virman ff PYAR MEIN KABHI KABHI #2 chap 27 pg 135 - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago
link to the previous chapter
CHAPTER 21
manvi was standing lost in her thoughts when a pair of hands circled around her waist...
viren : i love you...
manvi : i love you too...
viren : manna u have lost weight...
manvi : what...??
viren : yeah your tiny slim waist has toned down baby... it has become more slim...
manvi : accha hai na...
viren : nahi... kuch kam karne ki jaroorat nahi hai... jo jaisa hai theek hai... ek dum mast...
manvi : chhii... kitne besharam ho gaye ho tum... (she slapped his hand which was around her waist)
viren : arrey tum meri hone wali biwi ho... mujhe haq hai...
manvi : toh hone wale pati dev ji... apki koi aur specification bhi hai kya...???
viren : hmmm... no... its okk for the time being...
manvi turned around and hugged him. viren hugged her even more closely and stroked her hair.
viren : you missed me so much manna...???
manvi : hmmm...
viren : haaye... tum toh mujhe maar hi dalogi...
manvi : viren tumhe kuch hone se pehle main hi marr jaun...
viren : haaye... itni filmy baatein kyun kar rahi ho meri madhubala...
manvi : filmy nahi hai... pyaar karti hai hoon main tumse...
viren : main bhi... waise ek baat bolun...??
manvi : hmm...
viren : manvi maine suna hai, shaadi ke kareeb aate aate ladkiyan aksar apne weight ko leke obessed ho jati hain...??
manvi : hmmm...
viren : but u dnt have to worry about anything manna... i want you exactly the way you are... naa jyada naa kaam... just the way you are...
manvi : will you love me like this after marriage also...??
viren : no... i would love even more...
manvi : and what if i make a mistake or something, will you scold me for that...???
viren : naah... i will cover it uo for you...
manvi : promise...???
viren : pakka promise...
manvi : by the way what is happening at home thsee days...??
viren : preparations for the cricket IPL... ofcourse they are all day preparaing for your welcome... wedding preparations have speeded up and badi maa is very happy from all this... she is all day busy in making the arrangements and making sure that everything goes well. and u know what she even asked me to final our honeymoon destination soon, so that she could book the tickets.
manvi donno why but she became uncomfortable on hearing the word honeymoon and broke the hug.
viren : dnt tell me your blushing... cmon manna...
manvi : hmm...
viren : accha tell me where do you wanna go...??? london, paris, switzerland, australia, miami, mauritious...
manvi : anywhere u wish like...
viren : oh cmon... it will be your call... tell me na manna...
manvi : hmm... miami...
viren : woww... thats cool beaches n babes... that would be awesome... so its dne...
manvi : beaches n babes... no we arent going to miami... hmm... lets go for switzerland...
viren : as you say... but whats the problem in miami... its a cool place...
manvi : no... those hot babes would distract you n i cant tolerate you looking at anybody else other than me...
viren : and what if i find anyother girl more attractive than you...???
manvi : i will kill there n then... you are mine viren... only n only mine...
viren : thats what i wanted to hear... i am all yours... its sounds sooo great... and remember manvi belongs to viren... samjhi meri hone wali dharampatni...
manvi smiled and nodded in positive...
viren : now come i will drop you home...
manvi : but i have my car...
viren : lets spend time together before marriage... what if after marriage we dont get time together...???
manvi : no wonder thats why you are the best lawyer of chandigarh... you know how to play with words...
viren : shall we...??
manvi : yes... but my car...??
viren : i will tell the driver to drop it at your place... now happy...???
manvi : yeah...
after a cup of coffee, viren and manvi reached chaudhary house.
manvi : chalo... (lets go...)
viren : no... i think i shouldt go inside...
manvi : oh cmon viren... you are the future son in law of the house... jiju toh subah se yahan hai...
viren : tumhare jiju toh tope hain...
manvi : cmon... everybody would be happy to see you...
viren : okkk...
viren n manvi entered the house to be greeted by shaurya and a smirk on his face...
shaurya : had fun guys...??
viren : why are you jealous...??
manvi : we had fun jiju... thanks
shaurya : come my manvi... lets go inside... (forwarding his hand towards manvi)
viren : oh hello... she is mine... (pulling manvi towards him)
shaurya : i have the right on manvi first... she is my sister-in -law...
viren : exactly... she is your sister-in-law but she is my fiance... so i have more right...
manvi started laughing on seeing the two important men of her life fighting for her...
manvi : di has a first right on me guys... i am goingto di and you both carry on...
