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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much for the love you showed for this SS of mine ! I'm glad you like it :)

This Is My Copy right Story ! There is NO relationship between OM Shanti OM and this story !

I hate OSO ! I just watched it cause of Deepika !

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ASR

Full name: Arnav Singh Raizada

A 25 year Old, Billionaire Business Tycoon of USA, Owner Of AR works as CEO in AR!

When He was 17th he had came to USA to study further! He is a Harvard Gold medalist, From Past 8 yrs he is living in USA.

But not anymore | Yup, He was going back to India, Going back to his mother land, The place which he hates the most

No not because of any kind of Economic, Political, Cultural etc reasons |

He hates India because of Those Dreams, Which he got since he was 9,

He hates India because of Those flash backs he got in day light

He hates India Because of those voices he hears

He hates India Because of that one particular Song which he could hear anytime of the day

He hates India because of that Pain and Shine which rose up in his birth mark

He hates India because of One Girl whose Face he never saw , Whom he has talked to, Who always came in his dream !

He still remembers that Night when it all started.

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He was in a strong sleep after his mother had told him a story of Dragon. Dreaming of all superman, spiderman was he excepting but instead of that came a girl in his dream,

A girl of 8 yrs, who was crying very badly facing her back to him but before he could see further there was horrible and terrible pain in his birth mark. He woke up sweating, The pain was increasing second by second

9 yr Old Arnav rushed off his bed to go to his parent's room, When His eyes landed on his room's Mirror.

What he saw was Shocking.

He went near the mirror and rubbed his eyes, No it wasn't a Dream, It was real, His Birthmark was shining, Shining Like a Sun of mid summers.

A tear escaped from lil Arnav's eyes, A tear of Fear. Arnav Touched his Birthmark and he was able to listen to cries as soon as he touched his birth mark , He closed his eyes and placed his hand on his ears to stop the Noise,

Finally When the Cries Noise stopped, He removed his hands from his ears and opened his eyes, Now if before he was afraid , Then Now he was scared

He wasn't in his room any more, he was not standing in front of His room's mirror any more

He was now standing in a big room, with white walls, he turned his face around to see where he was,

He was standing in between dead bodies, Lying on a bed and were covered with white sheet.

Scared what he was. He Walked fast to exit this horrible room , He was near the exit when he heard the same cries and this time louder than before, he looked around and found few people standing and crying, His feet on their own took him towards those people, reaching near the people, he still wasn't able to see anything, he moved a bit forward, When he saw one of the person turning and waking towards him.

Thinking the Person might help, Arnav tried to speak but before He could Speak the person passed

The Person passed THROUGH him, Shocked Arnav turned to see the person, who now was talking to a man standing in white coat, looking like a doctor,

Next thing he saw that both the men were coming towards him, and Passed Through him.

Arnav was too horrified to do any thing, when he heard the same crying voice saying

Mummy!

Papa

Then he saw that Few people were picking the two bodies around which the people were crying and taking it some where, That's when he saw the same back of 8 yr old girl who was crying,

Everything Stilled when the girl turned and her hazle eyes meet his chocolate brown eyes.

What Arnav Saw was getting horrible every second but when their eyes meet, he felt sound and safe and Happy,

He saw something coming out of the girl's body, Something which was a duplicate of her, Something of same age , same Height , same dress , Same eyes , same everything,

He then saw that Something same as the Girl walking towards him , stopping few steps away from him and forwarding her hand toward him to hold it.

Arnav had no idea what is happening but he only knew one thing that he had to hold her hand at any coast , so reaching her Arnav held her hand in his and hugged her!

The Girl cried in his arms, Her heart out.

After a while when the cries died , Arnav pulled away from the hug, and wipped away her tears and said

Lal hogyi !

The girl Frowned, and Arnav smiled and said

Naak , Tumahri Naak lal hogyi !

Saying so Arnav Kissed the Girl on her nose and the Girl Smiled, Then he saw the girl taking steps back and going back to the body of her own which was Still like Statue, sitting on the stool kept near the bed,

Next thing he saw was that the girl entered the body and everything disappeared, everything went black and Then he saw light seeping inn,

Things started to appear again, and Then He found himself standing in front of his Mirror.

****

" We'll soon be landing in Delhi's IGI airport, hope you all had a relaxing journey from USA to India Delhi , Do Travel again with us "

This announcement bought Arnav back from his thoughts.

He was Back to his mother land , Back to his India , Back to his Family and Back to The Dream Girl !

xxx


The Something in the Post Is Khushi's soul !


Love

Diva

Edited by babydevil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Loved the Update... Very Touching Beautiful Description...
babydevil thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: arshi_sunshine

Loved the Update... Very Touching Beautiful Description...


Thank you :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Awww!!!!
So lovely Kiddo!
Loved the update...
Let them meet ASAP! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Nice update - Can't wait for Arnav and Khushi to meet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Just read it..
It was a new concept..
Aarav n Khusbhu as Arnav n Khushi...after their punar janam..
Loved the first chapter..
The way Arnav's flashbacks was described..it was so touching..
Loved the update..
Continue soon n do PM me..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Oh wow! Beautifull!
ThankGod you have finally updated, otherwise i'd be dead because of all the Author's whose stories i m reading has seemed to refuse to ipdate even reply! *:'(*
Oky coming to story,
Amazing! 😊
The flashback was so so so... What to say, yeah, Superb!
Now please update soon with Khushi's POV of having Arnav's flashback! 😉
Why do i have a feeling that next chapter would be somethimg like 'She'! [:P[
Well whatever the title or story may be, update sooonnn! [:S] pleasee!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

wooww...

amazing ff...

beautiful concept..

loved it to the core...

cont. soon...

n do pm me when update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
I love reincarnation stories !!

With ur tadka its gonna rock :)

Teaser was fab :)

Going to read update :)
Edited by ..Paawani.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Finished first chapter !!

Awesome hai baby *thumbsup* :)

Waiting for Arshi meet ;)

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