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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: sahana747

Divorce battle, custody battle everything squeezed out,Ab Tycoon and family man wala ff chahiye.


somewhere I agree with u, ab thoda romance aur family wale scenes chahiye, which am sure yahan pe bhi hoga
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very much Interested..PM me please..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahana747

Divorce battle, custody battle everything squeezed out,Ab Tycoon and family man wala ff chahiye.

this is not at all about divorce battle or any custody battle. Its family man wala ff only. its suspence which will reveal at the end only.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Unsure ! RaYa divorce..Sepeation..Ummm...Start it lets c.. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here I am giving one smaller update.

Ram:- Neha mein yeh nahi kar sakta. Agar ek baar meine ispar sign kar diya toh phir mein Priya ko hameesha ke liye ko dunga.

Neha:- Ram agar tum Priya se sach mein pyar karte ho, toh uske liye tumhe yeh karna honga

Ram:- tum nahi jaanti ho neha. Inn saatth(7) saalo mein mein kabhi bhi Priya se ek din bhi alag nahi raha. Uuse dekhe bagair, usse chuhe bagair. Jab bhi bhahar office meeting ke liye jata hoon., priya ko saat lekar jata hoon. Aur aaj tum mujse Priya se hamesha ke liye alag hone ke liye keh rahi ho. Mein yeh nahi kar sakta. Bachho ko kya bolunga.

Neha:- mein sab jaanti hoon ki tum aur priya ek dusre se kitna pyar karte ho. Lekin tumhe aaj Priya ki situation ko bhi samajna honga.

Ram:- kaisi situation. Sab bataya toh tha meine. Teek hai mujse alag rehna chahti hai lekin bachhe. Inn sabme unki kya galti hai. lekin usne unhe bhi apnane se mana kar diya. Woh bachhe jisse woh ek pal ke liye bhi alag nahi hoti thi aaj apne bachho ke paas aana nahi chahti hai.

Bachho ki kya galti hai.

Neha:- mein manti hoon Priya bachho ke saat teek nahi kar rahi hai. Lekin hame uuse bhi samajna honga. saath(7) saal kam nahi hote.

Ram:- kaash uss din Priya ke saat eisa kuch na hua hota.

At last Neha convinced him to sign the paper. Ram takes his pen and points it in the paper when suddenly he gets a call. It's from his home.

Natasha:- Bhai app jaldi ghar aayiye. Druv ki tabiyat bahut karab hai.

Ram:- kya hua Dhruv ko. Peehu kaisi hai.

Natasha:- peehu bilkul teek hai.aap bas ghar aayiye.

Ram neha ko kehta hai ki uuse abhi ghar jana honga.dhruv ki tabiyat kharab hai. neha aur Vikram kehte hai ki woh bhi saat chal rahe hai.

Everybody reaches KM

Ram ran's to his son's room. Doctor is examining him.

Dhruv in sleep calling his mamma. Everybody is helpless.

Doctor said he has running with high fever, moreover he asking for his mother.

Right now, it's important to bring his mother here. Btw where is his mother????

Peehu:- papa mamma kahan hai???? woh nahi aayi. Mummy ko bolo na aane ko, dekho Dhruv bhi bimar hai.

Ram:- aayegi beta. Mamma zaroor aayegi.

He indicated Natasha to take peehu outside.

Natasha:- peehu chalo hum bahar chalet hai. tumhari favorite wali kulfi khate hai.

Peehu:- muje kulfi nahi khaani. Muje mamma chahiye. Bolo na bua kya mamma hamse pyar nahi karti. Woh kyun nahi aayi. Muje mamma ki yaad aa rahi hai.

Natasha had tears in her eyes. She wipes her tears and said " kisne bola mamma aapse pyar nahi karti. Mamma hum sabse bahut pyar karti hai. lekin kya hai na peehu jaise tum mamma ko miss kar rahi ho na, mamma bhi apni mamma ko miss kar rahi hai. mamma jaldi hamare paas aa jaayegi.

Ram is sitting at the edge of the bed. He is holding dhruv's hand.

Neha:- kya socha hai????

Ram:- meine soch liya hai ki mein Priya ko ghar lekar aaunga. Woh mujse sab rishta tod sakti hai lekin bachho se iss tarah alag nahi ho sakti.

Neha:- kya woh aayegi???

Ram:- uuse aana hoga. Apne aap se nahi toh zabardasti se. bachho ke liye mein uuse idar lekar aaunga. Neha mein jaa raha hoon, bachho ka khayal rakna, kuch bhi ho toh muje phone karna.

Neha uuse rokna chahti thi lekin uuse pata tha ki woh abb rukne wala nahi hai.

Next update based on comments

Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
it is interesting
kya suspense h
update fast
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
nice update bt what is reeson 4 divorse ?????
hope its clear nxt update
pls continue soon
thx 4 PM waiting 4 nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Hmm cant believe priya is heartless to leave husband and kids want to know the reason i like the name dhruv cont soon
Edited by ramsakshiroxxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: ramsakshiroxxx

Hmm cant believe priya is heartless to leave husband and kids want to know the reason i like the name dhruv cont soon

hey Priya is not heartless, but helpless. thanks for comments.
flash back scenes and furture scenes I am not writing. know only about present. so can give small small updates only.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Its very emotional yaar kids re suffering plz bring priya back nd do reveil the reason of her absence
Cont soon nd thanx for pm

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