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Posted: 12 years ago
well l have comment on all parts but l read it again and thought it was very lovely and nice update. arnav you do have feelings for khushi, just confess it, by way you have come to see khushi and looked at her, it just shows you do have feelings for her and khushi give arnav a chance. l know it is very hard but still gave him a chance...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


chapter fifteen

part A:

Arnav and Arjun looked at each other and seeing the condition..they decided to agree to Arohi's indication.

Arjun noticed the smile and a tinkle on his eyes played.

It was not unnoticed by Arnav. But he pretended as if he had not seen anything..

Arnav and Arjun came out of the cabin.

Arnav: why the hell did you not let me say the truth ?

Arjun: what truth?

Arnav: that you brought here and not me?

Arjun: it was absolutely unnecessary.

Arnav: now when Dr. Arohi will tell..she wil think me cheap again.

Arjun: that is why I stopped you.

Arnav: what the? For creating more problems?

Arjun: noo..

Arnav: then??

Arjun: let me complete at least..then shout even more than Ms. Gupta.

Arnav cooled down.

Arjun: I told Arohi that you brought here..and downstairs you were performing some formalities so I brought that girl here.

Arnav: that GIRL?? She is Khushi..Khushi Gupta.

Arjun: okay..you are getting hyper..well I don't want to create any more misunderstanding with my Arohi..to avoid the complication..I told Arohi this petty lie.

Arnav: so this lie was for sake of YOUR Arohi?

Arjun: your?? I just told Arohi..where is the point "your" is coming?

Arnav: nothing..hmm.

Arjun: there is nothing still now as such where you can say..umm..

Arnav: no explanations..thank you..I derived from what I saw..after all I am your brother.

Arjun was just awestruck..

Arjun's POV

Did Arnav himself said these words???

He called me brother??

Is it possible??

Was this magic??

Reality ??

Illusion ??

Dream ???

Is everything not just a delusion??

I don't know what to do..what to think and what to say..

I am falling for Arohi..

Then Arnav asks for help..

Arnav not flirting with Khushi

Not touching her in spite of spending a whole night with her..

He advises me..regarding my life'LOVE??

Then he himself is admiring Khushi..

The entry of these two girls in our lives is turning upside down..

After both of our fathers died..we started hating love-life-relations and everything related with heart and feelings.

And now we are re-uniting..

Love is visiting us..

Life is giving another opportunity for revival..

Relations are inviting us..

Old relations again growing back..

New relations sprouting..

And everything is again colourful and happy..

If it is inviting us..why won't I accept it..??

I should accept and go with the flow..

Don't know about Arnav'

He will need time more than I do'

But I am feeling better at the thought that he feels that I am not guilty or was my father for uncle's death.

May be Arnav will return now to chachi..

Or too early to predict??

Arnav saw Arjun thoughtful'he didn't disturb him.

Arnav understood that his inner feelings is coming out'

He called himself as Arjun's brother..

The truth which he had denied..which he had strangled whenever the thought had come before..

But he tried to strangle the feelings once more..today'

But he can't be successful completely'

Half-soul he disagreed..

Something else was happening some where else.


next update you will see the girls...the girl gang,...and Khushi will come to know where she is going to stay and her reactions !!!

and also you will know about the missing picture..


and...

and...

nothing more...

I have deleted a hell lot of my buddies...and the number has straight fallen down from 213 to 139..so beware of it...

and for future pms do buddy me



and GOOD FRIDAY to my dear buddies

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part B:

Where as...in the cabin.

After Arohi distributed her free smiles to Arjun, she tried to calm down the situation.

Arohi: Sir, please leave the patient alone, so much noise can affect her health and we won't be responsible if she falls sick again.

Shashi Gupta left to avoid any damage, how strong he may be, but he was very protective towards his youngest and only surviving child.

Arohi: Hi, I am Dr. Arohi Sharma..and I am attending you.

Khushi: hi, doc.

Arohi: how are feeling now?

Khushi: fine.. have they gone? They were like magnets, ditto..copy-paste case!

Arohi: copy-paste? Nice example. Well, this magnet thing happens between them rarely. You got a rare sight.

Khushi: hey, you know them?

Arohi: whom? (and she blushed..thinking that Khushi might have seen her smiling at Arjun)

Khushi: both of them. I mean Arnav..

Arohi: I know Mr. Raizada as Aradhana is my friend. How come you know him so well to call by his name?

