Ariya's SS: Humari adhori kahani lst pt pg 30 26-4 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovvinit

Aur kitne mystry hain. Nice update cntinve jaldi. Wamt al answers.



Two more mysteries which remains unfold
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

superb update...
whats the mystery?? cant wait to know...
why is arjun blaming riya??
arjun going to shimla??
continue soon...



why is arjun blaming riya??
this Answer is hides in next part soo please wait till next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
curious to know why ria left arjun
update soon
thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh wow..
Reallie great updates..
Song slction in previous update was awesome..
Its descrbd each emotions very well..
Waitng for updates..
To unfold da mystery...
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART EIGHT:
" HUMARI ADHORI KAHANI:"

Sameer: hello Arjun tum kahan tak pohnchay ho?

Arjun: Sameer mei nay sari details collect kar k tumhain Fax kar diya hai.

Sameer: great

Arjun: bus mei kuch hi ghanton mei Dehli pohnch jaun ga.

Sameer: Please jaldi aana humain is case mei tumhari buhat zarorat hai.

Arjun: I know, isliay mei nay socha k mei shortsut route lunga, don't worry mei 5 ghanton mei pohnach jaun ga.

Sameer: Theek hai, mei tumhara wait kar rha hun.

Arjun: ok bye mei phone rakhta hun.

Sameer: bye take care.

Arjun POV: " I thinks agar mei nay ye route liya toh 7 ghantay mujhe Dehli pohnchnay mei lag jaen gay, I thinks I choose this route for Dehli, may be mei jaldi pohnch jaun"

He decided to take a shortcut to reach Dehli, But unfortunately after covering the distance of few kilometers his car stop, he becomes angry on his car, he takeoff from his car and hit his car by his feet.

Arjun: isay bhi abhi kharab hona tha, yahan aas pass dekhta hun koi garage hai ya nahi, but he sees a tea stall infront of his eyes.

Arjun: pehlay apni cutting chai pee lun.

During taking his cutting chai he observes the school childs who rushes outside from schools, their parents are also outside the School for receiving their child.

Arjun: kash Zayan mere sath hota toh mei bhi usay us k school pick karnay jata.

Arjun returns the empty cup of chai and pay for the tea, and sits on the bench, a small child also sits beside him.

Arjun: kiya huwa beta aap pareshan kyun ho.

Child: Uncle meri school bus miss ho gai aab mei ghar kaisay jaun ga.

Arjun: beta aap apnay dad ko call karo wo aapko pick kar lyn gay.

Child: mere dad yahan nahi hain.

Arjun: Toh aap apni mama ko call kar k bula lo.

Child: Mama office mei hungi,

Arjun: theek hai mei aapko aap k ghar drop kar deta hun.

Child: thank you uncle.

Arjun: aapko apnay ghar ka address pata hai.

Child: nahi par humaray ghar k pass ek bara sa park hai.

Arjun: yahan toh buhat saray parks hain aapka ghar kis park k pass hai.

Child: wahan park mei buhat saray jholay bhi hain.

Arjun: beta har part mei jholay hotay hain.

Child: us park mei bari bari benches bhi hai.

Arjun: park hai banches toh hun gi hi na.

Child: Mera ghar ek baray say mandir k pass hai jahan har waqt ghantyan bajti hai.

Arjun: wait mei kisi say pochta hun.

Arjun to a man: Bhai sahib yahan koi park hai jis k pass ek mandir hai bari si.

Man: kahin aap shiv mandir k baat toh nahi kar rhay.

Arjun: ha kahan hai wo.

Man: bahi sahib wo yahan say 15 min t]k fasalay par hai, buhat bara mandir hair oz wahan hazaron log aatay hai.

Arjun: thanks

Arjun holds child hand and drop him infront of his house by the autorickshaw and Tow his car to the garage.

Arjun: are you sure tumhara ghar yahin hai.

Child: ji Uncle.

Arjun: kahan hai aapka ghar.

Child: wo raha (points a door)

Arjun moves to the house and rings the bell .

Child: uncle meri maasi abhi aati hungi un k pass key hai.

Arjun: theek hai mei yahen wait karta hun jab tak aapki maasi nahi aati.

Arjun sees the name plates on which written " Ms. Priya Khanna"

Arjun mumered : Priya Khanna.

The child is non other than It's Zayan.

Arjun: kafi dyar ho gai aapki maasi nahi aai.

A lady who lives beside Riya house sees Zayan.

Old Lady: " beta tum aa gay tumhari maasi tum dhondnay nikli hai, tum school bus mei nahi thay na"

Zayan: nani maa aap maasi ko kahen k mei ghar k nbahir hun.

Old lady:beta tum yahan beth jao mei tumhari maasi ko call karti hun, aur ye kaun hai beta (Pointing to Arjun).

Zayan: ye Uncle hain jinhon nay mujhe ghar drop kiya hai.

Old Lady : Thanked Arjun, Shukriya beta tum nay isay yahan pohncha k buhat hi naik kam kiya hai, God tumhain iska ajar zaror day ga, iski maa ki bhi majbori hai warna wo apnay betay ko is tarha nahi chorti hai"

Arjun: aab mei chalta hun.

