#1 TaaRey: Love, Trust, Jealousy (Moved to thread 2) COMPLETED - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: disismeenu4u

read 2nd n 3rd parts shweta, they were really nice, i love reading a jealous taani bt niki n rey as couple uff cant bear, i hate her being close to him . When will u update next, wanna know whats there actually bw rey n niki


part 4 n 5 are uploaded on pg 2

nxt part vil b up very soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG! Jst cmpltd 5chptrs in a singl stretch...Its pretty cute dr...Dude,tani is realy such a undstndg gf,i so lv hr...Bt who is nikki?Jaldi secret reveal kardo yaar.Haan!Swa yaar,yaha bi nahi chodega...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

OMG! Jst cmpltd 5chptrs in a singl stretch...Its pretty cute dr...Dude,tani is realy such a undstndg gf,i so lv hr...Bt who is nikki?Jaldi secret reveal kardo yaar.Haan!Swa yaar,yaha bi nahi chodega...


Swayam kaise chodega itna possessive jo haišŸ˜‰

Niki ka secret vil soon b revealed...n nxt part vil b up by tmrw for sure...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6

Vicky: Chalo na guys kuch khelte hai.

Nil: Truth or dare?

(All agree. They sit in a circle TaaRey are sitting opposite to each other. Swayam on one side of Rey while Vicky on other side. Niki is sitting between Sharon and Taani. And Sharon opposite of Swayam.)

*The game starts*

(Bottle stops on Swayam.)

Rey: Truth or dare?

Sharon: No doubt. Tru..

Swayam: DARE! (Sharon 😲)

Rey : Great. Propose your love. Abhi, yahan, hum sab ke saamne.

(Sharon is a bit nervous.)

*Swayam goes towards Sharon and bends down on his knees*

Swayam: You are the only girl I have loved and will always love. Will you be mine forever?

Sharon: Yes.😳

Girls (except Niki): Aweee😳

Niki: What? Di you didn't tell me. Kya din aa gaye hai! (shakes her head sarcastically.)

Sharon: Tum abhi toh aayi ho, kab batau?

Niki: So? Agar Yansh tumhari jagah hota toh mere aate hi bata deta.

Rey (to himself): Mujhe shayad pehle hi Nik ko mere aur Taani ke bare mein bata dena chahiye tha. Abh toh meri band bajne wali hai. Yansh beta get ready.

(When Rey was in his thoughts the game had resumed. He came out of his thoughts when everyone started saying Taani's name.) [Taani pe bottle ruki thi.]

Taani (scared ki use kuch ajeeb dare na mile, jaldi se kehti hai): Truth.

Simmi: So Taani, tum apne "Prince Charming" se kabse pyaar karti ho?šŸ˜‰

Taani (blushingā˜ŗļø): Jab meine unhe pehli baar dance karte dekha tha tabse. 5 saal se.

(Rey was surprised hearing this. He knew Taani loved him even before she joined college. But 5 saal se pyaar karti thi ye nahi pata tha.)

(Rey is looking at Taani in awe. Taani first avoided eye contact but couldn't stop herself from looking into his warm eyes. Both were lost in each others eyes. LLHH. Their eyes were expressing love for each other. For them time had stopped. Dono aakhon se baate kar rahe the.)

Rey: 5 years really?

Taani: Haan.

Rey: I love you Taani.

Taani: I love you too Rey.

[Yeh sab aakhon hi aakhon mein chal raha tha. No one spoke.]

(They broke from the eye lock when the boys (except Swayam) started singing)

Boys: Aakhon hi aakhon mein ishara ho gaya, baithe baithe jeene ka sahara ho gaya. Aakhon hi aakhon mein..šŸ˜†

(TaaRey a bit embarrassed 😳started looking here and there. Rey saw dark black eyes staring at him giving him a "You are so dead" look. Rey gulped. He understood Niki came to know about TaaRey. The bottle spun and stopped on Niki.)

Niki: Dare.

Vicky: Kisi bhi boy ko kiss karo.

Gang: WHAT?

Vicky: Arre I mean cheeks pe.

(Niki got up started walking towards Vicky. [Vicky ke mann mein ladoo phutašŸ˜›] stopped between Rey n Vicky. Vicky forwarded his cheek but Niki gave a peck on Rey's cheek. The gang burst out laughing seeing Vicky's facešŸ˜† and Taani was now full jealous. Niki saw this and forwarded her cheek to Rey. Rey gave a small little peck on her cheek. Now Taani couldn't take it any more and got up.)

Taani: Bhai, mein ghar jaa rhi hu. Sshe said it looking at Rey. Rey realized what had happened and he stood up instantly.)

Rey: Taani wait. (Ran towards her and held her hand to stop her from going.)

Taani: Mera haath chodiye Rey mujhe jana hai.

Niki: Yansh, if she wants to leave let her leave. Why are you forcing her?

Rey: Nik, tu chup rahegi?

Niki: What the hell! Meine kya galat kaha? Usse jana hai jane do.

Rey: Nik stop acting.

Niki: Ab meine kya kiya?

Rey: NIK😔

Taani: Aap uss pe kyu chilla rahe ho?

Rey: Quiet both of you. And Taani tum kahi nahi jaa rhi!

Niki: Haan Taani aap yahin pe rukho. Jana toh mujhe chahiye yahan se. (gives angry looks to ShaRey) Mujhe laga tha you will tell me but I was wrong.

Rey (irritated): FINE THEN, LEAVE.😔

*Niki leaves and goes to her room crying😭*

Sharon: Rey tum pagal ho gaye ho kya? Already she is upset and tum ho ki..

(Loud sound is heard from the room upstairs. All run there and open the room. Everything is in a mess in the room and Niki is sitting in one corner and crying.)

Rey: Nik I'm really sorry. I should have told you.

Swayam: Rey tu sorry kyu bol raha hai? Yeh abhi toh aayi hai.(to Niki) Tum kyu itni upset ho rahi ho? Who are you? [possessive bhai jag gaya šŸ˜›]

Niki : Excuse me? Who are you to ask me such question? Tum mujhe jaante bhi nahi so don't you dare mess with me!😔

Rey: Nik control your anger please.

Sharon: Guys hume nikalna chahiye. It's getting late. Let's leave. Kal se NDC ke liye rehearsals bhi start karni hai.

(Everyone leaves.)

Sharon (to Rey): Tum Niki se baat kar lena. Kal milte hai good night.

Taani: Rey mujhe nahi pata ki kya problem hai par jo bhi hai sort out kar lena.

(Everyone go home and sleep as it will be a hectic time for them due of NDC. Here NikAnsh also talk and Niki is very happy with TaaRey as a couple.)

[NikAnsh = Niki + Yanshu. Niha thanks for this.]

Itna editing meine aaj tak nhi kiya hai.šŸ˜›

Please comment karo. Atcha nahi laga to bhi bolo. Joote khane ke liye ready hu.

Silent readers please like karo.

Edited by 2111_shweta - 7 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good one shwetha..!! Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww... taani jealous ho gayi... tht was very cute!! and also the little nok jhok was awesome!! loved it alot!!
update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
awsm concept
plz update soon
and plz plz plz pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update.waitng 4 nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww Taarey cute eyelock ... Nice update sweety thank you for the update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
LOVED IT SOOO MUCH YAAR... PAR CHOTI SI BAAT PE ITNA JHAGDA!!!
WELL NICE ONE!
UPDATE SOON!!!

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