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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pink1

😃Thank you Thank you 😃 I am so happy u update my fav story finally he realize is feeling to her now what happen when he get know that she love some one else how he will react update soon if possible update regular and one again a big hug walla thank you






thank u sooo much... 😊 😊 ohhh so this is ur fav8... great 😊 will defo try dear 😊 n thanks for the big hug n the teddys
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jenniifer

OMG :DD<3

yur ff is sooo amazingg <3
i love it damn Virman are cute :')
but now what gunna happen O:
Virats realised his feelings for manvi where as she is in love with kabir and i getting engaged :'c
im damn sure yu have some twist coming up yeah ? ;)
well do pm me! <3
and continue soon, cant wait to read yur fab story :D

thank u soo much jennifer 😊 😊 to know whats gonna happen next, stay tuned 😊
twist... yes it is 😉
will pm u...
do buddy me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
owww
dont know whom i want together😔
i mean manvi & kabir love each other so much, how can i be so heartless and wish they would get seperate...
but than there is viratt???
ufff and now he will go to her, im so excited to know what will happen...

great work as every time naina...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee yayyeee he realised his love thank god hrishikesh ka tho pata nahi bt - manvi n especially kabir bach ke kyu ke virat aa raha hai apni manvi ko lene eeekkksss cnt wait to see wat virat does omg wat will happen wen he finds out about manvi n kabir bein together n wen manvi finds out virat loves her n even virat n kabirs reaction on seein each other the 2 important guys in manvi's life this is gonna get very interestin😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
next part in 10 minutes
naina927 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
just updating... finding approprite pics 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 14
viren calls virat to enquire about his whereabouts.
viren : toh kahan hai mere bhai...??
virat : apni manjil ki aur...

viren : toh aaj tu breakfast pe toh dikhega nahi aur teri car bhi...
virat : haan bhai wo main subah jaldi nikal gaya tha... bhai waise mere pankh hote na toh main udd ke chala jata...
viren : waah waah good going bhai...
virat : bhai wahan kisiko kuch mat btana aur koi bahana bna dena...

viren : dont worry.. main hoon na n jaa mera aashirwaad tere saath hai... meri saali ko manake hi aana...
virat : poori koshish karunga...

viren : koshish nahi tujhe karna hi hoga... make her realise that she loves you...
virat : yes boss... okk bye bhai...
viren : bye.. take care
scene shifts
manvi was sleeping peacefully when her phone started ringing...

manvi : helllooo...

kabir smiled listening to her extended version of hello
manvi : arrey baat nahi karni toh mat karo... par mujhe sone do yaar...
kabir : mani main hoon...
manvi : kabbbiiirrr...
kabir : nahi... its onlu kabir...
manvi : hehe... very funny...
kabir : good morning meri jaan...
manvi : good morning...
kabir : ab woh kaho jo itne din se nahin kaha...
manvi : kya...??
kabir : haaww... tumhe yaad nahi hai...??
manvi : kya yaad nahi hai...???
kabir : yahi ke itne din se tumne mujhe kya nahi kaha...
manvi : kya nahi kaha...
kabir : wohi jo almost ek mahine pehle kaha tha...
manvi : kya..?? ohhh... ab yaad aaya..
kabir : toh phir bolo...
manvi : nahi... baar baar kehne se nazar lag jati hai...
kabir : chii... kitna gand
logic hai ye...
manvi : gand nahi hai beeji kehti hai khushiyon ko nazar jaldi lag jati hai...
kabir : tu phir tum nahi kahogi...??
manvi : nahi...
kabir : theek hai toh main tumse baat nahi karunga...
manvi : bhau kyun khaa rahe ho... ghar aao na chachi ke haath ke garma garam paranthe khilati hoon...
kabir : mujhe nahi khane... bye..
manvi : suno toh... hello..?? kabir..?? koi hai kya..?? phone kaat dia... ufff...
manvi threw the mobile on the pillow n banged her head on that pillow only...
manvi : ab toh kabir nahi manega... mujhe i love you kehna hi padega... itna jiddi hai mera boyfriend... koi nai, jis din main tumhare biwi ban gayi na, tumhe ek din sudhar dungi... dekhna tum... chal ab uth manvi.. kuch seekhle, warna sasural mein lol ho jaega tera... par mere sasural mein hai hi kaun... main aur kabir... uncle aunty toh wapas chale jaege na... but agar main aur kabir bhi unke saath shift ho gaye toh... haan haan kuch toh seekhna hi padega...
whole day manvi tried talking to kabir n manaofy him but he was ignoring manvi and manvi well knew that he was doing all this on purpose. now manvi was sitting at ganga ghat thinking how to clear the air, she suddenly got an idea to take an idea from her partner. she called virat but before he could pick it, she discoonected it thinking that she shouldnt disturb him n maya.
manvi : kyun pareshaan karun unn love birds ko... aur waise bhi agar uss chep ko shaq ho gaya toh usko sab kuch btana padega... waise ab chupane waala hai hi kya... usko bhi bta dungi aur di ko bhi... haan yahi theek h... toh fir call kar hi leti hoon...
manvi called virat n he picked it instantly...
virat : mujhe miss kar rahi thi...
manvi : haan... tumhe kaise pta...
virat : dil ka rishta u see...
manvi : mera majaak bana rahe ho...
virat : nahi toh...
manvi : partner...
virat : bolo partner...
manvi : actually na..
virat : aise tum ho kahan...?? i mean ghar pe ho kya...??
manvi : nahi re.. ganga ghat aai thi...
virat : accha...
manvi : pta hai partner...
virat : listen i will call u back... maya ka call aa raha hai.. okk okk bye..

