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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khamoshi...lakin kab tak

Part 12

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in this update past and present continuous parallel...past in blue color and present in dark pink (magenta) color..and some in black color..


Karan : ab hume bhi apne family ke baare mein sochna chaiye

Shilpa : what

Karan : ha ..mujhe bhi to sia jaisi beti chaiye..

Jo mujhe papa khe...

He hugged her and kissed on her cheek..

Shilpa: chodiye mujhe

Karan : nhi...

Sia: chachu chachi ko chodo...

Karan (whisper):- isse bhi abhi aana tha

Karan : ye lo...chod diya

She giggled...

Karan : tumhe bhut hassi aa rhi hai

He glares her...

Sia : meri chachi ko ase mt gurro...

She came near to shilpa and sits on her lap and kissed on her cheek...

Sia: meri chachi best hai

Karan : aur chachu...

Sia : hmmm

Karan : bolo

Sia : thik hai...kuch khas nhi

Karan: acha bachu

Ab chocolate nhi milengi...

Sia : waise bhi jyada chocolate nhi khani chaiye...

Karan : acha ji

Sia: hai na chachi

Shilpa: ha bacha

Kitni intelligent hai hmari sia

Karan : wo toh hai

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G:-Aaj bhi wo din yaad hai...jb phli baar hum mile the...

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pyaar tune kya kiya, mm hmm mm mm kya kiya

M:-Kis tarah wo in bahoo mein simat gyi thi...

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ek hee pal me achanak

Both stand-ins same place...but far from each other eyes...

Geet : ye kaisi bechani thi mujhko...us waqt nhi jaan payi...


pyaar tune kya kiya, ae pyaar tune kya kiya

She see came near to classroom and maan see classroom from window...

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ek hee pal me achaanak dee hai nayi duniya

dee hai nayee khushiya

Geet : maan please wapas kro meri book

Maan : nhi...

Phle ha kaho...

Aaj tum mere sath chl rhi ho...bs...

That's final

Geet : no...

She tries to catch her book from his hand..her foot stuck in bench and fall on him...

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Both smiles...

pyaar tune kya kiya, ae pyaar tune kya kiya

ek hee pal me achaanak dee hai nayi duniya

dee hai nayi khushiya

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pehali dafao usse dekh kar, hone laga kuchh aisa asar

geet : are you maan

maan: hmm

tum toh whi ho na

jo abhi kuch der phle bahar mujhse takrayi thi

geet : wo galati se

maan : I know..aur itni jaldi mera naam bhi bhul gyi

geet : nhi asa nhi hai..wo bs

maan: wo sb chodo...phle mujhe tum ye btayo...

tumne itna late admission kyun liya

geet : jyada late thode na hai

only one month

he smiles...

geet : aap mujhpe has kyun rhe ho

maan : nhi...

pehali dafao usse dekh kar, hone laga kuchh aisa asar

maan : madam ne mujhe tumhari aur zaira ki help karne ko kaha hai

ye lo notes

koi bhi problem ho puch lena

geet : thanks

maan : welcome

khud se huyee mai bekhabar, mai hu yaha dil meraa hai vaha

geet : maan mujhe ye swal smjh nhi aa rha

maan : geet tum ydi swal pe dhyan dongi to smjh aayenga na

geet : aap khena kya chahte hai...mera dhyan khi aur hai

pyaar tune kya kiya, ae pyaar tune kya kiya

ek hee pal me achaanak dee hai nayi duniya

dee hai nayi khushiya

Near to canteen

Kaka: are maan bte

Maan : kaka kaise hai aap...

Kaka: sb bdiya

Tum toh yha ka rasta hi bhul gye ho...

Maan : nhi kaka who bs

Kaka: pata hai sb mujhe...

Aaj tum yha kyun aaye ho...

Wow hi baithi hai...jha tum dono hamesha baithte the

Jayo...

Maan : geet yha...

too de raha hai ehsaas yeh, jaise koyee mere pas hai

He came near to geet and sits beside her...see into each other eyes...

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then turn the face and feel the mirror of past days...in front of eyes...

too de raha hai ehsaas yeh, jaise koyee mere pas hai

Maan : geet is ice cream mein kya kharabi hai

Geet : nhi mujhe bs pasta wala flavor hi khana hai

Maan : geet

Geet : no

jiske badan ko chhu kar, mere badan ko chhu rahee

hai hawa

She broke the trance of past scenes...

Geet : kitna ladte the na hum...

