Jaane dil mein kbse hai tu...- Maaneet Ff - Page 65

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Part 13

Maan : Daadi mujhe ye engagement nhi krni hai

Daadi :- "kya baat hai bte' achanak asa kya ho gya'

jo apne asa fasla le liya'.

Maan:

Daadi:- apne hume phle kyun nhi kaha'tb kyun nhi kaha.. Maan'..

Maan:-

Daadi:- Hum apse kuch puch rhe hai'.

Maan: Daadi' please aap itna stress mt lijiye'.

Mein aapko batana chahta tha

Pr aapki tabiyat

Daadi: maan ' jhoot mt kahiye'.

Aur aajka hi din mila aapko ye sb khne ka

Ek baar hmare baare mein na shi kmse km Handa Pariwaar ke baare mein to socha hota'. Wo sbko kya jwab denge' geet ka kya honga''.

Nhi

Aapko to bs '..

Maan: daaadi'..

He Screamed'..

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He came downstairs and goes towards daadimaa'and bent down ' touches her feet' but all I could see tears of happiness in her eyes'

Daadi : khush rhiye bte'..

Aaj hum bhut khush hai maan

Annie: oh ho meri Daadi'

Khush hai to ye aansu kyun

Daadi: pagli' ye toh khushi ke aansu hai

Maan aap kya soch rhe hai'

Maan: kuch nhi daadi

Annie: kh bhi do Bhai..

Maan: ab hume chalna chaiye

Annie: daadi'. Hume chalna chaiye

Bhai se ab aur intzaar nhi ho rha hai

Maan: Anniee

Annie: bhai Annie khehna ab km kriye

Geet khiye na

Maan: annie apni bakwas bnd kro

Aur chup chap chlo

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Rishabh: oye'..

Madhu: kya hai

Risabh: mujhe kya honga

Madhu: to mujhe bula kyun rha tha

Risabh: tujhe

He looks confused'''.

Risabh: maine kb bulaya

Madhu: abhi

Risabh : oh' maine tujhe nhi''..usse bulaya hai

He pointed some another one'

Risabh: hey kajal

Kajal: hey rishu

Madhu: iska naam rishu nhi Risabh hai

Aur tu chup chal mere sath

Ghar mein kitna kaam hai''.aur tu'yha idher udhar ki baaton pe dhyan de rha hai

She held his hand and drags him '.

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Rano stand near door and look towards geet''.mohinder placed his hand on her shoulder'

Mohinder: kya dekh rhi ho rano

Rano: bs yhi'.kitni jaldi betiya bdi ho jati hai''

Asa lagta hai'kal ki hi to baat thi''jb mein is ghar mein apne inhi hatho'.mein 'do nanhi jaano ko leke pravesh kiya tha

Aur aajka din hai'..inhi hatho se ek ko vidha krna hai''

Samay itni jaldi kyun bhit jata hai'..

Mohinder :- rano'' hmari betiyo ko aaj nhi to kal to jana hi honga na

Geet ko ek din hum sbse praya hona hi tha'''

Chlo ab aansu puchlo'' ydi geet ne tumhe dekh liya''.khi uski aankho mein bhi aansu na aajaaye,,'''..

She wipes her tears and again looks towards geet''.

Rano: kissi ki nazar na lage meri pari ko'..

Mohinder: nhi lagengi''

Both turn to going but her voice stop the both'.

Geet: maa' papa''.

Rano came near geet and kissed on her forehead''.

Rano: pari lag rhi hai meri beti..

She places a black dot behind her ear by her kajal'

Geet: maa ' koi pareshani hai'..

She caressed her face and said "nhi beta"

Geet: fir ye aansu

Rano: kaha hai aansu'..

Geet: maa aap kitne bhi aapne aansu chupa lo'..pr mujhe dikh hi jate hai''.

Mohinder: mein bhi sayad issi room mein ho''

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Maan(think) :- daadi kitni khush hai'..aur mein unhe sb btane jaa rha tha''..

Acha huya'. Shi waqt pe maine khud ko smbhal liya''..

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Flashback in

Daadi: annie hmare pass bhut hi km waqt hai''

Saari tyaari ho jani chaiye

Annie: daadi ' phle bhai se puch lena chaiye hume'.

