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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

congratulation...👏👏
and update the first part of thread😊 2 soon...


thank you dear.. i'll try to update asap..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey

Congo dii!! 2nd thread!! PARTY PARTY PARTY!! 🥳


I so am in love with this FF!! Specially the HILARIOUS Swayam and the Salim-Anarkali Jodi!! 🤣

Keep making the updates hilarious!! I love it!!

Now do update soon and do pm me!! <3

hey shivangi thank you so much bebs.. ur comments are always sweet n cute...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: patie

congo kady tai fr 2nd thread 😳


thank you annie... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: shamanbk

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!! 👏


thanks dear.. thank you so much..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: nis_n

Congrats on 2nd thread!!


thanks dear... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: 123renudrlng

cngrts 4r de sncd thread..hope ur ff makes many more threads lyks dis...all de best...


aww thanks dear.. thank you so much.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

CHAPTER 18


At morning 7 a.m.

Rey wakes up only to see his taani's head resting on his chest… he smiles seeing her sleeping peacefully..

Rey: taani ab hume koi alag nahi kar sakta.. ab tumhare pyaar pe, tumhare har pal pe mera haq hai..( n he slowly kisses her forehead which makes her awake.. she slowly rubs her eyes with her soft palm..) oops sorry jagane ke liye.. good morning my jwalamukhi..

taani smiles n says: good morning rey…

rey: aauchhh.. utho abhi mere chest par se.. god dukh raha hai..

taani frowns n hits him on his chest .. with a cute anger she gets up..

taani: jaaiye aap baat mat kijiye..

rey too gets up n hugs her from behind..

rey: hayyee meri jwalamukhi.. tum mujhe aise kahogi toh main kiske pass jaunga..??

taani starts laughing…

rey: wat?? Has kyun rahi ho??

Taani controls her laughter n says: aap ke salim hai na.. aur aap unki anarkali..

(again she starts laughing)

Rey: tanni ki bachchi… ruko tumhe abhi dikhata hoon..

N he starts tickling her..

Taani while laughing: rey.. hehe.. taani ki bachchi abhi aayi nahi hai..

Rey tickles more..

Taani: ok ok.. sorry.. hehe.. sorry rey.. pls..

Rey leaves her n says: that's my girl.. btw hasi mazak bohot ho gaya aur pyaar toh use bhi jyada ho gaya..

Taani looks at him confusingly..

Rey with his killer smile: kal raat ki yaad dila du??

Taani blushes..

Rey stares at her n after some moment he comes back to his sense..

Rey: okay okay.. toh main baat.. taani I hav an idea jisse ke hum ansh aur shayli ko tumhare papa ke samne la sakte hai.. par who plan main puri gang ke samne bataunga.. btw usse pehle tumhe colg main aana hoga as main tumhare bina kuch soch nahi sakta..

Taani smiles bt again gets upset..

Taani: rey papa ne mana kiya hai.. can't come..

Rey cups her face n says: areee meri jwalamukhi.. dnt get upset yaar… tumhara rey hai na.. tumhe ansh se shadi karne ke liye haa kehni hogi..

Taani sees him with her mouth open… n rey smiles..

Rey: are I mean u hav to jus act… tabhi tum colg aa sakogi.. aur baaki ka plan baad mein bataunga..

Taani: bt rey papa nahi manenge…

Rey: toh manao unhe.. I'm sure woh maan jayenge.. okay chalo main jaata hoon.. warna tumhara bhai aagaya na toh meri toh khair nahi..

Rey kisses on her cheek n leaves through window..

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Mr shikhawat was in hall reading news paper.. taani comes there n that time ansh too comes..

Taani goes near him n says: papa woh..

Swayam also comes there ..

Papa without looking at her: taani tum agar yeh kehne aayi ho ke tumhe shadi nahi karni toh mujhe iske baare mein kuch nahi sunna..

Taani: bt papa mujhe karni hai ab..

Not only Mr.shikhawat bt swayam n ansh too look at her with surprised expression..

Papa: kya kaha tumne???

Taani: haa papa.. maine kal bohot socha.. aur mujhe laga ke aap toh humesha mera bhala hi sochenge.. mujhe aapki baat maan leni chahiye.. aur ab main ready hoon shadi ke liye..

Mr. shikhawat satnds up n hugs taani

Papa: mujhe pata tha taani tum meri baat kabhi nahi katogi.. I love you my baby..

Taani: love you too papa..

Bt swayam n ansh both were not convinced..

Swayam (to himself): yeh taani kar kya rahi hai…

Ansh (to himself):ohhh so dat's the plan my sweetheart haa.. u really think u can fool me??? if yes then u r highly mistaken..

Taani breaks the hug..

Taani: papa kya main ab colg ja sakti hoon??

Papa: sure beta.. jaao na..

Ansh (to himself): bang on… toh isiliye yeh sab drama.. btw taani yeh tumhara deemag nahi ho sakta.. toh phir kiska??

He looks at swayam n again murmurs to himself: naa.. swayam toh khud confused lag raha hai.. yeh nahi ho sakta.. taani ne kaha tha dat she loves someone.. kahi usne toh nahi?? Mujhe pata lagana hoga..

