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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
hi kunchu.. nice start...awesome concept..arjun's son adi seems very naughty...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Nice start..
Arjun as dad n Adi son...
Adi so cute..
Will be waiting for the update..
Continue Soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
hi... an early installment of next chapter... weekend thi na.. tho aise hi likh diya... but will not be updating regularly ok??
thanks a lot for liking this story...hope to keep up the hopes...

Part 2:

Same evening: Mumbai:

"bache…man ke sache…patha nahi kis gadhe ne kaha hai ye dialog. Ji kartha hu ke jisne bhi bola hai, uska gala dabalu…" she throws her hand bag on the sofa and marches to the kitchen and then dumps the shopping bags on the counter. The lady's Mom was watching all these with an amused face.

Mom: ab kya hua?? Kiske gale dabane wale ho??

Girl: uske jisne ye ghatiya dialog mari hai.

Mom: kyu??

Girl: kyunki usne galath dialog banaye hai. bache kabhi bhi man ke sache nahi hai!!!

Mom: ab kaunsi bache ne there mood bigada hai?

Girl: kisse patha?? Kya koi bacha aise kar sakthe hai kya??pranksters number 1!!! Patha nahi, bade hoke kya kya banege?

Mom: ab bath tho bolo…

Girl: mien shopping keliye nikli thi. Suna tha ke uss lane me ek nayi shop khuli hai. meine kuch logonse pucha ke wo shop kaunsi hai. kisiko bhi patha nahi tha. Thab do bache... nahi do shaitan… mujhe pyaar se bulaya… aur kaha… (making a cute face) "didi aap wo naye shop dhunt rahe hai??"…meine kaha "ha beta… aap janthe ho wo kaha hai?"... usne kaha… "ha didi… mien mummy ke saath kal gayi thi waha pe… wo yaha aage se left… fir thodi der baad junction pe left lena…. Fir thodi baad, ek aur left… thode steps age aoge tho aap seedhe shop ke samne hoge"…. kithna pyara bacha tha… meine wahi rasta liya… and at the end, mien wahi lane pohonch gayi jaha se shuru kiya tha… aur mere samne hi wo shop…uff… agar uss lane me hi wo shop thi... tho wo seedhe keh sakthe the na???

Mom was giggling over the talks. She glares at the mother.

Mom: so the summary of the story is… do nadan bache… apko ullu banaya… great... superb…

Girl: mom... please stop it… agar wo dono mere hath me aye na… uff… patha nahi ye parents apne bache ko kya kya sikha dethe hai… prankster kahinka…

Mom: ithne bhi gussa math ho meri jaan… mien janthi hu aap bachpan me kithne bade shaitan the… kafi mushkil thi apko handle karna. Aur bachpan chodo… theri harkathe koi bache se kam nahi hai…

Girl: mom… please… chidao math…mere mood kharab hai.

Mom: do anjan bachose ithne mood kharab hui?? Ab socho theri bache kaise hoge?? I'm sure wo bhi kuch kam nahi hogi…

She rolls her eyes. "oh please… aap mere bache ke piche math ana… hosake tho bhagwan mujhe bachon se dur hi rakhe… mien ja rahi hu fresh hone… bohot bhoog lagi hai. kuch khana lagana please…"

She walks off to her room, leaving her mom smiling. "apni thakdir ko koi nahi rok sakthe meri bachi… jis din tum Ma banogi…thab tum janogi ke Ma banna kithni badi baath hai. thab thak aise masti mazak ke saath jilo. Tumhe mien uss din theek se dekh lungi."

Mom goes to arrange food for her daughter.

Arjun's SUV:

The father-son duo was having a gala time. Adi was updating with each and everything that happened the year.

Adi: Dad, patha hai… Rithesh ke aur Rishab ke jhagda hua!!

Arj: kyu??

Adi: cricket ko lekar. Rishab actually out hua tha. Lekin wo manthe hi nahi the. Fir Rithesh ne bat cheene ke koshish ki. Fir jhagda.

Arj: acha?? Fir?

Adi: fir… Sister aye.aur dono ko detention de diya. Ek period staff room me ghada rahna pada. Aur warning bhi di.

Arj: hm… jhagda kiya hai. galath bath hai. saza tho milega hi.

Adi: ha wo tho hai. ab meiene ithne sare bathein ki hai, aap kuch bolo. Kaise hai office me? Sam uncle aya tha ghar pe? Aur wo… kya chashmish bhaiya kaise hai? aur muscle wali bhai??

Arj: Adi… nicknames nahi beta… Sree aur Chotu bolo… ha sab bikul teekh hai. sab tumhe bohot miss kar rahe hai.

