Ariya::AASHIQUI-Tom & Jerry's Love Story(completed - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
amazing update :) loved it
felt so bad seeing riya in that condition 😭
what kind of parents they are 😡 they still think vishal is a nice guy
loved shree and riya's conversation
love the way rathore said "kya tum meri behen se shadi karoge" :)
arjun and roshni's flashback was lovely
finally ariya got married
awww rathore and sonali did riya's kanyaadan :) how sweet
can't wait to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
yes ariya ka shadi hogayi
ab iska tom and jerry fights ghar mein bhi hogi
wow thanks 4 the update
looking forwaard for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Awesome dear.
Riya's parents are just b*****d how they think like that.
Love shree riya and rathore arjun convo.
How rathore said kya tum meri behen say shaadi karogi.
Finally ariya got married.
Update soon.
Ho sake to ek update or dedo.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
thank god rathore ne bacchaliya
poor riya
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
awesome update
yup finally ariya married😳
omg her parents😲 poor riya feel bad for her
shree-riya sam-arjun convo was nice
loved the way sam sonali did kanyadan of riya
etf is so sweet😛
let's see what tom & jerry gonna do next😆
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
OMG they are getting married :O
Shree Riya and Arjun- Sam convo was lovely.
contd soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Nice update... Riya's parents!!! uff wat kind of parents are they??? felt bad for Riya... finally Ariya got married... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Arjun & Riya :: AASHIQUI - Tom & Jerry's Love Story..
Arjun's Home:-

The newly wed couple & all other's are waiting on door from almost a minute..

Sonali come from kitchen of Arjun's home..having a kalash full of rice in one hand & puja thali in another hand..she put the kalash in the middle of door..make aarati of the newly wed couple..& told to push the kalash to Riya..

Riya is going to place her first foot in Arjun's house..in Arjun's life..

She remember when Rathod ask her to move in Arjun's home at the time of Sikandar's case ..she fully confidently told infront of everyone.. " mein inake ghar me..ek kadam bhi nahi rakungi.."

& now..she is coming to his house as his wife..

Sonali break her thoughts..

Sonali:-Riya..kalash ko dheere se apne right foot se push karo..

She come out of her thoughts..& do the same as Sonali told her..

She entered in the house..Rothod who understand Riya..put his hand on Riya's shoulder & make her sit on sofa in hall..

Sonali turned to do something..& Chotu is helping her..

Rathod:-Riya..don't worry..mein tumhare mom-dad se baat kar lunga..woh maan jayege..

Riya:-isaki koi zarurat nahi he..woh ab kabhi meri shakal bhi nahi dekhege..I know them very well..

She get teary..Shree placed his hand on her..

Sonali comes..she had brought a large boul full of milk & water & some flower petals..

Sonali(who wants to cheer up all):-guys..chalo..ab ek game khelate he..dekho mein ye ring iss boul mein dalugi..aur Riya & Arjun ko iss Ring ko dundna hoga..jo pehale dundega woh jeet jayega..aur aisa kehate he jo iss game mein jeetata he na..usaki hamesha chalti he dono mein se..toh suru kare..

She put the ring in boul..& again mix the mixture well..

Sonali:-aur haa..jo haar jayega..usse jo ham kaam batayege woh karna padega..

Shree:-are par jaha tak muze pata he..iss game me sirf ring dundani hoti he..ye haar ne wale ko punishment nahi dete..

Sonali:-oh..ho..ye hamari additional rasam he(she winked at him..)are Riya..Arjun,,tum dono dekh kya rahe ho..chalo suru karo..

They both put their right hands..& started searching..

Arjun again lost in Roshni's memory..

Flashback:-

Roshni & Arjun both are searching for ring in boul..Roshni got the ring..but before she can tell anyone..& take the ring from boul..Arjun hold her hand within boul..he is moving his hand over her intensely..she got shocked..& move her hand from his..but during this the ring escape from her fingers..& he got it..

He take out it from boul..& show to all..

Arjun:-meine kaha tha na..Arjun Rawte ko koi nahi hara sakta..

