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Posted: 12 years ago

#971

Originally posted by: dqno1
Yeh lo mere bhoots so gaye 😕

Main jaging abhi toh 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#972

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

I Lub You 🤗

I lub u 2 Gundi...

Mari ke liye comment type kar rahi thi... is liye time laga...

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Soye nahin. Thodi der baad aati hoon.

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This update had so many small tableaus in it... For an update without any love scenes in it, I could feel the love in so much here...little vignettes that shows various bonds in effective Mari style..

Ayush Anaya and Geet on the bus, finding bad news about Maan's mom and immediately forming a cordon of support around Maan... Some of the awkwardness that lingers among new friends dissipates with the anxiety surrounding their friend, finding ways to help in the fastest way possible.

Then another with rushing home and finding Maan's mother alright. I confess I loved the way you wrote that. I could sense the relief he felt in his heart.

Love of neighbors and friends coming out to help and nurture, the finest of human qualities...

The new person in each brother's life and their judging them in their own brotherly fashion was written with just the right touch of boy behavior.

Anaya finally coming out to Geet about her fear of revealing her own feelings about Ayush

Geet getting resolution of the place Anaya had in Maan's life. I liked the way she asked it. That was so much Mari-ish...😆

The piece-de-resistance, the declaration, again true Mari style... the relief in him and happiness of having a name to this relationship... friends...❤️

You took me on a roller coaster ride and all is well in the world when it ended.

I had read it yesterday on the train itself but wanted to org my thougts to put it in a decent comment

Thanks for updating.. I loved it...🤗

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago