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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: nanditam2107
Pretty interesting & as the name suggests its thriller!!!!😊

Do continue soon!!😊

Thanks Nandita 😳

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preity_d

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: alicemath
Yet another Mindblowing storyline ...woow...A suspense-thriller story on Virman...*cant control my excitement*
Where do u get such variety plots from dear...*bows down*...An amazingly talented writer indeed...⭐️ 👏
Luvd the description of scenic beauty of Red Hill town...but those mysterious brutal murders...😕
Virat as a n investigation agent ...wooww...u r cumin up wid different professions for out hottie Viru😉
Mrs.Maanvi Viren Vadhera😲...n shez preg...😲😲 nw hw wil our fit Virat in?????
Viren-Manvi seqence wz romatic...but hw i wish it wz on Virman 🤔
Ms.Keller seems to b a mysterious character...
Really xcited to c how the story z gonna unfold...M already in luv wid dis ff...
Itna amazing concepts leke aathey ho n u xpect us to wait for loong for the update...not fair...so plzz cont asap...
N thnx a loot fr the pm!!!🤗

OMg alice Divya 😃🤗
sachme what a wonderful and long comment
I seriously wait fpr ur comments
they are just amazing 😳
And as the story is on virman and they will end up, so don't lose hopes 😉😆
The next is coming 😳

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preity_d

@preity_d

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Niaksharma
Continue soon..
Nd
also in other stories...
Waiting...
Waiting...
Sinner.. Also...

Pehle yeh pad lo khushi 😉😆 thanks for waiting a big hugs 😳
The next is coming 😃

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preity_d

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Res

unres..

yayyy i am the first one to comment

Finally tune update kar hi diya

awesome update preetooo just amazing wowww

full of suspense and i love it more...viren gayab in such a weird way...itna weird reaction tha uska...why did he go in such a hurry in the forest tht too taking manvi there...and wats with the client thing...lots and lots of qustions ...full of suspense ...

martin kinda trying to flirt with manvi haan 😆

martin and virat ka competion chal raha hai haan ..thts kinnda funny😆

"Oh, yeah and leave you to do some romance with the lady! You are using your chances huh?
loved this dialogue 🤣🤣

soo i guess the online chat convo was virat's and manvi's and they know eachother from before plus virat kinda likes her...OMG this is going to be soo damn interesting man ...😃
virat was just going to check the laptop shitt he just missed it 😔
the case is getting soo damn interesting yet more mysterious...the biggest question is why did viren go missing all of a sudden and what can manvi be hiding from them and why??

update next part sooon and do pm me...
i love the mysterious part in this story and ofcoz the way you have thought and written the story till know hattsss off to your writing skills...👏

Edited by kulsum_virman - 13 years ago

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.Yamin.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Res 😛

Unres,,,

Amazing n fabulous update Preity👏👏👏...mazaa aa gayya😃...i juz love thrillers😉...teraa yeh story par par kar meraa dimaag kaa dahi ho rahaa hai😆...soch soch ke....😉😆...par kuch nikal tha hi nahi...😆...virat aur manvi are chat friends haww...does virat noe tat manvi is his chat frd...aur yeh kya viren is missing😲...yeh kya ...manvi par hamlaa...is viren the culprit...arey meraa sar ghooming.....😆...the way u create the suspense awesome...superb...head offs to u preity...really mindblowing......really really interesting...now can't wait for next part...excited to read next...will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the upcoming pm

Edited by yaminnthida - 13 years ago

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: preity_d
Pehle yeh pad lo khushi 😉😆 thanks for waiting a big hugs 😳
The next is coming 😃

thank for update..with returned hug...
Running to read...
Bt dusri story me bhi chahiye..;(...

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Done...
Its was awesome...se upar ka tha...
Liked it...
Want to read more nd more..
Continue soon...
Nd other stories also...btw how u knew my name?... Maine bataya tha?...:|...

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Res 😊
Unres 😊

Awesome update Preity!! Fantastic ⭐️⭐️.. Really loved the way story is progressing.. Full of suspense.. After reading the update, many question raised in my mind..
So Viren is missing and that too in a weird manner 😕.. He left his phone back also.. That's strange..Viren and Manvi left Keller's house in a hurry and suddenly Viren disappeared in the forest!! And Manvi fainted there.. What actually happened in the Keller house?? I hope Manvi is not lying!! Now someone attacked her 😲.. Who is behind this attack?? Aww Virat took her in his arms and she held his collar tightly 😳😳.. I liked that part 😛.. What is wrong with this Martin guy?? 😡 Is he trying to hit on Manvi?? 😵 Not cool.. It seems that Martin and Virat don't share a good working relationship 😆 .. Finally Virat got some clue.. All those victims were Viren's client 😲.. That's shocking.. It means somehow Viren is related to the real culprit 😳..
But the best part of this update was definitely the chat conversation between Virman ❤️.. I loved it totally!! They are online friends *WOW* and both are unaware of this fact as of now.. Unexpected and superb twist 👍🏼.. Loved their ids.. 'Midnight star' and 'Liquid sulfur'.. Nice names.. So sulfur has some feelings for night 😃.. That's amazing ..Im already loving their bonding 😳.. Update was brilliantly written Preity animated clapping photo: Bravo Clap Claps Clapping Smiley Smilie Emoticon Animated Animation Animations Gif bravosmiley.gif