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Hi guys… I am bck with the next new n fresh episode…..in this there are no taarey its on team n some more interesting things….. I hope it will be interesting…



CHAPTER:--82A

Rey: 5:00 baj gaye….just a second….. vicky ne kaha ki nilesh ko chodke baki sabh uske ghar par hain…bt nilesh,,nilesh waha nahi hain…. Nilesh…beta abh tu dekh…. Tujhe meri taani pe bada crush haina…..abh dekh main iss crush ka kaise faida uthata hu….

{rey takes out his phone n calls nilesh….here nilesh was deep in his sleep….as his phone rings he moves his hand here n there on bed still with closed eyes….he was nt in a mood to opens his eyes as he was very very tired…he tn gets his phone n picks it up keep it near his ear n says in a very low tone….}

Nilesh:hellooo…..

Rey:hey nilesh….

Nilesh:rey tu…bol kya kaam hain…

Rey:tu kya kar raha hain…?????????

Nilesh:alligator main snooker game khel raha hu……

Rey:wat??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Nilesh:kya yaar,,aur kya karunga so raha hu….{rey hearing this thinks….}

Rey:{thinking} ye nilesh ko alag tarike se phasana padega warna ye bhi manaa kar dega…

Nilesh:are rey abh kuch bolega bhi kyun phone kiya hain…

Rey:nahi kuch nahi tu so raha hain to its ok…bas main soch raha tha ki hame jodhpur jaana hain,,,,TAANI se milna hain..{he presses the word taani….hearing word taani nilesh jumps n sits on his bed with widened eyes} jitna jaldi jayenge utna jaldi pahuchenge aur utna hi jaldi TAANI se milenge…{again rey presses word taani}wo bhi to hame miss kar rahi hongi…tujhe miss kar rahi hongi……..

Nilesh:{loudly} kya mujhe miss kar rahi hogi??

Rey:haa tu uska friend,,,no no tu uska best friend jo hain….tu har baar usse kitna support kiya,,uske saath raha…..bt its ok agar tujhe neend aa rahi hain to tu so jaa….waise bhi baki team bhi so rahi hain….unhe taani se milne mein koi interest nahi hain….tujhe bhi nahi hain to…{nilesh cuts him n says}

Nilesh:nahi nahi rey…mujhe milna haina taani se…ek kaam kart u abhi 5:00 ho raha hain tu exact 6:00 mujhe pick up karne aaja…main ready rahunga…

Rey:nilesh bt baki team to nahi aa rahi…ham dono kya kare??

Nilesh:uski tension tu mat le…tu bas dekhte jaa & 6:00 sharp mujhe pick up karne aa k??

Rey:fine….{nilesh hungs up the call n thinks…}

Nilesh:{excited}taani se milne jaana hain……par team ko kaise bulau????{he thinks for some time n gets an idea…as he gets an idea his face gets filled with happiness…} nilesh u r great….{he jumps out of bed n gets ready…he was setting his hairstyle…..the clock strucks 5:20 n there comes sound of horn from outside….rey goes on horning loudly…here nileshesh thinks..}

Nilesh:rey aagaya…par ye itna horn kyun maar raha hain…sabh log uth jayenge…{he takes his bag n rushes out…seeing him rey stops the horn….all others houses people come out n shout..}

A person:ye kaun hain aisa horn maar raha hain…{hearing this rey gets down of car n cums to nilesh n stands..}

2nd person:pagal hogaya hain kya?? Dimag satak gaya hain kya…akal hain yaa nahi??

Rey:iski to…{n our angry young man abt to go when nilesh stops n says…,}

Nilesh:sabh logo ko sorry disturb karne ke liye…jayiye jayiye so jayiye…{all goes of n then nilesh says}

Nilesh:rey tu chal gadi main bheth…..

Rey:fine…{they sits in the car n rey says..}

Rey:bt nilesh baki team???

Nilesh:tu uski tension mat le…aadhe ghante main sab log ghirte,padte—bhagte , haafte station aa jayenge…tu chal na abh./..{rey drives the cars…theyboth reach the station…it was around 6:15 now…rey tells nilesh}

Rey:nilesh tu yaha pe bheth main atleast jaake sabh ke tickets la leta hu…pata nahi team aayegi bhi ki nahi….{n rey moves off…nilesh smiles n takes out his phone n calls swayam….here rey takes the tickets,,takes two coffees n comes after 10 minutes he cums bck to nilesh…as he was cuming nilesh doesn't see him n mummers…}

Nilesh:ho gaya kaam…

Rey:kaunsa kaam hogaya…

Nilesh:kuch nahi…..

