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Awesome update
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Awsome
cont soon
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Awessome update. Thanks for the pm.
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really nice update dear...eagerly wating for nxt prt...update soonnn...
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chapter 3(a):

rk reached rk mansion with aryan niranjan kaka.
rk stepped out from car and opened door of other side for aryan to step out.
aryan is trying to step out.rk taken him in to his arms.

aryan: chachu i am not a kid i can walk...
rk: but u r kid for me...😊
aryan luked at rk mansion.he was totally surprised.really mansion was so big.

aryan: chachu is this ur mansion?
rk: no,it is our mansion.😊
aryan: really.😃
rk: ha.😊

aryan ,rk rushed to sultan room...

yes in mansion there is a special room for sultan.but rk closed it when he left him.he never allowed anyone to open that room.
whenever he feel alone he used to go to that room and getting flashes of his sweetest moments with his tiger&father...

when sultan in hospital he opened it again for sultan and he given orders to servers to clean the room.

sultan in his room.

sultan room toobig as rk room...

sultan: aryan 😊
aryan: sultan.how r u?😊

he sat on bed beside sultan.
sultan: i am fine now.

aryan: sultan do u know rk is leaving us for madhu?

sultan: wat???????? 😲
aryan: ha,sultan.padmini aunty given a task to chachu to prove his luv.

rk went to his room.he is packing his clothes.
he taken a few clothes...

rk is so happy.he got a chance to prove his luv.

radha and sultan with aryan all entered in to rk's room

rk:😊 hmmm my packing was done...so ma plz give ur blessings...i want to win in this battle ma for my madhu...

radha: u will win beta..😊😭(she kissed him on his forehead while blessing.)

rk: tiger plz give a hug na...😊

sultan and rk shared a hug.

rk: bittuji u done alot for me.and i am giving u two months break.just two months...😊i think u will be happy without me.

bittuji: no,chief without u .i will never stay happy.i will come daily there to see u."aadat pad gayi aapki daant ka..."
rk:ahaan...

bittuji: chief i discussed about ur shootings with director and producer...so no need to worry. and huh chief u will definitely bring my bhaabi back.i trust u.😊

rk: thank u bittuji 😊

rk went near to aryan...

rk: so wat about my little tiger?😃

aryan: i will talk to u only when u take me to chawl with u.😉

rk: wat?but aryan how can u live with me there.
aryan: plz rk.i will come with u.

rk: but aryan.
sultan: take him rk.😊

aryan: sultan 😲😊

sultan: ha,aryan go with ur chachu and ha have great fun with ur chachu and maasi...

aryan: thank u baba. 😊
aryan hugged sultan with happy.

rk: r u sure tiger?
sultan:yes,ofcourse i knew u will take care of him than me.

rk: thank u so much

he left mansion with aryan.

when rk leaving mansion he given a glance at mansion.as he was going to miss it so much...

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madhu: ma,why u challenged with rk?u know he can't stay in chawl.and he don't know this life.😭
padmini: what i done is for u?and i know he will lose the challenge.and u will be safe.

madhu: ma,rk is not a liar.ma whatever he said was true ma?

padmini:" tum itni badi hogaye ki tumhaari ma ko sikhana suru kiya..."😡

madhu : par ma...


madhu is thinking about rk...

night:

madhu went out from house and standed lonely at rk's poster luking at him.poster was changed.now poster is of dard-e -ishq...

madhu getting flashes of their sweetest moments and her eyes filled with tears...😊😭

she is touching rk poster...😭

when her tear drop is about to fall on ground.some hands holded her tears from falling on ground safely...

madhu felt someone presence behind her.she turned to luk at that person.
she was shocked luking at rk infront of her.
for a minute she thought that it is her imagination.

rk: madhu i said u to don't cry.then why r u crying?i can't tolerate ur tears madhu...

rk wiped her tears.madhu still in shock state until she saw aryan there.😲

aryan: madhu...😊
madhu turned to see aryan.she hugged him.🤗
madhu: aryan...
aryan: madhu now u r my maasi na...😊

madhu luked at rk.

nodded her head 😊
aryan: madhu I am getting sleep.may I sleep in ur lap?

Madhu nodded her head


"lor lori lori lal lor lor - 2
chandan ka paalna resham ki dor
chandaa ki chaandi laayi achur
neendiya tora rasta rahe aankhiyan agor
lor lori lori lal lor lor

bhanvwaran ke huthwan pe kaliyan ki baat
bela ki khushbu se mehki hai raat
dheeme dheeme purwaiya maaren hilor
lor lori lori lal lor lor - 2
chandan ka paalna resham ki dor


aryan fall asleep in madhu lap...


rk just luking at them by sitting beside madhu on stairs.

rk 😊: madhu he gone in to sleep.

madhu: shhh...

she slowly caressing aryan hair...😊


rk: i will take him in to the room.

rk taken aryan in to his arms.when he is taking him from madhu.he is about to open his eyes.but rk continued lori song for aryan


palakan hindole pe nenediya jo le
mamta ki bahiyan mein bachpan phoolen
dheem dheeme raat kate ho jaaye bhor
lor lori lori lal lor lor - 2
chandan ka paalna resham ki dor"


again he slept in rk arms...rk slowly placed aryan on bed.

madhu surprised to see rk staying in their chawl.


rk laid aryan on bed.and he slowly went out.

madhu: rk wat r u doing?

rk: shhh...

madhu dragged him to aside.

madhu: rk wat r u doing here?

rk: madhu i am following whatever sasuma said...

madhu😭: it means u r staying here in chawl..

rk: again tears.

