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TENTH PART:
HUMARI ADHORI KAHANI:

First of all thanks for supporting me , i split my last part in to two part here i update my first part and Inshallah second part update tomorrow, because this part become so lengthy here is the last part One:

Arjun: nahi Riya mei tumhain koi saza nahi dena chahta tum bhi hamaray sath chalo gi.

Riya: kis haq say jaun aap k sath.

Arjun: tum zayan ki maa ho.

Riya: par ye sach nahi hai, ek baar mei nay khud ko aap say dour kar liya bar bar nahi kar paungi, jaisay aap k bina jeena sekh liya hai mei nay waisay zayan k bina bhi jeena seekh lungi, aadat ho chuki hai mujhe.

Arjun: please Riya hosh say kam lo, tum chalo humaray sath.

Riya: nahi mei nahi ja sakti.

Arjun: Riya mei yahen hun tumharay pass do din hai, tum aachi tarha soch samjh lo k tumhain kiya karna hai, zayan ko khushi hogi agar tum us k sath jao gi.

Riya: theek hai. mei soch k aapko jawab deti hun, tab tak aap yahen humaray sath rahen gay.

Arjun: jaisa tumhain theek lagay.

Zayan is still playing with his toys. Riya calls zayan.

Riya: Zayan beta yahan aao.

Zayan sits in her lap she kisses on his forhead.

Riya: Zayan tumhain aapnay papa say milna tha na.

Zayan: yes Mama.

Riya: ye hai tumharay Papa Arjun suryakant Rawate.

Zayan: Papa.

Arjun feels happy he feels himself on the seventh sky because his son first time says him Papa.

Arjun: zayan phir say kaho jo abhi tum nay kaha hai.

Zayan: papa.

Arjun takes him from her lap and hugs him tightly and place many kisses on all over zayan's face.

Riya: raat buhat ho gai hai mei aapka room ready kar deti hun, aap soo jaen hum kal subha baat kartay hain.

Arjun: kiya zayan aaj raat mere sath soo sakta hai.

Riya: is baat ka faisala zayan ko khud karnay day.

Arjun: zayan kiya aap apnay papa k sath so aaj raat soo gay.

Zayan: nahi mujhe Mama k beghair neend nahi aati.

Arjun: theek hai Riya tum isay apnay sath lay jao.

Riya: chalo zayu.

Next day in Morning.

Riya: zayan quick be ready aap school k liay late ho rhay hain.

Zayan: Mama I am ready.

Riya: great mera zayan toh bara ho gaya hai, ab ye mama k bina bhi hark am kar sakta hai.

Arjun is watching them silently.

Riya: Breakfast ready hai Aap aa jaen.

Arjun simply nodded his head in Yes.

Anu as usual enters in Riya's Home, she is shocked to see Arjun there .

Anu: aap yahan..

Arjun: How is she Riya?

Riya: Arjun ye Anu hai meri friend, aur Anu ye hai Arjun.

Anu: aaj tak Riya say aap k baray mei buhat suna tha, magar aaisay mulaqat ho gi ye kabhi socha nahi tha, Humasha aap k naam k sath Riya k aankhon mei dar dekha tha mei nay, Isliay mei aap say mil k ye nahi keh sakti k Nice to meet you, pata nahi kyun ek daar sa hai k akahin aap ka yahan aana Riya k khushiyun ka khatma toh nahi hai.

Arjun: Don't worry Anu, mei yahan Riya ki khushiyan cheenay nahi aaya hun, mei Riya aur zayan ko sath lay janay aaya hun.

Anu: Great .

Riya: Arjun aaj zayan k school mei functions hai saray parents bhi invited hai, agar aap zayan k sath us k school jaen gay toh zayan ko khushi hogi, wo har baar dosron ko in kay papa k sath dekh k dukhi ho jata hai.

Arjun: theek hai mei tyaar hun, tum bhi ready ho jao sath chalen gay.

Riya: Kyun mera jana aab zarori hai kiya.

Arjun: kaisi batein kar rahi ho tum , tum aakhir zayan ki maa ho

Riya: but ..

Arjun: no argument Riya.

Riya nodded his head in positive.

