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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
okay people, it is official. I am heading out for an easter trip so, no more updates until next week and this time I will stick to my words (hopefully)
this means one last chapter before I go :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Heaven on Earth?

She dodged several bullets with the tipsy security guards as she entered the caravan of Mumbaikar film makers settled in the heart of the cold desert. Not a light was in sight, except an occasional firefly hovering in the night sky. She searched through tents and vanity vans to find a safe house for the night. Then, it hit her! The meditation room should be empty. She tiptoed in to the serenity that awaited her. The walls contained silence loud as a scream, just what she needed to recover. She washed away the fresh blood and the stale pus of her wounds in the artificial waterfall.

A rectangular trunk under the seating bed made for a perfect hideout to accommodate her petite frame. There she lay, covered in wash clothes and yoga mats, hoping no one would find her till dusk.

And she was right. As the sun rose from the far east, someone curious uncovered her camouflage.

"Madhubala, what are you doing here?"

She did not wish to end her sweet slumber so, a slight hand motion requested the intruder to leave. He complied, RK let Madhu rest up on her own.

She woke up on cushioned bedding, wrapped in a fur blanket. Was she dead and allowed entry in heaven? There was white everywhere she looked and a prince with grey eyes.

"How are you feeling?" his Godly voice bestowed the honour of speech upon her.

"Where am I?"

"Right where you decided to trespass in last night", he raised an eyebrow referring to her recent adventure.

"You bought my painting for $80,000. Why?"

"That is what came here to ask, really?"

He offered her a seemingly harmless drink which she refused, as expected. Her curiosity did not fade. Eventually, he spoke up.

"I don't believe in charity. I believe in business. Your $80,000 painting earned me a two film signing contract with the Chopras. Don't give yourself too much credit".

Madhubala unwrapped the layers of fabric covering her body. Her want pulled him closer. She crossed her heart and pressed her lips on to his. The force pulled him right down to her level. She clutched him in the tight hold of her chest. He lay underneath her, breathless and shocked, confused and amused. Her tongue explored the corners of his mouth, her lips whispering soft melodies to his. He was lost in her actions for a moment. RK recovered as the lack of a context dawned on him.

"Madhu, stop".

She did not listen. Her touch became more aggressive. Her unruly hands fighting his unruly hair. The desert sand glittering on her caramel skin, deposited on his.

"Madhu, please stop", he nudged her being as gentle as possible.

She loosened her hold, he managed to get up.

"Not like this Madhu. What happened?"

"You were so keen on saving me. I am here". She opened up her arms speaking sarcastically and truthfully, all at once.

What did you do? He didn't ask anything but the question was printed on his forehead in block letters.

"I didn't kill him. He will wake up in a few hours. This is what you wanted, me selling myself. I am doing it. So, take me away".

He paced across the van, trying to make sense of her hatred.

"I don't want your body, not like this. I cared for you because this is what humans are supposed to do, help each other. I just want you to not die at his hands. We can fly out to Mumbai today. I called a private jet two hours ago".

"I can't leave him", she frantically searched for her duppatta. "I have to go back. He will go crazy".

"What did you do wrong?" he yelled right in her ears, ruthless in his demeanour. "He is a real nice painter. A polite guy, the most well mannered guy I have met. So, what did you do to make him hit you? Can't be him. You must have been a bitch for him to act like this". He shook her hard until she fought back.

"I didn't do anything. He is the crazy one. He thinks I am his maid and you are siding with him? You are all the same". She freed herself from his arms and proceeded to exit.

"So, if he is that bad, why are you going back to him?"

His words stopped her in her tracks.

"I don't know", she turned around. "I don't know why I am enduring this. I don't know, okay? It's not my fault".

"That's right. It's not. I'll get you out of here and you can decide on how much you hate me later".

He pulled into an embrace with a cautious eye out for attacks. She buried her worries in his chest, contemplating her future plans.

Two weeks without me and he will come back to his senses. I will go back and tell him. He needs me and he will find out soon. We can be okay, can't we?

She asked a question she could not bring herself to answer. Could she be okay with Rishabh or, without him?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Owesome update dear 4 a min i was hw he changed.. He s realy smart.. Cant wait to read more.. Atleast madhu hit hm nd s out hope so
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Desire6

Owesome update dear 4 a min i was hw he changed.. He s realy smart.. Cant wait to read more.. Atleast madhu hit hm nd s out hope so

thanks. there is another chapter right above your head😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
gosh I hope she will be better without him.
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Posted: 12 years ago

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thanks. there is another chapter right above your head😆

yeah i saw d new update aftr i postd my comment... Dat was yet again an owesome update.. Though first was a bit confusd on hw madhu can kiss hm bt den as d story proceeded it drawn ... Waitn 4 next update to c what happens.. Happy journey n Happy Holi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg you! You are unbelievable! For a moment I actually thought he loves her. lmao Looks like I'm a big sucker for love too. I mean expecting love from a man like that. Oh thank God she ran away!

*Off to the next chapter*
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Prince with GREY EYES? =O It's not... errr nevermind. It's RK!!!! Right? I thought he has brown eyes. (He better not be Sultan or I'm going to run off too)

Oh, he has a Godly voice. That's my RK! ;)

Hmm another wonderful chapter. I'm waiting for Madhu's decision eagerly. Thanks for the PM's!
Have a safe journey! =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
two updates in a row !!👏
at first i thought that that jerk was really starting to love madhu but just then 🤢
instead of making him unconscious temporarily madhu should have knocked him out forever
but i don't understand madhu, she is still hoping for things to become right ??
and finally my prince charming with gray eyes 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woahhh ! Loved the update !

I like RK :P bt I hate Rishabh !! Its done !!

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