"biwi ab mere pass paisa bi nahi hai agar income tax officers rona par tax lagaya tho barne keliye bi nahi hai.isliye plz rona -dona bandh..."

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Edited by sai.janu350 - 12 years ago
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madhu: rk plz don't play jokes.

rk: oops sorry...biwi.i no it is not time for jokes.but what to do
"aadat pad gayi...woh kehthe haina aadat se majbhoor hoon..."

madhu 😊: u will never change.
rk: "what can i do?it is in my blood..."

rk cupped madhu face with his hands.

rk: madhu i am waiting for this minute.after a long time i got a chance to touch u.i missed u badly biwi.
madhu😭: i too missed u rk.

rk:" tumse zyaada mein tumhe miss kiya..."

madhu: nahi mein tumse zyaada miss kiya tujhe
rk: biwi koi rk se zyaada nahi kar saktha isliye maano mein tumse zyaada miss kiya hai tujhe...

madhu: no,i missed u than u...

rk: biwi i said missed u than u.
madhu: rk i too said that i missed u than u.

rk shutted her mouth with hi shands.

rk: plz biwi ...rk kabhi kisi se plz nahi kehta .aaj mein tumse keh raha hoon.maanlo na mein tumse zyaada miss kiya hoon...

madhu signalling him to remove his hand from her mouth.rk realized it and freed her mouth.
madhu: nahi rk.i luv so much than u so i missed u badly than u.

rk : ok,we will play a game to know who missed more than other..?ok

madhu: ok,and luk i will win.
rk: let's see.

rk : ok i will toss this coin.if it heads then i missed u more than u otherwise u missed me more than me.ok.

madhu: ok.but i want heads and tails urs.

rk(smiling with her childish behaviour): ok.

he tossed coin.but it revolving on ground.madhu and rk luking at curiously...

but coin stood in stand position.that means both won the toss.

rk and madhu stared at each other.

rk: luk coin also cannot calibrate our luv towards each other.so it failed...

madhu: ha,rk...

Dil ko aaya sukoon tere deedar se haaye...
Dil ko aaya sukoon tere deedar se
Ab na hona rukhsat apne dildar se haay


rk and madhu staring at each other.they r remembering their sweetest memories in studio.
karwachauth scene,rk packing her in bag (when they planned to go to a picnic)
suddenly padmini entered there.
padmini: madhu...😡
rk left her...
padmini dragged her to room.and she shutted their door.
rk i sjust staring until madhu shadow disappeared.he just stood there.he is luking at their window.


Bin tere ik lamha, ab reh nahi paata hai
Ye ishq mere Allah kitna tadpata hai (x2)

Kabhi aahein bharta hai
Kabhi dil dhadkata hai
Ye ishq mere Allah kitna tadpata hai

rk sat near a side of the tree which was in the middle of chawl.he is staring at window.

in room:

padmini didn't uttered single word.she locked door.and gone in to sleep.

madhu 😭😭

suddenly she remembered rk saying to not cry.he can't see her cry.

she wiped her tears and slowly she opened her windows.

Dard tanhayi ka, dooriyon ka mausam
Naa jiya jaaye na, bekasi ka aalam

Tere ehsaaso ki chaadarein bunti hoon
Main tere khwabon ki neend me chunti hoon

rk 😊 staring at her.madhu too given a smile 😊

Dil ko aaya sukoon tere deedar se
Ab na hona rukhsat apne dildar se haay

Bin tere ik lamha, ab reh nahi paata hai
Ye ishq mere Allah kitna tadpata hai
Kabhi aahein bharta hai
Kabhi dil dhadkata hai
Ye ishq mere Allah kitna tadpata hai

Tera ishq ishq ishq...

whole night they r thinking about each other.

in studio:(after rk humiliating madhu in party.madhu left mansion sadly and she entered in to studio unknowingly)

rk saving her.when studio was full of dark.madhu hugging rk with fear.

rk 😊(at himself) remembering it.

Bas tere pehlu mein
Jeene ki chaahat hai
Zindagi tu meri tujhse hi daahat hai

madhu - rk and madhu r going to picnic.in car rk wants her to propose.he left car stearing...

madhu(to herself): paagal...😊

Jab duaa maangi hai
Bas tujhe maanga hai
Saanson ki galiyon mein tujhko hi paaya hai

Dil ko aaya sukoon tere deedar se
Ab na hona rukhsat apne dildar se haay

rk(with madhu soul): i know u r saying that i am paagal.

madhu(with rk soul): ha,toh.

rk(with madhu soul): ha,i am mad for u.

this made madhu blush...😳

rk(with madhu soul): when u blush u luk damn-cute...!!!!!!!


Bin tere ik lamha, ab reh nahi paata hai
Ye ishq mere Allah kitna tadpata hai (x2)
Kabhi aahein bharta hai
Kabhi dil dhadkata hai
Ye ishq mere Allah kitna tadpata hai

Tera ishq ishq ishq...


next part will be continue soon...

plz do comments...

sorry for mistakes😊


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really awesome updates dear...really hating paddo...
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Awesome update dear ...why is padmini doing this separating ...anyway happy to see Rishbala together and very much in love with each other.waiting for next part.
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Amazing update
update next part fast
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Originally posted by: zina.92

Amazing update
update next part fast



thank u😊
i will update soon.
and u will get to see some rishbalicious moments in holi...😉😳

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