ArSha 'n' TanHa FF | Ever After (Ch1 to Ch8) - Page 71

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Sab mujhe aise bol rahe hain ki discontinue ka naatak kar rahi hai.

Par koi bhi mere point of view se nahi dekh paa raha hai! :/
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i m not saying ki tu natak kar rae hai, but why do u have to discontinue?

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Kyunki I am not getting the kind of response I was expecting. :/

And it's not that I have high expectations. My readers themselves have set this level for me. And now it's difficult for me when they are not as supportive as they were before! :|
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@Aquilia_Aditi: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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Originally posted by: girlz-rule

@Aquilia_Aditi: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊


Thanks a lot dear. I'm glad you liked it! 😊
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I have decided to continue this one! 😳
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I'll be updating it in a while! 😳
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(I do not own this sig. Thanks to Aamna Am for this awesome sig. It's awesome. Love you di. 🤗🤗)




Heya my lovelies. 🤗
Sorry for the delay! 😳 Note about the continuations below. Here's Chapter Eight for now. 😃
Thanks for liking the previous chapter and for all your wonderful comments!
Enjoy! Do read and comment! 😆
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Shakti (to herself): Ab manao isse. Gussa dilaya hai toh manana toh padhega hi na. Kya karun, kya karun, kya karun? Yes, Idea!!

Shakti ran her finger through her still wet hair and made them in a way so that they look natural. She adjusted her bathrobe and went towards Amar.

She hugged him tightly from behind. He tried to escape her grasp but she refused to let him go away. After a lot of tries he gave in and sat down.

Amar (angrily): That's not going to work. So don't even try, oka?

Shakti was now planting kisses on his neck from behind. Her hands rested on around his waist and she was seducing him.

Shakti: Hm..

Amar: What hm?

Shakti: Mmm..

Amar: Stop it Shaks. I'm telling you it's not going to work.

Shakti finally gave up and came from the back and stood right in front of him.

Shakti: Sorry Kunwar.

Amar: Tumhein toh sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Tumhaari toh koi galti hi nahi thi. Tum ne kuch galat thodi kia. Bas mera mood kharab kar dia.

Shakti (pouting): Kunwar, stop it na. Stop being a baby. Maine kaha na I'm sorry. (holding her ears) Lo, ab toh maine kaan bhi pakad liye. Ab toh maan jao. Please!!

Kunwar eyed her from up and down. She was looking really hot and her actions were making her look hotter. But he still pretended.

Amar: No ways. Tum har baar yeh hi karti ho. I'll not talk with you. In fact what am I doing over here. I have no work over here. I'll take your leave now. Excuse me..

Saying that Amar got up and started moving towards the door. But our Shakti is not less. She was even faster. She blocked his way.

Shakti: Arey! Sorry baba! Please Kunwar. Maaf kardo na.

Amar: No ways!

Shakti (annoyed and irritated): Fine then, go ahead. Bye. I tried my best to stop you and apologise. But you will never listen to me. Right? You may leave now. That's it.

Amar (to himself): Arey, ab toh yeh naraz ho gayi. You're so stupid Amar. Abhi who itni romantic hui thi aur tumne naatak kiya. You're so mad. Ab manao isse. Urgh! What should I do.

Shakti: Why are you still standing here? Leave!

Amar: Arey meri Shaku bai naaraz ho gayi? Sorry bacha.

He came forward towards her but she held her hand up.

Shakti (almost shouting): Leave!!!

Amar (to himself): Abhi isse panga lena galat rahega. She's way too much angry right now. I guess I should wait for the correct time.

Just then the bell rang. Amar opened the door slowly hoping that koi aur na ho. But, to save him, it was none other than Sneha. As she entered she could sense a tense atmosphere and Amar's expressions confirmed it. But as she took in Shakti's appearance she was shocked.

Sneha: Shaks, what are you doing in that bathrobe? (eyeing them both) What were you guys up to? Hun?

Shakti: Nothing. Who asked you to go? And why when I was taking a shower? When I came out I saw him. You should've at least told me. That would've been better. Anyways, what are you doing here?

