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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zulfinazi

amzng dear

but it was short plz nxt updt make it lil big

nd pm me


thnku... nxt update will surely be a big one!! 😊😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Nice story and concept update nxt part asap and plz pm me when u update.


thanku!!! wil surely pm u!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey friends.. m back with the next update and this time lamba wala... and sorry agar upto the mark nahi tha coz almost all of it was deleted and muje phirse likhna pada that too when i am ill... and i am really scared coz muje bilkul idea nahi hai ki aap sab kese react karne wale ho... i am really very scared... to plz plz plz jada bash mat karna!!!





PART4

"Welcome to the devil's den…" he spoke and left her in the cabin puzzled and annoyed. She couldn't seem to understand what he meant. On top of it nothing was going perfect and she was hell frustrated because of the happenings today.

She left the cabin annoyed, walking hurriedly in the corridor when she banged into something hard. She grabbed his arms to avoid falling and looked into his eyes but he held her wrist and shoved her back roughly. She was shocked and angry at his indecent behavior and now she couldn't control her anger. No one has ever behaved with her like he was behaving. She came forward looking into his eyes and spoke," don't you dare to behave like this with me ever again. I won't tolerate this ill mannered and egoistic attitude of yours. So just stay away from me. You get that?"

He smirked and spoke, "Behave hmmm? And stay away hmmm?" he started moving closer to her while she kept on moving back. She was confused by his actions as he was so very unpredictable and sometimes even staring his face felt dangerous. In a nick of moment like thought came to her mind she tried to flee away from the scene but this time he held her upper arms and pushed her towards the wall behind roughly. As her head hit the wall she gave a soft yelp, "Ouch..." but he didn't seem to bother about it. She had tightened her fists and closed her eyes in fear and shock at the sudden happenings. He moved his face closer to hers and then tilted it towards her ear where he could smell her sweet fragrance from her silky hairs which was driving him crazy. She could feel his breath on her hairs which were hiding her earlobe and she felt like coldness rush through her body. The same coldness which his face reflected but still had a powerful attraction and no wonder why each girl of the campus was drooling over him.

He just spoke," this is the way I am…" and he removed his grip from her arms and walked off yet again leaving her flabbergasted and shocked. His actions were so annoying and the worst part was now she had to deal with him every day. The mere thought of it scared her. She left the scene in sheer annoyance, mumbling and muttering something under her breath.

Here Sharon was sitting in library staring the lecture notes but her mind was lost somewhere in past memories and she just sat there absentmindedly. She just knew for the time being that someone is going to be her ACS and it could never ever be him now.

"hey Sharon… why do you worry so much!! See I told you that only I will become your dance partner… now stop getting so hyper now!" swayam tried to calm down Sharon while he was eating chocolate. "leave it… why don't you try this? Its tastes so good!"

They both were the best dancers of their class… standard 9th… and always performed together but this time Sharon was worried because they might had to perform with different partners. But fortunately it didn't happen.

"what do you mean by 'I told you'? I should have said this when you would have that grumpy girl as you partner and that irritating boy mine… huh" she shook her head and gave him a glare.

"but it didn't happen so why are you so hyper now. And you know even our dance teacher knows that we are perfect for each other." He smiled and said while licking his chocolaty fingers. Sharon's glare turned into a short blush which flew away as she came out of her trance and just uttered "whatever.." and she stomped her feet and left an amused swayam.

THUDDD…

Sharon came out of her world when she heard a sudden noise beside her. Taani's antics always amused sharon and this time taani had dropped all the books in anger on the chair beside Sharon and rested her palms on her waist. Sharon amusingly gestured a 'what?' look on which taani came around and thumped on the other side of Sharon. She was already in sheer anger and Sharon's gesture just made her burst it like a tsunami.

"what does he think of himself? And how does he behave!! I am his GS… no no he is my AGS!! Comes under me… but shows like I come under him!! I will show him stars… he need to know that I can crush his ego just by my nails!!!!" she kept on muttering and Sharon was left with an amused smile and trying to hold back her laughter.

"it is uncontrollable now…." Vicky entered their conversation with a wide smile. Taani squinted her eyes as she couldn't comprehend if he was supporting her or not.

"he is talking about sharon. See how much it is uncontrollable to suppress one's laugh." Neha sat infront of them beside Vicky giving a similar wide smile.

Taani now digested the fact that they were highly amused by her frustration and gave 'will kill you all' look to the threesome. And with this three of them burst into splits getting a deadly glare from the librarian who made them suppress it into a short giggle whereas taani gave a victory smile.

