Khawaish...pyaar ki :(- thread 2 added - Page 3

Originally posted by: Parikhurana

GEET:::Andekhi anjani kia ye MOHABAT h...😳
Chupky sa milty dilon ki ye ahat h...😳
MAAN::q pyar k sb dewanyyy...😲
GEET::jo kho gaya wo he janyyy...😛
MAAN::batain kitabon ki..😡
ratain hn khabon ki...
GEET::hr khab iqrar h..⭐️
MAAN::kaisa ye pyar hyyy...👏
waiting waiting waiting n congrates 4 new story 😊

wow its interesting.ud soon.payar or saza.main ff writer nehi hoon.so could nt suggest so gud

Very Interestg. Eagerly waitg for d story to progress 😃

very nice concept.maan doesnt think luv is d most imp thing while 4 geet its d most valuable thing.maan i so short tempered.poor geet.who is the guy who got fired by maan?

nyc stsrt... n nyc concept...
lets c geet ka pyaar jeet ta hai ki maan ki zidd

nice start
loved part i
continue soon

Originally posted by: geetsmile

wow sounding nyc dii

waiting for it

n in title m kaacha heheh

khawaish ...Pyaar ki... :(

Part 2

in this story past and present continue parallely...i hope u no confusion happened

He: welcome Mr. Khurana

Maan : hello Mr. Sharma

Sharma: meet my Co- Partner Mr. Dev Mehra

Maan (whisper) :- Dev

Maan : hello Dev

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Maan : geet I am coming back...

Mein aaj hi hmari shaadi ki baat karunga tumhare papa se

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Driver : sir, yha toh kissi ki shaadi hai

He looks the board where writes "GEET WEDS DEV"...

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Sb kuch jhoot tha tumhare liye...

Phle mujhe khudse pyaar krne ke liye majboor kr diya

Jb tumhari adaat ho gyi...

To mujhe chodke kissi aur se shaadi kr li...

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Maan : adi mujhe dev ke baare mein saari information chaiye

Adi : yes sir

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Maan : geet kissi aur se shaadi kaise kr sakti hai

Jaroor koi wajh hongi...

Usne kaha tha mujhse

"Maan I love you...

Maan I don't know how to live without you"

Aur aaj wo kissi aur se...

Mein kal hi geet se milunga...

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Geet : rimzim ab koi masti nhi

Chup chap yha baitho

Bhut khel ho gya

Ab pdai kro

Mohan : kya ho rha hai

Rimzim : bappu dekho na

Mujhe khelna hai

Geet : ab pdhai krni hai

Mohan : bachi hai

Khelne do na

Geet : bilkul nhi

Mohan : meri baat to suno

Geet : kha na

Rimzim : bappu

Geet : no bapu...

Chup chap pdo

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next part part 3 on page 16

Originally posted by: geetsmile

waiting