Khushi: you didn't let me complete..which I dislike..well let it be. Well Aradhana is also a friend of mine. Well I didn't tell you my name only.. I am..Khu

Arohi: Khushi Gupta. Daughter of Shashi Gupta. You and Aradhana became friends at a wedding party'sorry to interrupt..but can't stop myself.

Khushi: whoa..seems like you had done a research.

Arohi: nope..If someone has a friend like Aradhana..none needs anyone or anything else.

Khushi: yep..she is a chatterbox. Well very lively. She reminds me of my Di.

Arohi: you have a sister? Anna never told me about it.

Khushi: I never told her about my family. Actually I never shared with anybody till date.

Arohi: if you don't want you don't need to tell me. I respect your privacy.

Khushi: yeah. Thanks. Hey, why did you tell that was a rare sight?

Arohi: because Arnav bhaiyya and he always fight on some or the other issues.

Khushi: he means?

Khushi said that deliberately as Arohi was blushing.

Arohi: ohh..Mr. Malik.

Khushi: ohh the one you gave a sweet smile?

Arohi: yep..noo..ya..no..

Khushi: ok..I understood.

Arohi: what?

Khushi: you like Mr. Malik.

Arohi: noo..noo..I don't love Arjun..

Khushi: I never said you love..well may be..I don't know.. when one loves and cannot like'and she smirked.

Arohi felt like..more than Arjun this time Khushi was more of a copy-paste case..the way she smirked. Only Arnav Singh Raizada does so..

This convo was overheard..and she smiled. She thought of informing Aradhana as soon as possible. But she didn't know that Aradhana was already aware of that.

She entered the cabin.


Who is she referred to?

any Guesses??


hint: only girls !!!

in next part...something about NK ! hope you got the clue ??

sorry for the length aquagal..!! can't let be longer than this !!

MAYBE SOMETIME AT SOME MAHA-UPDATE


Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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part C:

Arohi: Di..you?

Anjali: yeah..visiting hours??


Arohi: not for that.

Anjali: ohh..arre, don't worry. I came to take Khushi ji.

Khushi: me..where? Madam I don't know you..but you know me..I am deadly puzzled.

Anjali: it's ok..Khushi ji. See Arohi, she is also confused. Let me explain. Your father has some very urgent work and he is leaving today alone. But you are not that well enough and he is in a dilemma. So, Aradhana thought of a solution and asked me to take you home. You will live with me until your father returns.

Khushi: ohh..so you are Aradhana's relative? Glad to talk with you..and yes, I will like to stay with you Anjali Di rather than staying alone in home or at hospital. No offence doc.

Anjali: you can also call by my name or only Di.

Khushi: ok..I would like calling Di itself.

Khushi thought Anjali is some cousin of Aradhana..and thought she will be living with Anjali. But she had overlooked the fact that Anjali is also Arnav's sister and she and Arnav will be living under the same roof and her oath was going to be reverse..!! which she never had dreamt in a nightmare also !

Anjali was smart enough to understand that Khushi was short-tempered and a woman of principles..with some family disturbances. With that she also derived..that Khushi was a sweet girl and had a warm and loving heart within a hard crust.

Meanwhile Aradhana arrived in the new trio and saw Anjali talking with Khushi and Arohi is lost somewhere. Thought Arohi was physically present here..but her mind was flying somewhere else. She thought of making her embarrass.

Aradhana entered.

Aradhana: with whom are you now, Arohiiieee?

Arohi: Arj.. what? What do you mean by that?

Khushi was engrossed in talking with Anjali. She liked her very much..as she reminded her a lot of her eldest sister Khusboo. She was a school kid when Khusboo went missing. And later after many futile searches she came to know from her father that she was dead.

Khushi: Hey, when did you come? Ms. Chatterbox.

Anna: nice name for me..Ms. Happy.

Arohi: happy?



Anjali: arre, she literally translated her name. hope you don't mind Khushi..my lil sis is a total whacko.

Khushi: I don't have any doubt di.

Arohi: Di you can take her home after completing the formalities.

Anjali: let Chotte do that.

Khushi: Chotte? Who's that?

Anjali: you don't know him?

Aradhana panicked.

Aradhana: c'mon we are getting late..let's go home. Khushi let that be a surprise for you to know whose nickname is Chotte.

Anjali: why such stupid acts? Chotte is A

Khushi: no, Di..let that be a surprise if Anna wants to. I would be highly delighted to know the kid.

She didn't have the slightest inkling that it was Arnav Singh Raizada.

