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Amazing FF
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Loved whole write up. Again a heartbreak of rhea. N xcited to see d aftr mariage life of yuvreen. U r a superb content writer.
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CHAPTER 14: CAFFEINE :)
Guggal Mansion

Baldev:"Suvreen?"
Suvi:"Yes Papa?"
Baldev:"Are you doing anything for the next three days dear?".
Suvi:"I don't think so,why papa?"
Baldev:"Yuvi's parents invited us to join them at one of their hotels tomorrow morning. You are coming along right?"
Suvi:"Um.. Can I not go?"
Baldev: "Why suvi?u and yuvraj having some sort of fight?"
Suvi: "No papa...we are good...Its just..i don't feel like going"
Baldev:"That wouldn't look good sweetheart." he sweetly explained. "You are about to be a part of their family, you should go."
Suvi: "I'll go Papa, don't worry."
Baldev:"Suvi..they have invited all your friends too..."
Suvi:"Papa, is Rehan bhaiya going?"
Baldev:"No,he's going out of town...for a meeting...he's packing right now." he replied and left.
"Hmm..I guess i'm on my own now?" she mumble by herself, until she heard the phone rang.
"Hello?" she greeted.
"Hey Suvreen." Zorro replied from the other line.
Suvi:"Its about The Khuranna's inviting us to the hotel?"
Zorro:"Sort..Of..actually...urmmm...my invitation are from...Alisha Diwan"
Suvi:"Gee I wonder why.." She teased. "you need something?"
Zorro:"I just wanted to tell you that..Annie and Naro is on their way to your house,they are going to stay over...me,Rathi,Mannu and Alisha will see you tomorrow morning okay?"
Suvi:"Okie dokie."
The Next Day

Suvi woke up and saw Rehan about to leave the house.
Suvi:"U are leaving now? We're about to leave in a few hours." she asked.
Rehan:"Yes suvi...its gonna be a long drive"
Suvi:"Safe journey bhai"
Rehan:"Come here"Rehan gave suvi a warm hug "Anything...i'm just a phone call away...ok suvi?"
Suvi:"Sure Bhai...bye...take care"
Suvreen mindthought:"I n a few hours i'll be facing Mr Devil...its gonna be a crazy day...I should go for Coffee...better wake Annie and Naro"
THE HOTEL

Zorro:"I have never seen anyone drink FOUR CUPS OF LARGE MOCHAS!" he shouted.
Suvi:"Just shut up and get out of the car! We're at the hotel!" she ordered. "You complain just like a girl!"
Zorro:"This is one tall hotel" he awed, staring at the hotel from bottoms up.
"Hotels, I wonder how many girls was brought over here by him." Suvreen said to herself aloud.
Mannu:"You should ask yourself if he still have girlfriend" Mannu teased.
Suvi:"I couldn't care less. Don't make me hurt you Mannu."
Mannu:"like you can"
Suvi:"Oh yeah?" she assured him. "I can do it."
Mannu:"Do it then, hurt me."
Suvi:"You said so.." she winked and shouted. "NARO! MANNU USED TO CALL YOU A MOUSE!"
Naro:"He what?!" Naro clutched his ear almost twisting it off. "You used to call me what?!"
Mannu:"That was so long ago baby," he pleaded in pain. "I'm sorry sorry!"
"yeah, if you call last year long ago." Suvi stuck her tongue out at Mannu who was kneeling in pain right now. "MAN-U, MAN-U,MAN-U, I thought you knew by now.. I don't use my energy, I use my brain." she laughed and walked inside with Rathi, Zorro, Annie and Alisha.
Alisha:"That was mean Suvreen." Alisha giggled.
Zorro:"You haven't seen her at her worst yet." Zorro added. "She's a troublemaker!"
Suvi:"That's not fair!" Suvi hollered. "you want to see trouble maker?! I'll show you trouble maker!, ALI.."
She was about to shout, but Zorro put his hand over her mouth and pulled her back.
Zorro:"You nearly caused Mannu's death, that should be enough please!!" he begged. "You had too much caffeine this morning!"
Suvi:"I can't breathe you punk." she muffled and pointed at Zorro's hand. "Hands.. Hands.."
Zorro:"Oh sorry."
Annie:"Okay ladies" Annie walked over. "I got the room."
Zorro:"Sweet..But why is there only one key?"
Annie:"Me, Alisha, and Suvreen are sharing." Annie smiled.
Zorro:"Your sharing with.." he started at Alisha and pointed at Annie and Suvi with fear. "with.. These girls?"
Alisha:"Yup" she nodded.
He looked at her up and down innocently and waved.
Zorro:"I am going to miss the innocent you."
Alisha:"What's wrong?"
He pointed to Naro. "You see Naro over there?" He asked. "She used to be innocent just like you.. " and then he pointed at Suvreen and Annie. "Until she started to hand out with Suvreen and Annie' then they became the three evil trios."😆
"HEY!!!" Suvreen, Annie, and Naro shouted. "WE'RE NOT THAT BAD!!"
Zorro, Rathi, and Mannu all looked at each other and sighed together. "YES YOU ARE!"
Naro snatched her suitcase from Mannu and gave him the death glare. "Someone's sleeping alone tonight." she said out loud. "take a wild guess on who it will be!"
The four girls walked away, but Suvreen looked back, pointed at the boys and laughed.
After the girls got settled in their room, Suvreen was ordered by her parents to meet them in the waiting room. When she got downstairs, in the waiting room, she spotted Her father, her step mother, and also Yuvi's parents.

