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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely Poo,as usual! Hmmm so MM finally meet only to separate once more ! Sounds familiar??!! 😉 Enjoyed it all,thanks ever o much for the update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great Poo.

Gradually growing Bond between Mohan-Addu was nice, surprise B'day party arrangements and Megha's secret visit 😳 at Mohan's place were wow...

I loved Guru decorating Monu's laptop.😆...FB scenes ☺️
Guru pulling Mohan's leg...Poor Monu, did't know what to do...😛like a teen-ager😆

Nanhi planning to make MM meet and made it success...
MM's romantic moments were adorable and looks like you didn't want to stop writing more on this...😉...

Oh, Poor Megha so helpless with jealous feeling on seeing Anu-Mohan...but still so ❤️ on Monu😆.

Great going...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Mohan and Megha spent the night alone, replaying every moment of their togetherness that day. Mohan was tempted to call Megha but did not find the courage to make it. He understood Megha's feelings and her reason to stay away. He remembered the letter for Megha, which he had dropped that morning before leaving for Nanhi's office party.

"Arrey yaar! What kind of musibat that I have put her into, again?"

He thought to retrieve the letter but then concluded to leave things as is.

***

"Sir, you were looking for us?" Jayesh entered Mohan's office

"Where is Aditya?" Mohan asked casually

"Sir, he is on leave today. He is not keeping well"

"What happened? Is anything serious?" Mohan tried hard to hide his concern

"Nothing serious, Sir. He is mentally upset about something personal"

Mohan got worried thinking what could have upset Addu. He dreaded to think anything that could be related to his meeting with Megha.

"Do you know anything about his personal life?" Mohan hated himself to ask about Addu to others but he desperately needed some lead on this

"Yes Sir, a little"

Mohan stopped himself from asking anything further and decided to take the courage of facing Addu directly. He said in his mind 'If anything I have to do, then it has to be now'

"Ok never mind. You can go"

Mohan picked the phone wanting to call Megha then halted. He informed his secretary to cancel his assignments for the day and rushed out of the office. While he was driving he received a call from Nanhi.

"Spiderman, are you busy?"

"I am never busy for my Chavvanni, but yes I am"

"Then ok, I will talk to you later"

"Sunna! What is it about?"

"About Addu" Mohan applied a sudden break

"What happened to Addu?"

"Looks like he is upset about something. I tried to talk to him but he is not ready to tell anything"

"Piddi and his mood swings" Mohan uttered worriedly

"Did you fight with him, Spiderman?"

"Arrey yaar! Do I look like that to you? Ok don't worry about that. I will take care"

"Ok bye"

Mohan was more confused and worried now. He wasn't sure what to expect but continued to drive towards the guest house. By the time he reached Addu he was playing and replaying the possible scenes of his encounter with him. He was shocked to see what he actually got there.

"Addu, are you ok?"

Addu was quiet and calm sitting on the floor, in a corner of the room staring at the empty walls. It looked like he had cried for long time. His eyes were puffy and tired. On seeing Mohan, Addu was tensed but did not move or say anything.

"Addu, what is it boy?" Mohan went closer and sat next to him on the floor. He touched his hand and forehead to check on him. It took a long time for Mohan to get Addu talk to him. Finally when Addu broke the silence it was only with his little sobs that took Mohan by surprise.

"I hate myself"

Mohan was hurt hearing this and was aching to do anything to comfort Addu.

"But I love you" Addu turned to look at him doubtfully. Mohan managed to say "I mean to say I like you"

"Why would you?"

"Because you are young, smart and energetic"

"No I am not. I am just a sensitive and emotional fool"

"Oh! Being sensitive and emotional are good! Those don't make you a fool"

"But I do foolish things because of these touchy feelings in me"

"Like?" Mohan was afraid to hear a response but he was getting ready for anything

"Falling in love"

Mohan was shocked but was relieved to hear this. He raised his brows in surprise knowing that Addu was in love. He did not know whether he was happy about it but he certainly was not upset. He wondered why but he thought it was good for Addu to be in love.

"Is that wrong to fall in love?" Mohan sat comfortably resting his back on the wall

"I don't know but it's so wrong for me. I get very sensitive, cry and do things which I hate doing"

"Can I tell you something? It's not an advice but something which always works for me"

Addu was quiet and Mohan took this as a sign for him to continue.

"One can cry because they are sensitive and in touch with feelings. But the feelings that they are sensitive to, should be that of others and not of their own"

Addu looked at him confused not understanding what Mohan meant. Mohan continued to clear his confusion.

"You said that you are in love. Isn't that a good thing and shouldn't you feel happy about it?"

Addu did not have an answer to this.

"If your tears are for the feelings of the one you love, then you will be happy to shed those. It hurts you only if those are tears are bound with your own feelings"

Addu looked at Mohan now forgotten about what his hurt was for. Instead he started thinking about the feelings of his loved ones, his mother, sister and the man standing in front of him. He was lost thinking whether he was getting selfish because of his love and that's why he hated to fall in love.

"Addu, I must say this. I am proud of you. At your age, kids actually falling deeply in love and just attraction are very rare. And if you focus these emotions in the right direction, then you will be the happiest" Mohan patted on Addu's back.

