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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update dear 😊had tears in my eyes😭waiting for next part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
very awesome update...

hope geet and meher reaches on time..

cont soon..
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OMEG!!! JUst Amazing Update di...Loved it very much
So so PAinful n emotinaal...aww poor Maaneet felt bad for them😔
past scene were scary...gosh..i so much want to killed that bitch Sameera😡🤬
OMG OMG OMG!!!! Maan is in critical conditions😭.. hope geet ll reach to him n save her Maan
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eagerly waiting for next...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
sameera is such a bi***...she planed it al...
finally geet gained conscious bt maan still in danger...hope they reach himm on time...
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 29

Past in red

She is in coma.. His world shattered with the cruel truth tat his Mishti was in coma having a part of him in her. He died each moment with the doctor's words while everyone pour they heart with loud cries. His eyes searched for tat one soothing voice but he failed to hear it collapsing down on the floor unattended by any of them. They walked passed him reaching the door to their angel who was sleeping deep with their undying pain tat they had instilled in her though it was their fate and destiny but now they had been the sole reason for it.

His eyes opened and he was unaware tat he had been sleeping for more than two days while his heart ached feeling pain. His eyes roamed all over, his ears could hear the faint voices from outside. He slowly moved out gathering himself hearing the voice tat had his Mishti's name in it. His legs freeze while his heart stops hearing them say " Pata nahi.. wat the almighty had written in their life. Do din pehle it was Geet Maan Singh Khuranna who slipped into coma with a baby growing inside her and now the doctors gives the Khuranna and Handa family the worst news of Mr. Raj Khuranna being paralyzed for lifelong." His whole world shattered with his hand landing on the neck of the people talking about his Dad and Mishti. He choked the ward boy to death asking in anger and fury "Tumari himmat kaisi hui.. how dare you say tat. Haan do you know about whom are you saying.. She is my wife.. Meri Mishti hain.. Mere Dad.. Raj Singh Khuranna hain.. do you get." The ward boy was scared seeing his anger while the other tried to pull him away but Maan's hold was tighter than they could deal with him but soon he found he was pulled and pushed away from them. His eyes shot fire while seeing the person who did. Vicky and Yash looking at him with anger and hatred. Maan tried to say something but he was slapped by Yash shutting him for the very first time.

Yash: Don't.. just don't create any more issues.. bahut dekh liya aur sun liye hum.. par ab nahi.. we cant afford to loose wat we have now.

Maan looked at Yash while his lips trying to say something but before tat Vicky held him by his collar shaking him with anger,

Vicky: Jee nahi bara kya.. wasn't it enough tat you killed Geet and now aapka saaya.. aapka bura kaala saaya Dad ko bhi kha gaya…. Nahi Manthe hum ish ajeeb si destiny ko.. I don't believe tat she is your savior. How can she be when you are a bloody murderer. I don't agree tat she has been saving you since your birth. I don't agree tat she is your life.. nahi maana yeh sach mujhe ki aap dono ek duje ke liye bane ho.. I don't agree tat she is meant to save you.. aapke kale saaye ki roshni hain woh.. I don't want to agree it.

Vicky slapped him saying all this while Maan stood not getting wat he meant. His eyes questioned him to know wat his words meant but than he did not get any as Yash and Vicky went away leaving a broken Maan. He slowly followed them and saw the way all were surrounding his Dad. He inched closer only to be stopped by his mother Shikha who had been broken and the moment she did see him her mind and heart asked her to throw her own son away from their life. She came forward slapping him dragging him to Raj throwing him on his feet and screaming on top of her voice blaming him for all.

Shikha: This is wat you gave him.. Maar diya tumhe hum sabko.. kya bura kiya agar if he tried to save Her.. wat wrong did he do if he wanted his doll and son to be safe and alive. Kya galat kiya if he wanted to save you both from your evil destiny… Haan kya galat kiya agar just to save you we married her to you.. kya galat kiya agar 5 saal ki umar mein humne aap dono ki shaadi karavi.. Kya galat kiya ki humne uski saase bachane ke liye we lied tat the chain she was wearing was a gift from Raj rather than it was her mangasutra.. her lifeline. Wat wrong did we do if we had to marry you both again to save her before she dies. Kya galat kiya humne agar aap dono ki saaso ke liye humne yeh sab kiya.

