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Chapter 13

Next day.

Vanshika: Viren, Virat, Manvi, Jeevika. where are you all, it's holi tum charon ko khelna nahi, pooja karne ha humein.

Foursome enter from the main door.

Virat (hugs vanshikafrom the back): Maa hum toh kab ke agaye aur sarre tayariyan bhi kar li.

Vanshika: lekin tum saab kaab uthe.

Jeevika: maa bas thodi der phela.

Manvi sneeze.

Vanshika: manvi kya hua angel.

Virat sneeze.

Vanshika: Why are you both sneezing.

Virat(looks down guilty): Maa woh kaal barish.

Vanshika(carresses their cheeks): Beta lekin abb tum dono ki tabiyat khrab ho gayi ne.

Manvi: solly maa (in baby voice, vanshika hugs her)

Virat(pouts): Main bhi.

Virika: aur hum

and they all hug.

jeevika wore this

manvi wore this

viren wore this

virat wore this

After pooja all were happily playing holi.

Virat: Bhai larkiyan kaha ha.

Viren: yahi hogi dono.

Virat: dekho wahan ha.

Viren: onke haath mein kya glass hai.

Viren to sunder: tarun manvi aur jeevika ko kya hua.

tarun: Manvi aur jeevika madam ne bhang peli.

VV bros: Kya bhang.

Jeevika: Viren app ek se do kehe ho gaye.

Manvi: di bhai ho gaye virat teen ho chuka ha.

Jeevika: arrey hain maanu.

Virat: Manvi...

Manvi: Kya maanvi manvi, chup chap yeh thandai pe lo.

Jeevika: haan viren app bhi.

All four get taali and dance sequence of yesterday's

Around 5pm

The foursome come down.

Viren: Sorry dadaji

Virat: sorry

Manvi: sorry

Jeevika: sorry

Dadaji comes to them strictly and then starts laughing .

dadaji: tum log mujhe ese ghoor kyun rahe ho arrey holi ha.

Accha abb kaal ki sarri tayariyan ho gayi, holi excitment mein koi bhol toh nahi gya kaal sagayi ha.

Inder: HAan chalo.

Next day

Vanshika: Kadambri ajj mein bohot kush hoon virman virika ki saagai ho rahi ha.

Kadambri: Haan bhabhi mein bhi kush hoon itne saalon taak in charoon ne apne shaadi ke sapna dekha ajj unki engagement ho rahi hai to kuch waqt mein shaadi bhi ho jyayegi.

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Chapter 14

The foursome came down virat was holding manvi's hand and viren was holding jeevikas

jeevika

manvi

viren

virat

Kadambri: Hynee kisi ki nazar ne laga intne pyara lgraha ha.

Dadaji: Ajj mein bohot kush hoon ajj meri dono grandsons ki saggai hai, yeh din humara ghar ke liya bohot kushi ha yeh humera beta vikram aur uske dost amar ke liye bohot bara sapna tha. The ring ceremony will take place in a while till then enjoy everyone.

|Suddenly the lights go off and comes and two dpot lights come on one own vv bros and the other on jeeman than dance sequence

Ishq Hai...
( Teri Aankhon Ke Matvaale Kaajal Ko Mera Salaam
Zulfon Ke Kale Kale Baadal Ko Mera Salaam )... (2)
Ghayal Kar De Mujhe Yaar Tere Paayal Ke Jhankar
Hey Soni Sone Teri Soni Har Adaa Ko Salaam
Salaam-E-Ishq Ishq Ishq Salaam-E-Ishq... (2)
( Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E- )... (2) Ishq Hai...

Ho Teri Mastaani Anjaani Bataon Ko Mera Salaam
Rangon Mein Doobi Doobi Raaton Ko Mera Slaaam
Khwaabon Mein Kho Gayi Main Deewani Ho Gayi Main
Soney Soney Aisse Soney Har Adaa Ko Salaam
Salaam-E-Ishq Ishq Ishq Salaam-E-Ishq' (2)
( Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E- )... (2) Ishq Hai...

Ho Teri Hathhawitch Mehandi Ka Rang Khila Hain
Tujhe Sapano Da Changa Mehboob Mila Hain
Meri Banno Pyaari Pyaari Sari Duniya Se Nyaari
Ise Doli Mein Tu Leja Doliyaan, Doliyaan...

Teri Meri Nazar Jo Mili Pehli Baar
Ho Gaya Ho Gaya Tujhse Pyaar
Dil Hai Kya Dil Hai Kya Jaan Bhi Tujhpe Nisaar
Maine Tujhe Kiya Aitbaar
Ho Main Bhi Toh Tujhpe Mar Gayi
Deewanapan Kya Kar Gayi
Meri Har Dhakan Betaab Hai
Palkon Vich Tera Khwaab Hai
Ho Jaan Se Bhi Pyaari Pyaari Jaaniya Ko Salaam
Salaam-E-Ishq, ( Salaam-E-Ishq Ishq Ishq Salaam-E-Ishq )... (2)
( Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E )... (2) Ishq Hai...

