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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part yar feeling very crying how much they suffer yar still suffreing ab to sb tick kar do dear cant see them like that
thanks for update and pm dear waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 32

He stood watching her talking to herself. A tear slips from the corner of his eyes. Did he ever meant it.. No, never as he never blamed her for wat she did. She was wrong but she just took the opportunity of the situation as he was the main culprit. He looked at her again and slowly walked inside the room. He bends down on his knees to level himself as her.

Maan: M sorry Sameera. I never wanted this for you.. I never wanted to harm you.

Sameera looked at him and moved away fearing him. Maan closed his eyes as these was the case since she was here.But see the fate.. his own Mishti was in this condition due to this Sameera and here now she is here.. same way or say more horrible lying in the most dark corner of the Mental Asylum. (not the same one as geet).

Maan: But I had to punish you.. you dared to kill my Mishti and our Baby.. uski tho sazza milni hi thi na.. How could you.. tumari himmat kaisi hui thi..and dekho.. you are the same as my Mishti was… (Maan laughs) Do you know… My Mishti is all good now.. her Mehar got her Mumma back.. but how can I get my Mishti back….. main layak hi nahi hoon uske..

He looked at her with anger and for a second he lost all his control and pulled her holding her chin. Sameera feared and tried to hit him with whatever she could, but Maan just held her tighter.

Maan: you bitch.. tumari wajah se meri beti .. she lived without her mom.. just coz of you..i did not know where my wife was.. meri beti ne kya bhigada tha tera… how dare you try to kill my Mishti.. You wanted me na.. than why.. why my mishti. I will kill you.. maar dunga main tujhe…

Sameera flinched with pain and she pushed Maan with all her power hitting him to the bed rim hurting him. He looked at her and she turned violent. She looked around and started to hit him with water she had. Throwing her things, her plate glass and everything on him making his head bleed. He just kept staring at her until and unless the ward boys came and controlled Sameera.

Geet watched her baby troubling Pari. Pari was trying hard to feed her the soup. She stood watching her baby while her hand rested on her stomach. Her eyes told the story of her heart the pain, the love and the longing she had for her baby. Her legs took slow steps towards her bed where Pari was making her to have the soup while she told her a story. Her legs froze the moment Mehar's eyes rested on her Mumma and the moment Mehar saw her she ran pushing her Pari chachi asking Geet to carry her and without the will her hands held her baby tight in her arms while Mehar complained.

Mehar: Mumma.. Pari chactli.. bad.. stee.. Mehar no soup Chachtli.. soup.. chtii.. soup bad.. Mehar baby.. good na.

Geet looked at Mehar and than at Pari who smiled seeing her. This was the very first time Pari was having a close look at Geet.

Pari: Its her soup time Bhabi.

Geet's heart swelled with happiness hearing the world Bhabi. She never knew tat she even had such relations in her life. Her tears wetted her cheeks while Mehar sniffed in anger looking at them and than giving Pari a glare wiping her tears.

Mehar: bad Parli chactli.. stee.. Mumma… no soup..Mumma cryling.. Mehar Baby.. tell.. Dadda.. Parli chactli .. Mumma cryl.. hmm

Pari smiled hearing Mehar while Geet just gaped at her angel.

Pari: Bhabi.. do you want to feed her. (geet looked at Pari with questions in her eyes while Pari smiled) She is all yours Bhabi and its time tat she gets wat she lost.. Hum humara waqt bhita juke hain ish angel ke saath now its you who have to see her,, love her and feed her.

Pari left them kissing Mehar on her cheeks while Geet moved towards the bed with Mehar. She kept looking at Mehar while Mehar spoke of everything tat her lips could. Her eyes now glanced the room tat was filled with their pictures from childhood while the place above the bed was having the huge portrait of their wedding photo. She looked at Mehar and than at the room again.

Mehar: Mumma.. whlere is Dadda.. Mehar Baby.. misstting Dadda.