"Thank you, Sir" Addu thanked Mohan who was leaving after a long talk with him. Addu got comfortable in sharing some of his deep feelings with Mohan. Mohan was pleased to be part of Addu's life in some way even if it did not mean anything about his own presence in it. He left the place with complete satisfaction.

***

"Megha, are you not going to school today?"

"No Jiji. I am not keeping well"

Jiji doubted Megha's response and somehow she felt that Megha was lying. Megha got to know that Mohan was coming to drop Rimjhim back in school. She did not have the courage to face him once more only to depart again. She decided to play it safe by staying back home.

"Jikki!" Megha was shocked to hear Rimjhim's voice at the door

"Looks like Rimjhim has come" Jiji went out happily

Megha heard Jiji welcoming someone with a happy tone and she froze. She had images of Mohan walking inside the house. She closed her eyes waiting for those moments to fade away and pass by without her interference. But she heard Jiji calling her. Megha took all her nerve to move herself and face the reality. As she walked into the living room, Rimjhim ran into her arms.

"Jikki, I missed you so much!"

"Me too, sweetie" She hugged Rimjhim and kissed her

"Hello Megha bhabhi"

Megha lifted her head to see Guru smiling in front of her. She was greatly disappointed not to see Mohan there. She hid her letdown and welcomed Guru inside and attended to them. She wondered what made Mohan change his decision.

"Has it become so easy for you to avoid me, Mohan?" She burst out in an empty room when she was alone.

"Didn't I disturb you as much as you disturbed me?" She squeezed her fists together in rage.

"Mr. Bhatnagar, you are gone. Nobody can save you now" She picked the phone to call him and vent out her frustration.

Megha was standing in front of the mirror. Before the phone started ringing she held back and ended the call. "Am I behaving like a new lover angry with her boyfriend?"

She laughed at her image in the mirror. She slapped her forehead with the phone, as if to chide her silly reaction.

***

"So what is it about?"

"What about what?"

Nanhi lost her patience in Mohan's response over the phone. She waited for hours before calling him to know Addu's state and Mohan played around without revealing anything.

"Spiderman, if I get to see you now, even Mummy cannot save you" Nanhi fumed in anger while Mohan laughed in amusement

"Hey Chavvanni, sunna! Tension not! There is no problem"

"Did you talk to Addu and find out what bothers him?"

"Haanaa! He is not piddi anymore! He's grown up enough to fall in love" Mohan smiled through his voice

"Oh! Is it that Ragini? I knew it!" Nanhi did not know whether she was happy or worried for Addu

"Sunna! I don't know the girl but whoever it is, she better be good with Addu. He is such a nice boy"

"Spiderman, are you giving good conduct certificate for Addu? What a day!" Nanhi teased him

"After all I am the dad here!" Mohan smiled with pride

"I love you Spiderman. And I know you will sure support me in my love life too, right?"

"Definitely!"

"Sachchi?"

"Muchchi! Ok, now I am getting late. Bye"

Nanhi was confused on the other side of the phone with Mohan's dull reactions for her statement. Mohan put the phone back and was about to start his car when Nanhi's words stuck him clearly.

"What? Love life?"

He hurried to pick up the phone and dial Nanhi again. Nanhi understood Mohan's confusion and his reason to call again. She smiled and answered the phone.

"Haan Spiderman, anything urgent?" She asked teasingly

"Hey Chavvanni, did you say about me supporting your love life?"

"What? I did not say anything like that" Nanhi giggled

"Arrey yaar! I know you said something like that"

"Spiderman, are you not getting late? I too gotta go now"

Mohan started digging without letting her disconnect while Nanhi played around without letting out any details. She was amused with the way Mohan went possessive about his little Chavvanni and how he treated her like a child. She felt as if she has earned back all those childhood days that she missed with her Spiderman.

***

Mohan was restless waiting at the restaurant. It was the day and time for which he had asked Megha to meet him, in his letter. He was sure that Megha must have received the letter but was not sure whether she would be coming to meet him again. He did not want to assume things and so went ahead with his plans to be there on time. He kept on ordering juice whenever the waiter asked for anything else. As he was checking his watch from time to time a sweet voice intruded him.

"Hello Mohan!"

Mohan turned to find a smiling Anu, looking completely dressed for a party.

"Arrey yaar, what kind of musibat again?" He chided himself mentally

"Oh Hai Anu!"

"Are you alone? Shall I join you?"

"Yeah, oh No'" Mohan stuttered when he heard a voice from behind

"Aji sunte ho!"

Mohan turned to find a smiling Megha, looking gorgeous in her cream and brick red color saree.

Pages to be continued...
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Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG..you brought back Aji Sunte Ho...!!!!!

Big bear hug to you for this update 🤗 Can't wait to see Mohan playing Cupid in BN's "love life" 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏 👏 Good going senpoo.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Poo!!

Now Mohan has to sort out the love life of his kids now😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aji sunte ho👏
Another great update Poo please do not mind the pace. its our job to keep up
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww..love it poo...so we get to see addu-mohan bond, nanhi- mohan bond, megha-RJ bond and also mohan -megha scene.couldnt be better..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update. So mohan-addu bond s progressing. Good to see that. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aji sunte ho is back

Megha's childish attitude in love all over again... ...I so wanna see this in show

Father-son becoming frnds finally...wow ...Phantashtik updt 👏 🤗 🤗



Edited by Megher_Palok - 12 years ago

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