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Posted: 12 years ago
great poo keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh Poo! Absolutely delicious, what a guilty pleasure to read and enjoy so much! You have outdone yourself in the romance dept. of this MM saga! 👏


Have to admit I did experience a few heart palpitations with some of the terms you used, but they turned out to be quite harmless after all! 😉 Sigh! 😆 "The Next Page" series is turning into quite the page turner! I can't wait to turn the next page! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another superb update Poo. 👏
You are an ace in subtle romantic story writing 👍🏼👏
Fb was awsome👍🏼
Please continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
I loved the bro -sis banter

Cont soon
Thnks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
as usual loved it poo..cant wait for d next part..i can seriously imagine d scenes..
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Waiting for the next update badly😃😃😃
Edited by Pravesh.P - 12 years ago
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"Hello Mummy!" Megha was surprised to see Addu standing in front of her full of smiles

"Addu!"

"Haan! How is my surprise?"

"You did not tell me that you are coming"

"That's the surprise, Mummy!" Addu teased her but went blank on Megha's expressions

"You are not happy to see me, Mummy?"

"Ohho Addu! How will I not be? I am just.." Megha did not complete her sentence Rimjhim jumped in between them

"Jikki, who is this?"

"Oh, you are Rimjhim?"

"Oh, you are the phone uncle?"

"Uncle? I told you brother!"

"What? Brother? But you are not as loving as a brother! So I will call you Uncle!"

"No I will not let you call me that"

"Try and stop me! Uncle, uncle, uncle" Rimjhim ran away screaming and leaving him to chase her

Megha was relieved that she was saved from their introduction and prayed that things remain as it is. A little later during the day, Megha found Addu and Rimjhim fighting for the TV remote.

"Hey pataka, what is this? All day, you are watching cartoons. Give me the remote. I want to watch cricket match"

"No! This is my TV time and my favorite cartoon is going on"

"My favorite teams are playing too"

Both were pulling the remote from either side. Addu managed to pull it hard leaving Rimjhim fall off. She cried and went to Megha

"Jikki, I don't want this uncle in this house" Addu looked at her angrily while Megha consoled her.

"Leave him, sweetie. Come let us play carom"

Megha managed to win her smile and they sat down for the carom game next to Addu. Megha said something in secret to Rimjhim's ears for which she laughed looking at Addu. One by one Renu, Jiji and Tannu joined them at the carom table making the game interesting. They were screaming in joy and clapping, making the place loud in noise. Addu could not focus on the TV anymore and he moved towards the gang on the table. Unknowingly he started helping Rimjhim in the game.

"Hey uncle! You are playing good!"

"Hello pataka! I am the champion in the game!" Addu lifted his shirt collar in pride

"My paapu is a champion too! You gotta win him for me to believe you" Rimjhim challenged him

"Challenge? Anytime!"

Megha raised her brows looking at them and she lost herself in the old memories of Addu, Nanhi, Mohan and herself having fun playing carom. She remembered the FB moment with a happy face of Mohan watching Addu jumping out of pride on winning the game.

****

Back in Bhopal, Nanhi, Mohan and Guru were celebrating on their super shots on the carom board.

"Hey Sunna! Nobody can beat me up here" Mohan lifted his shirt collar in pride

"Naa Spiderman! Addu always beats you up in carom"

As Nanhi blurt out those words, they were lost in the old memories. Mohan remembered the FB moment with a happy face of Megha watching them celebrating the game.

"Spiderman, missing someone?"

"Yeah very much!" Mohan noticed Nanhi's phone beeping every now and then with text messages.

"Why don't you meet?"

"Yeah sure we will! When shall we?"

"Spiderman, are you serious?"

"Haan why not? He looks like a good guy"

"He? Whom are you talking about?"

"Beera! Who else did you think?" Mohan winked at her

"Who is this Beera?" Guru came in with a plate of snacks

"Chavvanni's boyfriend"

"Nanhi?" Guru was shocked

"Guru, nothing like that. Spiderman is lying and making fun of me"

"Uffoo bhaiya! Why are you doing this? Nanhi is sweet and innocent"

"And that's why I am worried about" Mohan mumbled those words not letting others hear them

"You and your reporter mind! Always looking for some story" Guru teased him

"Haaannaa! Why don't you tell me some story from your favorite TV serial?" Mohan uttered annoyingly leaving Guru fumed with false anger

****

Addu was celebrating his first bike, distributing sweets and giving rides to his colleagues and friends.