His whole world crashed as the whole truth was opened in front of him. His mind and heart blanked as the realization sunk into him tat how he usually found her close to him when he was in danger. The realization tat she was his wife since ages just to save him, the fact tat the black beaded chain she was carrying was her lifeline to save her and then the words tat he heard from Sameera tat his car breaks were tampered but than once again it was her who saved him taking the death on her. Every realization took him into guilt, a dark life, a life where his cursed life, his evil destiny and than the truth tat she was his savior and he her destroyer yet her savior shattered him into pieces tat would never be healed nor joint. His eyes blurred with each truth while his heart cursed with each moment he blamed her, the sins tat he did the fact tat she was dying and the last thread when he heard his Mom saying " Tat she was carrying a sin inside her for saving him, a life tat would kill her" the truth tat he betrayed her and now she was dying each second engulfed him once again into a pit of darkness.

His eyes were closing and fearing to see the same darkness tat he had seen three years back. It was engulfing him in it and though he wanted to fight back, he could not. His heart was weakening, his breadths leaving him still his soul waiting for tat one soothing touch. The monitor attached to him were showing tat he was on the death bed while the doctors who had been with him were trying their best to stable him but it was as if his heart did not want to listen to him.

He sat at a lone corner of the hospital forgetting everything around waiting for one glimpse of his life. He did not know when the day was and when was the night nor did he have any clue how many days had passed. He could feel people talking and seeing him but his heart and soul ached to see the two souls dying inside. Everyone threw him out from his or her life while Vicky felt disgusted to even have a look at him and finally after so-called 15days he was a dead soul lying on the hospital bed. His eyes opened but heart stopped beating. Maan begged everyone to let him see his Mishti and Dad but none was there to listen to him and lastly he begged fell into the feet's of the doctors treating Geet and his Dad tat they let him see them once. The doctors were strictly given orders by the Khuranna's and Handa's but seeing him dying each second they let him see them during the nighttime. He let out a sharp painful cry seeing his Dad lying there with open eyes staring at the ceiling. Maan fell into his feet and than taking his hand hitting me without mercy begging for death. he cried out his heart asking for punishment.

Maan: kill me Dad.. kill me.. I don't deserve to be alive.. maine apne hi haatho se barbaad kar diya.. I killed her Dad.. I killed the one soul who dies each time to save me..kill me Dad.. aaj bhi.. even now she took my death for her.. tat death was for me Dad… it was me but see na Dad you doll she proved tat she will take all my death for her.. she proved tat she is an angel Dad and m the black shadow for her… I cant dad.. mar jaane diya hota mujhe Dad… I want to die Dad.. but I cant.. I cant Dad.. you all will loose her if I die… punish me Dad.. Sameera ne kiya Dad.. I saw her dying dad.. I saw My Mishti dying dad.. I will kill tat Sameera Dad.. main maar dunga ushe….i want you Dad.,.. I want my Mishti Dad.. she will die Dad.. you say na.. tell her tat she needs to come… she is carrying our love Dad.. ushe keh do na.. tat I need her.. Tell her Dad.

He saw tears flowing down his Dad's eyes while that blank look accused him even more.

His lips smiled shocking everyone in the room. They could not believe tat he was lying on his dead bed and here he was smiling, but where did they knew tat he was smiling as he was remembering the day when he first felt Her Mehar.. Felt the angel who gave him the strength to fight all odds. Where they knew tat this smile would be even the last one in his life.

His legs could not cover the small distance from the door to her bed. His eyes shed blood tears seeing her lying there. He slowly walked and the more he walked he left she was far away. His heart cursed him now while his soul wanting to leave his body but they stopped the moment his eyes saw her tummy. The place where her angel was hidden trying hard to cope up with the coma. Trying hard to make his angel open her eyes. He ran and fell on her legs hugging them touching them to his forehead. He cried but his voice was not helping him. he kissed her toes worshipping them with his eyes.

" Mishti….. please Mishti.. get up.. punish me… kill me Mishti.. kill Maan.. kill me.."

He looked up and walked towards her face and stood watching her sleeping. His eyes could not let her sight while his hand reached her tummy caressing it over her dress.

"Don't punish me like this.. I know I never gave you a calm sleep but don't punish me like this.. she needs you Mishti.. your Angel needs you."

He sat down on his knees and kissed her tummy wetting it with his tears.

" Angel.. tell Mumma na.. tell her tat you need her.. tell her tat her Maan needs her.. needs her to punish him. tell angel.. tell her not to punish you for me.. tell her angel.. tell Mumma tat her Dad needs her.. tell Mumma tat Dad needs her doll please."

He hugged her tummy speaking to the angel who was inside her while his eyes kept staring at his Mishti feeling her angel inside her.