Sharon finally spoke, "looks like you have got a good match to fight with… enjoy dear!!" getting a bit serious she spoke," But lets us know if can't tackle him or he goes overboard ok?! We will beat him black n blue…" taani just nodded with a soft smile while others gave her a reassuring serious look. This is what we call friends who will laugh at your irritation just to bring a smile at your face and they themselves get more serious than you.

After a while Sharon, taani and reyansh were called in for an important notice by the vp. Sharon entered first while taani and reyansh entered together. Taani squinted her eyes and then looked away from him to which reyansh gave a smirk.

"I have called three of you to convey that we have shortlisted two names for the post of ACS and it will be decided by tomorrow." Vp sir informed them. Sharon was already worried and this news made her more tensed and upset that someone else than him will be her assistant. She left absentmindedly. Taani sensed her feelings and asked sir, "excuse me sir… but can I meet them… I mean as a GS…"

"all right… but one of them hasn't arrived yet. They are new students who had applied for the candidature before the admission and we were impressed with their profile as like that of reyansh. He is present in the projector room… you can meet him."

They both left to meet the new candidate for the ACS post in the projector room but in their way no one bothered to talk, not even gave a glance to each other. They entered the room and saw a guy standing with back facing them his fingers tucked into his pocket. Reyansh could feel uneasiness in the surroundings and while taani stepped forward addressing him politely.

"hey!! Pleased to meet you… "

He turned around and smiled. "Pleased to meet you too... I am shivam waliya." He forwarded his hand for a hand shake to which she responded with hers.

"I am taani shekhawat... GS of the college."

But there was someone else in the room who was fuming with anger as soon as he saw her palm in the new guy's hand. He was already sensing something amiss and this shot up his boiling blood. He felt like snatching her from the grip of him and he did it. He pushed him back and caught hold of taani's wrist which made her adrenaline rush up to her brains. She was shocked and felt like hitting him hard but her nerves didn't allow her. Whereas his victim, shivam, gave an evil smirk cause he knew now his prey.

"so much anger? Not good for health reyansh… or should I call you rey? Feels a little more friendly no?" shivam was igniting rey's anger more and more but as he is unpredictable so are his actions.

"yea sure… you can call me rey… and…" he turned towards taani who was frowning now," I don't mind you calling me rey too."

Taani stood dumbstruck by his behavior. Then she just snatched out her hands back from his grip and spoke, " I need to go now, its getting late and I need to rush for my home." And she turned to go but was stopped by shivam…

"I can drop you home if you don't mind and in this way I would come to know my upcoming responsibilities too…"

"she can go by herself…" rey cutoff in between and then again turned to taani staring her furiously he spoke "not unless she loves to take other's help."

His last statement made her totally irritated and she in a huff said," yea sure… I don't need anyone's help…" and she left the projector room.

She was standing nearby the road in the dim light of the night were she looked for a taxi as her car was still resting somewhere at the middle of the road with its tyre punctured. The thought of her car drifted her mind into the morning rift between her and mr egoistic rey, as she called him.

An image of a man emerged behind her and moved closely towards her with a pin drop silence. She felt as if there was danger and death walking towards her but she just hit her head with fingers for such a stupid thought. While behind her back stood shivam, a deadly and blood taking vampire… yeah a vampire who was living or it felt that he was living…. for giving every innocence a death... a painful... chilling... and wild death.

He had held her tiny neck with a force and she was already unconscious. He was hungry to taste her blood and her essence was inviting him. His face had become none less than that of an evil and actually it was one. He came a bit closer to her throat with his pupil dilating and he himself going wild, his fangs about to come. Just then he heard a loud groan which could almost tore someone eardrum and so he furiously turned his head and there stood a powerful and more stronger than him, rey. The head of the vampire clan… the one who safeguards the innocence from the deadly clan of shivam. He looked majestic in the light of moon but his eyes were burning ferociously with the thought of taani and her pain. Her unconscious state made him go wild and he grabbed his collar in a nick of seconds and threw him away with an amazing force which made him hit his head badly while rey caught taani in his arms carefully as a fragile flower. This interruption made shivam furious and he stepped forward but someone emerged out of nowhere so he stopped in his way and left with speed. Rey had held taani with his one arm and as she was unconscious her head hung backwards with her hands loosened by her side. The sight of a hurt and fainted taani with imprints embarked on her throat made him burn with anger as if he would destroy everything and everyone. He was confused as he knew she didn't belong to him nor he would let her belong him. But for now she mattered to him the most... more than anything he could think and more than his entire life. For a moment taani gained little of her consciousness and tried to grasp her surroundings. She felt herself hanging in rey's arms. Her body felt week like all of her energy is drained out. Her vision drifted to person behind him and she just muttered….


