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superb
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Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

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Khamoshi………….Lakin kab tak………….

Part 8

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He made her sit on chair & made pasta for her. He served it in a plate. He took it to her fed her blowing it slowly. She still turned her face & refused to eat.
Maan - sweety dehko na main ne kitne pyar se banaya hain aap ke liyen
she crossed her hand & went to the living room. Maan lifted his brows & wondered what next.

Maan: princess suno na

Karan: kya huya meri sweet little princess ko

Apne chachu ko to btayo

Sia: sia ko kissi se baat nhi krni

Karan: chachu ne kya kiya hai

Chachu se to baat kr sakti hai meri princess

Daadi: aaj ye sb yha kya ho rha hai

Shilpa: daadi Sia mnayo abiyan

Daadi: kya huya Sia ko

Kisne narqz kiya princess ko

Maan: maine

Sia papa se baat nhi krongi…

Sia:

Maan: thik hai

To papa office jaa rhe hai

Shilpa : veerji apne to abhi breakfast bhi nhi kiya hai

Maan: hmm

Hum to tbhi khayenge… jb sia humse baat karengi… aur apna

breakfast complete karengi

Sia: chachi hume bhuk lagi hai….

Karan: good girl

Hum khud khilayenge apni princess ko

Shilpa: veerji aap bhi

Maan: sia to mujhse baat hi nhi kr rhi hai

Apne papa se itna jyada naraaz hai

Sia: chachi hume pasta do na

Hum papa ko khud khilayenge

She takes spoon and feed him…

Maan kissed on her cheek….

Maan: papa sorry hai

Next time apko pura time denge

Sia: promise

Maan: promise

************************

Adi : sir saari information is file mein hai

Maan: ok

Tum ab jayo

Adi : yes sir

****************

He opens the file and read it….and smile only……..

Maan(thought) :- geet na chahte huye bhi tum mere karib hi aa

rhi ho

Mein bhi dekhta hu…kb tak bhagti hu mujhse

*************

Geet : asad ye kya baat huyi

Meeting ek dum se abhi… kaise ho sakti hai…

Asad: relax geet

Unka phone aaya… to maine ha kh diya

Geet : mujhse pucha tk nhi

Asad: oh god geet

Tumhi toh chahti thi na… yha ka kaam jaldi se khtm ho

Aur ab whi ho rha hai…toh tumhe hi problem hai

Khi asa to nhi hai geet … tum ab yha se jaana hi nhi chahti

Geet : tum ye kya bakwas kr rhe ho

Mein 10 minute mein aati hu

Asad: thik hai

Geet : tum room se bahar jayonge.. toh mein

Asad:ok

*******************

He : madam bs 5 minute aur

Sir ke meeting bs end hone wali hai…

Wo bs aate hi honge

Geet : tumhare boss ne ek to meeting pre- pone kr di

Aur ab who khud kisi aur meeting mein busy hai

Asad: it's ok

Kyi baa rasa ho jata hai

We have no problem…

He : thanks sir

***************

Geet : asad tum na

Asad: yaar itni choti si baat hai

Madam itna gussa acha nhi hota hai

*************

Same man enters again in cabin…

Geet : aur kitna intzaar krna hai hume…

He : madam mein toh aap dono ko conference hall mein le

jaane aaya hu

Asad: hmm

Chle geet

Her phone ring…….

Geet : asad tum chlo… mein aati hu

Asad: ok

***************

Geet : hello

Hello

No one speak…

Geet : jb baat hi nhi krni thi… toh phone kyun krte ho

He: you are right….

She turns and sees him…

Geet : aap

He : tum itni betaab thi mujhse milne ke liye…

To kaise nhi aata

Geet : dekhiye

He : dikhayo geet

Kya dekhu

Geet : maan aap yha kya kr rhe hai

Maan: ye toh mein bhi puch sakta hu……

He came close to her and held her by waist…

Geet : maan chodiye mujhe

He pulled near to her more…

Maan :ye kya geet…

Abhi toh itni betaab thi mujhse ilne ke liye… itna gussa thi

mujhse intzaar krwane ke liye…

Aur ab…jb mein tumhare pass hoon toh…

Geet : maan chodiye mujhe

Koi aa jayenga

Maan : bs itni si problem…

Abhi lock kr dete hai cabin…

Geet : what ?

He takes out the remote and locks the cabin…

Geet : maan door open kriye…

Maan: nhi

Jb tak tum mere swalo ka jwab nhi deti…

Tb tak toh bilkul nhi

Geet : maan please

He holds her tightly when he feels her try to remove his hands

making her plaster to him fully. Geet gasp at this sudden contect

with his body she is trying to be away from him and he is making

it more difficult for her. She don't want this, she don't want this

closeness this is something

she can't handle. Maan did not like when she looked away from

him he is looking in her eyes after a long time and here she is

not allowing him at all . He held her chin and makes her look at

him again when he speaks "geet kb tak mujhe yuhi khudse durr

krti rhongi…kb tak tum ase

hi bhagti rahongi…….geet ab bhut huya……."

Maan: ab aur nhi geet…

Geet tum chahe kitni baar mujhse apne nazre churalo…

Pr ab mein tumhe khudse durr nhi jaane dunga…..

Tum mere pass… mere karib…..

Geet : maan mein toh kbhi aapke karib bhi nhi thi….

Maan: geet

Geet : maan karib hoti toh aap

Maan: mein kya geet

She nothing says to him and tries to removing his hand……….

Maan : geet jwab do

Geet : khne ko kuch nhi hai maan

Someone knocks the door… both separated ………

Sorry for mistakes….

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