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thank u...😊
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love to read ur comments nici... like them a lot
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Originally posted by: deepa1122

Good job Hari really nice waiting for the next update

so much relieved listening this from u... hope u got ur answers 😊
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PART 26 - Broken hearts??

"Aarti kunj bihari ki..."

Listening to the bhajan song, Dev who was holding chayas hand, automatically left it and ran towards that side...
Chaya looked at Dev who was running and "Dev, rukho, kaha jaa raha ho"

Chaya too went to that side to see Dev standing there listening to that song...

Chaya went near him and said "What happened, why did u come here"

Dev:Maa, I feel like I heard this song before.

Chaya never do pooja of Lord Krishna in their house, being the devotees of Lord Shiv, they do pooja of Lord shiv in their home, or in their relatives home too... Only for sake fo Dev and his like to Kanha , Chaya took him to Kanha temple... She her self never heard this song , she was trying to recollect where would have Dev heard this song.

At same time...

Radhika was crying out loudly... Savithri was trying to manage her, she was nto knowing how to, because Radhika never cried like that. She not knowing what to do, trying to pacify her roaming round the temple, and Radhika's tears stopped as she came near the place where bhajan was going on...

Savithri: Acha , toh babli wants to come here, thats why she was crying...

Radhika smiled playing with Savithri's chain.

Savithri smiled and sat there beside Chaya , who was sitting there along with Dev.

Savithri looked at the little boy who was dressed up as Kanha and smiled... She smiled to him and asked him to come near her, but she went beside her mother... Chaya noticed Dev coming behind her and looked beside to see a woman with a cute baby in her hands. She smiled ot her and Savithri smiled in return saying " Aapki bacha, bahut cute hain"

Chaya smiled and said " Thanks, aapki beti ka kitna age hain"

Savithri:She is 6 months old. Aapki bete ka naam

Chaya:Dev...

Savithri saw Radhika smiling out all of a sudden and playing out more... she doesn't understand what happened to Radhika but she smiled. Chaya looked at Radhika and tried to play with her... "Aapki beti ka naam"

Savithri;Radhika...

Dev who all this time standing beside her mother came infront and went near savithri.. Savithri and Chaya frowned seeing this, and Dev silently went near Radhika and extended his finger to her... Radhika with her hands got hold of his finger and then Dev smiled...

Chaya and Savithri felt it amusing... Savithri who was in a playful mood "Toh Dev ji, all this time u hided from me na, now why u came out all of a sudden. "

Dev: Aunty, I wished to see pari...

Chaya;Ye pari koun hain...

Dev:Ye dekho pari ko.

Chaya:Vuska naam pari nahi hain Dev..

Dev:Nahi ye meri Pari hain...

Chaya shook her head off and Savithri smiled saying 'Acha tumhe jo chahe vo bhulalo isko"

Dev smiled and kissed savithri saying "Thanks"

Chaya: Isko hua kya hain, ye kabhi bhi aise behave nahi karte,.

Savithri: Koi baat nahi hain ji, bachon kabhi kabhi aisa behave karte hain, ismein kuch galti nahi hain.

Chaya smiled and said "acha humein abhi jaana hain, Mere pati ko kuch kaam hain, vuske paas mere chote bete ko chodkar yaha aaya tha"

Savithri smiled and she saw towards side they left and she noticed Radhika crying as they leave...

Savithri thinking that Radhika needs milk left temple to go home...

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16 years later...
Delhi ...

Sumitra was looking through the door for every five minutes... For first time , she went out, Sumitra never let her grand daughter go out alone with her friends, in case she was worried for her, and Radhika her self never ask to go out too... but today is completion of her 12th, she just wished that she wanna go out with her friends, and Sumithra accepted readily.. But she know the bore she feel after Radhika left but she thought to her self that she should let Radhika freak out..

While she was in her thoughts she felt to cold hands around her neck, she knew who it was "So finally how did u enjoy"

Radhika:I enjoyed a lot, but i felt it a bit boring too...

Sumithra: So where did u go...

