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Posted: 12 years ago
Cutest wedding ever 😆
Loved Madhu dancing with real Ranbir and the kiss with RK ☺️
Awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
God!!! a very CUTE update...!!!!! Madhu and Rishabh were like Romeo Juliet here...Lost in there LOVE no Bother for the sorrounding just WE!!!
It was Very Very Cute...and the CAR Ride was also fun!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read the whole ss in one day! I loved it sooo much! I wish i could publish this! God bless you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful
Awsome
lovely ss
Actually LOVED IT
Simply Amazing read all the parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 14(last part/ epilogue)

I have never been this upset in my life even when i was asked to stay away from Madhu for the last day before marriage. I was angry rather than upset. How can she do this to me? This is the first day for us as married couple and we are already fighting. Well i m fighting and she is trying to pacify. This time i m not gonna give in so soon. What she did really hurt me.Madhu was in the kitchen doing some after marriage ritual of cooking. As if she hasn't cooked in this house. I was pacing in our room.

After few minutes i heard the door click open and she entered with her sweet smile. Don't fall for it RK i told myself.
" bored without me? " she hugged me from back

I removed her hand and sat on the couch ignoring her. She sat near me and leaned on me blowing in my ear.

" that tickles? " she giggled seeing me shake my head with the slight blow.

" not interested Madhu " i said waving dismissively

" come on baby i said sorry " she pouted cutely. Damn i m controlling myself.

" sorry doesn't do this time " i told pushing her hand away that was playing with my shirt button.

" only if you allow me i can make it up to you " she said gluing herself to me.

I looked at her. Making up for her mistake is something i always love. Mostly Madhu never makes mistake and if she does the way she apologizes is like a boon to me.

" but what you did this time is ..."
" i shouldn't have slept " she said looking down
" on our wedding night " i added.

Yeah you heard it right. When i reached my room after paying half a lakh to pirates in the name of sisters in law what i saw? My newly wedded wife sleeping. I know she was tired but she could have waited for me at least. I m not cruel enough to force her when she was tired. I have dreamt about that night since when our marriage was fixed and all i wanted was a kiss and her in my arms enjoying the first night of our togetherness. But she spoiled everything.

" i m sorry baby but this one month we ll do whatever you want " she promised

Tonight we are going to an island in the east where we are going to spend 10 days then rest of the days in European countries. So yeah total one month. I think i shouldn't let go this angry expression that can gain me a lot.


Finally we landed in the island. It is the most costly island in the world that makes us the fifth couple staying in this island presently with two other families. I was still pretending to be angry and Madhu was trying all possible ways to make me happy. I was getting special attention and pampering. Not that i don't get this normally but her trying to pacify me is something i love.

We reached the private cottage i booked. It was nothing less than heaven. The living room was as big as Khudra mannsion's. The bedroom had king sized bed with mirror straight opposite to it. Wow that will be fun. The best thing was the room where the sea was right under our legs. Sea creatures can be seen easily just by sitting in our chairs. I bet Madhu loves this place. She gets all excited just with the name island.

Madhu hugged me from behind when i was looking at the beach.

" are you planning to stay here all time ? " she asked nuzzling my neck.

It was 7 in the evening and the sun has just set giving a romantic atmosphere.

" well not really " i said turning to face her.

" then? "

" i m going out to have dinner " i said much to her annoyance " wanna join "

" no thanks " she said making a angry face and walked inside.

This is probably the last time i m playing this 'stii-upset –with-you' game. I have no plans to ruin my honeymoon. Tonight i m gonna convince her that i m back to normal and we can start everything new. Madhu didn't accompany me to the sea restaurant she said she had head ache and so wanted to rest and will order here. Poor me now i can't cancel my plan,right? So half heartedly i went to have dinner.


The room is dark, very dark that i can't even look at my own hands. What the hell is she doing ?

" Madhu? " i called out but no answer.

" muffin if this is some kind of a prank then let me tell you i m too tired for all this " warned.

I managed to enter our bed room with the small light that my phone provided. I heard the door close as soon as i entered. Wait is she really doing what i m thinking now? Lights appeared from nowhere and it was not usual room light. It was mild aqua blue that give you sea side feeling and it was erotic. I felt a pat on my right shoulder and i turned to see nothing that made me turn to the left immediately. Surprise Nothing.

" come on muffin don't make your husband wait" i said with a glint of mischief.

" am i forgiven ? " i heard her voice from somewhere

" long back " i said genuinely

Then entered my angel actually looking like an angel in white saree. I m gald she chose to wear a saree rather than any $exy outfit. The sari was perfect revealing at right places and nothing can turn on an Indian man more.

" you look ..." i stopped my sentence incomplete. Madhu raised her eyebrow in question.

" huh... i don't know " god get a gun and shoot me. I know to ruin a perfect moment.

" what? " Madhu chuckled. Thank god she wasn't angry. " is that what you want to say after all my hard work ? " she asked. By now she was so close to me that my hands automatically went around her and pulled closer.