Saying this Shakti went towards her bag and started opening it. Sneha was totally confused. She looked at Amar who stood there helpless.

Sneha (to Shakti): This is my room also. I came here to change. It's almost time for the bonfire.

(to Amar): Are you going to tell me what happened.

Amar: Who actually..

But he was cut off in between by Shakti as usual.

Shakti: What are you still doing here? Leave! Right now. And what? Time for bonfire! Oh no! I need to get ready. Kya karu?

And she again got into her hyper-active mode. She started searching through her bag while Amar sighed and went out of the room.

As soon as Amar left, both began getting ready for the bonfire. Shakti was almost ready when Shantanu showed up at their room and Sneha spoke up.

Sneha: Shakti! It's time. They've all reached there. Let us also go.

Shakti: Um, Sneha you go with him. I'll be there in five minutes.

Sneha: Are you sure? I mean we don't mind waiting.

Shakti: No, no. You guys carry on. I'll be there soon.

Sneha: Oka.

And with that Shantanu and Sneha left the rooms.

*****

At park no. 3:


Park No 3 (Image):




Everyone was greeting each other and enjoying the night with each other. Only one person stood alone in a corner, looking low. Suddenly Alisha asked,

Alisha: Guys, where's Shaks ?

Vinti: Exactly. Um, Amar kahaan hai who.

Amar just shrugged and his frown deepened.

Amar: How would I know?!

Bharat: Now I understand. Yet another fight. Am I right? Well that makes it World War 139.

Amar gave him a 'please' look and said,

Amar (in a serious tone): That's not funny dude.

Alisha looked at his expression and turned towards Sneha and asked her what the matter is. She just told her that they were fighting when she got into the room for some reason which she is unaware of. Just then Archie spoke,

Archie: Oh look, there my sweet sister is.

Then, everyone looked at her and everyone stopped in their tarcks. Everyone was looking at her from head to toe. Shakti saw it and a smile automatically covered her face accompanied by a warm blush.


Kria's Dress:



Archie stepped ahead and held out his hand. Shakti carefully placed her hand in his and Archie kissed it.

Archie: Seriously, agar tu meri behen na hoti na toh main bina kuch soche samjhe tujhe pro maar deta.

Shakti: Tujhse toh mujhe aur kuch expected bhi nahi tha.

Archie grinned and Shakti joined in.

All this while Amar was just staring her. Admiring her. Shakti saw her from the corner of her eyes checking her out but she just ignored him.

Macce: He's absolutely correct. You look sexy and stunning and pretty and hot and what should I say Shakti. I bet agar tu aise bahar chali jaaye na, saare ladke tujh pe fida ho jaayeinge. Even SRK !

Shakti (shyly): Thanks Macce.

*****

Palki: So guys, let's begin with the party?!

Everyone hooted and they all took their places. Shakti was just sitting down when Amar came there. He was about to sit beside her but she got up and changed her position. She sat in between Archie and Shantanu and Amar was sitting right in front of her. They all got into conversations, but our majnu was still looking at his laila.

*****

Kya Kunwar, kar paayega Shakti se baat?

Kya mana paayega who ussey?

Kya Shakti karegi maaf ussey?

Jaan ne ke liye, stay in touch!

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PPS: Wondering why the sudden continuation? Well it is because I cannot see my friends sad. It is for all of them who were eating my head for this one. Deetha di and Palak di this update is specially for you guys. Deetha di, remember the awesome spamming you did on this thread a few months back? 🤣 🤗
Next Update on the new thread? And after some 45+ likes, eh? Pretty please! 😆


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Res 🤣

Unress 😉

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Loved it very muchie Kamini 😳

Hope that yeh chappy thoda aur lamba hota but then it's kay!🤔

Next chappy should be large ... 😉

All the scenes were perfectly incorporated ... 👏

And my my Shaks dress .. Ispe toh lattu hona hi tha boys ko ... 😉

Overall update was Supah Hawt ... just like you ... 🤣

With Love ❤️
~Sweets 😳
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fantastic update...

bechara amar...😆
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