Rey:fine ye le coffee….{they drinks the coffee..it was now 7:00 rey was desperate n restless…he luks here n there then looks time n says…]

Rey:nilesh tune to bola ki aadhe ghante main sab log yaha par rahenge abh tak ek bhi nahi aaya…

Nilesh:chill kar yaar dekhte jaa abh kaise ek ke baad ek aate hain….n ek baat yaad rakh jabh sab logaayenge to tu unse kuch nahi kahega…bas main jo bolu uske liye haa haa kehna{after a few minutes swayam running reaches …he cums n start searching for Jodhpur express….

Nilesh luks at him n asks rey…}

Nil:rey tune kabhi Bandar ki puch mein aag lagi hui dekhi hain…

Rey:wat????

Nil:udhar dekh pata chal jayega….{rey n nil luks at swayam,,and seeing him like that both of them start laughing…swayam luks at them ncome to them…}

Swayam:guys tum log yaha bhethe ho jothpur ki train chali gayi kya?????????

Rey:jothpur ki train,,wo to….{bfore he cud complete nil cuts him n says}

Nil:wo to chali gayi…..hamne miss kardi…

Rey:wat??? Kab gayi train?? Tune mujhe bataya kyun nahi???

Swayam:tu kya bol raha hain rey???{nil stamps on rey's leg to indicate him n says}

Nil:wo rey joke kar raha hain…haina rey???{rey gives a blank expression to nil again nil pressing his teeth says..} haina rey????

Rey:ha…haa…haa…haa….main to joke kar raha tha…

Swayam:lagta nahi hain….anyways nil baki team kaha hain?? N sharon?? Tune kaha sabh aa rahe hain???

Nil:wo swayam tu akela hi late aaya hain…sabh time ke pehle hi aagaye the n sabh log train main bheth ke jothpur gaye…bas main aur rey tere liye ruk gaye…ham 9:00 ki train se chale jayenge…n swayam Sharon bahut gusse main thi..

Swayam:wat??? Really????

Rey:really ???

Swayam:rey tujhe nahi pata…{hearing this rey luks at nil n nil says..}

Nil: wo rey tujhe bol raha hain ki really aisa hua hain…haina rey???

Rey:ha…haa…haa…haa….main tujhe bata raha tha..

Swayam:Sabh chale gaye n Sharon gusse main abh to main gaya…{rey get lost in thinking something n after a few mintues he loudly says to nil}

Rey:oh….abh main samjha…nil tune ye bolke bulaya hain sabko ki 7:00 ko train hain jabki ye to sirf hame pata hain ki7:00 ki to koi train hi nahi hain….awesome dude….…ur really intelligent man..;…

Nil:{hits his forehead n says} rey tu thodi der chup nahi reh sakta…

Swayam:acha to 7:00 ki koi train hi nahi hain…nil ye tera plan hain n tu sabko ullu bana raha tha…

Nil:are sun na dude wo rey ko sabko jaldi bulana tha isiliye maine uski help ki aur ye pagalhain ki isne mujhe hi phasa diya…

Swayam:main to kuch nahi bolunga par abhi Sharon aayegi…tabh use tu kya kahega???

Nil:wo main sambhal lunga…bas jo main kahu uske liye tum dono haa bolna please…..

Swayam:ham kyun bole??

Nil:plzzz mere baapo mujhe bachaaoo…

Reyam:fine…{till thn Sharon arrives n sees them…she start cuming to them…}

Rey:Sharon aagayi..

Nil:yaar sharon aagayi..plzz guys haa bolna n rey iss baar ache se…

Reyam:fine…

Sharon:guys tum log yaha….baki team kaha par hain…n train abhi tak nahi aayi kya??

Nil:nahi Sharon train to kabka aake chali gayi n hamne miss kardi…par dekho team wale to abhi tak nahi aaye…

Sharon:wat?? hamari train miss ho gayi??????