Radhika; Just its sunny's birthday today, she took all of us to a fair.

Sumithra: U love fairs na..

Radhika:Inded I love them, but what bored me is their stupid convos...

Sumithra: So my dear grandie what is that boring talk...

Radhhika: Well i have no energy to narrate u every thing that happened there... but just much of it about the gobar gas..

Sumithra laughed out loud ' Gobar gas was name which Radhika kept for their schools hottie... Abhay.. and when ever Radhika explain the thing which made her keep that name to him, it was very funny..

Radhika: So why are u laughing now... they played truth and dare for a while and when it came to me, they asked me some weirdo question

Sumithra; Whats that

Radhika making a ugly face ' They wish to know which type of guy will I marry"

Sumithra: what did u say...

Radhika:I said them I will never marry.

Sumithra shooked off her head and said "Go, fresh and come, I made ur favourite paratha"

Radhika: Khane ka man nahi hain, main soney jaa rahi hoon. gud nyt...

Sumithra:Kya hua...

Radhika:Maa... please, mujhe khane ka man nahi hain...

saying this she rushed up to her room and then she started to cry keeping her head in pillow... She was remembering how she loved Abhay and held him as life.. but how he rejected her love... She took her dairy and started to write "Mummy... I know u are angry on me , u would never think that I would love some one , but I loved him mummy... But he never loved me, and found me weird girl, who was more of a boy than a girl... what should I do mummy... i was brought up like that, i feel it weird to feel shy always and do those girlish... talks, whats wrong in that mummy..."
Rubbing her tears she continued further "Mummy, u know what today sunny asked me which type of guy would I like to have as my husband , but she never knows that I don't believe in marriage. How can i believe in it, after I saw what happened to u mummy... how can I/. U know what mummy... if ever I feel like marrying, I will, but for me the person whom I love and marry would be 'My best friend, my mentor , my teacher, my philosopher, and most of all he should become my mother mumma... And also he should use me, play with me, angry on me, love me. make me his every thing and let me use him, play with him, love him, angry on him and make him my every thing. Such psychos are very rare to find mumma... very rare..I hope i get one such psycho"

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At same time...

"Priya, how come do u think that I will marry u"

Priya: U only said me na Dev, that U love me...

Dev:I still tell u, I love u a lot, but I can't marry u/

Priya: Why dev, why can't u marry me..

Dev:Its because, u can't held me Priya... I am a psycho.. u never know how i will be, if ever a girl becomes my wife I will use her, will play with her, will cheat her, will be angry on her, will love her and will make her my ever thing. ' u being a girl who was very sensitive can never tolerate it Priya , try to understand it.

Priya:But I always imagined u as my husband Dev

Dev: On the very day I proposed u, I said u that I can't marry u, but why did u still thought like that

Priya: I thought I can change u Dev...

Dev:No one can ever change me... Leave it off priya, Gud bye..

Priya looked at Dev terrified, she never saw this side of Dev, she tried to connect this Dev with the very loving and caring Dev... whom she know... , but she can no where find the connection...

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Radhika opened her Face book account to find a new friend request... Frowning she looked at the profile to find a name "Dev Nath Purohith"

Radhika felt the name similar, but when she try to recollect any person she knew by the name, she can't recollect any thing.. Frowning she opened the profile to find that he's a medical student, Radhika always have a profound interest and respect for medicos, which came out of her childhood memories with her grandfather who was a doctor.. She always respects doctors a lot, and out of that interest she added him immediately... Then she checked his profile to find a status on the wall " I am left alone in the ocean of love... It pains a lot..."

Radhika smiled to her self and thought " How cruel this love is, whom we love we never get them and we won't be available to the one who love us..."

She then immediately changed and opened the profile of Abhay and looked at his profile picture... seeing his profile picture she smiled and continued to stare it like that till she fall a sleep..

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Dev came home and saw a worried hari waiting for him...

hari;dev, kal tere exam hain na

Dev:Haan papa...