Maan : bs tum

Geet : acha...aur tum to jaise kuch krte hi nhi the...

Meri koi baat nhi mante

Maan : asi kaunsi baat hai jo maine nhi mani

For few minutes both forget the separation and live again the past happy moments...

Geet :jaise meri hr baat mante the

Maan : geet ab tum firse bina baat lad rhi ho

Geet : mein ladti hu

Maan : ha..

Jagdalu

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Geet : tum..

Maan : tum

Kaka : bs karo tum dono...

Geet bte tumahri favorite Pasta flavor ice-cream

Geet : thanks kaka

Geet : tasty..

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You know maan ...i love

Maan : ice- cream

(He said in mid before completing her sentence)

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Geet : hm

Maan : achi tarah janta hu

Geet : ase kyun dekh rhe ho..tumhe khani hai

Maan :

Geet : mein nhi dene wali...

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pyaar tune kya kiya, ae pyaar tune kya kiya

ek hee pal me achaanak dee hai nayi duniya

dee hai nayi khushiya

Maan : geet deni to tumhe padengi...

Geet : nhi du toh

Maan : toh tumhari kal se icecream band

Geet : no way

Maan : yes

Geet : acha ye lo tum bhi kha lo...

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She licked her lips in between eating ice-cream...

He came near to her...she stop in mid...

Geet : maan

He removed the ice-cream with his thumb near to her lips...

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pyaar tune kya kiya, ae pyaar tune kya kiya

ek hee pal me achaanak dee hai nayi duniya

dee hai nayi khushiya

Maan : wo ice- cream lag gyi thi

Geet : hmm

Asad: geet tum yha ho yaar...

Both feel like again reality of life come front of both...

Geet : ha wo mein

She stands from the sit...

Asad: are yaar tum to ase gabra rhi ho...jaise maine tumhari koi chori pakad li...

Geet : nhi asa kuch nhi hai

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Asad: hey maan tum yha

Maan : hey

Ha wo charity function ke liye aaya tha

Asad: aur hum bhi to issi hi liye aaye hai

Chl geet...

He held her wrist...

Asad: maan , Are you ok...

Maan : hmmm

Asad : toh fir chalo na

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Asad: maan tum kal meeting mein kyun nhi aaye...

He(maan) look towards geet ...

Maan : geet kya kbhi bhi tumne mujhse

She stops him in mid...

Geet : maan ab bhut der ho chuki hai

Aap ab kissi aur ke hai

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Aur mein bhi kissi aur ki hone jaa rhi hu

Maan :tum khehna kya chahti ho

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Geet : maan mera nikah th ho gya hai

Asad ke sath

Asad: tum kha kho gye maan

Maine kya koi difficult question puch liya

His voice break the trance of bitter truth of his life...

Maan : nhi...wo kuch kaam aa gya tha

precap : nhi dena...😡

teaser dekh lo...😉

hit like button and do comment...i hope you all liked the update..


Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
many one not read previous update see here...


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teaser on page 15- 11 may
Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
priyanka it was great part. both are lost in their past memories. i loved their nok jhok moment. i hope they get their happiness again. waiting for next dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
fab ud dr
sia is so cute
both maaneet lost in ther old memories
cntinue soon dr
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
awesome part
amazing
loved it
maaneet r lost in their old memories
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
man no fair
this should not happen to them should it
but it is
so sad naa
they love one another and yet so far
she lied didnt she about being married to asad right
i should hope so
so they were remembering their old memories
man they were beautiful
haiyye kya din the woh
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
i was waiting 4 d update since u posted d teaser.thx.karan-sia-shilpa scene was funny.i cud imagin kran's face expression.Maanet fb scenes wer too good.iccream scene was damn romantic.nice pics too.nice song u hav added 4 d scenes.wasnt geet lying abt her nikah with Azad?plz reveal ther status 2 each other.plz update soon
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
loved the update
nice..
like is not working..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
😳 awsssmmm song selection...perfectly match on maaneet's situation... 👏 pics were outstanding..finding pics n then use them in a ri8 place is not an easy job ... 😊 u did it fntstically nd in last the update hmmm 10 on 10 dear liked it very much... Maaneet's meeting at colg i wish asad wouldn't b there he was like KABAB ma HADI 😡 didn't like his presence tht moment ...maaneet were living there past n he intrupt them but over all it was h SUPERB update...and in last thnx 4 PM 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
nice part
thanks for the pm

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