|| MG FF: Guns And Roses ||~Chp.1 pg 10~ - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Updating!😎 gk aap kahan ho 😉 aapka demand aa raha hai 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Happy holi to all 🤗 have a colourful holi 😃
P.S: Belated for you guys 😉 we are having holi today in our place 😆
hehe wrote some lines for Guns N Roses
Hope you like it 😉 hehe you guys might have already seen my "mann mai ladoo phooting" wala poem for ashy mumma(kawaii_geet / Aishwariya sweetu's) parineeta on fb hehehehe 🤣 and must have had laughed a lot (if u didnt check then do check it on fb :p :p u will have a laughter of a lifetime🤣 )
hehe this one is a serious one !
Do tell how is it 😳

Guns N Roses




Soft and Sweet, Fresh and alive
As a rose she bloomed,
Her dreams as naive and young as her
Life- a bed of roses, she beamed always.


Hard and Rough, Sleek and tough,
As a thorn, he bleeded
His dreams as mysterious and heartless as him,
Life- A war of guns to conquer, he deemed to be truth


Poles apart they were,
Yet they met as a rose with a thorn
He made her bleed, She turned him soft.
As a Rose tainted with a Gun
Who won was still undecided;
It was a war of love
Yet to be fought, Yet to be deciphered
Yet to experience the truimph amongst the
Guns and Roses


How's it? *fingers crossed*
Love
Marsie☺️
Edited by Miss.Mars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter One:
She is back!


"I saw HER with them''!" He spoke as he saw his hold loosening. He walked away with a forlorn look.

HE took out the rose'. "Just that our positions are exchanged now?????"
Just then Rehman came by running, "Boss they are still here!"

No sooner had those words escaped from his mouth than He ran towards the backyard gate.

'May be he could catch a glimpse of her' He couldn't believe what he saw.

He stood there shocked.

Her attire was changed.

There was a cold look on her face, devoid of any emotion.

But her attire or her face wasn't the things which shocked him but she being all flesh and blood, she being alive.

'Oh how relieved he was!'

He was perhaps already flying over the moon.

"She is alive! SHE IS ALIVE!" He went on jumping and screaming.

"Yes She is Maan! Go get her!" Aunt Bella spoke calming him down.

All were astonished, they were witnessing not the Boss Maan Singh Khurana but only the Maan, the way he was with Geet!

Just then they heard a gunshot. All of them rushed out of the gate leaving old Aunt Bella alone in the backyard.

She was beaming!

She was happy!

Her baby was alive!

Happy tears rolled down her dry sunken cheeks.

Before Maan could reach out to her, Rehman pulled him back.

Some guy aimed at Susie, daughter of Uncle Khanna.

She pushed his hand up as the bullet shot in the air.

"Wasting bullets isn't required here! Let's move!" She bit out at the face of that guy.

All of them, her along with five other guys whose faces were covered moved towards jeep.

Maan was panicking. She was going away!

He wanted to meet her. He wanted to take her away, away from these cruel people.

He could clearly see how those guys' lustful gaze roamed over her.

He hated it but couldn't stop her as he was held back by Rehman.

Maan was in no state to act immediately.

Rehman immediately called up someone,"Find the details of XX-YY-zzz jeep as fast as possible! He is waiting!"

Only his mention was enough to give anyone shivers just that those foolish guys didn't know that he was alive.


The jeep zoomed off.

****

"Mmm It smells really nice'' Bossy has made it Right?" Aunt Bella winked at Rehman who smiled and winked back at her.

"Really sulking'.." Rehman whispered.

"Hmmm I understand'." Aunt Bella whispered back.

"But mood is bit okay now after preparing your order'." Rehman smiled.

"Before your order'." Rahul dreaded remembering THE BOSS.

"Come on boys keep on doing the push ups, just because we are away from it we shouldn't let lose it Right?" He said rolling his eyes tensed over something else.

"Yes Boss" Came the reply from his boys.

"Rahul! Come to the Underground room!" He ordered something which Rahul dreaded.

Perhaps Boss had seen him not doing his task properly. ' Oh Fish! '

Rahul dreaded the underground room so much.

The Underground Room was specially constructed under strict vigillance of the Boss just below the flower shop.

Boss had tried to recompose himself after he lost too much than he gained. He was looking for something and then it was her as always. The cause of his distress was her loss and the remedy was her flower shop.

Then began his expedition to reconstruct the flower shop, recreate her memories and hence recompose himself.

Yet he failed to kill his inner instinct to turn into what he was earlier.

It was then that he constructed the UG room.
A room to hide all equipments, all their guns, bullets.

It was the ground where he wanted them to be their ownself what they were earlier.

He knew their enemy still was around.

The murderer that he was!

Boss wanted them to be alert and trained to face him.

The great loss that they had suffered!

The loss of their status, money, livelihood and moreover their identity and Boss !

He lost something unimaginable, irreparable, irrecoverable! He lost more than what he gained! His mentor! His love!

Within these five years Boss had finally tamed his animal killer instinct and it was one of such days when he couldn't control it that he resorted to the room .

And so Rahul dreaded it.

Yet he perfectly knew the reason!

It was five years back the same day when he lost her! He lost everything!

Since then he has been counting upon his enemy!

A Revenge that could never be imagined!
To take back with full interest what was rightfully his and was deceitfully snatched!!!


Rahul meekly stepped inside the room tiptoeing.
"Rahul!" A voice echoed and the weak hearted guy that he was, perfectly knew to whom the voice could belong to!

"Y.. Yesss!" He almost whispered.


"You know how much I hate imposters, cheaters!" And a bullet whizzed past just inches away from his ear.

Rahul finally noticed the revolver in Boss' hand and he shivered.

Boss had trained the object on him.

Not exactly at him but at the board behind him.

He was about to move away when the voice came,

"Stand still!"

Precap: Disguised😛 😉

Did I stop at the right time?????😆
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Love

Marsie 😳
Edited by Miss.Mars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
This update is specially dedicated to my gk 🤗
after all unki demand thi na 😉 so

HAPPY BIRTHDAY GK!

Wish gk reachsky2011(Prafulla) here


Hey hey there's "ek aur 28th march" bday gal

HAPPY BIRTHDAY SONA DI


Wish sona di sona-rai(sona) here

Love

Marsie😳
Edited by Miss.Mars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: .bloom.


Wow !! lovely start dear 👍🏼 pls cont sn & ll be waiting 😊

awww love ya 😳 am glad u liked it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserving Pe Reserving ??? 🤣


yeh kya chakkar ??? 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

kyu 😲 i am taking so much pain that too much earlier than my time otherwise page 20 se pehle toh no update 😛 Soch rai thi 😆 but GK ITNA CHOTA COMMENT 🥺 nai bella coming to take what she had ordered for, and maan n geet you will know in the next part 😃 love u gk and haan aapka demand coming 😉

kyun ki u hadn't started with my work na isliye...
me inactive so chota comments 😉
wahi tho order
luv u too Alien 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Itna hi hai ya... u r still updating...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Font thoda zyaada bada hogaya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: reachsky2011

kyun ki u hadn't started with my work na isliye...
me inactive so chota comments 😉
wahi tho order
luv u too Alien 😆

nai chota comment toh phir chota update hi milega 😆
luv u too gk😛

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