#1 TaaRey: Love, Trust, Jealousy (Moved to thread 2) COMPLETED - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome stry...
lovd d update...
niki s really nice charactr...
plz update soon n pm me plz/...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vijichandran

awesome stry...

lovd d update...
niki s really nice charactr...
plz update soon n pm me plz/...


thanx a lot...😃
m happy dat u liked Niki's character😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing story ...loved it :) :)
waiting for next update :)
keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey amazing story
loved all the parts
when u update the next part please pmme
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello mere pyaare pyaare dosto.🤗 I'm back with an update.

Finally my exams are over! Yeh meri taraf se ek treat hi samajh lo.😆

Okay abh jyada bore nahi karungi. Here you go.


Part 9


After the party everyone is heading to the parking lot. [Taani and Niki walking ahead, followed by Reyam and then rest of the gang.]

Three men come from behind the pillars and surround Taani and Niki. Taani is too scared to react seeing the knives and guns in their hands but Niki recognizes something and keeps her calm as she knows screaming and shouting will get them into trouble.

One of the men points his gun to Taani and asks her to call Rey. Taani is unable to react. She gets more scared when the man asks her to call Rey. Sensing Taani's fright Niki dials Rey's number.

*Here with ReYam*

Rey: Yeh Taani and Nik kaha gaye? Itni kya jaldi hai unhe jo bhaag rahe hai?😕

Swayam: Sahi keh raha hai tu. Yeh dono kuch jyada hi aage chali gayi hai and gang ko dekho chalne ka naam hi nahi le rahi.

Rey: (to the gang behind) Guys jaldi chalo. Ghar nahi jana kya?

*Tring Tring*

Rey: Nik? Yeh kyu call kar rhi hai? (picks up) Ya Nik bas two mins hum sab pohoch hi rahe hai.

Niki: Rey vo..

Taani:😲 Niki nahi phone cut karo. Don't call him. No!😲

Man 1: Oye ladki apni jaan pyaari hai toh chup raho aur tum (to Niki) jaldi usse yahan bulao. Warna.. 😈

Niki: Rey tum jaldi se parking lot ke pillar no. 16 ke paas aao. Please come fast.

Rey: Nik hua kya hai? Taani itni kyu dari hui hai? Aur vo kon tha?

Man 2: (Takes away the phone from Niki) Mr. Reyansh Singhania agar tum inn dono ko sahi salamat dekhna chahate ho toh jaldi yahan aao. Aur haan apne doston ko mat lana, warna yeh dono jinda nahi bachegi. (cuts the phone)

Rey: Hello? Hello? Damn!😡

Swayam: Rey kya hua hai?

Rey: Nik ne mujhe REY bulaya? And vo itni calm kyu thi? And vo log hai kaun?

Swayam: Kaun log? Rey bata hua kya hai?

Rey: Kisi ne Taani and Nik ko kidnap kar liya hai and vo muje bula rahe hai. Mujhe jaana hoga.

Swayam: Ruk Rey mein bhi aa raha hun.

Rey: Nahi. Mujhe akele bulaya hai and Nik ka behavior bhi kuch alag tha. Kuch toh gadbad hai. Swayam tu kaam kar gang ko leke pillar 16 ke waha aa. But make sure unn kidnappers ko pata na chale. I'm going, you come with the gang.

(Here with Taani and Niki)

Niki: (whispering to Taani) Taani tum aise hi dari hui rehna and kuch bhi hojaye hum inn logon ko Yansh ko yahan se akele nahi le jane denge. Got it? (Taani nods. She isn't sure if it's the right thing to do or not but agrees to what Niki says.)

*Rey comes [to the rescue😆] near the pillar*

Rey: Mein aa gaya, abh inko chod do!

(Niki signals Taani. Rey notices.)

Taani: Nahi mein aapko chod ke kahin nahi jaungi.😭

Rey: Taani please. Nik tum please samjhao isse.

Niki: Rey hum dono tumhare saath chalenge. Tumhe kuch hogaya toh?😒

Rey: Parrr..

Man 3: Agar tum logon ki baate khatam ho chuki ho toh hum kuch bole?😡

Man 1: Reyansh gaadi ki driver's seat pe baitho. Abhi! (Rey keeps mum and walks towards the car.)

Niki: Rey please inki baate maan lo. Mujhe darr lag raha hai. Inhone bola na PHONE chalao toh please chala lo.😉 (emphasizing on the word phone)

(Rey gets her message and slowly removes his phone and dials Swayam. Keeps the call on and slides the phone in his pocket.)

Man 2: Phone? Gaadi chalane bola hai. Phone nahi.😡

Rey: Jaa raha hun chalane. Aur uspe chillao mat, vo gaadi ko phone bolti hai.😡😡

(The gang is watching all this hiding behind the cars in the parking lot. They are confused.😕 Swayam picks his phone and keeps it on.)

Swayam: Yeh Niki itni calm kyu hai? And Rey vo bhi chup chaap maan raha hai?

Sharon: (Realizing Niki's tone senses that she has a full proof plan to get out of it.) Swayam I know ki Taani tumhari behen hai and tum uski wajah se hyper ho rahe ho but please calm down. Niki has some plan. Let's just follow it. (All agree.)

(Rey sits on the drivers's seat and one of the men sits on passengers seat. Taani and Niki behind them and the other two men behind them with their guns pointing towards Taani and Niki. [Imagine the car to be Scorpio] They drive off. The gang gets into their car and follows them.)

Taani: (whispers to Niki) Rey ko kuch nahi hoga na?😒

Niki: (whispers) Trust me Yansh ko kuch nahi hoga.

Rey: Tumne inko kyu pakda? Kaam mujhse tha na?

Man 1: Jab tak heroine problem mein na phase toh hero kaise aayaga? Tumhe kidnap karne ka mohra [trap] bani yeh bechaari.😈

Niki: (giggling😆😆) Tum bohot filmy ho. Hero heroine and all. Waise mein soch rahi thi, aap teeno vo jail ke black and white uniform mein kaise langenge,😆 aakhir wahin jane wale ho tum sab, jald hi.😈

Man 2: Tu hume jail bhijwayegi?

Niki: Na na na. Tum log khud hi jaoge.😈

(Rey looks in the mirror and sees that the gang is following them at a safe distance and is relieved. Then his eyes fall on Taani's crying image in the mirror. He is unable to see her so scared and crying for him. His eyes start becoming wet as well seeing her.😭 Taani feels Rey's gaze on her. [which is getting reflected from the mirror😉] She looks in the mirror and sees that his eyes are becoming wet. Taani quickly wipes away her tears and forces a smile.😊 Rey too assures her that all will be fine. He won't let anything happen to her.)


*Running to hide myself*😆

Many of you wanted some thriller action packed update, but woh kya hai na mujhe kuch aur hi sujh raha tha.😉

Sorry ki update mein TaaRey hardly the.😒

I know yeh update bohot short and boring tha,😔 but I have some weird concept in my head (which will be Niki's plan) and uske liye yeh update zaruri tha.

So if you liked it then please do Like & Comment😊

Edited by 2111_shweta - 7 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ll comment tom morn after reading 😃

unresv

very good shweta👍🏼

you have written so well
Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum upate shweta...
that taarey small scene was super cute
loved it yaar
hayeee they understand eachother so well
update asap eagar to know niki's plan
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey... ossom yaar...
pls update soon... very interesting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update... really excited 2 know whts nikky's plan... do update the nxt part soon

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