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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TAAREY786

update sooon and plz pm me




Thank u dear. I will update very soon and PM u! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: velvetrose

great concept update soon n plz pm me :)



Thank u dear. Thanks for the support! I will update very soon and PM u! 😊
Edited by Curvmars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reyanks

Update! Update! Update!



Aww.. I was waiting for ur comment! Ok.. I will update very soon! U dun have to wait. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow wow!!! this is jus so amazing...love the CS and the whole track...its jus amazing <3
im already hooked to it yaaar ...so jaldi update karna...hehe =D

cant wait to read on! =D

and love the title as well...unique hai =)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

wow wow wow!!! this is jus so amazing...love the CS and the whole track...its jus amazing <3

im already hooked to it yaaar ...so jaldi update karna...hehe =D

cant wait to read on! =D

and love the title as well...unique hai =)



Thank u dear. Thank u so much. Sneha. 🤗. I'll update very soon and Pm u.😉
Kal update mil jayega.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Ishani gr8 concept plz continue soon n thnx 4 d pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
please update naa!! 😊
i cant wait to read this
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakshigupta

Hey Ishani gr8 concept plz continue soon n thnx 4 d pm :)



Thank u dear! I will continue very soon! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushan-taarey

please update naa!! 😊
i cant wait to read this


Sure dear! I will update and pm u too! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 1
A huge crowd of fans was waiting for their star. All girls were going mad to look at him. All were waiting. Crew members were running from here and there. Checking every bit and confirming. The crowd was fuming with excitement with every passing fraction of second.

Finally, a black but stylish Lamborghini Aventador arrived with full speed.
Doors slide up.

The noise increased in huge amount by crowd. Girls started behaving like mad. Waiting was finished for fans. All wanted to run at that car. But, Bodyguard were their obstacles. Bodyguard made a round around the car and crowd too.

In car,
A smart and handsome young dude was sitting. Sending sms to someone.
Umm...Let's take a look what he was doing.

A little zoom and more little zoom on his scree. Yeah..That's perfect.

To:Kriya.

I luv u a lot. <3

The hunk dude smirked and took sip of his chilled cold drink. He just looked around and found so many people were waiting for him, for his arrival.

He smirked with dashing look. Took his can and came out of the car. He wore his jacket.

Bodyguards who were trying to control crowd were getting in problem now. Crowd was getting wild. Fans were pushing, else if possible they would crush them.

He waved his hand and gave flying kiss to crowd. Girls broke the circle of guards and ran to him. The first girl who arrived to him, screamed.

Girl:"OMGGG... I AM STANDING WITH REEYANSH SINGHANIA! OOHH GOOSSHHH.. I CAN'T BELIVE."

Guy:"Hey..call me Rey." (Gave dashing bt loving look.)

[ Yes guyzz.. It's Rey.]

In no time, she pulled him into a tight hug and clicked maximum pics as much she could. Rest of the crowd came to him and did the same. Shouting, some got faint, some were getting his autographs.

Again, guards came and made a way for Rey. Rey waved for last and entered in studio. He started his work.

In the same time, somewhere in rehalsal hall.

A beautiful girl was doing hip-hop and bollywod. (Mix up)
On This song.

Bebot

She done it very fluently with her heart. Her body was glowing by sweat. Already, she had silky and soft skin. She untied her hair and sat on the floor. She was going to start her sit ups.

She heard clapping. She turned to see who was it and found her bhai standing there with smile. Her face got lighten up and she ran to him but stopped. She didn't hug him. She was standing in front of him.

He made confused faces and finally asked.
"What happended?? Give me hug yaar."

She smiled. But, I am very sticky right now. He also nodded and made a yuckss wala face. But, in no time he pulled her into a tight hug.

Guy:"Taani... ur my sister. Tum bhi na.. I m very sticky right now."(mimmicking her.)

[Yes, guyz.. This is Taani.And the guy is Raj, her bhai.]

