New FF:Yes Mr.Khan prt7 updtd*8 May* - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: crazzychips

i know it's late yet still " HAPPY BIRTHDAY dear"🤗
such cute updates. pls pls pls update more
& don't you dare stop this ff woman- i'll hit you in the head with my keyboard if you stop this. 😡"it is a threat & remember i do what i say."
it is so lovely so please... don't stop this " pleading "
don't worry about the comments give people some time. look at the no. of likes. pls don't dissapoint them.pls don't dissappoint me😒
PLEASE DON'T STOP UPDATING . i want to read more of this ff
so please... update more😊
i'll be waiting for your updates
& pls pm me😉

THANK YOU dear...I will Update..I don't want to be hitted with a keyboard😆😆😆
Thank you for commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Part 6

Hum Saath-Saath hai!!
"Mr. Khuranna has made a deal for..Sir?..Sir?.. Sir???
My Peon shaked me "Han..Yes Tell me" "I think Sir, today you aren't in the mood!" "I think so"
I looked at the clock it was 4:30 already, Gosh! Zoya had told me to reach home by 5:00
I quickly walked out of my Office, opened the car and drove straight away..
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"Bhiaya, A chart paper, no! 2 ahh.. Give me 3" "And some Glue Bottle, A4 sheets, not one..whole Packet, yes colourful!"
...Thank you!"
Here I was at the Stationary shop, due to Zoya. She had told me to bring these supplies, you all know Nazma'a Birthday...Well Why I had to bring these? I am not the creative types like Zoya...I never needed that, And i couldn't ask Nazma too
End of Mr. Khan's POV
"Asad beta, aa Gaye!!!" "Haan!~ Ammi woh...Zoya kahan hain?Asad asked. To which Dilshad smiled, A Colgate wala smile, you know!
"Mr.Khan!! Itna late!!!" "Zoya abhi 5 to baj rahe hai!"
"5 nahi 5:15 ho raha hai"
"Par..."
"Bas karo tum dono" Dilshad interuppt, she was getting sick of this unusual behaviour, hi-fives and all!
"I have noticed Zoya and Asad, something is cooking between you two, what is it tell me?"
Asad and Zoya exchanged Glances
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"Achha toh yeh Baat hai" Dilshad was smiling wider than before
She was very Glad to see both the so-called-enemies working toghather, she will difinately help them
And she loved Zoya for this!!!
How this Girl has brought Happiness to their home!!! How she wished she could stay here forever!
Well she can, there is one way
Dilshad smiled to herself
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"Pass me the Glue bottle" Asad did as he was told
He glanced at the clock, It was 12:30am but Zoya didn't care..she had to finish the work
They were sitting in Asad's Bedroom working on a collage for Nazma, Well Zoya's Idea. He could never do this stuff
"Miss Farooqui mai Pani pi ke aata hoon" "Go Mr.Khan" she was still buried in the collage
How funny he was asking permission from her, like she is some Head Mistress. Asad smiled to himself
And went out
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it was when he was drinking water, Asad noticed some shadow going to the Lawn
He dicided to follow that
He found some Girl standing outside
Who she could be?
He leaned to the Window to listen
She was talking on the phone
Asad couldn't listen, she was still a distance away
"Zoya...han chinta mat kijiye Bi...woh jyaada din iss duniya me nahi hai" was all he cloud catch
After some time the figure turned..
It...
It was..
It was...
Tanveer!!!!!
What was she talking about Zoya? Duniya me jyadda din nahi rahegi?
He remebered the time zoya told something related this
Mr Khan you know I think Tanveer is acting wierdly nowadays!
Miss Farooqui, If you are wierd then It doesn't means everybody is!!
But Mr. Khan...
Shut Up Miss Farooqui
That day he Dissmissed it, But today he feels the same
Suspision!!
Hello dear readers! I know it is short but..I am very busy with the Marriage ceremonies of relative...But I wrote of crazzychips
Oh God It is Crap..Please forgive me for this Nonsense Update...But I couldn't write better, you know I am a very Folp writer...Anway thanks everyone
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
This is called stalking. Great update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
ok... Now u mk me more excite... Next one soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Awesme!

N a belated happiiee bday!❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
thats like awesome
i love how they pair up as a team

and finally asad is sensing something against tanveer


great update
Edited by kajenvirman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ApurvaLovesARVI

Don't worry dear...I will Update..I have a threath that someone is going to hit me with the keynoeard if I didn't😆
Thank you for COMMENTING!!!!!!


thank god you actually came to your senses😆else i would have to buy a new keyboard "wheww"
i loved the update . it was really nice.i'll push you in to a well if you call it crap😡
thanks for the PM😃
you should give us long long updates .it's okay with this one cause it was your relative's wedding
give them my hearty CONGRATULATIONS.🤗
i want the next chapter to be long & i want it as soon as possible

love
crazzychips
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
what a way to end it , keeping us wanting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Hey! You have a new reader😃 Your FF is amazing...!!! Please continue soon and PM me when you update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Hey ...
That was fantastic !!!
I'm loving AsYa workin as a team :D

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