Nil:haa…chaho to rey n swayam ko bhi puchlo…{Sharon luk at reyam n bth of them nods saying yes..}

Sharon:ye hamari team bhi naa aaj kal bahut zyada lazy ho gayi hain..kuch kaam nahi hota bas sote rehte hain… aane do achi khabar leti hu inki …

Nil:haa Sharon tum yaha ruko wo log aate honge…ache se khabar lena unki…main rey n swayam ham tickets change karke aate hain….

Sharon:k fine,…{three of them moves frm there n the whole team enters n rushes to Sharon…}

Vicky:train kaha hain???

Simmi:yaa n nil,rey n swayam kaha hain…

Neha:neha asking train not cum till now??

Amar:nahi aayi kya train???

Bharath:kaha hain train??

Rimmi:batao na sharon…

Vishaka:tell man…

Sharon:guys stop………..ek to tum log itna late aaye n now ur expecting that train will be waiting for u…wat the hell guys….this will not work…bcoz of u all we missed our train…..tum logo ko kuch nahi hoga bt tumhari wajah se rey bhi nahi jaa paya…I did nt expect this frm u guys…

All:sorry Sharon…

Sharon:u shuld be…

Rimmi:matlabh abh ham jothpur nahi jaa sakte…

Sharon:nahi

Neha:nahiii aisa nahi ho sakta…..

Rinni:shit maine jo itne dress pack kiye hai wo main kaha phenugi…..

Vicky:are jodhpur dekhna rehgaya yar…

Sharon:guys stop it….what is this firstly to tum logo ko jhodpur nahi gaye n apne dress nahi phen paoge iska tension hain…instead tum logo ko sochna to ye chaiye ki abh rey taani se kaise milega….u guys are really un belivable….

Vishaka:yaa man she is rt…

Vicky.rinni,neha:sorry Sharon…

Sharon:now its k n listen we r going to jodhpur as rey,swayam n nil gaye hain 9.00 ki train ke tickets lene….

Amar:oh..to 9.00ki train hain to ham us main jaa sakte hain…

Sharon:yaa……….{till then reyamesh{ nilesh swayam n rey} were hiding behind a stall n looking team n Sharon one above the other n thn rey ask nilesh}

Rey:yar nil ye bata humne tickets to phele hi leli n tune sharon se jhoth bola wo to thik hai.. bt hum team aane se phele yaha q agaye…?n abh yese chup chup ke kya dekh rahe hai…{hearing this nil turns to reyam n says to swayam…}

Nil:swayam teri behen ke pyaar ne rey ko nikama kardiy..{reyam gives him glaring look n swayam says…}

Swayam:dekh meri behen ko bheech mein mat la tu…

Nil: ye ek possive bhai kai ka…k let it be n rey listen hum yaha tickets lene aaye isse Sharon ko ye belive hogaya hai ki hum jhoot nahi bol rahe hai…n agar team ke samne hum hote is waqt to tum dono ke expression se kisina kisiko to shaq hohi jata n upar se Sharon THE SHARON RAI PRAKSH ka gussa to pata hai kaise hota hai n hum q bekar mein uss mein pashe jhelne do baki team ko…isliye main tum logo ko yaha leke agaya…batao how was that…am I nt smart n intelligent…?

Reyam:{reyam bring they palms together n join them,bend n say…} jahapana tushi great ho...

Nil:I know I know…{n reyan stand straight n swayam take out his mobile n do something meanwhile rey stand beside nil n nil losting in his own world mummers to himself}

Nil:main smart hu intelligent hu aur looks bhi ache hai popular hu phir bhi meri taani meri taani mere best frnd se pyaar karti hai…[makes a puppy face then says…]par main to simmi n waise bhi rey taani se bohut pyaar karta hai..to rey is best for taani n I would have always crush on taani n I will always be there for her n rey as a best frnd….{n smiles…..n moves frm there n rey who beside nil listen everthing n feels happy n he to smiles…till thn swayam keeps his hand n rey turns to him n swayam says…}

Swayam:kya hut u smile kyu kar raha hai..

Rey:kuch nahi bas main ye soch raha hu ki finally main taani ke saath rahunga n use abh apne aap se kabhi dur nahi jane dunga….{swayam gets emotional n hugs rey n rey to give back a tight hug…nil sees this n shouts…}

Nil:oye….duniya ke emotional namuno abh chalo waran Sharon yaha aake apna shiren suru kardegi…{reyam brk hug n laughs hearing nil…..}

Reyam:yaa phir yah ape bhjega…siren siren siren….hahahahahaaa{all three on them reaches team laughing loudly…n falling on eachother team gets surprise to see them like that after so long….n nil says…}

Nil:hi guys….