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on their way to colg taani told swayam about rey's plan.. All are in canteen discussing about plan…

rey: so taani ek baat yaad rakhna jitna maine ansh ko jana hai woh yakeen nahi karega ke tumne shadi ke liye bina wajah haa kahi hai.. so sabse pehle hume use aur shayli ko yakeen dilana hoga…

taani: kaise rey??

Rey: woh tum humpar chod do… (he winks at Sharon n sharon smiles..)

Swayam: oyyeee anarkali meri gf ko aankh mat maar… salim ghussa ho jayega haa.. tu sirf mujhe aankh maar sakta hai okay…

Rey rolls his eyes n says: swayam shut up.. aur tum dono ko bhi iss mein part lena hoga.. (looks at taayam)

Taayam: okay..

Rey: guys be ready… woh dono jaise hi aaye mujhe batana.. (Vicky goes from canteen to keep watch on gate..)

Taani: woh yaha aayenge??

Rey: 100% aayenge sweetheart..

Swayam: mere samne aise words mat use kar..

Rey: dude seriously Sharon meri behen honi chahiye thi… chun chun ke badla leta tujhse.. btw suno tum dono ko kya karna hai.. (n he tells them about their next step..)

Vicky calls rey..

Rey: haa dude bol..

Vicky: they r here..

Rey: okay bye.. (he cuts the call) guys it's time for an action..

TaaShaReYam go to rehearsal hall n here when ansh n shayli enter Vicky acts like he is on phone n talking with nil..

Vicky: haa dude.. who taani,rey,swayam,Sharon rehearsal hall mein jhagad rahe hai yaar.. pata nahi dono couples mein kya hua hai..

Ansh n shayli looks at each other n rush towards the rehearsal hall..

Here taashareyam were waiting for them to come n when Vicky msgs that they r coming, rey winks at three of them n they starts their drama… ansh n shayli stand outside the rehearsal hall n hide behind wall..

Rey (in angry tone) : taani tumne shadi ke liye haa kyun ki??

Taani: (in same tone) kyun ke ansh toh mujhse pyaar karta hai.. agar aap karte toh aise mujhe chodke bhaag nahi jaate.. papa se mera hath mangte..

Rey: taani pls I'm not a puppet ke humesha tum jo chaho wohi karunga.. aur tumhare papa sunte kaha hai kisi ki..

Swayam: watch it dude.. taani par aise chilla mat..

Sharon: ohh pls swayam tum toh chup hi raho.. kya kiya tumne?? Tumne apne papa se baat ki?? Nahi na?? toh phir??

Swayam: Sharon mujhe ghussa mat dilao.. maine try kiya tha..

Sharon: par ki toh nahi na.. cuz tum mujhse pyaar hi nahi karte..

Swayam: haa nahi karta pyaar main tumse jo karna hai karlo…

Sharon starts crying: I knew it.. tumse achcha toh who ansh hai… taani ke liye who aaya wapas..

Byee… aaj se humara brkup..

N she leaves from there..

Taani: exactly ansh mere liye aaya matlab who mujhse pyaar karta hai… par rey aap.. aap toh bas mujhe humesha for granted lete hai..

Rey: wat the hell .. tumse achchi toh who shayli hai.. agar meri gf woh hoti na toh duniya ka koi ladka uski taraf aankh uthake nahi dekhta.. btw tum raho apne ansh ke pass..

Taani: haa toh rahungi..

Rey: I knew it.. yahi sunna tha tumse.. sunliya.. bye forever..

N he also leaves..

Swayam: chalo taani yaha se..

N they both leave…

Here ansh n shayli enter in RH..

Shayli: wat was dat??

Ansh: I know.. mujhe laga tha taani ka plan hai kuch bt yeh toh sach mein jhagad rahi thi..

Shayli: well hume jaana chahiye..

Ansh: yeah.. let's go..

N they both leave… as soon as they leave gang enter into RH.. n start laughing..

Nil: dude tum log kya jhagad rahe the.. aise laga jaise sach mein jhagad rahe ho..

Rey: samjha kar dude.. sach much ka jhagadna afford nahi kar sakte.. (n winks at taani..)

Taani blushes..

Swayam clears his throat n says: tu toh salim ke alava sabko aankh marta hai yaar.. dat's not done..

Rey (in angree tone): Sharon pls haa pls apne bf ko samjhaao.. woh na sach mein ek din tumhe chodke mujhe propose karega..

Sharon (in shocked expression): wat?? Swayam tum aisa karoge??? Matlab mujhe kisi aur se shadi karni padegi??? No way… ab itni jaldi dusra ladka kahan se dhundu??? Waise ansh bura nahi hai.. hai na rey??

Rey laughs n swayam looks at him angrily so he stops laughing..

Swayam to Sharon: Sharon tumhe kahi jaane ki jaroorat nahi hai.. main ek sath tumhe aur rey ko handle kar sakta hoon..

N he burst out laughing bt then realizes all are glaring at him..

Swayam (in serious tone): so wat's the nxt plan rey??

Rey: sorry swayam yeh nxt step tere liye aur taani ke liye bohot tough hone wala hai..

Taayam look at each other in confusion..

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That's it for today… I know it was boring.. bt yeh update jaroori tha.. aage ke plan ke liye.. so share ur precious views guys..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome dear awesome loved it plz continue soon dear plzzz😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GR8 LOVED THE WAY THEY FOOLED ANSH AND SHYLI
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
waiting for next plan
loved the part
waiting for next update
thanx for the pm

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