"That's a cool bike, man" Jayesh was praising every part of the new bike

"Give me a ride" Buvi insisted and got her ride too

Addu was busy but did not fail to notice Ragini watching him from her seat. He offered her sweets which she did not refuse surprisingly. He found that Ragini was not treating him like earlier. She was showing interest in his activities and his talks. Addu was happy about it but did not want to take it forward. He kept things detached and enjoyed the pleasure distantly without getting involved.

"Why don't you take Ragi for a ride" when Jayesh asked, Addu closed the topic saying

"Some lessons are for lifetime. One should not commit the same mistakes again. I am better off this way"

"Do I get a ride too?" Addu was surprised by the request that came from Mohan

"Sir! You on my bike?"

"Yes, why not? It's a wonderful opportunity to ride behind a youth!" Mohan winked at him

Everyone cheered up for the boys. A nervous Addu wasn't sure what he was doing but he managed the ride. He almost jumped a signal on the road but held back in line. The traffic policeman was much in distress and took them aside without heeding to any of his pleads.

"Sir, sir! I just stopped it and did not jump the signal, Sir!" Addu was pleading with the policeman

"Rules are rules, boy! Show me the papers" As the policeman started his scrutiny, Mohan was irritated by his approach

"Arrey yaar, there is no mistake of his and why do you stop us?"

"So, you are talking rules too? Then ok stay here. Give me the keys"

"May I?" Mohan asked for the keys from Addu

As Mohan took the keys, he signed him to sit. Addu looked around to see the policemen busy with the others. He jumped on to the pillion seat. Mohan pressed the button and vroom the bike. Within seconds they were out of the spot leaving the others far behind. They did not realize that a simple ride could be so much fun. Addu let himself loose and stretched his arms wide open as if flying behind Mohan. They were laughing their hearts out from their little misbehavior.

"Don't tell your Mummy, ok?" Mohan bit his lips wondering how to revert what he just said

"Sir?" Addu paused to look at Mohan not knowing what he meant

"Normally mothers don't like such things and your mom might get worried if you get in trouble" Mohan managed to get some sensible reason for his goof up

"You are right, Sir! My Mummy is very strict that way and she will spank me if she gets to know it"

"I know! Tell me about it!" Mohan slapped his forehead for another mistake of his

"I mean to say; even my wife is like that. Ok shall we go?" Mohan closed the topic

****

"Dude, is everything going fine as per our plans?"

"Haan baby! All are set! I and Nanhi will take care of everything"

"Ok bye"

Rimjhim was planning for a birthday bash for Mohan. She had earlier requested Megha to take her to Bhopal for a day, on Mohan's birthday. Megha knew no bounds of joy on hearing Mohan's name and being reminded of his birthday. She was even delighted at the thought of seeing him after so many years.

"Jikki, Shall we go?"

"Yes sweetie" Megha tried hard to hide her nervousness

"Will you stay with me, Jikki?"

"No beta! I will drop you at home and have to get back home the same day" Megha prayed that everything goes as per her plans

Megha wanted to see Mohan but wasn't ready to meet him yet. She was determined to hide herself only to witness those beautiful moments of Mohan with his lovely daughters. Though she knew that Addu was doing well she did not want to know anything more about his relationship with Mohan. She believed that some things are better left without any intrusion. On top of anything, she was tired of meddling with things and dreaded the expectations and disappointments that they brought to her.

Pages to be continued...
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Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yipee...I m here before ur PM 😆

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Its amazing... 👍🏼 I loved d Addu RJ scene sply 😃 cos there is less hope to see these bonding in show...pata nahi kab hoga 😭

Oh Mohan d father of Kalyug 😆 Himself teasing her daughter on BF's name...who isnt her BF yet 😆

Wah wah...perfect updt 🤗

Hoping to get an updt on this weekend too...i know am being greedy now...demanding next updt in 2-3 days 😆 Sorry for tht... 😊 ...but if possible...just an updt... 😃

Edited by Megher_Palok - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update poo...addu ko uncle bana dia😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow poo awesome stuff man hats off


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