All:hi…tickets mil gaye??

Rey:haa…..

Vicky:dude kuch hua hai ki jo tum itna has rahe ho…

Simmi:yaa whts the matter…{before reyam could say anything nil says them….}

Nil:nting….k listen guys train is on time that is 9:00 k so we have sometime till then we can take rest..

All:yaa….

Vicky:ek baat bol rey tu thik haina??

Rey:tu aisa kyun puch raha hain..

Vicky:nahi mujhe ye doubt aaya ki taani ne jo tujhe itne jhatke,shocks diye uski wajah se kahi tere mind main koi fault to nahi aaya na…

Sharon:wat??? Wat do u mean?? Tum aisa kyun bol rahe ho Vicky??

Vicky:nahi Sharon aisa hain ki ye rey na sotahain,na khata hain na kuch….hame bhi nahi sone diya…{hearing this all laughs n sharon goes beside rey n says..}

Sharon:that's enough guys…waise rey pagal to ho gaya hain taani ke pyaar main…

Rey:Sharon tum bhi…{all again laughs n then bharath says..}

Bharath:ek kaam karte hain be….jab tak train nahi aajati ham thoda aaram karte hain…

All:yaa u r right..{all sits couple couple on nearby chairs….sharon sit with swayam n rey sits alone on a distance chair n start reading taani's diary…}


to be continued...in next post...scroll down...

Edited by rajkumaripari - 12 years ago
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Chapter:82b continued



{rey moves his hand on that diary's cover n says }

Rey:kitni cute hain meri taani…{n he opens the first page n start reading it….}

FIRST DAY OF TAANI IN COLLEGE……….


Rey:thank u tumhe nahi bolna chahiye taani wo to mujhe bolna chahiye….Thank u krishnaji mujhe taani se milane ke liye….{all flashes start flashing in rey's mind….he recollects all the things happened on first day…}


{thn he comes out his trance n read some pages n thn it comes the page of}

DIL SE REY SEQUENCE……….


Rey:pata nahi tha mujhe ki wo tum ho par shayad Krishnaji hi chahte the isiliye ham dono itne close aaye….waise bhi unhe to pata hi tha ki aage jake hame ekhona hain..{he then again get lost in thinking of dil se sequence…..}


{then he read some more pages n thn cums the page of }

REY REJECTING TAANI………..


Rey:nahi taani tab main apne feeling jaan nahi paya aur aisi condition main nahi tha ki jaan pau… par main tabhi,abhi bhi aur aage bhi sirf tumse hi pyaar karunga…{thn all that day flashes in my mind……}


{thn he read some pages…a little water was formed in his eyes..thn it cums the page of }

MITWA SEQUENCE……………


Rey:nahi taani tum mere liye sirf Swayam ki behen nahi ho….tum mere liye meri Zindagi ho….aur main tumhare khilaaf kuch nahi sun sakta….tumhari wajah se mujhe kabhi koi problem nahi ho sakti…….



{thn he read some more pages n thn its cums the page of that day when..}{guys frm here our story starts…now this is nt of D3}

REY CONFESSION TO TAANI


Rey:I love u taani n I know that u too love me…..par ye line samajh nahi aayi…aap jaise apni princess ko rakhna chahte the…..THE???????????anyways……

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{he then start reading next pages….there was a broad smile on his face…thn it came the page of..}

2 DAYS TAANI MISSING…………….


Rey:to ye do din taani apni frnd ke paas nahi balki kriya ki mom ke saath thi…..shivam ki wajah se taani kriya ki mom se milli….taani ne tabhi promise kiya…..meri taani ka dil bahut bada hain…Taani ne iss page main "R" likh kar cut kar diya…..sirf taani likha………

{thn he goes o reading….all day by day he was reading…thn it came of }

GOA TRIP……………


Rey:matlabh taani on plan thi……..usne pehle hi decide kar liya ki next day article daalna hain n rey se break up karna hain…..taaniii taani………..waise Goa ki trip meri sabse favourite aur beautiful trip thi….