Sonali:-oh..ho..Roshni..ab tumhe zindagi bhar Arjun ki sunani padegi..

She is very blushing..

Sonali:-toh haarne wale ko ab punishment milegi..

Roshni:ye kya bhabhi..muze pata he ha..aisi koi punishment nahi hoti..aisi rasam nahi hoti..sirf Ring nikalani hoti he..

Sonali:-uff..meri jaan..ye rasam hamne thodi extend kar li he..

Chalo ab..tumhe kya punishment de...(pause)ok..chalo tum Arjun ke liye koi song gaao..

Roshni(blush):-nahi muze koi song nahi aata..

Rathod:-come on..Roshni..tum meri behen ho..aise kaise haar maan sakti ho..chalo..gaao..

Arjun(leand somewhat to her & mutter in her ear):-jaldi se gaao..kyo ki isake baad ki rasam most important he..

She don't get him.. & try to remember which 'Rasam' is next..

But she got it suddenly..the next 'Rasam' will be their 'Suhag-raat'..she blush..he winked to her..

Sonali:-come on Roshni..

She started singing the song..

Yeh Tumhari Meri Baatein
Hamesha yunhi chalti rahen

Yeh Hamari mulakatein
Hamesh Yunhi chalti rahen

Beeetein yunhi apne sare
Din raat
Baaton se nikalti rahe Nai Baat
Phir wohi Baatein leke
Geet koi hum likhe
Jo Dil ko Haan sab ki dil ko chu le


Baatein Suron mein yunhi
Peeghalti rahe
Baatein geeton mein yunhi
Dhalti rahe


Flashback Ends

Arjun come back to present as Rathod is placed his hand on his back..

Rathod:-come on Arjun..

Shree & Chotu:-Ritz..come on..

Arjun & Riya both are not interested in finding the Ring so they are just moving their hand here & there..

But they get the ring at the same time..Arjun's hands on Riya..& Riya's on Ring ..Arjun remove his hand from over her hand..Riya shows the ring to all..

Sonali:-OMG..Riya got the ring..chalo koi toh aisa he jo Arjun Rawte ko hara sakta he..

They all smile..not Arjun & Riya..

Sonali:-ok..Arjun..chalo toh tumhari punishment he..ke tumhe apni wife ke liye gaana gao..

All think that Arjun will make excuse but..

Arjun:-ok..this song is dedicated to my most beautifull..most lovable..& beloved wife..to whom I will never forget not in my whole life..

They all stared him most suprizingly..

He started singing..

Meri kismat ke har ek panne pe
Mere jeete ji baad marne ke
Mere har ik kal har ik lamhe me
Tu likh de mera usey
Har kahaani me

saare qisson me
Dil ki duniya ke
sacche rishton me
Zindagani ke
saare hisso mein
Tu likh de mera usey
Aye Khuda aye Khuda
jab bana uska hi bana
Aye Khuda aye Khuda
jab bana uska hi bana

(Everyone including Riya understand that he is singing the song for Roshni..he get up..& come near to a painting which Roshni give him as a gift..stared that painting..& singing..)

Uska hoon uss me hoon uss se hoon
Usi ka rehne de
Main toh pyaasa hoon hai
Dariya woh zariya woh jeene ka mere
Mujhe ghar de gali de shehar de
Usi ke naam ke
Kadam ye chale ya

ruke ab usi ke vaaste
Dil mujhe de agar
dard de uska par
Uski ho woh hasin goonje jo mera ghar
Aye Khuda aye Khuda
jab bana uska hi bana
Aye Khuda aye Khuda
jab bana uska hi bana

(his eyes are teary..all others eyes also moist...Riya remember the day after Vishal proposes Riya..he dedicate this song to her..she somehow control her tears flowing..)


Mere hisse ki khushi ko hansi ko
Tu chaahe aadha kar
Chahe lele tu meri zindagi par
Ye mujhse vaada kar
Uske ashqon pe ghamon pe dukhon pe
Har uske zakhm par
Haq mera hi rahe har jagah

har ghadi haan umr bhar
Ab faqat ho yahi woh rahe mujh me hi
Woh juda kehne ko
bichhde na par kabhi
Aye Khuda aye Khuda
jab bana uska hi bana
Aye Khuda aye Khuda
jab bana uska hi bana
(he looked Riya..& give her look as he want to say.."Samaze yaa Samzaaoo"...everyone notice this..)