manvi went to her room and later viren n shaurya also bursted out laughing and hugged each other.
shaurya : you are most welcome mr. vadera, the to be son-in-law of chaudharys...
viren : thank you... waise tu shaadi mein mera aise welcome karne wala hai...
shaurya : woh toh surprise hai... abhi nahi bta sakta... (and winked at viren)
viren : ok no problem... cmon lets go to meet maya...
shaurya : maya ya manvi...??? i mean apni wali se itni bhi doori bardhast nahi hoti tujhse...
viren : just see who is talking...
shaurya : come buddy, lets go... hum dono hi ye chaudhary sisters ke maare hai...
viren : yeah...
after some time
in manya room
maya : so mere hone jiju... honeymoon pe kahan jaa rahe ho...???
viren : ask your loving sister saali sahiba...
manvi : switzerland n thats final...
viren : but miama is a good place... isnt it shaurya...???
shaurya : yeah dude... thats fab...
viren : but manvi doesnt want to go there...
maya : but why mannu...???
manvi : there are beaches over there n there would be hot chicks as well...
maya : oh yeah... so miami is cancelled...
shaurya : soul sisters...
viren : hehe...
beeji : arrey viren tum yahan...???
viren : namaste beeji... woh main...
beeji : aapka hi ghar hai beta ji...
viren : ji beeji... ab main chalta hoon...
beeji : nahi nahi... how can you go without having tea...??
viren : beeji actually i have an important meeting at 8 today... i have to rush...
beeji : okk...
viren : bye guys...
and viren left from there.
scene shifts
virat was sitting on the bonnet of the car and was drinking endlessly. he was unable to digest whatever happened today. his manvi left him just because of a mere misunderstanding. if this was the only thing, he would have forgiven manvi there n then but now after knowing the truth he just coouldnt forgive manvi. he was hurt knowing the fact that manvi aborted his child... no she killed his first child. he loved manvi and now coming in terms with the hatred manvi felt towards him, made virat burn from within and it did hurt his soul as well. it all made him feel low of himself and feel guilty that he never gave manvi what she deserved. he never told manvi what he felt for her, rather he couldnt even make manvi believe him. the fact that manvi didnt believed him, made virat broken from inside and shattered into pieces. he always thought manvi loved him more than anything in the damn world and would believe him no matter what. he was totally shattered now with no hope left in his heart.
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PMS WILL BE SENT LATER...WISH U ALL A VERY HAPPY HOLI IN ADVANCE...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting...i know u not do partial with any characters, thats why i like ur writings
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
unres
amazing update naina ⭐️👏
viren aur manvi moments were reallyy cute ..
matlab viren really loves her 😊
the honeymoon discussion was cute 😉
the jiju and going to be hubby fight was fun 😛


bechara virat i thought he hates her but the fact being he hates himself ...
and punishing himself for that 😭

aage hoga kya ...wanna know fasttt
update soon
and pm ke liye thanx alott 😊
Edited by kulsum_virman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
its just awesome update. loved viren and manvi conversation...and viren like manvi structure...and i want manvi tell all the truth to viren before marriage, he has all rights to know the truth...honeymoon plan for switzerland good, virat thinking he lost everything...its getting excite day by day...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaarrr plzzz makr manvi realize that she still loves virat nd nobody else plzzz. i hope virat make her jealous or do something but i know that now he really hates manvi plzzz do something . update next soon waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aamazing update dear..the possessivness ong...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u so much 4 Pm..
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it was awesome...
Plz continu soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Thank u so much 4 Pm..
Nd
it was awesome...
Plz continu soon...

ur most welcome khushi...
n thanks for liking... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was simply awesome...loved manvi n vires convo...thats so lovely dovely...shaurya n virens bond n masti was so adorable...felt bad for virat...so so so sad...he actually lost everything...i m scear, how will he handle this pain?...cont soon naina
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Posted: 13 years ago
nainaaa missed so many of your updates!!!!now m rushing to read them.❤️

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