At Evening:

Arjun is sitting in the park.

Zayan is also there.

Zayan sees Arjun and sits beside him.

Zayan: Uncle aap yahan.

Arjun: hey beta tum yahan.

Zayan: Uncle mei yahan Karan Uncle k sath aaya hun , Mama office mei ek zarori kam mei busy hai na, isliay mujhe karan uncle yahan Park mei lay aaen hain.

Arjun: aacha, waisay kahan hai aap k karan uncle.

Zayan: wo mere liay Ice- Cream laynay gay hai.

Arjun: aap ka naam kiya hai beta.

Zayan: mera Naam Mera naam Zayan Rawate hai.

Arjun is shocked by hearing this name.

Arjun: Zayan Rawate.

Zayan: nahi Zayan Arjun suryakant Rawate, Mere Papa ka naam Arjun surkayank Rwate hai.

Arjun: aur Mama ka naam.

Zayan: Priya Rawate.

Arjun: Priya Soo ye pehchan hai tumhari Riya.

Arjun hugs zayan and kisses on his forhead.

Arjun: tumhari Mama kaisi hai.

Zayan: meri Mama world k best Mama hai, wo mujh say itna pyar karti hai, mei unka aklota beta jo hun, meri mama Meray liay chocolate bhi lati hai ….

Arjun cuts him in between: Aur tumharay Papa.

Zayan: mere Papa mere sath nahi rehty. Mama kehti hai mei ja bara ho jaun gat oh mere papa mujh say milnay aaen gay.

Arjun: aur tumhari mama kiya kehti hai tumharay Papa k baray mei.

Zayan: Mama kehti hain k mere Papa buhat buhat aachay hai, wo mujh say buhat pyar kartay hai, aur meri mama bhi mere Papa say buhat pyar karti hain.

Arjun: phir wo tumhain lay k tumahray papa k pass kyun nahi jati.

Zayan: mama buhat roti hai, Mama ko dar lagta hai k kahin koi mujhe un say na cheen lay, Mama kehtin hain wo mere bina mar jaen gi.

An past echo also reach near his ears " Shree zayan jab say meri zindagi mei aaya hai sab kuch badal gaya hai wo mere jeenay ki wajah banta ja raha hai, us say mei khud ko ek paal k liay bhi dour nahi rakh sakti"

A tears flows from his eyes and falls on the ground and absorbs in the grass.

" mei aap k bina toh jee sakti hun, magar zayan k bina ek paal bhi jee nahi paun gi", again Riya voice reaches on his ears.

Karan: zayan ye lo tumhari ice-cream.

Zayan:: uncle ye hai Karan Uncle, meri Mama in k hi office mei job karti hain.

Arjun: hello karan.

Karan: hey .

Karan: zayan jaldi jaldi ice- cream finish karo tumhari Mama aati hi hungi, unhon nay tumahin is ice cream k sath dekh liya toh na wo mujhe maaf Karen gin a hi tumhain so let's hurry up finish your ice-cream.

Zayan: ok Uncle.

Karan: Priya zayan ki buhat care karti hai isay bahir k cheezain hargiz nahi khanay deti, really she is a great Mother, Zayan k liya waqai wo buhat kasht uthati hai kai kai ghantay office mei kam karti hai sirf islaiy k us k zayan ko bright and secure future milay, khud ko wo zayan k liay tabha kar rhi hai sirf isliay k uska beta ek aacha aur kabil insane banay, wo fakhar say sir utha k keh sakay k Zayan mera beta hai.

Arjun: I know Zayan ko dekh k lagta hai k uski Maa us say buhat pyar karti hai.

Arjun calls Sameer Rathode when Karan and Zayan left.

Sameer: hello Arjun tun kahan ho abhi tak Dehli nahi pohnchay,you know tumhara is waqt yahan hona kitna zarori hai.

Arjun: sameer Relax mei shimla mei hun , meri gari kharab ho gait hi Garage mei hai repair onay k liay di hai.

Sameer: ok jaisay hi car repair ho jaey tum foran Dehli pohncho

Arjun: Sameer tum jantay ho mei Shimla mei kis say mila hun.

Sameer: kis say.

Arjun: Zayan say wo mere samnay tha mera zayan mera beta par mei usay galay nahi laga sakta tha, mei usay beta nahi keh sakta tha.

Sameer: Arjun please don't cry tum Riya aur Zayan ko lay k hi Dehli wapis aana.


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Posted: 12 years ago
res
*unres*
yay.. Me frst one to cmnt..
Wow..
Great update...
Finallie arjun met zayan..
Hope nw evrythng goes well..
Continue soon :)
Edited by aroojarain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice par as allways please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jorja

Nice par as allways please update soon



Sara i update this SS on daily basis, this SS is also going to end soon, Three to four parts are left of this SS
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey. Finaly arjun met zavan. Gud update .cntinue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank god arjun ko zayan ki pahchan mil gayi.per riya ko agar pata chala toh.god and u know what will happen next.lvly updt.cont sun.

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