Meri kismat ke har ek panne pe
Mere jeete ji baad marne ke
Mere har ik kal, har ik lamhe me
Tu likh de mera usey
Aye Khuda Aye khuda
Aye Khuda Aye khuda


He turned to his room..& close the door harshly..

Everyone get shocked..& don't know what to say to Riya..& what to do now..

Rathod:-Riya..ab tum aaram karo..ham log chalate he..

He make signal to Sonali..she get up..

Shree who don't want to leave Riya alone..but Rathod calls him..

Rathod:-chalo Shree..

They all leave..

In parking:-

Sonali:-sorry Sam..ye sab mere wajah se hua..par meine socha ke isase thode relax ho jayege woh dono..

Rathod:-don't worry..it's not your fault..they want some time..

Shree:-Rathod sir..hame Ritz ko aise akele nahi..

Rathod:-nahi Shree..iss waqt usse thodi der akela rehne do..

Chotu:-Shree..sir bilcul thik keh rahe he..

They all leave..

Arjun's Home:-

Riya is still sitting as it is..she just want to throw herself on bed now..she look to his bedroom..infront of his room there is another room..she entered in that room..& throw herself on bed..& started crying helplessly...

Arjun who is lying on bed..holding Roshni's photograph..tears slowly fall down from his eyes.."why Roshni..why..you leave me alone.."

Next Morning:-

Riya wake up..& realize this is not her room..she is in Arjun's house..she take deep sigh..& turned to bathroom..

When she see herself in mirror..still in dulhan attire..her maang is filled with Sindoor..& the mangalsutra in her neck..

"iss Sindoor aur mangalsutra ki koi importance nahi he.."

She remove her mangalsutra..

She realized that her bags are still in hall..she shift her bags to the room..

take a bath & remove sindoor also..

she come to hall...& take a sigh of relief when she don't found Arjun there..she take the boul which is still there in hall..move to kitchen..& start making some sandwitch & coffee for her..

Arjun comes from jogging..& senses someone in kitchen..

Arjun(angrily):-tum kitchen me kya kar rahi ho..?

Riya:-apne liye breakfast bana rahi hoo..aap ke liye bhi kuch bana doo..

Arjun(angrily):-muze tumahri zarurat nahi he..dont you dare to come near me..stay away from me..aur aage se kitchen me kadam mat rakana..

Riya(also get angry):-kya..?kitchen me kadam na rakhu..?toh mein apna breakfast kaha banau..

Arjun(angrily):-office me kar liya karo..kuch bhi karo..muze kya?

Riya:-aap chahte he mein woh office ka unhygienic breakfast karu..no way..aur waise bhi mein aapke liye thodi na bana rahi hoo..apne liye bana rahi hu..fir kya problem he aapko..?

Arjun:-Riya..I warned you..iss ghar me changes karne ki koshish mat karo..

Riya:-meine kisi cheez ko haat bhi nahi lagaya he..mein sirf kichen use kar rahi hu aapke iss ghar ki..aur aap muze nahi breakfast karne se kaise rok sakhte he..?

He angrily turned to his room..

After sometime they both leave for office separately..

Arjun comes first..he sit on his usual chair..Vishal also comes..but no one is talking to anyone..Chotu & Shree who get worried after they see Arjun come alone..but remain quite..Rathod comes..

Rathod(smile):-hello guys..

They all just nodded but no one smiles..

Rathod:-Arjun..Riya nahi aayi..?

Arjun(angrily):-muze kya pata ..?usse aana hoga toh aa jayegi..

Before Rathod can ask him anything..Riya come inside..

Riya(smile):-hello everyone..

Shree & Chotu take sigh of relief after see her smile..Rathod also smile back..

Rathod:-Riya..inn papers pe sign karo..