"Bhai…." And she passed out…

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*fingers crossed*...

and really very scared for your reactions...

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Posted: 12 years ago
RES 😃
kya sahi timing hai aapki dii... 😆
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unres...

in a state of utter shock and disbelief...so kuch zyada comment nahi karungi...
jus update soon
and thank u for the long update...

PS: agar sense mein aa gayi prob wil re-edit this...
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re-edited:

the irritated taani was soo cute...hehe...
and taarey's proximity literally send shiver dwn my spine... *dnt ask how...but it did*
u knw jaise romantic scenes mein kuch kuch hota hai... 😳 waisa nahi tha...it was "cold" as u said...
so jus loved how u expressed it... 👏

and den d much needed flashback, as to what hpnd to swayam...it was cuteee...esp sharon... hehe 😳
bt den still lost ki swayam ko hua kya...*gona wait for you to reveal it...*

and d gang ki masti over taani's frustration was hilarious...
poor taani... and den when the librarian asked them to be quiet...i burst out laughing...🤣
it was epic...!! 😆

and now shivam...ughh!! 😡
i dont like him...so im gona go wid rey dis time...*for a change* 😳
and rey ka anger and frustration...though mujhe samaj nahi aaya ki itna gussa kyun, then when it was revealed that they both knw each other...then i was like "experience" 😆
so thought ki he must know dat he is evil...so went along wid rey... again...😳

and loved the part when he mocked taani jus so that she doesnt accept shivam's offer... i loved it... 😆

the next part was unexpected...as i said...pairo taale zaameen khisak gayi... 😲
i pehle thought ki usse kidnap karne koi aa raha hai...and was like please rey jaldi aa jao...

and den...i find out...he is a freaking vampire...!!

u knw the first thing which dashed across my mind was twilight...seriously! the whole epilogue part of the first part of the series...and i culdnt help but think of edward...

what least expected was edward = rey...
unexpected...scary...in ur words flabbergasted...

and he is the head of the clan...?! woah!!

this is exactly what i meant by "shocked" 😲
mujhe initially kissi bhi angle se yeh nahi laga ki rey was a vampire...not even for a second!!
and now jus everything fits into the place...from the beginning...

sachh bolu...toh im a bit scared now... its like this chill running thru me still... *Sigh*
and that jus shows u r an incredible writer...though im hating u for the chills at the moment...

and btw, id swayam to a vamp? thats why he left...didnt he? cuz he though he mite pose a threat...
pata nahi my mind is jus wondering off into too many directions...
and the one which is killing is, where will rey take taani now...? in her house? or wherE?

*sigh*
again ending with too many questions...but atleast the main thing is revealed... =P
in shrt awesome job...loved it...but scary hai at the moment...thanks to the killer ending of the chp...

and dnt worry...u did a great job... 🤗
and thank u for the long updatee... 😃


Edited by Mohit_monaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
u seriously nailed it dear!!!
very well written... keep it up!
nd loved aggressive love of taarey!!!
pls make it passionate soon... nd update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
O godd i am in a shock still yaar rey is a vampire mere hosh udd gaye padke yaar kya baat hai mistee you rock itna hatke update diya hai ki mein dusre land mein hi paunch gayi yaar 😲😲😲 i was like this yaar nd par the way you had written the update wow yaar i think mujhe tujhse classes leni chaiye lol bemmari mein bhi itna superbb likha hai yaar loved the taarey so passionate yaar👏 ns taani's part with gang was so much like 🤣🤣 all in all⭐️⭐️⭐️ rock rock meri mistee👍🏼 and plzzz update asap yaar
Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh Rey is a vampire...nd then...swayam too must be a vampire...its hell interesting.
nd tht delete thing..has happened with me too, i understand the pains.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update it was amazing so rey is a vampire
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super awsome i really like it and thanks for the pm update nxt part asap and plz pm me when u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
IMPOSSIBE JUST IMPOSSIBLE REY AUR SHIVAM VAMPIRE HAI AND THE WAY U WROTE TOSHI WAS JUST AMAZING U R JUST A GOOD WRITER AND THIS IDEA IS AMAZING PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON
Edited by swatisingh2 - 12 years ago

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