Adi: aur Dad… aap?? Aap miss kiya mujhe??

Arj nahi tho… meine bilkul miss nahi kiya…

Adi: kya??

Arj: just kidding champ. Ha mien apko bohot miss kiya… bohot bohot miss kiya.

Adi smiles at his dad. "Dad, mien drive karu?? please…"

Arj: are nahi, ab kafi bheed hai. thode baad.

After a while they reach an almost free highway. "Dad, ab drive karu please…" he says with his puppy face.

Arj: ok, chehra math bana. Bas thode der keliye ok?

Adi: ok.

He is too excited. Arjun parks the car at a side and pulls Adi to his lap. Adi holds the steering wheel tight along with his dad, and they both drive together for a while. There was so much happiness in both their faces.

After a while, "ok, ab bheed shuru hone wale hai, ab mien drive kartha hu." Adi nods and goes to his seat when Arjun slows the SUV.

Its almost night, and Adi's never ending stories was filling the air. After a long time Arjun was having a great time with his son.

Adi: Dad, ek baath bathana tha.

Arj: ha bolo.

Adi: wo school me, ek competition me hum sabko apne mummy ke bare me kehna tha.

Arjun is all silent now. Adi looks at his Dad.

Arj: fir??

Adi: fir… meine bhi bathayi Mom ke bare me…

Arjun looks at his son confused. Adi smiles at his Dad. "meine apke bare me batha diya, par Mumma ka name dediya. Sabko ullu bana diya."

Arjun could see a hidden pain in his son's eyes.

Arj: I'm sorry beta.

Adi: sorry kyu? Mumma ko bhagwan ji bulaya tha na… tho aap kyu sorry bol rahe ho?

Arj: wo…

Adi: its ok Dad. Aapko patha hai ke world ke best Dad kaun hai??

Arj: kaun??

Adi: aap… you are the best Dad in the world.

Arjun smiles at his son who was smiling at him with whole heart. "thanks Adi…"

Adi: Dad, ek problem hai.

Arj: kya?

Adi: bhoog lagi hai…

Arj: (smiling) patha hai, isliye hum apke fav Mc Donalds me jarahe hai!! khush??

Adi: wow… mugambo khush hua!!!

They laugh a lot after that with Adi's silly jokes. Once they reach the food outlet, Adi gets his favorite snack. And after a grand time they ride back home. All the talking and excitement drains Adi slowly. He slowly drifts to a sound sleep.

By the time they reached home, Adi was fully out. Arjun brushes his son's hair and lifts him and his bag in his hand and goes inside. After placing the bags aside he puts Adi on his bed. Adi didn't even know that he reached home. Arjun pulls his shoes and socks. Adi rolls in his sleep and sleeps on his stomach. Arjun smiles at his sleeping boy and then goes to fresh up. Later he slips in to his son's blanket and Adi rolls again to his Dad.

Arjun caresses Adi's hair and kiss him. He eyes goes to a portrait right in front of him.

She was there, holding baby Adi, along with him, smiling at the camera.

"see, Adi wapas ghar agaye hai. kafi thak gaye hai. kal milthe hai ok?? Good night meri jaan!!!"

Arjun turns around and hugs Adi tightly.

Same night:

The mom of the girl opens her door slowly. Sakshi was sleeping peacefully.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
lovely post...

so its Arjun and Sakshi...and Sakshi hates kids
Adi is so cute!
cont soon
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Jaise he PM mila maine seedha scroll down karke update ka end pada..i was like thankgod sakshi hai toh hai😆
who is adi's mom?

"Riya?"

loved sakshi's
On Kids..bache shaitan hote hai sach me🤣
adi-arjun was too cute
pls batao adi ki mom roshni he hai na..Chupke se PM kardo na?
lovely update..thanks for PM.
Edited by aliya_begh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Sakshi vs Adi ...
bahut mazaa aane wala hai yaar
and i love Arjun ji as a dad
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
very nice.
i think adi's mom was roshni???
clear it soon.
love sakshi'sdialog..."bache man ke sache patha nahi kis gadhe ne kaha hai ye dialog. Ji kartha hu ke jisne bhi bola hai, uska gala dabalu"
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Haye Rabba! Adi is so freaking cute! 😳
Awesome update!👏
Oh...so that girl is Sakshi...hmm...Arakshi?
Well...continue soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Ohk!!

So the girl is Sakshi...

Gawd! I cant control my laughter... Sakshi hates kids and Arjun has a kid...!!!

This would be worth reading...!!!

I cant wait...!! Please update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
NOT fair helna..chupke wala PM bola tha..tumne khaamosh wala bejha

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