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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD
IT WAS SO EMOTIONAL AND TOUCHING
MAAN IS SUCH A POSSESSIVE BADE PAPA, HE WILL NOT LET ANYONE ELSE HOLD THE BABAY
MEERA KNOWS WHAT A BLESSING SHE HAS GOT IN THE FORM OF HER BABY
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Piya for the banner

Thank you friends for your comments.

Heytal - You brought the point which I am partially going to address in today's update - about Meera's parents and her culprits. I am not sure if I will be punishing the culprits because I want Meera to move on but a confrontation with her parents is definitely on the cards. But not yet as right now I would not want Meera to face them.

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Chapter 38 – Choo Kar Mere Man Ko

Next Day

Maan entered the hospital room with some food prepared especially by Daadima but stopped short seeing Meera crying clutching Anu in her hands while Geet was softly rubbing her back.

"What happened, why are you crying?"

Meera was startled by Maan's sudden appearance and she tried to laugh it off "No…nothing Bhai…just like that."

"Just like that?"

Maan's sarcastic comment suddenly changed to realization and he frowned "Are you feeling overwhelmed Choti. Don't worry; see we all are here for you. I have read in the pregnancy book about such feelings in new mothers. You don't worry; I will talk to the doctor about it."

Both Meera and Geet looked at Maan as if he was an alien.

"What?"

"Pregnancy Book Bhai?"

"Haan…I mean…For Anu, I was just trying to understand. There they talked about post partum depression so so it is natural. Many women feel overwhelmed with sudden responsibility of the baby so…"

Meera smiled a little as she wiped her tears "Bhai, please stop worrying. I am fine and whatever little bit fear I have that also has gone away seeing your and Di's care."

"Are you sure?"

Meera nodded and Maan looked at Geet closely who stood silently.

"Kya baat hai Geet…any problem"

Geet sat next to Meera and caressed her head "I am sorry Choti for making you upset. That was not my intention."

She looked at Maan who was still trying to understand what was going on. "Woh, I was asking her if she wants to tell her parents about Anugraha's birth."

"What? Why would you think about it Geet?"

"Please Maan Sir…all I was saying is that being a mother is a big step in any girl's life. There is no right and wrong when it comes to relations. Me and you can not judge and it is only her and her heart's desires which matter.

Meera, yeh dil bahut bada hota hai. Jab koi naya rishta judta hai toh purana rishta tuta nahi…uski jagah wahi rehti hai. Me and your Bhai are and will always be there but if you do want to tell your parents about Anu then you have every right to do so. And if you don't then also, it is the right thing to do. We are here to support you and stand by you Choti."

Meera's eyes brimmed once again as she took Geet's hand in hers "Thank you Di. You are right and I know I am among my family now.

I also know that though I am dead for them, I can still forgive my parents for what they did if they feel remorse. After all they gave me this life and showered it with lot of love before….and for that I can forgive them.

But I don't want to talk to them. As you said, I am a mother now and as a mother, I don't think I can pardon them for what they did to my daughter. They tried to take her away from me and for that I don't want their thoughts or ill feelings to cast a shadow on my Anu.

And I am not sad Di. I know that you just want my happiness and my wishes. I love you Di."

Geet hugged Meera as she wiped her tears "I love you too Choti" while Maan just looked emotionally at the scene in front of him.

Few days later

Maan strode into the hostel closely followed by Geet.

"Meera, time for you to sleep now….la meri pyari guddan ko mujhe do"

"Haan Meera now you rest, I will take Anu."

But Maan picked her up before Geet and pulled her away

Geet pouted "Deejiye na…mujhe bhi pyaar karna hai meri gudiya ko"

"Haan to meine kab mana kiya. Mere jaane ke baad kar lena."

"Lekin, meine use subah se god nahi liya hai"

"Meine kal raat se nahi liya and you get to sleep with her, I don't."

"Daadima…dekhiye na"

"Arre, shhh…kitna shor macha rahi ho tum….Meera is resting inside. And I am your boss, so you better listen to me."

"Boss…aap office mein mere boss hain yahan nahi"

"Dusht Daanav kahin ke…jab dekho boss giri jhaadte rehte hain"

"Ok, don't make faces now. Come here…see how she is smiling."