Geet sat on the bed taking Mehar on her lap while her hands held the bowl and started to feed Mehar and to her surprise Mehar just had the soup with no complains.

Mehar: Mumma..

Geet looked at her eyes and she was surprised to see Mehar pulling her duppatta away and placing her hand inside her Kurti searching for something and the moment her fingers felt it she removed it out with a big smile on her lips and settled it over her kurti. Geet was just shocked to see the little angel searching for her mangalsutra.

Mehar: Dadda saya.. Mumma good if chain good.. so Mehar baby.. chain seeing.

Geet: Baby.. do you love Mumma.

Mehar looked at Geet and than simply smiled and pecked her lips with all love tat she had for her Mumma. Geet could not control herself and hugged her Baby tight to her making sure tat she was hidden from all the evil. Her eyes told the pain tat she went through knowing the harsh reality that she just heard from everyone. She pulled Mehar a bit and kissed her all over the face while the whole family (except Maan) saw the beautiful union of their two angels. They had tears in their eyes when they heard from Pari tat Geet was feeding Mehar and they just came to see them and here they saw the most awaited moment of their life. Their two angels were lost in their own sweet moment tat they forgot everyone else.

Mehar: Mumma… Dadda says.. Mumma.. na angtel.. Mumma.. verly good.. and Dadda says.. Mumma na.. Lovebs Mehar baby so so much..

Geet: Mumma loves Mehar baby.. very much baby.. you are my life my love.

Geet pulled Mehar on her stomach while she lay on the bed. Both kept speaking to each other but most of the time it was Mehar who spoke while Geet just heard wat she said. It was like a soothing balm for her painful heart. Her tears were just not stopping when she heard the door open and saw her life her Maan walking inside the room while his forehead had a white bandage on it. She sat taking Mehar on her lap again and the moment Mehar saw her Dadda she jumped off the bed running to him. He smiled carrying her but soon she was back in her Mumma's lap. Geet did not say a word while her eyes just followed Maan.

Mehar: Dadda.. Mehar Baby so happy.. Dadda.. Mumma na.. Mumma eat soup.. Mehar baby.. and Mehar baby..good baby na.. so eat all soup.

Maan smiled hearing his angel while his hand pulled the small bag. He opened the wardrobe and pulled out his clothes packing them in the bag. He stopped hearing Mehar say.

Mehar: Dadda…whlere you gtoing. Butuiness trlip kya.

Maan looked at Mehar but his eyes got locked with Geet.

Mehar: Mumma.. Vicky chactlu and Yash mammu says… Dadda always on Butuiness trlip.. so Dadda.. no stayling with Mehar baby.. hain na dadda.

His tears reached his cheeks but he quickly wiped them off not letting his two angels see the vulnerable side of him. He just picked his bag and turned to go when his legs stopped hearing the painful voice.

Geet: angel.. tell Dadda tat Mumma wants him and if he leaves this time than Mumma will just not die but even Dadda will die leaving Mehar baby all alone.

His heart pained with her words tat had very deep meaning. He knew tat the moment she gets to know tat he was leaving she would speak such words but his heart was filled with guilt and he could not stay with her in this state and once again he gave her pain. But still did not wait and tried walking away from them when he was stopped again.

Geet: Why should I be punished everytime.. meri kya galati hain ki tat I lose everything in this life. Nahi jeena .. I don't want to live … why don't you kill me… nahi why should you kill.. everyone says na.. tat my life in this Mangalsutra tat you tied me when I was just 5.. so here I go Maan..

His heart ached and the moment he turned he saw her trying to remove it while his lips only screamed for her. she looked at him with tears in her eyes accusing him to leave her all alone while his whole body heated with anger for her. He marched grabbing her by her shoulder while Mehar feared seeing him so much angry.

Maan: say it again.

Geet: Haan nikal dungi apni haatho se.. I wi..