" well i can say you are so $exy and this moment all i can think is that how good you ll look under me " i winked.

Madhu with a smile tip toed to kiss me. That is probably the longest kiss we shared after the one on my birthday. When we broke the kiss Madhu was panting heavily and i could see her eyes shining.

" so... i..." i know five languages fluently yet at situations like this nothing helps.

" Mr.Rishab Khundra i know that you suck at romantic lines when we both know what we are heading to why try to be cheesy? " she said patting my cheeks.

How sweet. Madhu has long back accepted that i can't be as romantic as i m on-screen. I m very bad at that. I lifted her bridal style and walked to the bed.

" i have been waiting for this for seven months ten days and well i don't know how many hours " i said placing her on the bed.

" that desperate ? " she asked raising her eyebrows

"very soon i ll show you how desperate i m. " i said winking

" this is my first time so you better be gentle " that is the last full sentence i heard her speak that night as later all i could hear was her moaning my name. God that was making me wild.


I was disturbed by the buzzing of my phone. I was almost lying on top of Madhu not to mention we both were naked covered only by thin spread oh wait where is the spread i used to cover us? I spotted the spread at the end of the bed covering only our legs. So i was the one covering Madhu's body and my body technically not covered. With great difficulty i opened my eyes and grabbed the spread covering us. I took my phone to check the reminder that said that we need to vacate this place this evening and have a flight to catch. Yeah? 10 days over already?

This place could do good to newly wedded couple. After our first night of togetherness we din't get out of the bed till evening next day. Only when Madhu insisted that she needed fresh air we went to the sea side restaurant. Next two days we went out only for two or three hours like sightseeing and then got back to the comfort of bed. After that the place didn't offer much places to explore so all days we stayed in our cottage exploring each other.

" morning " i heard madhu's sleepy voice. After marriage i discovered that Madhu is most beautiful when she is just out of sleep early morning.

" morning muffin." I said pecking her forehead.

" we need to go from here " i said showing the reminder in the phone

" already? " she asked in surprise. I nodded.

" so pack your things " i said

" yeah as if i used any dress " she said rolling her eyes

That is right. We never opened our suitcase except during early couple of days. We almost stayed in the house which means we didn't need dress as who knows when one of us will pounce on the other. Madhu used her bathrobe or wrap herself with spread. I prefer walking in my birth suit until she manage to find my boxers and throw it yelling to cover myself.

" that means we have free time " i wriggled my eyes suggestively

" don't even think Mr.Khundra. i m exhausted " she said.

Ignoring her words i began to kiss her neck.

" baby please i m tired " she said but i know she was lieing. If she was really tired i would know and no way i will ever force her.


" are you sure its our baby ? " i asked looking at the screen where doctor pointed a small bean like thing saying that was our baby.

" yes RK " Madhu said chuckling.

It has been five years of marriage and i and Madhu are convinced that enough of our never ending honeymoon and its time for thinking about family. She was mentally prepared and after three months of trying we heard the happy news of her being pregnant. Now we are presently in doctor's room for her first scan.

" are you sure doctor ? " i asked still not convinced. Come on how can my baby be so small.

" Of course Mr.RK " the doctor said looking at me dreamily. Dr.Sneha is young and since when we came she is staring at me more than at Madhu's report. Perhaps she still can't digest the fact that Superstar RK is in her hospital.

I could have carried Madhu to parking but she insisted that i just hold her hands and no need of PDA.

" that doc was totally into you " Madhu said

" so obvious ,wasn't it? " i said

" should i be worried" Madhu asked

" why? "

" generally when wife is pregnant husband go for an affair " she said

" really!!! " i faked shock

" do you want me to find a girl for you because if you are having an affair the girl should match my standard else i ll feel insulted " she said sounding genuine

" so bad then i can't ever have an affair. No one can match you muffin " i said opening the car door.

" so what shall we do? " she asked once i settled in my seat

" we are stuck with each other " i said smiling

" forever and ever " she added

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hope you are following my FF

good girl and bad boy

This is the last update of this story so i would appreciate if all comment on it. At least i will know how much you liked this story.

This is one of my favorites and yeah my first Rishbala story. So i m feeling happy and sad that it ended.

I may start a new one but not sure yet.










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Posted: 12 years ago
jeez!!who sleeps durin da first wedding night...🤢🤢
well da honeymoon part was teriffic *ahem ahem*😳😳
was an awesome update👏👏...it was great end to da story👏👏...
i m falling for ur writing😊😊...pls do come up wid a new story.😉😉...
Edited by philantus - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice ending!!! awesome story!!!! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice ending
luvd it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
that is so cute..
awesome ending..
the pairs part was too romantic n happy ending..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part !
The whole FF was fantastic 👏
Loved it !
The free style language you use along with the slang make it quite unique and fun to read !
But i am really sad that it ended 😭
PM the next chapters of your other works !
I would really love to read !

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