The doctors rushed to him the moment they heard the beep sound. One side scared to loose while other side shocked to see him smiling. Their hand freeze seeing him smiling as if he was all set to die after getting wat he wanted having tat calm serene look even on his death bed made them even more shocked while their hearts determined to save him and the moment they were to touch him the door was wide open while there was an argument going outside stopping the intruders when they heard a dangerous voice stopping them from touching her " Don't.. don't touch him." They turned to see who was the owner of the voice but the moment they saw they were shocked to see a man carrying a lady and another baby in his arms and the moment they tried to say something they heard the sweet voice " Dadda.. Mumma.. Dadda."


Her eyes did not want to know where she was. She hit Vicky hard biting him asking him to keep her down while Mehar accompanied her Mumma in the same. They hit him hard while Geet painful scream "Maan" made Maan's fingers to move. Her one call was enough for him but his heart was not steady. Vicky ran and Raj pushed all doctors making way for them towards the bed and the moment they were close Mehar jumped on the bed while Vicky placed Geet next to his almost dead body but there was no response from Geet while Mehar she patted Maan on her cheeks trying her best efforts to wake him up.

Mehar: Dadda.. Mumma.. Mehar … Chain.. see Dadda.. Mehar.. good na..(mehar turns to Geet pulling her closer showing Maan her mangalsutra) see Dadda.. Mumma.. wear.. chain.. Dadda say na.. Mumma.. live..chain .. see.. Mehar.. give chain to Mumma.. see na Dadda.

Geet was all the while looking at Maan and Mehar, she pulled all the wires and tubes attached to her Dadda. She did not like anything on her Dadda when Vicky saw the doctors trying to pull them but Vicky's one glare made them to stand where they were. Mehar sat on his stomach pulling Geet closer and making them to lay on his chest keeping their head on it. Mehar pulled her Mangalsutra once again making Maan to touch it. She looked at Maan and than at Geet with tears complaining about Maan to Geet and Geet to Maan.

Mehar: Dadda.. Mumma..Mumma not talking to Mehar Baby.. see Mumma just looks.. and holds.. Mumma.. tell Dadda na.. to talk…. Mehar good Girl na.. plwaese.. Dadda.

Geet wrapped her hands tight around Maan and Mehar hugging them to her heart. Her lips touched his heart giving it its beats back making it to smile while his hands wrapped around the two angels who were hugging him. Everyone just stood watching the miracle yet Maan had his eyes closed. His touch made her feel something. His heart made her feel something and than her eyes held his serene smiling face with closed eyes and the moment she saw his face everything, her past, his accusations flashed in front of her while her heart shattered thinking tat their love was a mistake making her hand to clutch her stomach in pain. She looked around and screamed " Nahi Maan.. its not a mistake.. our love is not mistake" fearing everyone.

His heart died once again hearing her pain while his soul now ready to leave him but her angel.. her Mehar did bring it back. She looked up at Geet and than at Maan and pulled their hands together entangling them back again as one keeping it close to her heart kissing their hands with her lips worshipping them with her eyes bringing the life back into her Dadda making him open his eyes. Mehar held his hand unknown tat her Dadda had opened his eyes, made them to touch her Mumma's Mangalsutra showing him tat she did wat he said.

Mehar: Dadda.. see Mumma good na.. Mumma chain.. Mehar.. give.. see Dadda.. Mumma all good.

He smiled hearing those words further opening his eyes wide open caressing the Mangalsutra tat had her life in it while Geet had her eyes on Mehar who was sitting on her Maan when she heard a soft whisper " Mishti" fluttering her eyes hearing it while tears showed wat it means when she heard it again " Its not a mistake Mishti.. never a mistake.. she is your.s. angel.. our angel.. Your Mehar." Her eyes slowly turned to see him while he had them on her and the moment she did she forgot everything all her pain seeing his eyes, the pain, the love and the longing making her push herself on him pushing Mehar away from his body while Vicky ran to hold a falling Mehar. Geet laid her weak body on his holding hugging him tight while he cried soothing her and Mehar she complaint to Vicky tat her Mumma threw her away. Geet snuggled herself closer into him trying to feel him asking him tat she was not wrong na.

Geet: its not.. mistake.. Maan.. Mishti not wrong.. its breathing Maan.. in me.

His hands reached more to her while his eyes cried hearing her.

Maan: Nahi hain.. Mishti.. she is not.. never a mistake.. but my strength.. Mishti.. strength tat made me to fight for you.. bring you back.

She looked up with happiness and love and kept his hand on her tummy while she sat on his stomach. He was shocked to see her though he did not want any proofs tat his Mishti was back but why was she doing this when he heard her say.

Geet: Nahi hain na Maan.. its our love na.. our love.