Her words died in her throat with the harshness of his lips tat were taking all her anger in his. His soul pierced hearing her say tat and with no other way he just smashed his lips on hers shutting her for once and all. He was so busy in his kiss tat he did not even realize tat she was just staring at him with the shine tat was missing in her eyes. He even failed to see tat their Angel was sitting next to them looking at them and suddenly she started to clap her hands making him to break and part away from her.

Mehar: Dadda.. Mumma.. kissy.. .. Mumma Dadda kissy

Mehar said getting excited seeing her parents for the first time kissing in front of her. she was all unknown to wat was happening but the happiness tat her parents kissed in front of her was something she was enjoying. She jumped into Geet again and touched her lips saying the same words again and again while Geet was all lost looking at her Maan.

Mehar: Dadda.. Mumma.. kissy pinky pinky lips..see Mumma

Mehar questioned Maan seeing her Mumma's lips turning pink to red as a result of his kiss. He smiled looking at Mehar and than his eyes rested on hers who was just staring at her. He wanted to stop those tears but his hands refused to touch the pure soul. He looked at her with pain trying to embrace her into him but could he.

Maan: Zindagi mein bahut Gunaah kiye hain.. and now I cant stay with this burden Mishti.

His own words choked refusing to come out. His tears made their way once again while Mehar tried to wipe them.

Maan: She is angel and I let her suffer… Maine uski Mumma ko ushe durr kiya.. I killed the very first moment where she would be with you.. I made her live without her Mumma.

He looked at Mehar who was only wiping his tears.

Mehar: Dadda.. no cryl.. see Mehar baby too cryling.. plwease.. Mumma.. tell na Dadda no cryl.

Maan: Mehar Baby.. Dadda does not deserve you and Mumma.. Dadda very bad Baby.

Mehar: Mumma.. Dadda.. na bad… na.. Dadda verly good.

Mehar hugged Maan and started to cry. She could not hear anyone say tat her Mumma – Dadda were bad. Maan cried hugging her closer but his eyes were on Geet.

Geet: Gunaah bhi kiye aur ush Gunaah ki sazza bhi mili.. Par nahi ush gunaah ne hume alag kiya nahi kabhi kar payega.

She said looking straight in his eyes. Her words were simple but they had deep meaning. She knew tat she would not let him go away and he had to stay for her even if its against his will.

Maan: Gunaah ki maafi nahi hoti.. and will Mehar be able to forgive me. Will she love me the same way after knowing wat sins her Dadda did. Will she ever say tat her Dadda is good.

Geet: An angel does not think about sins Maan.. aur rahi baat is angel ki.. I don't need to say anything. Shayad main kabhi aapke pyar ke layak nahi thi nahi ish angel ki tats why I even tried to kill my own baby with this hands.

Her tears rolled down leaving her heart with pain and guilt.

Geet: I don't even have a right on her.. Kash main ush accident mein mar jaathi.

Maan pushed Mehar on her chest with no tenderness in him. Mehar cried with the harshness while Geet's eyes burnt in anger holding their baby tight in her arms.

Geet: How dare you?

She almost raised her hand to hit him when she saw him with his head down in guilt.

Maan: I just pushed her in anger and see the way you reacted Mishti.. She needs you more than me.. mera kya hain..Gunaah kiye hain and will continue to do if I stay with you and her.

Geet: Gunaah.. Gunaah.. wat more you have to say Maan.. sleeping with me.. woh bhi kya Gunaah tha.. than even Mehar is a Gunaah.. sabse bada Gunaah tho Mehar hui na, Maan Singh Khuranna.

Maan's hand choked Geet by her neck for saying it. There was no fear nor any pain while Mehar hit Maan for holding her Mumma like tat. She cried seeing them while she moved out of Geet's lap but Maan held her right into him leaving Geet's neck.

Maan: M sorry.. m sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry.

He cried while Mehar just let him do wat he was doing. She did not say a word while Geet smiled in between her tears.

Maan: how can you love me so much Mishti.. zindagi mein itni galatiya kiye hain tat I don't even remember their count. How will you accept me knowing tat I destroyed Sameera. How will you accept me tat I killed her. how will you accept me after knowing tat she is living in dark because of me.