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fUtXdIRvwNo&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fUtXdIRvwNo

Chhookar Mere Man Ko Kiya Tune Kya Ishara
Badla Yeh Mausam Lage Pyaara Jag Saara
Chhookar Mere Man Ko Kiya Tune Kya Ishara


Geet smiled at the chance given to her by her khadoos boss to finally pamper their gudiya. Daadima lovingly looked at the scene in front of her. Maan held the little angel in his lap while Geet sat next to him and played with her fingers and toes. She smiled at seeing her grandson so free and happy. Sitting on the bed with the baby, she could see the bliss on his face. Well it was nothing new. Since the day Anu came in their life, Daadima could see the glimpses of old Maan in him. He would not stay in office a minute more than necessary. Before this, it had been ages since she had seen him leaving office on time or early. As Geet was staying in hostel for now, she will accompany him almost every day. Immediately they will ask Meera to relax and take over responsibility of baby fighting for amount of time they spend with her. But more often Maan will win and cajole the sweet baby till he would leave for the night.

Daadima smiled a little as she fondly remembered how she teased him one day

---Flashback---

"Maan beta, I am so happy to see you like this with Anu. If nothing else this should convince you that it is time to settle down now. You should really give some thought to starting your family and marriage."

"Whoa Daadima, please, how are you connecting things up. I love spending time with her because she is my gudiya. I am her bade papa after all and she is my sweet niece."

"Haan…haan humein pata hai…but"

"But what…just because I love Anu, I should marry and that too to have kids….now only this was left."

"Ok, fine. There is no need to make fun of me. Waise, when are you making me meet that girl…jiski khushiyon ki aapko itni parwaah thi…ab yeh mat kehna ki mere kaan baj rahe hain."

"Daadima….please…I told you ki aisi koi baat nahi hai"

"Humne kab kaha….this is called chor ki daadi mein tinka"

"Daadima!!!"

"What Daadima…batayiye kab milayenge?"

"Abhi nahi"

"Lekin"

"Please Daadima…I need time…I mean, aisa kuch bhi nahi hai humare beech mein. Yes I do care for her…a lot…and maybe a little bit more. But please…abhi nahi Daadima."

She came and caressed his head slightly

"Aap pareshaan mat hoyiye Maan. Hum khush hain agar aap kisi ke liye aisa mehsoos karte hain….aur agar humari zaroorat ho to batyenge na humein"

Maan smiled.

"By the way, mila nahi sakta…naam toh bata sakte hain"

"Daadima!!!"

"Please please please…dekhiye aur kitna please karwayenge hum se"

"Daadima"

Maan almost remembered Geet seeing Daadima's cute pleading face.

"Mishty"

"Mishty? Yeh kaisa naam hai…is she Bengali?"

"Nahi….woh…I have kept this name for her because she is sweet and now no more questions. I am getting late…mein jaa raha haoon."

Maan almost skipped out and then turned and looked exasperatedly at his Daadima who was laughing aloud as she screamed the words "Sweet…aapne chakh ke dekha kya?"


Tu Jo Kahe Jeevan Bhar Tere Liye Main Gaaoon
Tere Liye Main Gaaoon

Geet Tere Bolon Pe Likhta Chala Jaaoon,
Likhta Chala Jaoon

Mere Geeton Mein Tujhe Doonde Jag Saara

Chhookar Mere Man Ko Kiya Tune Kya Ishara
Badla Yeh Mausam Lage Pyaara Jag Saara
Chhookar Mere Man Ko Kiya Tune Kya Ishaara


Maan blushed slightly as he just walked out silently shaking his head….

---Flashback ends---

Maan looked up at his chuckling Daadima

"Kya hua…aap itna khush kyon hain?"

"Kuch nahi…woh bas humein kuch yaad aa gaya tha"

"Waise aaj aap yahan…kuch khaas kam tha?"

"Yes woh actually…"

Just then Mrs. Dixit entered and Daadima left with her. They both came later and informed Geet that Panditji had taken out the date for official namkaran of the baby. Mrs. Dixit handed out the list of things required in the puja.

"Thik hai…I will get it over weekend."

"Yes, thoda typical samaan hai…Lajpat Nagar ya Chandani Chowk mein mil jaana chaiye."

"Lekin tum akeli kaise jaogi wahan tak"

"What? Nahi mein chali jaungi sir"

"No…it is not safe especially Chandani Chowk. Tomorrow is Saturday, I will pick you from college and then I will take you there."

"Iski zaroorat nahi hai sir"

"I did not ask you Geet….I just told you."

Geet looked at Daadima who just shook her head as if saying what she could do.

"Anu ke liye puja hai beta. Ab Maan keh rahe hain to…."

Next Day

Maan adored Geet as she moved from one alley to other buying things for the puja. He just followed her as she selected and ticked off the things from the list.