Main Tere Ishq Mein Do Jahan Vaar Doon
Mere Vaade Pe Kar Le Yakeen
Keh Rahe Hai Zameen Keh Raha Aasman
Tere Jaissa Dooja Nahin
Ho Aisse Jaadoon Na Daal Ve
Naa Aaon Tere Naal Ve
Jhooti Tereefein Chodh De
Ab Dil Mere Dil Se Jod De
Ho Jo Abhi Hai Dil Se Nikli Uss Dua Ko Salaam
Salaam-E-Ishq Ishq Ishq Salaam-E-Ishq' (2)
( Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E- )... (2) Ishq Hai...

Rab Se Hai Iltija Maaf Kar De Mujhe
Main Toh Teri Ibaadat Karoon
Aye Meri Soniye Na Khabar Hai Tujhe
Tujhase Kitni Mohobbat Karoon
Tere Bin Sab Kuch Benoor Hai
Meri Maang Mein Tere Sindoor Hai
Sanson Mein Yehi Paigaam Hai
Mera Sab Kuch Tere Naam Hai
Ho Dhadkanon Mein Rehnewaali Soniye Ko Salaam
Salaam-E-Ishq
Teri Aankhon Ke Matvaale Kaajal Ko Mera Salaam
Zulfon Ke Kale Kale Baadal Ko Mera Salaam
Khwaabon Mein Kho Gayi Main Deewani Ho Gayi Main
Soney Soney Teri Soney Har Adaa Ko Salaam
Salaam-E-Ishq Ishq Ishq Salaam-E-Ishq' (2)
( Ho Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E-
Salaam-E-Ishq Salaam-E- )... (3) Ishq Hai...
Salaam-E-Ishq
Dadaji: Now the ring cermony will take place.

VIren and virat put the ring for jeevika and manvi and manvi jeevika put the ring for virat viren and everyone claps.

Virat: wese mannu tum bohot pyari lag rahi ho lekin tum yeh nahi lagta tumhara duppata had se zyada lamba ha tum se.

Manvi: kya matlab.

Virat: matlab yehi tum tum jese derfuthiya ke liye itne lamba duppattea ki kya zarorat.

Manvi: Virat (play fully hits him) tum ne yeh lehenga chuna

viren comes from behind with jeevika

Viren: oyye kya hua meri pyari behna ko kuyn perashan kar raha ha.

Jeevika: App mera pyara bhai ko kuch mata kehna.

Virman: Bhai/Di mein apka saga bhai / apki sagi bhen hoon.

Viren: Tum dono kitne natunki ho.

Virat: app logon ki hi wajaha se

Viren: acha humne natunki kab ki.

Virat: bhai mein kab keha ke app ne ki ap ne nahi ki iss liye toh humein karni pari.

jeevika starts to laugh.

viren: hasi kuyn rahi ho.

Jeevika: viren app mera bhai se nahi ji sakta (hugs virat) ek hazzaron mein mera bhai ha.

Virat: Ek hazzaron mein meri behna ha.

Manvi hugs viren

manvi: lakhon mein ek mera bhai ha

Viren: aur lakhon mein ek meri behna

After a while they all start laughing

All at once: love you

then they hug.

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other side

maya: divya humein kuch ne kuch karna padega.

divya: way ahead of you. (shows her an oil bottle) jeevika aur manvi mein se ek toh gira gi jab party ke baad woh upar kamra mein jaygi

After a while the party gets over. Geets family is there since they know the vadhera's very nicely

Vanshika: Tum saab change karne ke liye.

Divya: (thinks) abb ayga maza.

Maya smiles evilly
jeevika: MAnnu tu ja mein abhi ayi

Mannu ok di mein chali.

Everyone was talking suddenly a loud scream was heard.

Viren virat jeevika: mannu

Viren; mannu ankhein khol.

Virat: bhai app manvi ko le kar gari mein ajaya.

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In the hospital

after a while

Jeevika: doctor manvi kasi he

doctor : we can't say anything know.

virat hears this and is broken he remember their conversation and thinks that she tripped because of the duppatta and he was the one who told her to wear the lehenga.

Virat stands infront of bhawangi's idol

Virat: please meri manuu ko thek kar dijye.

Viren: virat ro mat humeri mannu thik ho jayi gi chab hum char thik ha humeri mannu ko kuch nahi ho sakta.

Jeevika: doctor manvi ko hosh agya.

doc: mein ne kaha ap se ke hum patient bohot critical ha aur survival ke chance bohot less ha.

All the threesome are broken and only whisper coming out of virat's mouth.

virat: it's all my fault.

virat slowly takes his steps back and moves out of there.

will manvi be alright

how will virat punish himself.

what impact will this take on viren jeevika's life

what will manvi's reaction be if she opens her eyes and doesn't see virat

and how will this all affect their relation.

keep thinking till the next update.

