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Posted: 12 years ago
Tashaaa when ru updating..?? After giving such an awesome promo itna time update dene main.. Jaldi update dear can't wait to read the next part..:) update soon..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Tashaaa when ru updating..?? After giving such an awesome promo itna time update dene main.. Jaldi update dear can't wait to read the next part..:) update soon..:)

awww dear sorry just updating in a minute or so stay tune dear 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sorry for late update was out of town just came back today in evening and updating by night so if you don't like the update sorry as it was written in short time😭</font>

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Part 5</font>


Sharon was in deep sleep but was
distracted by constant ringing on her phone. She picks it seeing that it was
Rey. "hmmm" she says in the sleepy tone.


"Hey, sleeping
beauty. You are about to miss the flight." He said chuckling.


"Wait what?"
Sharon stood up from bed and saw the time. She continued "well I will not I
have still an hour I will be there. Will talk to you there bye." And then she
hangs up the phone. She takes the shower and remembers that due to sleeping
till late she didn't go to temple and what will BM think of her absence. She
decided to go temple and then call BM on the way to airport. After praying in
temple she sits in her car and driver drives for the airport.


She calls BM
but her phone was switched off. She thanked God for that as she didn't know
what to say to her so she decides to leave a voice mail as she doesn't want BM
to worry about her as her phone will be switched off during the flight.


"Hey BM. Hope
you are feeling better. Sorry couldn't show up in the temple. I was sleeping
till late. Now I am on my way to airport. Please don't be mad at me Rey called
last night and we made a plan to go attend the event in Goa. So my phone will be
switched off in the flight but will call you as soon I reach there. Love you a
lot and take care of yourself or I will not talk to you when I come back. Don't
forget meray jasoos charoon taraf phelay howay hain (she giggled on that
dialogue and knew that this will lighten up BM mode. Suppressing her tears and
calming her voice she continued) okay gotta go see ya soon BM will miss you a
lot and do miss me too bye take care cya" she cuts the recording and cry
silently but soon the airport arrives and she freshens up and leaves for the
trip.


Sometime later
in Mumbai


"tum fikar mat
karo baba tumhein kaam de dainge" an old lady was talking to a young girl whose
face was covered till her chin with a long veil. She was very nervous due to
which she was playing with her big set of chura (bangles).


[This is the chura if someone is
unaware of it. I couldn't better pic than this so work with this]


The door opened and Swayam came in
shorts rubbing his eyes, looking at the maid he says "itni subah koi ata hai
maine mana kiya that subah nahi anay …" but before he could continue he was
interrupted by the girl's giggle as it was afternoon and not morning. He looked
at her in anger as he doesn't like any kind of interruption when he talks. The
old lady sees that and hits her with her elbow signaling her to stop giggling.
She gets scared feeling the intensity of the atmosphere. She again starts
playing with her chura showing her nervousness. Swayam glares at her and
notices her nervousness. He was distracted by the old lady "baba mujhe ap se
apne baray mein baat karni thi" she pauses and waits for his response. He nodes
and she continues "mujhe gao (village) jana hai meri saas (MIL) bimaar hai. Iis
liye mei yeh ladki ko lay kr ai hoon. Yeh ap ka aur ap ke ghar ka khayal rakhay
gi mei nei isse sab samjha diya hai." Swayam looks the girl again from top to
bottom and then looks at the lady "tumhein pakka yakeen hai yeh meray ghar ka
kaam kar sakti hai?" "haa baba yeh bohot achi hai kaam kaaj mein" she replies
him with full confidence.


"theek hai. Ao tumhein ghar dekha doon
mei" he says and signals the girl to come in. She walks in nervously and due to
which she stumbles and was about to fall but Swayam holds her from her waist and
stops her from falling. His hands are on her bare waist and she is holding him
from his collars. She felt a chill running through her entire body when she
feels his touch and he feels a strange feeling as well but ignores it. He makes
her stand up and she brings her closed palm ahead. He looks at her
suspiciously.


She opens it slowly and he sees two
buttons in her palm. He then looks at his shirt and finds empty spaces for
button from his collar. He frowns but soon he smiles as he saw her holding her
ears and saying "maaf kar di jiye hum ney jaan booch kar nahi kia pakka"
innocence was apparent in her voice fully.


"koi baat nahi"
Swayam replies calming himself down. "shukriya sahaab" she replies. Ughh Swayam
frowns again and says "don't call me that" he
paused and realized what he just said and continues "mera matlab hai k mujhe
yeh mat bolao. Sahaab bhi koi naam hai. Mujhe baba bolao jaise baki naukar bola
tay hain ya kuch bhi bolao magar yeh nahi" he said with irritation apparent in
his voice.


She
giggles again and he says "kya mei tumhei jok… matlab mei mazaak kar raha hoon
kya?" "nahi sahaab woh kya hai na ap apni umer dekhiye aur phir mujhe. Baba toh
apne se chotay umer kay logon ko bolatay hai aur aap…" she says and giggles
again. He thinks for a while and says "kuch bhi bolao magar sahaab nahi, Swayam
hi bola lo." "na baba na" she says while putting her fingers of hand on her
ears one by one showing that she is apologizing for something "mei ap ko ap ke
naam se kaise bola sakti hoon? Yeh toh ap ki tauheen (insult) karna hoga" she
asks him in most innocent tone ever. He smiles at her antics and then comes
back to his senses and says "waise mujhse behaas (argue) karna bhi tauheen
karna hota hai nahi?" she again starts playing with her chura and her face
drops down. She was struggling with her own thoughts of what is right and what
is wrong which could be seen as her head was moving from right to left very often
showing her struggle. He notices it and then says feeling defeated "sahaab toh
saahab hi sahi. Magar jis din mera dimaag kharab howa aur tum ney mujhe sahaab
bolaya aur mei nein tumhein daant (scold) diya toh mujhe mat kahna." He says
that and leaves the place as he was irritated that he had to listen to that
girl.


He
was leaving for his bedroom when he hears old lady yelling at her which makes
him stop at his trail. "dimaag kharab ho gaya tha tumhara. Aise baat karta hai
koi baba se. Agar aisa chalta raha na toh who tumhein apne ghar se nikaal daige
samjhi, ganga?" the old lady inquires her. ganga replies in scared tone "ji
samjh gai ainda dehaan rakhoon gi." "GANGA, nice name" he says to himself
unknowingly and when he realizes it he pushes the thought saying that he is
just stupid and need some drink.


*Part 5 Ends*


Okay
guys I know it wasn't as good as before but please work with it as I was so
busy and I know I am posting the update very late. I am sure you guys will
understand. And yes hope you all like ganga's entry and her character. Remember
guys she will be bringing Swaron together so show some liking and respect for
her. Do comment guys 20 comments and part will be up as I have made you
all waited for so long so no promo and direct update. Happy now so comment.


Also
if you all are struggling with the hindi part then I can write it in English. I
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Edited by TaareynSwaron - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey first one to reply..:) Lovely part.. Ganga's entry was nice I liked it.. She is an interesting character and I already like her if she going to help swaron meet..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Hey first one to reply..:) Lovely part.. Ganga's entry was nice I liked it.. She is an interesting character and I already like her if she going to help swaron meet..:)

yes first one to reply
she definitely will but u need to be patient for that and i m glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updt...thnx for d PM
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunitha_Swayam

Awesome updt...thnx for d PM


Thanks dear n you're welcome
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 update!!!
Thanks for the pm.

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