ARHI FF-THE MIRAGE -Thread 3 Chap-37,p 146 - Page 57

Waitin fr d next update Anu😳

lovd their electrifying chemistry...
awsm...
so sorrryyy, couldn't comnt on previous chapters...
but as usual, brilliant work dear...

Anu, thank you for the two fabulous updates. Arshi is bonding as a couple and learning to accept and understand each other. Khushi is even tempted to accept the forbidden proposal that her hubby keeps sending her. A blissful life of togetherness that will last for eternity. She loves her hubby and thus she dreams of being with him but reality prevents her from securing her marriage and confessing her love. Arnav is equally smitten by his stubborn and beautiful wife. Arshi has reached a level in their relationship where they can opening confess their thoughts, beliefs and emotions.

Originally posted by: anukat

I dint get your first statement! I write as i visualise what he does what she does and what goes on in the background thoughts, feelings and attitudes...coz its a novel and i cant show actually...

Arnav is on a hot pursuit...

Yeah he is slow... you said it as its not business anymore! He never hesitated to marry her... but now he thinks twice before even speaking as then he was not bothered about her! Now he cares! The fact is he does not know himself that its love!

Trust issues are a problem... he failed twice and ASR is not accustomed to failure...

He married her... failure coz he misjudged her

He took her responsibility... she got hurt... failure coz he did a cardinal mistake of underestimating the enemy( In this case its not under estimation its elusion as only Khushi knows shikhar is a psycho and does not follow a pattern) rest think that she is just paranoid!

Now he has come all the way even after she defied him! what does that tell you? Plus its only one day since he came the time line in Mirage is like a snail😳

Just read... he came she hugged him in the evenng and slept whole night in fever... they got up had brkfast and were abt to rest when smthng hapnd and ASR went into defensive mode... its just the next day... ok?

And last but not least! How can i be mad at u my sweetest! Infact all r welcome to diccuss and comment! it gives more insights and depth to me as a writer.

In fact I thank u for taking time out to discuss...

Anu

Anu-
I understand... It is like once burned shy twice. He is being careful.
But I love his character here. He was ruthless and did act in haste without verifying the facts. But he was clear from the beginning that he will be a dutiful husband for life if Khushi is proven innocent.
He should now just get this shikhar guy killed. THE END OF THIS EVIl.
Then he will be able to focus better.

I am sure you have planned it well and slow romance means more romance:) yes.

What a timing!
I was just checking.

Sweeet

stalking pays off! thanks for the lovey update

Gee that Shikhar is ultra hilarious... Should be cast as a special entry/ or guest appearance in Sargam may be

Originally posted by: ILoveFF

Gee that Shikhar is ultra hilarious... Should be cast as a special entry/ or guest appearance in Sargam may be

Closer to the second base indeed.
Evil brother wants to play holi with his sister.