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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update. loved Maan's teasing and Geet's confusion. continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooww what a gr8 update
there was lots of teasing
i loved it
heheh maan ne phir geet ko sari pehne kaha h
waiting for next
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
maan made geet understand wt he wants...n both going to give a chance to their relationship...
waiting fr he dinner date...
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesoem update dear...

total fun to read...

it was core entertainment..

Maan's thought, his smile and their discussion on his smile... awesome...

he made it clear... and Geet's innocent confession of making it small step first and sticking to it was so cute and Maan cleverly making big step for her as small step for him...

their teasing.. it was all so awesome... loved it to core

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Posted: 12 years ago
till part 9
nice story dear...
different...
poor Geet...
her sister was so selfish...
what was the need to treat Geet like that?
and Maan he realized late...
is he really in love with Geet?
or is it something else?
cont soon dear...
pm me and also can u post the link when u update in this thread?
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
fabulous update
liked a lot
very well written
continue soon
waiting for more
waiting😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful updates...
Read all parts in one go...
Wonderful story it is...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update. Enjoyed reading it😊
Maan so well understands geet 😳 loved d way story is progressing 😊
Eagerly waitg for dinner date 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 10

banner credit to RU_21 AND KINGKHANFAN AND MAANIQRA


Geet sat in front of the dressing table while her mind was still dazed with the events of today. Maan was turning out to be a real puzzle for her. His mercurial mood swings were actually giving her a whip lash.

What was with him? She thought, a little exasperated, a little confused. In the afternoon though she had lived up to his challenge with quick witty replies from her end. It had actually pushed him to the back foot and for a few moments she could see the confusion written all over his face. He seemed baffled but then he got her with his absurdly peeving questions and final straw had been the kiss! He had kissed her! Good heavens! What if Daadima would have seen! She mentally chided herself and automatically her hand flew to her cheek where he had kissed! She closed her eyes as if embarrassed. She was pulled out of her dreaming and brooding session when Daadima knocked.

Geet opened the door to a sweet and lovable lady who was the 'devil's' grandmother, "unfortunately" she chided peevishly. Daadima had a huge grin plastered onto her elegant face. She walked in with grace and plopped herself on the bed.

Once seated her gaze riveted automatically to the lovely saree along with a classy pair of diamond danglers they lay on the bed. She smiled to herself and then looked at geet, "so geet what do you plan to do with these?" she asked beckoning to the articles that lay on th bed.

"woh Daadima, I was just thinking if you know '. You would help'', I mean in the morning'', I mean i'''.." words came out in a torrent for Geet but failed to form a single sentence. She was nervous as heel about the date and had been brooding too much about the possibilities and somehow it had all taken a toll upon her.

As if understanding her predicament daadima said, "it's ok Geet, I know you don't know how to wear a sari, so its ok na, you know when I was your age my mother in law helped me wear one, so take a chill pill sweetie and let me see what I can do for you" she tweaked Geet's cheeks in process and made her sit in front of the mirror.

Daadima's good natured banter couldn't help Geet much, though she tried giving a smile but somewhere the smile faded and she was reminded of the impending date with Maan and she shuddered.

This didn't go unnoticed by her grandma in law who was skilfully brushing her long tresses.

"Geet there are may questions that are plaguing your mind that is keeping you from being your usual self, but all I would like to say is this date is the key to all your queries and instead of being all way and anxious you should be looking forward to it and remember I'm always with you, I know my grandson can be a real devil at times like today in the afternoon, uff he was up to mayhem and so did he succeed but what I saw after I left you both in the hall to call the caretaker was the same gleam in his eyes that it used to be like, that smile had the essence of life, to live life yet there was something lurking behind those heavy lashes, uncertainty, fear of rejection as if he is dreading a teat yet his life depends on it. I don't know what but Maan surely wants to test something and in doing so he can be a real devil. I saw him pulling your leg, getting at you every now and then and I loved your answer, my god! You so well without any help, left him baffled totally. Let me give you some tip, if you really want to get at him do take a jibe at his long dark dense eyelashes, in 1st year when in college some of the girls did, that lft him all riled up and red faced" she said with soothing gentleness.

In the time when she spoke of Maan Geet felt her voice change, once soft and gentle and then she sensed pride and the next moment love. She loved Maan with all her life afterall he was all she had.

Geet simply smiled up at her and she took her hands in her and squeezed them beckoning her as if saying thanks for the support. Somehow all the pep talk did good to her and now she had a trump card against Maan if and when he tried to rile her up. Somehow the thought of Maan dark dense eyelashes and he getting perturbed by the beauty of it brought an naughty smile up on her face and instantly her entire face lit up and she was all glowing.

"now that's like my girl" Daadima urged.