Her body became numb. Her ears refused to accept the truth. She knew he may even kill her as he had tat right, god itself had given but he killing someone else , he would never do. Her Maan was not like tat. He was not a monster, he would never do it. She moved holding his collar shaking him with all her energy shouting with anger.

Geet: Dare you say tat.. do you get.. You can kill me…. But you cant kill anyone else.. Mishti ka Maan aisa nahi hain.. he will never do when he had his Mehar.. nahi kiya aapne aisa.. sunna aapne.. you can never do it.

Maan: I did it Mishti. I.. I..

Her hand raised to slap him and they did not dare to stop. He held Mehar closer hiding her from her anger. He knew tat he deserved it and next second she pulled Mehar away from her and sat hugging her crying her heart out. She screamed shouting saying he cant while the whole family reached to their room only to witness her cry holding Mehar who herself was crying. Vicky tried moving but Raj held him by his hand seeing Maan crawling towards Geet. Raj knew this was the time tat he says the truth. He wanted his children to live a life not a life free of curse and right now only the three His Doll Her Maan and their Mehar could do miracle. Maan moved and pulled Geet into his lap while Mehar in her lap. He held her tight and dipped his head into her neck seeking the warmth he needed from his Mishti. He was living in a guilt a burden tat was killing him every second knowing tat he not only ruined his Mishti but Sameera who though was wrong but was not at fault completely. Geet kept murmuring saying tat he can never do tat while his heart ached to hear tat she still trusted him. his hold tightened around her while his lips moved to tell her wat he did.

Maan: I never knew tat I would do this. I was lost broken in all ways. I did not know wat I had to do. I lost days no one was with me.. kisine meri taraf pyar ka haath nahi diya. They all hated me Mishti and they were right. I killed you everytime.. I was lost all alone but when I came to senses my anger rose knowing Sameera tried to kill you. I could not hold myself and maine ushe punish karne ka decision liya. She was the main culprit here. I held her captive Mishti.. ushe maara nahi but I kept her under dark. No light no outside world nothing. Ek chote se andhere kamre mein ushe band karke rakh maine. I was wild.. I used to harass her sending my mens to make her scared in tat dark room. I did not know tat I was playing with girl.. par kya karta.. meri Mishti.. my Mishti and her Mehar was fighting for life. Jantha hoon Sameera was not at fault. She did try her ways to create problems between us and she even succeeded but wasn't I the one who was wrong. Par main soch nahi paya. I never let her see any light an later I just forgot about her when you were close to delivery.. I even warned my mens not to inform me about Sameera par sab galat hua.. I lost everything Mishti.. I was not allowed to meet you and Mehar.. I felt disgusted and I left.. I did not knew tat Sameera was losing herself or say she had lost everything Mishti.

Geet stiffened hearing it. She felt scared to know wat he meat with his last word.

Maan: My anger was so much tat when Arjun attacked me I wanted Sameera to die.. I wanted her to kill with my bear hands and so I did not tell.. jab wapas aaye I lost everything.. I did not know where you were.. wat happened to your Mehar.. pagal ban juka tha main. My mind just wanted to kill Sameera but when I saw her.. I died…. I died seeing her Mishti…. She had lost herself Mishti.. woh pagal ban juki thi. My torture had ruined her. she would shiver with slight sound. Woh puri tarah se darr juki thi.. a mere shadow she would be wild Mishti.. ushe maine pagal kar diya mishti and now.. she is nowhere to return.. ushe barbaad kiya mere gusse ne.

Geet was shocked hearing him. her lips refused to speak anything while others stood rooted in their place.

Geet: where is she Maan.