virat ended the call n ran towards ganga ghat
manvi : uff... meri baat toh sun lete... maya hi hai sab kuch ab...
manvi disappointedly started walking back home when someone called her from behind. she turned aroung n got the biggest shock ever...
manvi : v..vi.. virat...
virat : virat hoon... koi bh..bh..bhoot thodi...
manvi : tum sach mein aa gaye...
virat : haan manvi... main sach mein aa gaya.. tumhare paas...
manvi : par partner... achanak... sab theek toh hai na...
virat : sab achanak hi toh ho gaya.. pyaar, pyaar ka ehsaas..
manvi : kya bake jaa rahe ho...??
virat : kuch nahi... manvi mujhe kuch kehna hai...
manvi : mujhe bhi kuch kehna hai...
virat : pehle main...
manvi : nahi.. pehle main.. chep ho kya...??

virat : acha kaho... (dreamily smiling at her)
manvi hugged virat n said " i love you "

virat was shocked n then the very next moment he was on the top of the world thinking that manvi loves him too n she herself has confessed her feelings. he wrapped his arms around her n said what he was dying to say " i love you too manvi ". he felt as if he got evrything he ever wanted from life.
manvi : tumahre saamne toh kitni asaani se keh diya... phir pta nahi uske saamne kyun nahi keh pati... help me partner...
virat felt as if thw world came to a stand still and he was utterly confused.
virat : kiske saamne...??
manvi : kabir ke saamne...
virat broke the hug n held manvi by her shoulders...
virat : kabir...??

manvi : ufffooo... tumhe toh pta hi nahi hai... chalo main tumhe milwati hoon kabir se... waise
partner abhi ke liye itna jaanlo, ke kabir
meri jaan hai, mera dil hai, meri zindagi hai, mera pyaar hai, mera future hai, mera sab kuch hai... i love him so much...
that very moment, virat was broken... his heart was once again broken n he was damn hurt this time.. he was hurt to an extent, that tears also refused to roll from his eyes. he felt as if he was no longer alive, someone pulled out his heart in a jerk. he once again lost his love, not only love, his true love... he lost everything... the girl whom he was dreaming to live a lifetime, was in love with somebody else... destiny again played a cruel game with him... he was the one who again proved a looser in life n in love...
manvi : chalo na...
virat blankly followed manvi and his eyes were fixed at his hand which was manvi holding in her hand. he was thinking what if she she never leaves his hand now n become his for whole life long but he knew he was wishing the impossible... this would never happen now... but on the other hand he was cursing the man who took away his ded futiya from him... he was already feeling furious against the person who became the third angle in his love story.. he wished what if that third angle was never there...

manvi : virat...
virat : huh..
manvi : tum yahin rukna... jab main bolungi na... tab aana... okk..??
virat : hmm..
virat saw manvi going towards the main door of that house n ringing the bell. someone opens the door n manvi says i love u kabir... and taht someone hugs manvi... seeing them hug each other made virat hell jealous n angry..
manvi : kabir... i want you to meet somebody... virat... aao na...
manvi held virat's hand n brought him in front of the door and virat was again looking at manvi wishing that this nightmare of his life ends soon.
kabir : virat.. virat vadera...
virat looked at that guy and whispered " kabir... kabir singhania "
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Posted: 12 years ago
surprise update haan ...didnt expect it😃
update was just amazing naina 👏👏

bechara virat phirse dil toot gaya uska aur sab teri wajeh se naina😡
kitna khush tha woh jab manvi ne usse Ilove yu kaha...aur manvi ko samajh bhi nai aaya jab usne i love yu too manvi kaha...
aur yeh kya virat aur kabir ek doosre ko jante hai ...😲
ab yeh kaunsa naya twist hai yaar
jo bhi hai i want my virman together kaise bhi karke i want virman 😉

update next part soon 😊
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Virat n Kabir already knew each other Thats Good new Twist..Feeling really sad for Virat... Ab kya hoga ??? bt i love kabir too.. VirMan ke beech Kabir Na Na... So Kabir ko maaro goli pls Virat Manvi ko Milado sab aapke haath mein hai naina..😊😊😊
Edited by .jai. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res ..
unres .. sorry im late naina
update tou dhamakey dar tha like always
poor virat ..feeling very bad for him 😭
tu ne aisa kiu kiya uskey sath ? 😭
Edited by sabs.... - 12 years ago

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