Riya:-ye kya he sir..?

She started reading the papers..

Rathod:-ye complaints ke paper he..ke tum Vishal ki complaint kar rahi ho..kyo ki usane tumse shadi karne ki koshish ki jab ke woh pehale se shadi-shuda he..(he look angrily to Vishal)

Riya stared to Rathod..

Riya:-meine bahot soch ke faisla liya he..ke muze Vishal ke khilaf koi complaint nahi karni he..

Rathod:-Riya..

Arjun(angrily):-That's gr8..aisa idiot decision sirf tum hi le sakti ho..

Rathod:-Riya..come to my cabin immigiately..

They both leave to his cabin while Arjun is fuming in anger..& Vishal take sigh of relief..

Rathod:-Riya..ab muze batao..tum ne ye decision kyo liya he..?dont you worry about anyone..tumhe kisi se darne ki zarurat nahi he..I will handle it..

Riya:-no..mein dar nahi rahi hu..meine ye faisla 'Neha' ke liye liya he..iss sab me usaki koi galati nahi he..fir usaki zindgi kyo barabaad ho..

Rathod:-tum janati ho..agar tumne ye complaint nahi ki toh..usake khilaf kuch nahi kar sakunga mein..usse saza dilana toh dur ki baat he..usaki transfer bhi nahi kar pauga mein..

Riya:-It's ok..sir..I don't have problem..meine apna faisala kar liya he..

Rathod:-Arjun ki reaction dekhi tumne..?

Riya(angrily):-ye toh unki style hi he..woh kis baat pe gussa nahi hote muze batayiye..?

Rathod(smile):-well..tumne jo faisala liya he..koi bhi usase khush nahi hoga..

Riya:-nahi sir..bilcul thik hi faisala he ye..agar meine complaint ki toh ye baat pure department me pata chal jayegi..ke meri shadi Vishal se hone wali thi..aur kis halat me Arjun sir aur meine shadi ki..mein nahi chahti log iss bare me baate kare..

Rathod:-tumne logo ke bare me sochna kabse suru kiya?

Riya:-aap jante he na..ke Arjun sir ke bare me department me kya kya rumours he..ye toh accha hua ke meine aur Vishal ne shadi ke liye sirf ETF ko hi invitation diya tha..pure department ko nahi..mein nahi chahti ke mere wajah se koi unhe sawal kare..koi aur rumours create ho..

Rathod(smile naughtly):-toh tum ye sab Arjun ke liye kar rahi ho..?

Riya:-plz..dont tease me..now..

Rathod:-ok..but if you want to think twice..

Riya:-I have made my decision..

Rathod & Riya both come to conference hall..

They all started doing their work..Riya slowly explain Shree & Chotu..why she had take this decision..

Vishal:-Rathod muze 2 dino ki chutti chahiye..

Rathod(stared him):-2 dino ki kya..2 mahine ya fir 2 saal ki chutti le lo..mein approve karne ko tayar hu..

Vishal:-meine sirf 2 dino ki chutti mangi he..

Rathod:-ok..you can go..

Vishal..Thanks Rathod.(looking to Riya)..Riya...thank you..tumne muze maaf kar diya..

Riya(angily):-excuse me Vishal Sir..meine aapke khilaf complaint nahi ki isaka ye matlab nahi he ke meine aapko maaf kar diya..aur behatar hoga ke aap muzse dur rahe..yaha par mein sirf aapki collegue hu..aur kuch nahi.."SIR"..

Vishal leaves from there..

Rathod:-ok..guys now should we talk about our new case..

Arjun is still looking angrily to Riya..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Waooo what a beautifulll update..
its realy amazinggg dr..
the way shree n rathore convence both..
that was realy suppub written...
Woppuy ariya weddinggg...
finaly ariya ke shadi ho gaye maza aa gaya...
i m so excited for next...
paka dono ke ladaye hone valiii haiii..
update soon n thanks for the pm...
Kya tum apna naam bataogi dr..??? if u other wise no problem
bez i like to use nikk name...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
arjun ko toh sirf gussa hona aata hai pyarr kab karega

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