She broke the hug.

Taani:"Bhai.. app mera mazak uda rhe ho na??" (Made a cute and angry pout.)

Raj:"Meri itni majjal."

Taani smiled.

Taani:"Aap bhetho.. mera streching hone ke baad. We will leave."

Raj smiled and sat on chair.

Taani(while doing sit ups):" Bhai.. aap yaha kaise?? I mean, ap toh mujhe ghar pe milne wale the na. Then, yaha?"

Raj:"Taani.. me tumse kuch baat karna chahata hun."

Taani:" Haa.. bolo na bhai."

Raj:"Taani.. dekho na mat kehena.. Tum mere saath humare ghar q nhi rehene ko ati?? Kya kuch nhi hain!..."

Taani stopped doing sit-ups and cut it.

Taani:"Dekhiye, Bhai. Mujhe apna carrier banana hain. I want to b dancer. Mujhe kiski behen aur kisiki koi lagti hun isiliye mujhe fame nhi chaiye. Mujhe apne khudke talen pe trust karke, khud efforts karke kuch banna hain. Please, Bhai. Aap samjho na. Please."

Raj nodded.

Raj:"Okay. Fine. Now, do ur work then we will go to eat.."

Taani:" Chocolate sandwich."

Raj:"Ya.. right."

Taani did her streching and packed her belongings. They both came out of the rehalsal hall.

Raj opened the door of his car for Taani. But, his cell started ringing.
Taani didn't sit in car. Raj recived the call.

Person:"Hey..Jaan.Kaha ho tum. Missing u so much."

Raj smiled but controlled in front of Taani.

Raj:"Yaa... Yaa... Ok..Okk.."

Person:"Jaan. What happened?? Aise q ajeeb baat kar rhe ho??"

Raj:"Excuse me."

Taani nodded.

Raj little far from Taani.
Raj:"What happened Kria???"

[Yes. Guyzz... Girl is Kria.]

Kria:"Jaan..kiske saath ho tum?"

Raj:"Right now, I am busy my dear."

Kria:"What?? Tum mujhse jada aur kaun important hain jisme tum busy ho."

Raj:" Kria.. aisi baat nhi hain.."

Kria:"I dun knw.. Tum mujhe milne aaoo."

Raj:"Dekho. Kria bachpana chodho."

Kria:"No way! Come here right now."

Raj:" Okay. Kaha ho tum??"

Kria:" Me Rey ke ghar pe hun."

Raj:"What?? Humne kya decide kiya tha hum Rey ke ghar pe aur uske samne nahi milenege..Humm.."

Kria:"Yaa.. jaan.. I know that. But, Rey abhi shooting me hain. He will b late. U can come."

Raj:"Kria..but.."

Kria:"Plz... na.. aao na."

Raj:"Okay! After one hour."

Kria:"No right now."

Raj:" Abhi?? Tum hosh me toh ho!"

Kria:" I said abhi.. No more arguments."

She disconnected the call. Raj sighted.

Raj:"Taani.. uumm.. aaj me tumhe.. woo.."

Taani:"Koi baat nhi bhai. Kuch special kaam hoga na. U go."

Raj:" Me drop karta hun. Come."

Taani:"No. Bhai. I will manage."

Raj:"Are u sure??"

Taani:"Ya.. ap jao."

Raj went to meet Kria. Taani took an auto and went to her home.

At Taani's home.
Taani (to herself):" Bhai.. ki koi.. Love lady hain. Mujhe bataya nahi hain. Me unse iss bare me baat zaroor karungi."

Here, with Rey.
Director:"Sun.. Rey.. ek dance sequense bitha na hain. So, b ready."

Rey:"Okay dude. I am always ready."

Husshhh.. Khtam hua guuyzz...😆Okay!This was the first part. Hope u guyzz..Like it.

Leave ur precious comments and opinions abt this chapter and press the LIKE button.😊

Have a good day.


Edited by Curvmars - 12 years ago

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