Suvi:"Oh four of them together? This can't be good." she said to herself. "They said when I'm done settling in.. and I'm not done.. Better turn back."
she giggled to herself and step backwards without knowing that Yuvi was standing behind her the whole time.
Yuvi:"Ahem!"
By the sound, she can already tell who it was. She turned around slowly and..
"OH MY GOD ITS HIDEOUS!!" She covered her face and shook her head.
Yuvi:"Hey Hey Hey!" he shouted at her.
Suvi:What?!" she laughed and uncovered her face.
Yuvi:"Are you hyper? Or drunk?"
Suvi:"I am fine! Now what do you want?"
Yuvi:"Aren't you suppose to go meet your parents over there?" he pointed over at the waiting room.
Suvi:"That depends..Where are you going?"
Yuvi:"To meet my parents."
Suvi:"Oh, then I'm going the other way."
Yuvi:"Why? Your parents are waiting for you." Yuvi pulled her hands to the waiting room, but she refused to go.
Suvi:"I forgot my sunglasses!" she argued.
Yuvi:"You mean the one above your head?" he asked. "Why are you more insane than usual?"
Suvi:"I'm totally fine.." she smiled.
Yuvi:"Really? Can you stay still for one minute?" he asked.
Suvi:"uh huh!" she childishly nodded.
Yuvi:"Then stay still!"
Suvi stood there with her hands folded behind her back. Yuvi also stood still just staring at her. He thought she looked adorable with her hyper personality and her kiddish smile.
Suvi:"Is it one minute yet? What are you looking at?!"
Yuvi:"I'm looking at you!"
Suvi:"Well, stop looking at me with your stupid perverted playboy smile! You're creepin me out."
"Yuvi!Yuvi!"Rhea yelled out from across the hotel. She ran up to him and immediately wrapped her hands around his arm.
Rhea:"There you are, you won't pick up my calls, I went to your house and they said you were coming here.. Why didn't you tell me?"
Suvi:"He probably thought you were a stalker."
Rhea:"Ugh, its you again. What are you doing here?"
Suvi:"I'm starting to wonder why I'm here too! Well bye!"
Rhea:"Its good that you r going, so me and Yuvi can spend more time together. it must be tough to put up with such a naive little girl."
Suvi:"Naive?" Suvreen asked, looked around and pointed at herself. "You mean me?"
Rhea:"Duh stupid, who else am I talking about?! How could Yuvi ever be engaged to you?!"
Suvi:"She.. She just called me stupid and naive.." Suvi thought to herself. "Why am I still standing here waiting for her to insult me like this? Am I naive? I seriously shouldn't have took caffeine this morning."
Yuvi:"Rhea, can you let go of me now?"He glanced over at Suvreen, whose face is pouting with anger right now. "Oh wow, she looks cute when she's angry." he smiled at himself.
Annie:"Suvreen, I thought you were going to meet your parents." Annie asked, after walking out of the elevator.
After Annie walked downstairs, Suvreen's face was starting to show some tears. She stood there waiting for the tears to be visible and then.. (*old filmy mode)
"YUVRAJ! HOW COULD YOU!" she cried, running over to Yuvi and Rhea and pulled them apart. "YOU SAID I'M THE ONLY PERSON YOU LOVE! THEN WHO IS THIS CHEAP BITCH?!"
"Suvreen what the.." Yuvi questioned. "What are you doing?"
"TELL ME! WE'RE ON OUR VACATION! WHY DID YOU BRING THIS OTHER GIRLFRIEND OF YOURS ALONG HUH?!" she made a scene big enough for the whole hotel to know and slapped him(😲😆). "YUVRAJ! I HATE YOU! IF YOU DIDN'T LOVE ME, YOU COULD HAVE JUST TOLD ME!"
Suvi turned over to Rhea, not forgetting that Rhea called her stupid and naive. "AND YOU! I THOUGHT SUPER MODELS HAD MORE CLASS! MY FIANCE ALREADY PAID YOU FOR THE OTHER NIGHT! ISNT IT ENOUGH MONEY FOR YOU?!"