Daadi: hum jante hai unhe''.jo baat wo khud smjh nhi paate'.khud kh nhi paate'.. hum sb smjh jaate hai'..

Unka dil kya chahta hai''unse phle hume pta lag jaata hai

Annie: I know daadimaa

Pr khi''

Daadi: thik hai'.. hum puch lenge

Annie: bhai aa gye''..

Bhai'

She held his hand and said "congrates bhai"

Maan: hmm

He lost in own world''. Not realize what's going on here'''

Annie: to bhai iska matlab aapko pata hai

Daadi: humne to kaha hi tha''.

Humare Maan ko geet bhut pasand hai

She cupped his face and said "I am so much happy today Maan"

Aapki shaadi ho rhi hai'''..

Maan : shaadi ?

Daadi: bte geet aapke liye bilkul perfect life partner hai''

Maan (whisper) :- geet

Maan: daadi maa mein wo' aapse'

Daadi: bte humne aapse bina puche'.. aapka rishta pakka kr diya''.

Khi aapko koi atraaz to nhi hai''..

He not able to meet her eyes'. How he says the truth'' but how he hide the truth'' in between all this his thoughts ''. His daadi fall down on floor''

Annie screamed daadimaa'..

Annie: bhai daadi''..

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Maan: doctor daadimaa ab kaisi hai

Doc: she is fine now''

Bs wo stress na le'''

Aapko to pata hai Mr. Khurana unhe Asthma ki problem hai'' unhe sayad kafi time se breathe lene mein bhi difficulty ho rhi thi'..and now high blood pressure'''.

Maine medicines prescribe kr di hai''..

Take care'''

Maan: hmm

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Annie: bhai sorry''..

Maan: annie'.. sshhh

Don't cry'''.

Annie: bhai daadimaa aaj to bhut khush thi''

Aur maine unki is khushi mein unki takleef dekhi hi nhi''..

Bhai''.

She hugged him tightly''.

Maan: annie daadimaa thik hai'''.

Rona bnd kr''.

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Daadi: bte hum thik hai

Maan: daadi aap apne dhyan kyun nhi rakhti hai''

Daadi: bte sorry

Maan: daadimaa please kuch bhi problem ho to aap mujhe ya annie se kaha kro

She tries to sit' but he stops her''

Maan: daadi' mein aapko apna dhyan rkhne ko kh rha hu''. Aur aap aaram krne ke bjaye''.

Daadi: maan bte'. Kuch dino mein shaadi hai''aur abhi toh tyaari bhi shuru nhi ki ''.

Maan: daadi '.. mujhe ye shaadi

Daadi: bte hum bhut khush hai aapke liye''

Maan: daadi' meri baat to suniye'.

Daadi: maan aap hmari fikr mt kijiye''. Kuch dino mein yha geet aa jayengi''..wo sb smbhal lengi'''

Fir aapko bhi hmari fikr krne ki jaroorat nhihongi''..

Hmari geet hongi na''..hmara dhyan rakhne ke liye'''

Maan: daadi''.

Geet se aapna pucha'. Wo is shaadi se

Daadi: dekha annie''. Aapne apne bhai ko

Abhi se geet ki itni fikr hai

Beta who khush hai''.

Annie: aur bhai aap

Maan(think):- kaise mna kru daadimaa ko

Unki tabiyat bhi thik nhi hai''. Unhe kaise btayu'. Mein kissi aur se'

Daadi: bte aap kuch khte kyun nhi

Aap khush to hai na

Maan (think) :- daadi ki umeed kaise todu''

Annie: daadi'

Bhai daadi'

Maan: annie jaldi se inhaler do

He placed pump to her mouth and press the button'.. And daadi take deep breath''.

Maan: daadi aap aaram kijiye''

Daadi: bte aapne jwab nhi diya

Maan: daadi mera jwab aap to janti hi hai

HA

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Due to break he comes out from his thoughts''..his flashback moments'''..

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Awsum update yar ek ques kya geet shadi se khush nai h coz maan ka toh pata h

so he agreed to this marriage because of dadi
parr aone saath saath kahin yeh kayi zindagi na tabah karr dein
so will he hate geet after being married
parr uski kya galti thi
uff this is getting so confusing i tell ya
cheers for pm
so he didnt tell dadi due to what happened
but does madhu really love maan or not