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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -saranya-

wht kushi- shyam

arnav -lav... 😳

now its tym fr u to pen dwn the chap...

im no nomore waitng fr it...i demand a quick update... 😳

shall i?? 😉

i am also eager to pen it down, but first i wanna to clear some scenes which is still blur in my Thick SKULL..😕😕
will welcome with your opioion if you write something in it..😃
Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gud ngt...

robsten + arshi drms ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept plz pm me weneva u updt n plz updt supa soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Great start! So Arnav and Khushi are with different partners right now? Interesting :) Looking forward to reading more :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept
Update soon n do pm me wen u update :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Hey,

I was unable to concentrate on my studies... How the hell am I supposed to read about the causes of earthquakes and the materials and techniques adapted in the construction field in earthquake prone areas...????

My miseries apart, the prologue is very... intriguing... The part that attracted me is that Khushi and Arnav are best friends and that Khushi is Shyam's wife. Yes, I am insane in this, but I welcomed the concept. Everywhere, there is just Arnav and Khushi and I met many people who aren't interested or happy with such concepts. Trust me, those restrictions for a writer is hard and difficult. A story is a story, no matter what, and one has to look at it as it is but not to expect a fairy tale all the long.

So here, the couples are happy with each other. I look forward of how this journey with the best friends is going to be. I am not sure of how regular I will be with commenting with my busy schedule, (I guess you know about it,)... but I will follow you in their journey...

Vanhi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
FIRST LOOK : BEGINNING...

It always seems like my first day on this premises, I am not kid now then why I feel always so unprotected? She laugh on her own thought and question herself, really am I unprotected? She enter the huge lobby of her college, which connect stairs to the first floor, canteen to right from the gate, library (her favorite place) which is located back from the wall of lobby, which face sport room in front. She knows everyone knows her almost (or because of her friend), this is not she want to be but this is what she is for, she is good in this and can do a lot with it, she loves to help people she want their sorrow to leave them so they can live their life normally, she wants everyone to be happy, every person to be cherish, what an uncertain dreams she have. In this Law School she wants to achieve everything to help other, this is what her dream and this is how Our Khushi Gupta is.

She took stairs to reach her class she is never late, but everyday can't be same right?

Two strong pairs of hand circle around her waist, and whisper in her ears : Morning sweet heart!

She flinch on the touch but she knows who that can be, as no one can ever do this with her accept only one person, her Buddy, her Beast friend. She turn around in his hand and push him hard on his chest with her full force. And with firm Voice she command him : Arnav Singh Raizada , don't touch me.

He chuckle on her words he always do, he is a man of golden Heart, he is a man of Dreams, Girls die for his one look, and he love to Kill them all. He is not a man who take advantages, he have a charm from which he even can't outrun with, all girls die on Him and He can not help that. A tall lean figure with perfect trim jaw and Golden brown chocolate eyes , he is a sweet heart of all of them.

He grab her hand and kiss her cheeks in response she closed her eyes in anticipation : I just wish you morning dear.

She opened her hazel brown eyes and push him again and sigh, she knows she can't ignore him : Morning to you too, Arnav. And turn around to leave.

He exclaimed, he knows she don't like all this stuff, but he can't help himself, does he? : Just kidding yaar, you always look so hot, I can't keep.

Before he can't complete his sentence She cut him in between and hit him with her books and plied: Arnav Singh Raizada Please!

He Chuckle again and said : I love it yaar, when ever you take my name like this, what should I do to you dear. And with his thumb and forth finger he relax her forehead, which got wrinkle with their conversation. She sigh again. And with it he give his 1000 watt smile to her.

Arnav : We are getting late, isn't we?

Khushi look her watch and sigh again: Because of you.

Arnav question her : hey, why you sigh so much, you have any lungs problem which you never told me ? She looked at him with dragger in her eyes, he continue with awkward smirk on his lips: just kidding yaar.

After the class they both depart to their next classes, Khushi is in social law and Arnav is in Criminal law, they both meet before a year when they both selected to be a partner on effect on criminal law on social law and orders, from that day they both are together, together like Best Buddies.

Khushi reached her next class she took a seat beside a fair girl with black long hair enough till her waist, a nose pin which adore her beautiful thin nose with beautiful Chinese's eyes.

Khushi pat her shoulder and greet her : Morning Payal!

Payal immediately pull herself from her seat and hug her warmly : Good Moring sweetie..

Khushi give her a warm smile and sit beside her.

Payal asked her : so!?

Khushi confusingly : so what?

Payal make a what so ever face : What is going on between you both?

Khushi in utter confusion : Between who both?

Payal don't act smart like face : Between you both, she throw her hands in Air to make her understand what she meant : between both of you, Arnav and Khushi, she finally utter and she knows her friend who is so Dumbo.

Khushi laugh on her statement : Me and Arnav? Are you crazy ? She poke her fingers on her face.

Payal replies: Yeah I just saw you both near stairs you know, she said with matter of facts.

Khushi hit her head with her palm and then Payal with the same: what gal, you know him, how can you even think that we both, I mean we both can be like that. She stop her sentence incomplete when she caught Payal gazing outside the class she follow her gaze and sigh again : Yeah yeah, Akash of course!

Payal look at her in embarrassment : Sorry!

Khushi throw her hand on her shoulder and console her : Its okay, my friend is in love with that burger who don't even know your name.

Payal look in her eyes and with full force of authority she said: He knows my name!

On which Khushi laugh her heart out, and after a while Payal joined her too.

After class Khushi hold Payal : Tell him that you like him.

Payal in utter in disbelief : What?
Khushi with firm voice : Tell him before it's too late.

Payal look at her and found she is in deep thought she jerk her : Are you okay Khushi?

Khushi just nodded and move from their to library.

She was sitting on her usual table when Arnav came and sit beside her, she didn't said anything nor did he initiate any topic, after a long silence Arnav hold her hand and drag her outside the library, Khushi try to protest but his grip is firm and controlled, they reached back side of college and Arnav left her hand, he tried to compose himself as he don't want to hurt her, he know something is bothering her, but what he don't know, he throw his hand in his hair and ruffle them, she is still standing their with no words, and starring down to her entangle fingers. Arnav came near her and hold her hands with his one hand and with other hold her chin, and tilt it upward so he can see her eyes. He found moist in her eyes, which anytime can flow.

He compose himself and took her name with full affection he can carry : Khushi!

Without any delay she hug him and start sobbing, he know her very well she is strong girl, she is not that who can cry, she is in horrible grief which is hurting her and breaking her down. Without any other thought he throw his hands around her waist and pull her toward himself more.

Hey guys here is the second part, if anyone of you is not quiet sure about character sketch please feel free to ask, as per my plan i am not going to give any character sketch, as i flow with the story, and for me character sketch can bound me in my writting skills..

Thanks Atons.

RV..

Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Nice :D
But a little grammatical mistakes..

Nice though

Arnav is really charming in this :D


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shimmer_Vani

Nice :D

But a little grammatical mistakes..

Nice though

Arnav is really charming in this :D


will Again look through it..thanks dear..😊
Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazin yaar...loved the chapter...its cute.. especially arshi bond...n Payal is also nice...

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