Hari;Toh itni raat ke samay par kaha gaya

Dev:wo mere ek dost ka tabiyat thik nahi hain toh, vuske paas jaakar aa raha hoon

Hari:Hmmm toh kab padoge.

Dev: Abhi jaakar padunga na

Hari;Jaao, if ever I see u opening ur computer, I will get the net connection removed.

Dev nodded and went in , and as he went in... he himself felt a lot of pain... he was getting remembrance of priya a lot... he loved her, but he doesn't want to torture her innocence, thats why he broke up with her, he just ant to get rid of it... thats why he opened his face book... Then he saw a like of some girl on his profile status... he saw her name and its "Radhika" he felt the name familiar but didn't remember meeting her any where... He wanted to clarify whose she... He saw her online and messaged her "Hi"

But Dev didn't get reply/// feeling weird he went offline and took his book to read

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Radhika woke up to see her self sleeping keeping her laptop open..

she it her self on head and saw that she ;left her FB in online... she checked through the messages, some were from her friends... but a message from the newly added unknown [person with a familiar name...

Radhika messaged him "I am sorry, yesterday night, i am in some bad mood, slept infront of laptop ... can't reply u then sorry for that"
saying that she closed it and kept the lappy for charging and went to change herself...

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Dev who ended up reading till 2:30 woke up at 7:00 to get ready ... Out of his habit he opened his mobile to see message from Priya, but he didn't get any,,, not understanding he opened his FB to see a message notification, when he opened it, it wasn't from Priya but was indeed from radhika... He sighed reading it, and left out...

Chaya came out seeing Dev leaving "dev, eat some thing and leave"

Dev:Nahi maa, mujhe jaana hain, saying that he looked at the Kanha pic there and doing a short prayer left...

Chaya shook her head off and went in to complete her work so that she can go to her office.

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Sumithra:babli...

Radhika comign from pooja room "Haan daadi"

Sumithra:Pooja khatam ho gaya

Radhika:haan maa... pooja khatam ho gaya'

Sumithra: Acha aaj tera plan kya hain...

Radhika:Need to sleep that's it, after sleeping waking up and going to music class, coming and sleeping.

Sumithra: Acha mere saath mandir aaopge

Radhika:Okay... kya abhi jaana hain

Sumithra:Nahi, kuch der ke baad.

Radhika"Lekin aaj kya special hain...

Sumithra: Aaj savi aur rishi ka marriage day hain...

Radhika's face sadden all of a sudden... "Main nahi aavungi"

Sumithra:Kyun...

Radhika:Jis din ka koi importance hi nahi hain, kyun mandir jaana vus din.

Sumithra:Tera mummy-daddy ka wedding day hain aaj

Radhika:Lekin, main kabhi bhi apni mummy, aur vus aadmi ko saath mein nahi dekha tha... Jis shaadi ka, koi relation hi nahi bachi aaj, vus ko celebrate karne ki kya jaroorat hain.

Sumithra: Ur mum likes this day a lot.

Radhika:But it gave her only pain...

Sumithra: Rishi itna bura nahi hain...

Radhika: I will never say a person good or bad, no one will be perfect... what matters to me is their behaviour to me... in that case I can never accept that Rishikesh Bharadwaj...

Sumithra: Agar tum aaj mere saath nahi aaya toh, main ye ghar chodkar jaavungi..

Radhika: Acha baba aaungi , lekin tere liye... we will go in evening..

Sumithra smiled and nodded...

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Thats it friends,
Its an inward look into the characterisation of Radhika and Dev...
Its a bit different from our original sweet radev,
these Radev are different,
hope u like them😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for beautiful long update hari
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Posted: 13 years ago
Enjoyed the update & love these different RaDev. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I like it a whole bunch a nice long update good job waiting for the next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
love this story with different concept...
Thank you for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Liking it waiting for Radev face to face meeting
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just read it now..and was shocked that they are dead and this rebirth i just loved the re-incarnation track..keep it up..waiting for more...waiting for Dev to soften his heart towards his wife and how radhika will do it..

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