{thn he goes on reading the whole diary n now it was the last page of diary..}

SHIVAM N REY FIGHT………………



Rey:jo shivam ne kaha uske liye use aise hi maarna chahiye….agar uss din tum bich main nahi aati taani to main Shivam ko jaan se hi maar daalta….kriya was right…usne ye sab kaha tha mujhse...par taani was right….usne mujhse kabhi I love u nahi kaha naahi kabhi iss diary main likha…..{he thinks for some time n says..} pata nahi wo three magical words tum kab kahogi mujhse….iss baar mujhe pura yakeen hain kit um zarur kahogi..n I knew rohan tumhara sirf bst frnd hain…aur mera bff…yaa m jealous of him bt thts k…ye diary padke aisa lagta hain ki taani ke saath kuch to hua hain…..kuch major hua hain…jismain bade bhaiya,taani ki mumma n taani ke pops included the…………Taani sab keh rahe hain ki tumhare pyaar mein main pagal hogaya,nikamma hogaya n so to hain….bas abh tumse milna hain…pata nahi aur kitni der tumhare bigar rehna padega…{rey's eyes were a little teary…till thn swayam cums n keeps his hands on rey's shoulder n rey luks at him n he asks…}

Swayam:kya hua dude?? U r k na????

Rey:yaa…..

Swayam:kaha kho gaya..chal train aagayi hain….chal…

Rey:train aagayi..awesome..chalna khada kyun hain….{bth reyam cums to teamn Sharon says}

Sharon:finally rey apni girl frnd taani ke sapno se baahar aagaye…

Rey:Sharon plzzz….abh chalo guys lets get inside the train…

All:yaaa………………{all gets into the train n sits in their AC compartment…all settles in such way…


{thn after 5 minutes train starts n rey says…}

Rey:aree swayam tujhe jothpur jaane ke liye train hi milli…..ham flight main chale jate na..

Swayam:rey ji jothpur mein airport nahi hain…ek baar aapki shaadi ho jaye taani se phir aap banwa dena airport …………{all laughs hearing this n Sharon says..}

Sharon:guys check karlo sabke bags aa gaye na….

Simmi:nil u brought my bags naa..

Nil:yes madam………………

Simmi:haa Sharon mere 2 bags…

Nil:mere bhi 2 bags……

Rimmi:mere bhi 2 bags..

Neha:neha also having 2 bags…..

Vicky:mere bhi 2 bags aagaye..

Amar:haa mere bhi 2 bags…

Bharath:abe mere bhi do[2] bags aagaye..

Vishaka:yaa I too have 2 bags….

Sharon:mere bhi 2 bags aagaye………rey tumhare bags???

Rey:haa mera bhi ek bag aagaya……..

amar:wat?? Ek bag???

bharath:abe tu kapde bhi laya yaa nahi…….kya jodhpur main aise hi jaane ka plan hain…

nil:rey tujhe kya lagra ki tere sasuraal wale gift karenge kapde………….

Rey:arey wo sab sambhalne mera saala swayam haina..

Swayam:haa jijaji mere paas aur koi kaam to hain hi nahi..

Sharon:swayam tumhare bags aagaye…{swayam luks n thn says..}

Swayam:haa mere 4 bags aa gaye…

All:4 bags????????????

Rey:ek baat bol sab log sirf 2 bags laye,,main to ek hi bag laya n girls bhi unka makeup ka saaman n jewellery n dresses samet kar 2 bags hi layi tu konsa khazana laya 4 bags main…

Swayam:oh hello…ismain se sirf do bags mere hain baki tu teri girl…I mean meri behen taani ke hain…

Sharon:taani ke???

Swayam:haa actually jab maine use yaha se bhej diya tha tab jo haath main aaya wo maine uskebag mein dal diye..,.ye baki pura saamaan hain uska jo wo yaha chod ke gayi thi……….

Sharon:oh..k…{then sharon get lost in thinking something….swayam was busy doing something in his phone…rey was lost in recollecting all their goa moments…till then simmi takes out snacks n whole team eats… they passes few to boys n gives swayam n rey…thn simmi tells..}

Simmi:Sharon tum bhi lo…{no response frm Sharon..}

Simmi:Sharon….{no response….whole team including reyam were luking at sharon..}

Swayam:Sharon…{no respse thn rey shaking Sharon says..}

Rey:Sharon…

Sharon:huh???rey kuch kaha tumne..

