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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
hey nice update ... vaise taani se aur kuch expect bhi kya kar sakte hai ... hehehehe ...humesha paiso ke peeche hi bhagti hai ... 😛 ... thanxx for the pm and update soon ... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4
Rey stare at her, he could not take in what she was saying.
"Marry Shivam? How can you do this?"
"He wants to marry me, but we will have to wait until I'm out of mourning
."
"How can you do this to me?" he asked.
"I'm sorry Rey but you have to understand."
"What I need to understand."
She hesitate.Then he knew the answer.
"You mean because Shivam would inherit 51% of stake holder."
But she didn't reply.
He felt as if his head was spinning.Then as he realised that they had reached Taani house, he knew she had timed her revelation very cleverly.A min later the door open and she went inside the house.He came out of the car, took the keys from the driver & drove towards the club.When he came inside the club, he was sure that he was shaking with anger.
He had loved her & he had believed in her protestation of love.By the time he reached the club & drank an inordinate amount of tequila.That's when Swayam had found him.
"Listen Rey" he said."I have a suggestion & I want you to consider it seriously."
"The most sensible thing I can do is to jump into Thames!"he replied."I'm not likely to drown because I'm a strong swimmer, but I may die of the cold!"
"I have a better suggestion"
"What is it?"
"You come with me to Africa"
"Africa?"
There was a note of surprise in the question which made Swayam think that he was at least curious.
"I'm going there to find material for my next book." he said."I'm going to explore parts of desert & Morocco.We might have some game-hunting too.We could also lose ourselves in a sandstrom or be killed by some hostile tribe!"
"That would solve my problem, at any rate!" Rey remarked.
"I agree it would save a lot of trouble & would be interesting & unusual way to die."
There was silent.Then Swayam said:
"Come with me I know you would not regret it, & at least you will not have to sit here crying over Taani & wondering what she is doing with Shivam."
He paused before he added:
"You are much likely to be feeding off reptiles or other dangerous animals, thinking of how draugty & uncomfortable it is in a tent which is likely to blow away any moment!"
"You certainly make it sound unattractive"
"I can't promise you a feather-bed or the exotic pleasure of east." Swayam said."But it will gave you something to fight for & I think that is what you need at this particular moment."
There was silent.
Then Rey said:
"Alright if you want me, I will come with you.But you do all the arrangement, while I become disgustedly & I hope obliviouly, drunk!"
-------Flashback Ends-------
Rey thought how can he be so stupid as to love a woman who rejected him for money.
And yet after 1 year, the letter made him disturb something within him that he thought he had forgotten.
But why the hell had she written him now?
For a moment the words on the letter seemed to dance infornt of Rey's eyes.
Then he read:
Dearest, Most Beloved Rey,
How could you have gone away so cruelly without telling me where you were going? I couldn't believe it when I learnt you have left Vancouver.
I knew then how foolish I was & that I had been swept away by a sort of madness which I can't explain, but which had made me temporarily insane!
Now I have time to think over I know there is only one man in my life & that is You!
I love you, & I can only beg you on my knees if necessary, to forgive me.
I can't believe that I have really lost something so precious, so marvellous, as your love.My only excuse for not appreciating it was that I had never know anybody like you before.
Your uncle tells me you are somewhere in Africa & he has no address, so I can therefore only send this letter to Paris where I have learn you will stay first when you return.
When you read it, darling, forget my stupidity & think only of how happy we were before we went to Singhani mansion, & let me once again creep into your heart.
Forgive me & let us know the bliss we both felt when you first kiss me.
I love you! I love you!
Your very penitent & humble
Taani


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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
nice
but m still waitng for kriya
okay let me tell u
i love this update
but taani she is such a _________-
no foul language
but u know i have a advice if u like
taani ki jgha kisi or ko ley lo
i mean if u can please replace taani
u know i can't handle her
usually very annoying
but update was amazing
update soon
aroma_rubharu
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

nice
but m still waitng for kriya
okay let me tell u
i love this update
but taani she is such a _________-
no foul language
but u know i have a advice if u like
taani ki jgha kisi or ko ley lo
i mean if u can please replace taani
u know i can't handle her
usually very annoying
but update was amazing
update soon
aroma_rubharu



Thnx...Kriya Will Enter In d Next Part...I Also Cant Handle Taani...I Just Hate Her...But Don't u Want 2 Read How Rey Would Take Revenge From Her...Think About It...If You Still Want Me 2 Replace Her Then I Will Try...
Edited by AbhiyaMaaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awesome and good ... continue soon and pm me...
i want that taani should get a end with rey soon and kria should enter fast,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Oh God gracious. After all this, she comes back to him? Amazing twist.

Continue soon, and thanks for the PM :D)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awesome
ipdate
luvd it
very interesting
plzz ab kriya ko aldi jaldi le aao
plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Awsum update
Urgh hate dat taani to d core
Werr is kriya
Updat next part soon
Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
U write beautifully.. Seriously.. I cn easily connect to ur every word n thts what I love d most about any writer/Story.. Bein a reader,U obv would want dat u cud connect to d story ! Good job done !!

Coming to d story line..
Tani.. She's such a b*****
She left Reyaansh fr nothing elz but Money???? Dis is Sick ! N look at her audacity.. She's literally askin him to come back to her.. Are u kiddin me gal..

Swayam.. I jus love dis character.. He's always been supportive n here also,He's d one who stood by Reyaansh in his worst time.. Standin as a strength fr his friend ! 😳

I loved how Swayam described dat Africa thing to Reyaansh.. 😊

As d titles suggests n also I read in one of ur replies to a comment,Reyaansh wud Avenge Tani fr wht she did to him.. I do not want Reyaansh to use kriya as in he wud b by her side only coz of dis revenge.. Dat would break kriya all over again.. Do not do dat plz.. Would also love to c Kriya bein a strength of Reyaansh rather opposite !

Hopin some tashan looks n awesome scenes wid kriya n tani !
Update d nxt part soon n dis time.. Do pm me plz :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
amazing part


loved it so very much

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