Annie, on the other hand, noticed what Suvreen was doing and thought she'd join in for some help. "YOU ALREADY TOOK MY HUSBAND ISNT THAT ENOUGH?!" Annie shouted. "LEAVE US ALONE ALREADY!"
Suvreen widen her eyes in shocked
Suvi: "Annie...husband?"suvi whispered to Annie
Annie: "Tragic effect"😆
Suvi: "Owh okay"
Suvi and Annie hugged each other crying and ran back upstairs. Yuvi chased after Suvreen, leaving Rhea alone facing everyone who was downstairs.Suvi and Annie quickly ran into their room and locked the door.
Alisha:"What the hell is wrong with you girls? What's with the tears?!"
Naro:"HEY! what's wrong with you?"
Suvi and Annie threw themselves on the bed and rolled around laughing their hearts out. "Oh My.." Suvi laughed and trying to catch her breath at the same time. "Never, ever, ever, drink heavy dose of caffeine.." she warned and continued laughing.
KNOCK KNOCK
"SUVREEN GET OUT HERE!" Yuvi called out while still banging on the door. "Suvreen!"
Naro opened the door and found a red faced Yuvi standing there. "Um.. Hi Yuvraj." she nervously greeted.
"Where is she?!" he asked and stormed his way inside. "SUVREEN GUGGAL!"
The three girls quietly left the room while Suvi was still rolling on her bed laughing.
"Be nice to her" Alisha plead. "She had too much caffeine."
After the girls left, they closed the door behind them and Yuvi sat on the other bed glaring at Suvreen. "Did you know what you just caused?!"
"You girlfriend shouldn't have called me nave and stupid!"
"And you caused a scene for that!?" he began lecturing her about all the scene she caused and how bad it will be if the reporters got the news.. It had gotten to a point where Suvreen just got up, pulled him by his collar
Suvi: "You look cute when ur angry and you know what..."
Yuvi: "What?"
Suvi: "U talk a lot!"suvreen whispered to yuvi and gave him a kiss...
"Suvreen! What are you doing?!" a voice appeared in her head. She widened her eyes and pushed him away after all her senses came to her. She stood there shocked with her eyes still widened.
Yuvi:"Hey!" he called out waving his hands in front of her. "are you there?"
Suvi: "Damn caffeine!"
She could feel her face burning with her numb body. She couldn't speak, all she could do was continue to look at him.
"You got to leave!" she said after finally forming words out of her mouth.
"Leave like.. Now, this minute."
He smirked and wrapped his hands around her waist and pulled her closer.
"You started it" he whispered
"I hate you." she uttered.
"I Bet you do."and he kissed suvreen
...with a few ounce of sweetness, Hatred is just a few steps away..

END OF CHAPTER 14: 😳

NOTE:Its Yuvreen First kiss..to be frank...i felt super embarrassed when i was reading back the chapter😆...especially the end part...still...who cares!...lol
Edited by vidya.G - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
super cute...suvi..omg drama queen😆well done...waiting 4 the bestest...love u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow this was very good.Just like to read your ff Vidya.You are a very good writer,always I am waiting to read next part.Thanks again for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
so here it is superb update mia loved each and every action of suvi i love the way u write keep up and thanx for the pm😊👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Smazing updt!
Luvd resu bond!
Thnx fr d pm n conti soon!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a super update mia...loved the scene suvreen created n the whole update overall...you are doing an amazing job mia...thanks for the update and pm👏😛

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