Zayan: mama papa jaldi karo mujhe dyar ho rahi hai.

Riya: bus aai beta.

Arjun: tum log tyar ho.

Zayan: yes papa.

Arjun: chalen.

Riya: ji.

Riya wants to occupy the back seat of the car but Arjun forbid her to sit her on back seat.

Arjun: zayan tum peechay betho yahan aapki mama bethen gi aap kay Papa k sath kyun mama jaan, theek kaha na mei nay.

Riya: nahi mei zayan k sath peechay beth jao gi.

Arjun: shaid tum nay theek say suna nahi mei nay kiya kaha Yahan betho riya.

Riya: theek hai.

Arjun drive the car and turn on the radio. This song is playing on the radio.

kya wajah thi tere jaane ki

phir laut ke na aane ki

Arjun stares Riya while she sees outside the window

kya wajah thi tere jaane ki

phir laut ke na aane ki

The fast wind is blowing and her hair waves in the air but he continuously stares her through the front mirror

aaye hai hawaye tujhe hai bulaye

yaad bulaye

kya wajah thi tere jaane ki

phir laut ke na aane ki

Now Arjun concerntrate on driving and she stares him

kya wajah thi tere jaane ki

phir laut ke na aane ki

saiyaa ye saiyaa, saiyyaa

Riya's eyes fill with tears and she wipes her tears

kitne mousam gujre hai

hum yaad mai teri tadpe hai

chandni aa ke kehti hai

aate jaate kehti hai

Arjun Stares her again.

kitne mousam gujre hai

hum yaad mai teri tadpe hai

chandni aa ke kehti hai

aate jaate kehti hai

Arjun POV " I need you riya, tum mere jeenay ki zarorat ban chuki ho"

haa de de sahara

bas ek nazara

kab tak yun tadpayega

kya wajah thi pyar jatane ki

phir laut ke na aane ki

The whole journey is passing quietly, Arjun think that he break the silence between them.

Arjun: Riya are you Ok.

Riya: ha.

Arjun: kaisay guzaray ye char saal.

Riya: bus kaat liay ye char saal apnay zayan k saharay,.

Arjun: par mei maar maar k jiya hun in char salon mei

hu itna bhi na socha tumne

baad tumhare jaane ke

hum kaise jeeyenge

jaane jaan, nahi jeena mar jayenge

Riya: please aab ye batein band Karen mujhe beetee baton ko yaad karnay ka koi shoq nahi hai.

itna bhi na socha tumne

baad tumhare jaane ke

hum kaise jeeyenge

jaane jaan

nahi jeena mar jayenge

socho kya hoga hamara

dil ne hai pukara

bin tere nahi jee payenge

kya wajah thi khwab dikhane ki

phir laut ke na aane ki

kya wajah thi khwab dikhane ki

phir laut ke na aane ki

kya wajah thi tere jaane ki

phir laut ke na aane ki

while the rest journey is passing quietly.

Arjun: hum pohnch gay Riya

Riya take off from car and hold zayan's hand nad enters in a big hall.

A boy calling Zayan:u.

Boy: hey zayan kaisa hai tu

Zayan: I am fine, Monti dekh aaj mere sath kaun aaya hai.

Monti: kaun aaya hai.

Zayan: Monti ye mere Papa hai Arjun rawate. Ye police officer hai.

Monti calling his fellows.

Monti: jaldi aao dekho aaj zayan k Papa aaen hai.

Boys stares zayan:

Sunny: wah Zayan tere papa toh buhat handsom hai.

Zayan: Sunny dekha mere papa ko kitnay aachay hai, aab mei yahan nahi aaun ga mei mama aur Papa dehli ja rhay hai, ab mei Dehli mei hi rahunga.

Monti: tu yahan nahi aaey ga.

Zayan: nahi..

Arjun: Zayan beta aanday chalen.

Zayan: ji Papa.

Karan: hi Priya.

Riya: hello Karan How are you?

Karan: mei theek hunt um sunao.

Riya: mei bhi theek hun.

Arjun: hello karan.

Karan: hey aap wohi ho na jo us din park mei milay thay.

Riya: Karan ye ACP Arjun Surkayant Rawate hai Zayan k Papa.