Maan: Zinda lash ban juki hain woh Mishti.. I killed her.. but trust me I just wanted to punish her.. par kabhi itna bura nahi chaha Mishti.. you know I.. i.. took her to the hospital.. doctor said she lost her mind.. woh pagal ban juki thi.. and she would never be alright Mishti.. main darr gaya.. mere haatho se sab barbaad hua tha Mishti.. I lost everything.. I never wanted it Mishti.. mere gusse ne sab barbaad kiya.. sameera is in mental asylum Mishti.. woh.. dusre hospital mein.. hain.. trust me.. I have been bringing all doctors to save her. .. asking them to treat her Mishti…. I know maine gunaah kiya… but I never wanted to Mishti.. she tried to kill My Mishti.. meri Mishti ke saath uske pyar ko bhi.. how could I let her do tat Mishti.. bolo.. did I do wrong.. I know I did… but trust me Mishti I never wanted this harsh life for her.. even god will not forgive.. and now I know even you will not.. I cant live with this burden Mishti.. nahi jee saktha.. tell me how will Mehar love me knowing wat I did.. how will she say tat m a good person Mishti.

Maan cried hugging and hiding his face into her while she sat hearing him pour his heart. she looked at her family who stood with tears in their eyes. She knew tat Maan may be harsh but he was only on her not on anyone else. She knew tat he just wanted to punish Sameera was trying to kill her and as always his anger made him forget everything. She slowly pulled her one hand and hugged him sideways while other side Mehar placed her small hand on him.

Geet: I love you.

She could only say this and nothing else mattered to her right now. Her Maan was with her and she knew if she forgives him than even god will do. Her hand pulled him closer while her lips just stated the fact tat she would never stay without him.

Geet: Its past Maan and I don't want any past to come in our present and future.. Nahi chahati main ki humara kal humare angel ko taklif de. I don't want our past shadow to destroy our Mehar Maan…. she cant stay without you and these is the biggest truth tat Maan and Geet are made for each other. Unki kismat haar juki hain Maan.. Your evil destiny failed Maan.. and now I want you to give me my Love my Maan back.. Mishti ab aur nahi reh sakthi.

He cried loud hearing her confession. He could not say a word but just tight his hold around her letting her know tat he was all hers. He just wanted her to forgive and he would be free of this guilt.

Precap: Most probably last part

Hi everyone.. m ending this FF with my next update. I don't know wat you feel about it but now Destiny is ending. Hope you all love this update but still a question do you want few updates with Mehar and Maaneet and how they get hold of their missed years. If yes than I want sincere answers or else next will be the last part.

Do like and comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely rocking update. Di.!
It was simply beautiful.! Maans confession..geet's forgiving him...
Their undying love..everything was just beyond perfection...

All In all..loved the update.! Finally Maaneet n their Meher are together 😳

It's ending,! A bit sad as I'll badly miss Mehar 😭
But really happy with the end 😳

Waiting for next uodate di 😃
Edited by -AnushaGurtian- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
painful update maan feeling guilty and poured his heart to his misty its very emotional. So finally he destroyed sameera. Please dont end quickly i want some more parts with all happy maneet moments and meher because till now we cried a lot now we want happy wala updates.
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg sam pagal ho gyi
well she deserve it
my maanu guilty bt geet n meher is there with him to remove evry bitterness
it was really very painful yt amazing update
finally they won their lv lv won
their angel made them win
bt y end so soon
no na
plz lvd it
waiting 4 moer

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally maan confessed his deeds
N geet forgave him
its ending
Waiting for last part.
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Sameera deserved it..
Finally geet forgave maan..
Please give some more parts on maaneer and meher...
Love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow i am speechless with this update... it is superbbb...👏👏👏

everything was perfect... i just loved each and every bit of their confession... the way maan poured his heart out and geet forgave him... it was beautiful...

it is ending... Oh god.. i am gonna miss this story so much... i wanted few more parts with maan geet meher... PLSSS...😭😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely rocking update. .!
It was simply beautiful.! Maans confession..geet's forgiving him...
Their undying love..everything was just beyond perfection...

Waiting for next uodate
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Posted: 12 years ago
update sameera condition she deserve it maan guilty confession geet love and finally family together



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