(Lajpat Nagar and Chandani Chowk are old markets and they have alleys usually specializing in one item. For example there is an alley where you have back to back shop of laces and buttons in Lajpat Nagar or books in Chandani Chowk.)

As she almost finished they passed a lane full of bangle shops. Geet just glanced at it with longing and quickly moved on. But Maan saw her tilt her head as she looked at those colorful glass bangles.

"Geet apne liye bhi kuch dekh lo"

"Nahi Sir…I am fine."

"What fine…come let's look at these bangles."

"Bangles…but sir I can't"

Maan glared at her "You can…samjhi….I as your friend if gift you some bangles, you won't wear it?"

Geet swallowed hard as she pondered over the question. Maan's eyes made her restless and finally she nodded "How can I refuse you sir."

Aaja Tera Aanchal Yeh Pyaar Se Main Bhar Doon
Pyaar Se Main Bhar Doon

Khushiyaan Jahaan Bhar Ki Tujhko Nazar Kar Doon
Tujhko Nazar Kar Doon

Tu Hi Mera Jeevan Tuhi Jeene Ka Sahaara

Chhookar Mere Man Ko Kiya Tune Kya Ishara
Badla Yeh Mausam Lage Pyaara Jag Saara
Chhookar Mere Man Ko Kiya Tune Kya Ishaara

Maan smiled at her subconscious acceptance and selected few bangles.

Geet wore them and jingled her hand around. Her eyes got a little misty. She always loved glass bangles and would wear her mom's hiding from her. But after she became widow….

Her hand stilled. Maan saw her changing expression and picked up one green bangle and slipped on her slender wrists. She looked at him teary eyes – "Dekho Geet….tumhare haath mein hain toh plain glass is also looking beautiful."

She glanced at the mirror kept at the side and smiled. Suddenly it froze. Maan was confused.

"Kya hua Geet…pasand nahi aaya toh aur dekh lo"

But Geet stood like a statue. Her eyes widened and a layer of sweat formed on her forehead.

"Geet?"

Precap – Is Modh Se Jaate Hain

Note: Guys from next update story moves in a different direction. Unfortunately I have less time at hand now and after racking my brain also I am not able to come up with songs which fit the situation entirely. So, instead I have decided to use songs which portray the feelings in Maan's and Geet's hearts at this time rather than the actual going. Let me know if you feel they don't match at all in which case I will completely do away with the music for an update or two.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
😃

am first am first !!!!!😆
awesome part...loved the fight between maan n geet for Anu...
last part, has she seen anyone from her past??😕 lovddd it diii😊
Edited by honeygrape - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MEERA IS RIGHT
SHE CAN FORGIVE HER PARENTS AS A DAUGHTER BUT NOT AS A MOTHER

NAUGHTY DADI -MAKING MAAN BLUSH WITH HER WORDS

MAAN AND GEET HAVE BECOME KIDS OVER ANU - ME FIRST

WHAT MADE GEET FREEZE

AND DONT STOP THE MUSIC - LOVE TO HEAR IT WHILE READING
Edited by punam2712 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Maan, Meera, Dadima & Geet.. everyone is so happy becoz of Anugraha's arrival... Last part.. Why Geet looked like shocked? 😲
Nice update. waiting for next part..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great maan is reading pregnancy books...

dadima is right..maan chakh k dikha kya kitna sweet hain...

did geet see someone in th market...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆😆maan and geet fighting to take care of meera baby..meera soo lucky to have maaneet.. what have shocked geet at chandi chawk...wonderful update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
loved the update...
waiting for next part...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
That was an awesome one...
Iam just loving this side of Maan Singh Khurana... Anu is one of the luckiest girl to get a bade papa like MSK and aunt like Geet... the baby scenes and maaneet fighting to take care of anu was a real bliss to read...
And coming to meera forgiving her parents.. yes its not wrong to forgive them if they realize and feel remorse for it... but yet again, i think it will take time... meera has to be ready for that to forgive them and as of now, she is not yet for it... And that part am really looking forward to..
And the flashback... So daadi knows the girl as mishty.. am still so eager to know wat will be her reaction if she comes to know that its geet.. will she be able to accept her knowing all...
the last part... it was such an emotional one... her small wishes that were snatched from her at the tender age... and i liked the way maan emphasized her to complete her wish... but wat made her get into a numb - shocked mode...

eager for the next.. continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh such a sweet part... i loved this song...🤗... dil khush ker dita

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