It's funny that Palin said that Zarin Aman is nothing like me because after my sister heard about the character, she said to congratulate you on the spot on portrayal 😆 Marrein aap ke dushman... 😊 I am so glad it turned out the way you liked it... It was my pleasure having you in my story and keeping you in my life with my work...

Despite my love for the Dev-Zarin equation (everything has already been said about them but still, I have to commend you on the friendship and fun between the two), I-Star was still the star of the chapter for me. She had me grinning like mad with the zingers thrown at Zarin - love that she's just as conscious of fashion and style as the movie star is - and also when she stood between Bambi and the big, bad world. Her reluctance made me laugh because I have met a few Bambis myself and well... sometimes it gets infuriating to be around someone so innocent and sweet. But Tara is sweet poison... a (secretly) big heart and a razor tongue in one.

And I do love Dadima, so sharp and knowing. Loved her promise with Dev, as well as her orders for the duo. It'll be nice to see Dev busting his ass as much as Naintara. I have a feeling he'll rise to the occasion and a small, petty part of me that wants Tara to 'win' is unhappy 😆

Thank you for the update, Avi.

Originally posted by: glassdoor

Hi Avi !

Guess what I typed something long and nice and hit the back button by mistake .
So annoying when that happens.

Read through chapters 11 and 12. Following would be the summary:

You write very well when it comes to conveying characters thoughts and feelings. 👏.
I think Geet made the right decision about Darji. Nothing in life can be more important than our dear ones health.

Maan - I like this man of few words. He is so fiercely guarded and private about his emotions probably because he fears being hurt. Hence his talk of ego and love. Somewhere I feel he is afraid of love ! Geet's story opening up to him was a real blessing. He can now open up to her about his feelings. He will not take things she does at face value as he had been doing before.

All in all great updates!

Rest when I get to them...

Originally posted by: muskanp

Darji

U have portrayed him so different here
A man at that age struggling to bring up t little girl
Combing her hair that was so adorable to even imagine

Brilliant could feel t pain in my Heart seeing him like that not well
He seems to be such an integral part of geet
Like she opens up only to him

Originally posted by: muskanp

That was so intense
He will follow her in a hope they will walk together some day
That felt in.. T young boys feigns towards his love
Oh she was so so hurt to see his angered eyes
& add to it t misery of his refusal to her healing

Indeed destiny!!