Maan looked at her and than at Mehar and the moment he said "Mehar" all her memories flashed once again in front of her while her eyes rested on Mehar was being held by Vicky. Maan signaled Vicky to give Mehar and she instantly jumped on him hugging her Mumma and Dadda while Geet just kept looking at her with her eyes flashing the sweet moments of her, Mehar and Maan. she closed them again fearing but when she felt a soft touch on her cheeks she opened to see the little angel looking at her with all love while Maan looking at them.

Maan: Your angel Mishti.. Your Mehar for your Maan.. she is your baby Mishti.. out baby.. the baby tat you have cocooned in your womb.. the angel who made me fight for you… she yours Mishti.. our love.. your Love for your Maan.

She looked at Mehar who was just kissing her while her hand holding Maan's tat was caressing the Mangalsutra making sure tat it was tied around her fearing tat he may loose her again.

Maan: Aisa na dekho Mishti.. she is yours… only yours.

Geet: Baby..my tummy.. how.

Everyone closed their eyes tat were shedding tears of happiness hearing her words. Maan's heart cried knowing tat she was not feeling her baby but her hand tat had been holding Mehar tight proved him tat her heart and soul knew tat she was their part only her mind was not believing it.

He pulled them closer making them to sleep on him while the doctors who had been treating Maan left the them alone knowing tat this was not less than a big miracle and preferred to stay mum on this. All Khuranna's and Handa's gathered around the bed surrounding them while Maan talking to his Mishti.

Maan: She is yours Mishti.. only yours.. our love tat was always pure but I tainted it.. she saved me Mishti… Your Mehar saved your Maan from killing himself.. she has been saving your Maan since she was inside you. touch her Mishti (he kept her hand on Mehar's cheek) feel her Mishti.. feel the months tat you kept her inside you saving her and me…. Feel the joy tat you felt while giving her birth.. feel those moments tat we three spent Mishti.. those three years tat we missed.. she is your Mishti… Your Mehar for your Maan.

Geet raised her head a bit and looked at Maan and than at Mehar who was only hugging both tight while her eyes fast asleep. Geet slowly traced her fingers trying not to disturb her and the moment she did she could her and see her Mehar, her Maan and her playing dancing. She smiled caressing her cheeks more and more her images cleared.. the more she felt closer. She bends slowly towards her cheeks placing a soft kiss and the moment she did she heard her Mehar " Mumma..kissy.. Dadda to kissy" while her tears wetted Maan and Mehar.

Maan: Your baby.. Our Mehar Mishti.

Geet: Mehar.. My Mehar Maan.. my baby.. our baby.

And she pulled Mehar into her arms sitting once again on his stomach while he ignored the pain he was feelings. She kissed and loved Mehar hugging her close just calling her baby and showing wat she meant while Mehar smiled hugging her Mumma feeling the love for the evfy first time. Mehar slowly opened her eyes to see her Mumma crying and she instantly wiped them off saying.

Mehar: Dadda.. Mehar Mumma crying.. Dadda.. Mishti crlying see.. Mumma bad Mumma na.

Geet hugged her closer talking with Mehar for the very first time.

Geet: Haan.. Mehar Mumma crylyinh. Dadda Mishti bhi cryling.. Mumma Mishti bad na.. angel.. very bad.

Mehar giggled looking at Geet while Maan smiled looking at his two angels.

Mehar: Dadda.. Mishti not bad.. Mehar Mumma bad..Hain na Dadda.

Maan: Na.. Mehar.. Mishti and Mumma very good very very angel.. but Dadda bad.

Mehar: Mumma.. see Dadda.. saying bad Dadda.. Dadda not bad na.. Mehar dadda very good. Na..

Geet stood watching Maan cry while Mehar wiped his tears pulling Geet back on his chest to have a peaceful sleep with her Mumma and Dadda for the very first time.

Precap: How will Geet face her past and how will Maan explain her wat it was is the evil destiny over.Maan-Mehar-Geet.. socho.. kaun Maan ko jyada pyar karega.

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Posted: 12 years ago
It was emotional bonding of Maan, Mishti n their Mehar

Geet n their angel Mehar bring Maan out of death bed

Loved it to the core


Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsem update maan ok family moments
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome, beautiful emotional heart touching update
loved it
loved maaneet bond with meher
meher is an angel who bring back maaneet to each other
meher's love,maaneet's love make them win against destiny
each and every line of this update heart touching beautiful
past is sad ,emotional heart wrenching and ho destiny took their exam and finally all settled as of now
it's really tough for geet to understand that her baby is big now meher is big
but maan is there na to help them
meher bring maan to his mishty
lovely loved it
continue soon
precap interesting
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful update

maan is all safe

& geet is back to herself

want some beautiful moments of trio

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Superb very emotional and heart touching update:)

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