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JESMY

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WOW...
TWIST IN THE STORY. VERY NICE UPDATE👏👏👏

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Wao Very Nicely and Thoughtfully Written

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Wow...~! twist in the story...nice waiting for the next..:)

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Chapter 15

Vanshika: Doctor who is my child.

Doc: SHe has lost a lot of blood among you all does anyone have O negative blood.

Jeevika: doctor me, virat, manu and viren all have the same blood group so you take it from us, kuyn viren(turns behind to see himm and viren nods his head), kuyn virat(she doesn't get any response she goes near bhagwanji's idol but doesn't find him their.) Viren where is virat.

Viren: she was here a while ago.

jeevika breaks on the floor crying.

Jeevika: first mannu is in this condition and now we don't know where is virat.

Viren: jeevika I know where he can be, jeevika stay strong i"ll be back.

Jeevika: viren why this always happens with us.

Viren: no jeeevika nothing will happen.

Viren goes out to find virat

viren thinking tro himself: virat yeh toh humare phela accident ki jagha par gya hoga kuyn ke woh amar papa aur amrita maa ke bahut close tha (amar and amrita are jeeman's parents).

He goes to that place and sees virats car over there he parks his car near by and gets out of his car and starts screaming virat's name. after getting no response he runs into the jungle with the aim of finding virat, but has no luck, suddenly he spots something it's virat's key chain that manvi had gifted him, he goes more further down and sees someone crying in pain on their knees holding the side of their head. It was looking like that person was trying to give himself pain. viren went closer and was shocked to see virat his head was bleeding very badly viren went on his knees and hugged his brother.

Virat hugs viren very tightly.

virat: bhai manvi iii...sss i...nn th...is cooo...nnnddd...itiionn beeccauussee oo..ff m..ee.

viren wipes his tears.

Viren: first stop crying and listen to me nothing will happen to our mannu she will be alright lekin jaab woh ankhein kholagei and won't find both of us near her she will be very sad i know my little sis and one more think it wasn't your fault.ab chalo.

and pulls him in the whole way virat was crying saying sorry to viren for giving him tension and tears were running down viren's cheeks because he was very shattered seeing his little sis on that hospital bed and when he found virat missing he prayed to god every single second up till know to keep him safe. they reach the hospital and run upstairs jeevika comes to them running viren virat mannu ko hosh agya all three of them go running to manvi's room.

manvi: di, bhai, virat.

virat,jeevika,viren: mannu

all of them hug her.

After few days it's virman and virika's mehndi

jeevika

manvi

both came down looking like princess.

that's all for today I know it's small.

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Awesome ... Foresome...
Plz continue soon...

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Small but nice update...Waiting for the next:)

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Chapter 16

The mehndi rasam started Everyone in the house was very happy. The whole rasam went on very smoothly.

Manvi's room

Jeevika was sitting on the bed with manvi.

Jeevika: What happened mannu why do you look so tensed.

Manvi didn't answer she was lost in some other world. Jeevika again asked her she still didn't respond. This time jeevika shrugged her shoulders. Manvi got out from her thoughts.

Manvi: What happened di.

Jeevika: Mannu I am asking you something, what are you thinking.

Manvi: Nothing

Jeevika: now you will lie to me.

Manvi: di since I have come home from the hospital virat seems very distant from me.

Jeevika: Mannu you are only imagining.

Manvi again went in her thoughts the feeling of virat being away from her hurts her a lot.

Jeevika: Mannu go to sleep I am going in my room.

Jeevika did not go into her room but to virens

Viren: how sweet you came to my room.

Jeevika: Viren I am serious.

Viren: What's the matter

Tells him the whole story

Viren: I know jeevika why virat is doing that, he blames himself for manvi falling from the stairs.

Jeevika: Viren we need to clear things between them.

Viren: Idea.

Viren explains jeevika everything.

According to the plan jeevika brought virat to manvi's room saying that she and viren would come.

Virens room

Jeevika: you think everything will be back to normal.

Viren: Jeevika do you have any doubt on that, they love each other so much, trust each other so much not only them nothing can keep all for us apart for very long. right

Jeevika: Right

Viren: Waise don't you think I need a reward to think for this plan.

Jeevika: let me think no.

Viren: Please making puppy dog face.

Jeevika brings her lips close to viren and kisses passionately, they break the kiss after few minutes.

Viren: aur goodnight kiss.

Jeevika goes near viren's cheek and kisses it.

Manvi's room

Manvi saw virat entering, she ran from her bed and hugged him. Virat also hugged her.

Manvi: Why are you so distant virat, tell me na, mujhse ghussa ho.

Virat: No manvi not at all.

Manvi: then what's the matter.

Virat: Manvi that day you feel of the stairs because of me if I hadn't choice that lehenga for you your leg might have not tripped.

Manvi: Virat what happened wasn't your fault, please baby don't blame yourself and promise me you will never think about this.

Virat: promise

Virat pulls manvi into a paaionate kiss and manvi also starts responding equally after a few minutes they break the kiss, Virat kisses manvi's forhead and cheeks.

Viren room

Virika: I love you

Manvi's room

Virman: I love you

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