Simmi:wat happened Sharon?

Sharon:nothing.

Swayam:kya hua Sharon?tum kuch tense lag rahi ho??

Sharon:wo…..kuch nahi chodo na???{swayam bends keeps his hand on sharon's hand n asks…}

Swayam:bolo to sahi…

Sharon:wo….actually…wo…swayam tumne apni family ke bare main kuch nahi bataya,…

Nil:oh..to Sharon ur nervous…..

Sharon:shut up nil…nervous my foot… swayam main pehli baar tumhare ghar aa rahi hu…n I dnt know waha kaun kaun honge,,kya hoga… n tum hoke apni family ke bare main kuch bol bhi nahi rahe ho..pata hain mujhekitni nervousness horahi hain…

All:SHARON RAI PRAKASH N NERVOUS..

Nil:abhi maine kya Spanish main bola…

Sharon:shut up nil…

Simmi:nil u sit na….

Rey:oh so miss Sharon rai prakash the diva is nervous…

Sharon:rey plzzz meri nervousness ko aur mat badao…n swayam tum kuch to bolo..

Rey:haa yaar swayam tu kabhi apni family ke bare kuch bataya hi nahi n now we r going to meet ur familynham kisi ko jaante tak nahi….mujhe waha sabko impress bhi karna hain…main waha sirf taani ko manane nahi jaa raha…main taani se pyaar karta hu n taani mujhse ye baat waha sabko pata chalni chahiye n sab log iss relation ko accept bhi karna..

Swayam:oh hello jodhpur main jab tak nahi kehta tu kuch mat karna…

Rey:tera bas chala to tu to kabhi nahi bolenedega….{rey looks up...n team looking at him...}

rey:taani pata nahi tumse kab milunga...?????krishanaji helppp...

how was it guys everyone wanted that taani rey should rread taani dairy so i did that hope u all liked it...do comment n like n frnds as this r vacations i m free n can update soon bt i want minium nice likes n comment that too lamba then onlyi will update now ur wish u want fast update or slow...by the way love u all n thanks to all for wishing me happy birthdsy...love u ur pari...enjoy the update...👏


Edited by rajkumaripari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res/Unres..
Hey Pari n Priya..
*HUG*
🤗
enJoyed the update!!!! Nil is Nil! 😆
Seriously, Kya bhane marta hain! Loved it..😳 😆
Then, Hamara Hero...Rey!!
Ohh..Godd!! 😲 😆 😳
Swayam ki entry awesome thi ha...
Then, Gang discussion..
Nil and Reeyam watching them chupke chupke...😆
Nil's dialog..Wohhaaahh!! 😳
Enjoyed it a lot..
I was smiling...WIDELY throught the update!!!!
Gr8 work...👏
Update soon!
Pm me! 😳



Edited by Ish_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nise update
update the next paret soom
and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
main marr jawa..
OMG!!
pari darling kitni mehnat ki hai tumne...
luved both the prts 2 the core..
i thought ki mein bataungi ki mujhe kaunse parts acche lage but gosh the update..
there is no damn mistake!!
i loved it completely...
the rey-nil convo..
rey's plan..
nil's excitement..
nil's plan...
rey's stupidity..
everybdys dialogues..
the diary...
the confusion!!!
etc etc etc etc..
luved all the funny moments..
they were really hilarious...
luv u pari..
fr heavens sake.. agar mujhe sone dena hai to pls jaldi updt karo..
and pls cnfusions pe lake leap mat lelena..
pls jaldi likho and jaldi updt karo..



once again..
luv ya luv ya luv ya luv ya pari..
no i'll call u TAAREY'IANS ki PALKI!!!
lol...
updt ASAP..
and a heartly thnks fr the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...no no... super awesome...
diary part ws really nice... the pics added were perfect...
nil n his pranks are hillarious...
bt nil's dialogue abt taani n his crush on her ws really touching...
sharon s nervous... wow...
mystry abt taani's past s intrstng...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice 😊...update ...update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pari it was damn good ... i was really enjoying reading it ... i must say you are an amazing writer ... and taani's diary was awesome ... her each and every line touched my soul ... great work dear ... really loved it 😊 update soon and ya thanks for such a lamboo update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice update
update the next part soon
and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Luvd d both update..awesome.sharon is nervous..cntnu soon

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