Karan: toh ye hai tumharay Pati Dev, nice ko meet you Arjun.

Arjun: it's my pleasure, nice to meet you too.

Riya: karan ye mere..

Arjun: Chalen madam, he holds her by her shoulders , Riya kiya kar rhi ho hum yahan as a couple aaen hai mei zayan ka Papa aur tum Mama ho, agar tum nay kisi say kuch kaha toh Zayan ko kitna bura lagay ga,

Riya: theek hai par please aap mujhe choren.

Arjun: kyun?

Riya: please Sir.

Arjun: riya aab tum meri subordinate nahi ho jo mujhe sir bulao gi, tum mere betay ki maa ho samjhi ya samjhaun?

Zayan to his Principle: madam aaj mere Papa mere sath aaen hai.

Principle: kahan hai tumharay Papa .

Zayan: wo rhay meri Mama k sath.

Principle: hello Mr and Mrs. Rawate how are you.

Riya: fine mam.

Arjun: hello.

Priciple: please come and sit .

Arjun: Sure why not?

Zayan is on the stage and holding a mike in his hand.

Zayan: aaj mei apnay Papa k liya ek ganna gana chahta hun. Ye song aap k liay hai Papa nad Mama.



"tera mujhse hai pahle ka nata koi
yuhi nahi dil lubhata koitera mujhse hai pahle ka nata koiyuhi nahi dil lubhata koijane tu ya jane namane tu ya mane na

dekho abhi khona nahi kabhi juda hona nahidekho abhi khona nahi kabhi juda hona nahiabke yuhi mile rahenge donowada raha ye is sham ka jane tu ya jane namane tu ya mane natera mujhse hai pahle ka nata koiyuhi nahi dil lubhata koijane tu ya jane namane tu ya mane na" Riya rushes on the stages hai hugs him , Arjun also folloe her on the stages.Riya kisses him madly. Arjun put his hand on her shoulder and she stands He hugs her and Zayan. At evening: Arjun: Riya kiya faisala kiya hai tum nay. Humain kal Dehli k liay nikalna hai. Riya: mei nay faisala kar liya hai mei shimla chor k kahin nahi jaun gi. Arjun: kiya ye tumhara aakhiri faisala hai. Riya: ha Arjun: theek hai mei zayan ko apnay sath Dehli lay k jar aha hun, aur tum jab chaho aa sakti ho humray pass. Riya: theek hai. Arjun: Zayan beta aap mere sath Dehli jao gay. Zayan: par Mama.. Arjun: aapki mama humaray sah nahi jaen gi. Zayan: but mujhe mama k pass rehna hai.

Arjun: zayan zid nahi karo beta
Riya: mei nay zayan ki sari cheezain pack akr dii hain, zayan subha 7 bjay uthta hai, isay breakfast mei toast nad butter pasand hai, isay dophar mei theek 1: 30 bjay khana khanay ki aadat hai isay chocolate pasand hain magar please isay aap zayda chocolates nahi dilaey ga, isay raat jaldi sonay ki aadat hai ye apni mama k sath sota hai, please isay aap apnaay sath sulaeay ga is baat ka dhayan rakheay ga k kahin ye daar na jaey. Aur iska baqi schedule mei nay ek chit mei likh k is bag mei daal diya hai. is bag mei is k satay kapray iska dhayan rakheay ga, ok bye mei isay jatay huway nahi dekh sakti. Arjun: ok bye apna khayal rakhna. They reach Dehli on sharp 9 O'clock in morning.
Sameer: Hey Arjun. Hello zayan.
Zayan: Papa ye kaun hain. Arjun: ye sameer Uncle hai aap k Papa k best friend. Zayan: Jaisay Monti mera best friend hai. Arjun: ha . Sameer: Arjun Riya kahan hai. Arjun: wo nahi aai. Sameer: wo nahi aai ya tu usay lay k nahi aaya. Arjun: jo samjh lo. Sameer: Arjun tu kabhi nai badlay ga aakhir tu zayan ko Riya say cheen hi lya na. Arjun: mei nay usay sath chalnay ka kaha tha magar wo nahi mani. Sameer: Arjun tu usay manata tab hi wo manti na, sorry kaha tu nay usay . Arjun: nahi.Sameer: Arjun teri aana ek din sab ko tabha karay gi, tu usay apnay dil ki baat kyun nahi bata deta kyun chupa raha hai tu us say, us say tu ye kyun nhai keh deta k tujh us say pyar ho gaya hai, agar tu nay us say apnay dil ki baat kahi hoti toh wo tere sath zaror aati.Arjun: mei janta hun wo aaey gi khud aai gi aur buhat jald aaey gi janta hun k woe k pal bhi zayan k bina nahi reh sakti wo apni mamta k haton majboor ho k zaror aaaey gi. Sameer: wo nahi aaey gi, tujhe dosron ko jhukanay mei buhat maza aaya hai na, agr wo nahi aai toh kiya karay ga. Arjun: mei daway k sath kehta hun wo aaey gi.. I am tied now soo I continue my last part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie

Oh,Sumbal.
Waiting for the next update...



Zebbie i update the second last part below have a look
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Posted: 12 years ago


i was working on the part Sara.
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Posted: 12 years ago
continue soon
nice update
thnx for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dashequalsd3

are u ending it??????????



YA i am ending this
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope happy ending ho. Pls make ariya together.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.
Do continue soon and plss do not end this story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant update :) loved it
loved arjun's reaction when zayn called him papa :)
loved their morning scenes
awww they went together to zayn's school
car scenes were lovely
riya had tears in her eyes 😭
love the way zayn was telling his friends about arjun
how sweet zayn was singing a song for arjun :)
love the way riya was telling arjun about zayn's likes and dislikes
riya didn't go to delhi with them :(
hope riya comes to delhi
thanks for the pm
can't wait to read last part
continue soon


Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Wow,Sumbal... It was a great update. Finally,Zayan adressed Arjun as Papa.. Tht was a very emotional scene. Riya was explaining Arjun about Zayan's likes and dislikes Aww... Zayan is so sweeet and adorable. He sang a song for both of them... That brought tears in my eyes... Zayan introduced Arjun to his friends... That was really sweet. Finally,Zayan in Delhi. Zayan is missing Riya... Aww... Feeling bad for Zayan. Sameer bhai ne sahi kaha,ki,Arjun kabhi nahi sudhrega.Dil ki baat bata deta Riya se... Huh... I know that Riya will come for Zayan... Hope,iss baar saari galat fehmi dur hojaye. Ariya car scenes were great.. Thanks for the pm,dear. Will miss this story a lot... Rona aaraha hai mujhe... Love this story from the bottom of my heart. A big Bow and a Grand salute to you from my side. Excellent story it is.
Edited by zebbie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry for late comment di.



u really made me cry di..
Its really a superb update ... I am really gona miss it. 😭

so riya zayan k saath jana nhi chahati...sayad wo apne kiye ki saz chahati hai ..ya phir arjun ki nafrat nahi chahati hai..

Par khuda ki karni, arjun ko toh usi se ishq ho gaya jise hamesha usk dil ne nafrat kiya... Sach mai di iss mohabbat mai hai hi aise deewangi...
I am very happy for zayan... For the first time , he can proudly say abt both his mom and dad infront of his frnds...
Riya ki baaton ne sach mai rula diya..
Par kyun?? Wo jana nhi chahati..
Par usk mamta mai jo pagalpan hai , wo kabhi zayan se door nahi rah sakti..
She have to be back..


Di the song u choose.. That was totally again fit to the storyline and the staring session..i enjoyed that..
arjun ne riya aage baithne k liye kaha.. And function mai touch bhi kiya.. Romantic..
And phir zayan ka wo gana..
Best scene of the story.. They both can't stay without zayan bt they are nt ready to stay together..
Ajib sa pyaar hai..

Ek aur baat bhul gayi
phir jab riya ne zayan ko ye bataya ki arjun is his father.. U really made smile with my tears di..
Arjun ko ye yakeen hai ki wo waps aayegi aur mujhe bhi..


Ab ye khatam ho raha hai..
Par i m really gona miss it.

Thanks fr pm di


Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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