Aradhana's POV

Hai Devi Maiyya..help. Hope whatever anger Khushi will burst..may that be on bhaiyya only. He has the power to absorb her temper!! And what did she said? Kid? Yeah, bhaiyya is a kid..with a slight difference..a LARGE SIZE..no EXTRA LARGE kid !!

God knows how others will react seeing bhaiyya and Khushi fighting..cause I am damn sure..Khushi will be hysterical knowing that chotte is no othet than her arrogant Arnav Singh Raizada.

Devi Maiyya please be at my side.

****

NK looked at it.

NK's POV

How did Nannav got this pic? If he comes to know about all this, we all will be in big trouble. I should talk to her now. But I think she will panic. I must let know Ravin first. I can't let this matter left loose. Once it has happened and we are still under the consequences..this only happens when we are no more bound to emotions at all or a damn servant to emotions..both are very harmful.

NK took the picture and put it in his wallet.

He dialled Ravin's number.

But he disconnected before the call could get started.

He asked the nurse to be careful and not let anyone know about the situation.

Nk's POV

I am in a dilemma now. Should I call Ravin and inform him everything??

Or should I not hide anything from Nannav now, already when he has come to know about Lavanya.

He will try by all means to find out the reason behind my lies and Lavanya's and Amrita's..no..no..

If Amrita comes to know Lavanya is still alive..no..no I can't let that happen...

****


Khushi: hello?? What the hell are you lost now? Arohi called you thrice.. Di called you..

Aradhana: thrice or twice?

Khushi: no..once.

Aradhana: and you?

Khushi: I came direct here to interrupt your day dreams. I knew you won't able to hear!

By the way..what were you thinking?

Aradhana: about you only.

Khushi: me? Is it so? Hmm..

Aradhana didn't tell anything and left there. She had more missions to fulfil.

She texted Arohi.

Hey, whr z ur bro?

(hey, where is your brother?)

Arohi responded instantly

Y?

(why?)

Aradhana messaged back

Hd he lft 4 Sntivn?

(had he left for Shantivan?)

Arohi texted

Ya. Tld as infrmd. R u sure abt bsktbl mtch?

(yeah. Told him as you had asked to inform him. Are you sure about the basketball match?)

Aradhana answered

Ya. Hp so. Dt z d nly optn..4 nw!

(yeah. Hope so. That is the only option for now)

Arohi responded with a bollywood example

Ya. U n ur ideas. Wel. Filmi ideas can nvr b gvn a miss.

(yeah. You and your ideas. Well for now. Bollywood films and ideas cannot be missed)

Aradhana ended their sms conversation with this message

Ya. MISSION KKHH

(yeah. MISSION KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI)

N.B.- those who don't know what is Kuch Kuch Hota Hai.

Here is the link for details. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kuch_Kuch_Hota_Hai

So what's next?

and hope the length is good and fine !!!

and please check page 103
an important note for them those who want to help me with casting
others please ignore
and please like and comment...

I will not update the next chapter until I get atleast 60 likes..my buddylist has now 130 friends...I am not asking for even 50 %
hope you will read, like and comment.

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Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res part a


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awww...

lovely brotherly part...

arnie started accepting arju as brother...

arju shocked for the fact...

arjun started to accept his feelings for arohi...

nice part

waiting for next part f kushis reaction...
Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res part b

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un res

arohi-khushi going to be friends not bad...gud step 😉

ha ha ha khushi...u cracked me.."magnet...copy-paste ditto.." lols 😆

ha ha ha Arohi...nice compliment for Aradhana 👍🏼

i think aradhana is the she refered...wild guess😳
Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res part c

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omg full of girly parts


oh no...it was anji who heard it 😆

anna so smart...

khushi fall for anji trapp...

(the fun awaiting wen chotte secret reveals)

now nk...wht he upto...

who amrita...?

whts his relation with lavanya?

who ravin...?

comfused
Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Um there..i vl comment as soon as i cmplete reading ...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago



i guess i'l hav to start stalking!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update dear

awww first arjun sed HIS arohi ehehehhe datz super coool

n arnav spoke abt brother omg thats super awesome soo happy for them

ja their father were in a way of saying the cause of their separation their fight and now these two angels will be the cause of their reunite :D

super great

now cant wait for the gurls gang ehehehhe

n kushis reaction ahahah pooor u darling bt u gna have to accept

hmmm n also cant wait to knw abt the misisng pic

lovely update dear
thanks
gemi


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