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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you ... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samiha_taarey

again u did it... great update yar...ye salim anarkali ka thought tumhari dimag me aya kaha se yar!!!!! ...๐Ÿคฃ ye topic uthtehi harbar mai pagalo ki tarah hasne lagti hu... do update soon yar really excited to know Rey ka plan kam karega ya nehi...


hehe.. thank you so much dear... ๐Ÿ˜† i am glad u liked it.. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_angel09

nice update dear...๐Ÿ˜Š


thanks dear... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

chap 18:


it was amazingg...
taarey part was too cutee <3
and rey ka plan...waah! hehehe =D
and salim and anarkali part jus craks me up...LOL =D

and excited for the next part of the plan...



awww thank you so much yaar sneha... ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 19

Next day at shikhawat house

taayam's papa,shayli n ansh were chit chatting in hall.. taayam come from their room..

swayam: papa hum colg jaa rahe hai..

papa: okay beta..

ansh: uncle hum bhi jaayenge..

papa: ok beta.. jaao tum.. main bhi niklta hoon office jaana hai.. bye bachcho..

taayam: bye papa..

shayli n ansh: bye uncle..

(papa goes from there)

Ansh: toh kya hum chale??

taani murmurs to herself: kyun waha koi khana bat raha hai kya jo bhukon ki tarah har roj aate ho..

ansh(with doubtful expression): tumne kuch kaha taani??

Taani(while continuously blinking her eyes): maine?? Haa woh ji main keh rahi thi.. chaliye naa.. plss.. aap aayenge toh dil ko sukun milega..

Ansh(All confused): su wat??

Swayam: she means she will be happy if u come wid us..

Shayli(with confused look): par usne dil kaha na..

Swayam(with cute smile): ji aap mere dil ki taraf dekhiye ji.. iss dil mein sirf aap hi ke liye jagah rakhi hui hai..

Shayli(annoyed): okay.. so chale colg??

Taayam(with cute smile): pehle aap dono ji..

Ansh(irritated): dude tum dono alag behave kar rahe ho..

Taani(again continuously blinking her eyes): ab aisehi hoga hone waale praan naath..

Ansh(again with confused expressions): praan wat??

Swayam: she means husband'

Ansh: okay' chalo pls..

At colg

In canteen

Gang were doing their masti when taayam n shayli, ansh enter

Vicky sees them..

Vicky: hey guys aao na yaha..

(all four go near gang..)

Rey to shayli: hey bebs how r u??

Shayli (little bit confused): hey rey I am good..

(they four settle down..)

Nil: hey guys aaj movie dekhne ka man ho raha hai chalo na chalte hai..

Taani: no way.. I am not going wid him (points her index finger to rey)

Rey: as if I am dying to go wid you.. ohh plss.. bechara ansh pata nahi iska kya hoga..

Taani: excuse me.. woh tum hi the jo isse kya haa.. kutta, kamina aur aur haayee main toh bol bhi nahi sakti itni gandi gandi gaaliya dete the..

Rey: haa toh woh mujhe lagta tha tab kamina. . (looks at ansh) sorry haa dude.. mind mat karna..

(again to taani) par tum tum kya kam galiya deti thi use haa??

Taani: haaa toh mujhe lagta tha woh ladkiyon ko bhuke sheronki tarah dekhne wala.. bt ab woh mere hone wale praan nath hai na.. haaa jab bhi iska muh dekhti thi toh idhar ka muh udhar karne ka man hota tha.. par ab woh mere hone wale praan nath hai.. haa jab bhi inka naam sunti thi toh lagta tha ke duniya ke sare ansh naam ke ladkonko goli se udadu.. par ab woh mere hone wale praan nath hai.. aur ab main inhe kahi jaane nahi dungi.. mujhe bohot pasand hai ab yeh.. kyun ke yeh mere

All(except taashareyam n shayli n ansh): hone wale praan naath hai'

Rinni: par praan toh villain tha na purane movies mein??

Simmi: shut up rinni..

Ansh(all confused): tum meri tarif kar rahi thi ya mujhe galiya de rahi thi taani??

Taani: haayyyeee meri majal ke main aapko galiya doon ji??? Bilkul nahi.. main toh aapse bohot saara pyaar karti hoon.. ji aapko garmi lag rahi hai??? Aap ke liye juice laau???

Sharon: taani u r too much.. tum ek ladke ke liye itna karogi??? Oh pls' main toh kuch na karu..

Taani: kyun ke aap ansh ke sath nahi ho na isiliye.. par agar aap iske sath hote toh aap bhi inke liye yeh sab karte..

Sharon: give me a break' I mean seriously tumhe lagta hai yeh ladka mere level ka hai??? Lol.. pls koi samjhao taani ko.. main apne frnds bhi bohot sochne ke baad deicide karti hoon.. n btw koi bhi aira gaira Sharon rai prakash ko achcha nahi lagta..

Swayam: yeah right isiliye hum eksath nahi hai ab kyun ke main bhi kisi bhi airi gairi ko apne sath nahi rakhta.. shayli kitni achchi hai.. haayyeee.. main toh pagal ho raha hoon iske pyaar mein..

Sharon looking at shayli: I pity you..

Swayam: achcha pehle toh chudail lagti thi yeh tumhe.. aaj daya kaise aa rahi hai??

Sharon: tum bhi toh bhootni kehte the na..

Swayam: woh toh pehle.. ab I love her..

Shayli: umm.. hum abhi aaye.. bhai jara ek min aana'

Ansh: yeah..

(they go from there..)

Here gang start laughing..

Neha: kya galiya di hai yaar tumne..

Taani: deni toh thi hi.. unhe bhi toh pata chale kitne kamine hai woh..

Rey: aur kitne jyada kamine hai hum.. (winks at taani..)

Swayam: haa yaar anarkali.. kya plan banaya hai tune.. tu nahi hoti toh mera kya hota..

Rey: dude tu mujhe irritate karna kab band karega??

Swayam: jab tujhe deewar mein chunvaya jayega..

Rey: toh thik hai main taani ko leke deewar mein jaata hoon thik hai? Par meri ek shart hai pls deewar tere bedroom ki ho.. saale sone nahi dunga tujhe..

Swayam: chup oyyeee.. pehle toh tujhe taani ke sath deewar mein jaane dunga nahi main aur gaya na toh taani ko nikalke uss ansh ko andar tere sath bhej dunga..

Rey takes swayam's hand in his n says: pls swayam ek baar main tujhe jhel sakta hoon bt ansh ko nahi.. tuhi mera salim hai yaar.. main teri anarkali..

All girls: ewww'.

Boys: dostana part 2 hath chodo..

Rey leaves swayam's hand..

Here wid ansh n shayli

Shayli: ewww bhai.. I am not liking it.. mujhe ek aisa ladka chahiye tha jo mujhe protect kare bt yaha toh yeh bilkul mushy ho raha hai..

Ansh: I know mujhe bhi irritate ho raha hai.. yeh yeh praan n all.. ughh.. mujhe aise sab pasand nahi hai..

Btw chalo warna yaha par aajayenge yeh log..

(they come back)

Taani: hey praan naath kaha chale gaye the aap.. maine kitna miss kiya aapko.. shadi ke baad ek sec akela nahi chodungi aapko..

Ansh: wat??

Taani: ji bilkul.. aap ki puja karungi kyun ke pati toh parmeshwar hota hai na..

Ansh(annoyed): whatever.. main abhi aaya thoda ghum ke..

N he goes..

Sharon: main bhi abhi aayi..

N she also goes..

Swayam: hey shayli.. tum mujhe dekho na yaha waha kyun dekh rahi ho?? Tumhe pata hai main na shadi ke baad tumhe ghar se bahar bhi nahi nikalne dunga.. tumhe kisi ki nazar na lage isiliye.. tum itni beautiful jo ho..

Shayli (all scared of him) : woh main abhi bhai ko bulake lati hoon.. n she goes from there..

Rey: chalo guys.. plan ka part 2.. I am going.. n he also goes..

Taani: bhai hum bhi chalte hai' taayam also go from there..

Here ansh was walking back n forth on terrace.. Sharon comes there..

Sharon: dude taani is looking for you..

Ansh stops n looks at her..

Ansh: tum yaha?

Sharon: yup.. main bore ho rahi thi so yaha aayi aur dekha tum ho..

Ansh: ohhh so tum neeche kya keh rahi thi canteen mein??

(he takes one step forward..)

Sharon: kya keh rahi thi?

Ansh starts walking towards her.. bt she stays firm on her position'

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i know i know i am late.. so sorry guys... kaan pakadke sorry... now tell me how was my update? sorry for spelling and grammatical mistakes.. i am too lazy to correct it..

Edited by kady_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum update kady...m worried 4 sharon..wat us ansh goin 2 do...n muje ansh naam asha lagta hai bcoz its a part f reyansh...bt yaha toh ansh neg hai...kash koi aur naam hota ansh ka yeh ff mei...bt its k...as long taarey r 2gedr n rey is happy..nuthin else in d world matters 2 me :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh so that was their plan, to be sugary sweet. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Taani toh Ansh ko malmal ke kapde mein joothe dalkar maar rahi thi. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Awesome update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
again a hilarious update... Rey: dude tu mujhe irritate karna kab band
karega??
Swayam: jab tujhe deewar mein chunvaya
jayega..
Rey: toh thik hai main taani ko leke deewar
mein jaata hoon thik hai? Par meri ek shart
hai pls deewar tere bedroom ki ho.. saale
sone nahi dunga tujhe..
Swayam: chup oyyeee.. pehle toh tujhe
taani ke sath deewar mein jaane dunga
nahi main aur gaya na toh taani ko nikalke
uss ansh ko andar tere sath bhej dunga..
Rey takes swayam's hand in his n says: pls
swayam ek baar main tujhe jhel sakta hoon
bt ansh ko nahi.. tuhi mera salim hai yaar..
main teri anarkali..๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ just can't stop laughing in tht part... awsome update yar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was super dear
Update soon this time plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
please update soon and pm me

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