MG SS Love Zealots.LAST CHAPTER-PG 68,21/6/2013 - Page 6

my god!dear u write exceptionally well!!i can't fathom to start how much oved the story,despite the fact that u chose a complicated storyline for ur first written story.
pls cont soon dear.

@ bloom Thank you so much dear..

when u gonna update ?😔 😭

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

when u gonna update ?😔 😭

awww.. thats so beautiful,.,,,,,she sharing her little treasures with him... everyone has such stuff, which look so stupid, but were cherished by us at some point of time , to the extent of being possessive about it... those tender moments between them always make me go goey eyed and feel mushy... i love this simple story well told, succinct, that touches the chords of our heart and leaves me with 'feel good' feelings

Their love was safe from pricking eyes of the society in this darkness...

Originally posted by: yappingduck

awww.. thats so beautiful,.,,,,,she sharing her little treasures with him... everyone has such stuff, which look so stupid, but were cherished by us at some point of time , to the extent of being possessive about it... those tender moments between them always make me go goey eyed and feel mushy... i love this simple story well told, succinct, that touches the chords of our heart and leaves me with 'feel good' feelings

Their love was safe from pricking eyes of the society in this darkness...

i love this line...😳👏

Since last few updates, everytime I read this, I feel like something is going to happen, like the moment will break or something, the vulnerability, innocence, care and those unsaid emotions...
Another awesome writter in GF (sometimes you remind me of palindrome, you both write simple, touching stories bole toh jinme mitti ki khusboo aati hai :) :)(ignore my analogies :P) ).
Again looking forward to the next update...

P.S. That stapoo stone reminded me of my obsession with some good shaped, acchi quality wale stones, we used to carry our own stones in bag to school :D :D.

Originally posted by: Ubiquitos

Since last few updates, everytime I read this, I feel like something is going to happen, like the moment will break or something, the vulnerability, innocence, care and those unsaid emotions...
Another awesome writter in GF (sometimes you remind me of palindrome, you both write simple, touching stories bole toh jinme mitti ki khusboo aati hai :) :)(ignore my analogies :P) ).
Again looking forward to the next update...

P.S. That stapoo stone reminded me of my obsession with some good shaped, acchi quality wale stones, we used to carry our own stones in bag to school :D :D.