On the other hand Maan was also not having a field day about the date, though his other plans had had smooth sailing he wasn't having as much of a smooth gliding when it came to choosing clothes for himself, that too for a date with his wife. Now he had an entire closet of cloths strewn across the large canopied bed with the servants of the house looking along flustered and exasperated for they have been subdued by their master from whatever tasks they were into as he wanted them to look closely and decide what looked the best on him.

"so what do you all think, should I wear black or white?" Maan asked holding up two hangers one with a white shirt and the other with black, the servants looked as confused as ever and nodded meekly.

"god c'mon tell me something! Don't just stand there like stone statues and nod to everything that I say, am asking for your suggestion guys! Am nervous as hell! Please help!" Maan said raking hair from his scalp with irritation and exasperation.

The very thought that their master was nervous and was asking for their help left the household helps all the more baffled and flustered. The man who tormented terrorized them with his anger and grim moods every now and then was actually asking for their help.

It was not that Maan was a total jerk or he never cared about anyone's feelings. In fact inside that hard shell that he put on as a shield there was a real sweet and soft side to him. On many occasions he went out of his way to help everyone like once, when the mali's daughter required funds for further education, he had solemnly arranged for it without telling anyone. Later the mali discovered that the trust that had volunteered to sponsor his daughter's education was owned by Maan. He had come running to Maan and had fallen at his feet, Maan then had simply said, "kaka if you are really happy and feel indebted to me for what I have done and if you think you are gonna have to repay me, you are absolutely right!" the mali looked confused and then when he started to swear that he would spend extra time at the garden tending to the plants and that he would not take his salary for the next few months, Maan had simply smiled and sAid, "no, it was not what I meant, what I meant was, you'll repay me by letting your daughter study as much as she wants to and you'll repay me by blessing me and my family, that's biggest and costliest of all gifts" tears of joy had stung in the mali's eyes and he had hugged Maan and blessed him. The biggest quality of all was that he never looked down upon any of the helps as mere servants. He in fact treated them all at par. Yet his treacherous mood swings were always a terror for all of them.

Maan was now seated at the sofa of the large guest room still trying to decipher as to what he should wear, when he flt somebody's hand on his back and turned around to see that it was Nakul, the oldest and the sweetest of all the helps. What he said touched Maan,

"Maan baba, I have seen you grow and even if I say I know you are not gonna believe that you look good in everything you wear, and it's not because of the clothes that you choose but because of the person you are, I would suggest you wear whatever you feel like, just close your eyes and imagine the scene and am sure you'll get your answer" with that he nodded in the direction of the other helps who now dispersed off the room slowly along with Nakul.

Maan closed his eyes and he got his answer and the very answer brought a breathtaking sweet smile on his face.

Geet was now ready, he wore a beige net sari that was draped with panache all along her length and that blended with her body like second skin making her look divine and delicious both at the the same time. The diamond danglers that she wore glittered and shimmered adding shine to her already sparkling self. Her makeup was to the minimum, while her eyes had the smoky effect that gave her face the sensual effect. The blusher gave her cheeks a rosy hue adding to her exquisite beauty. In all she looked breathtaking.

"my god! You look so pretty Geet" daadi marveled at the beauty that lay in front.

"come lets take you down" Daadi extended her hand forward.

The very prospect of going down made Geet's heart thud vigorously and her entire body trembled. Feebly she followed Daadima down taking small steps and gingerly climbing down each of the stairs prolonging what was otherwise inevitable. Once down her eyes searched for that one man. While she looked here and there and Daadima went calling out his name aloud her anxiety doubled as to what was in store for her. All along the afternoon sh had brooded over the possibilities as to what the date could be like and every time he mind conjured up romantic, sensual images and every time sh shook those images out consoling herself that Maan had promised to take small tiny steps one at a time. That soothed hr to some extent but her treacherous mind would deny to rest and again her imaginations would run high and wild and then she would think about the trump card and felt happy.

Her mindless pondering over was halted when she felt a warm touch against her waist and then she saw the face that she had be searching for all the while smiling down at her and the next moment th deep timbre of his voice sent unknown sensations down her spine and she felt herself shivering under his intense warm sensual gaze. He towered over her and looked down as if regarding her from head to toe, with a gaze that had get's insides churning.

It was at this moment she noticed him. As usual he was looking great, he had on a black suit with a crisp white shirt that was matched with a red tie, his hair was brushed back and and the the stubble had been trimmed. He smelled of cologne mixed with the smell of a musky body wash. He looked delicious.

"so Geet' shall we proceed, I mean for our destination" he said with a hint of amusement in his eyes. He held her close to his body and as he was about to move forward with her, they were stalled by daadima, "not before I take a picture"

Once out Maan made her sit in his car, which he fondly referred to as baby and hopped on to the driving seat. They bid Daadima goodbye and started their journey towards their destination.

Geet had gone quite and she stared listlessly out of the window while Maan drove with style stealing glances very now and then at Geet.

"Geet I have never knew that you planned to be an actress, that too in a silent film, well that's quite a carer you know, I mean not everyone can be a silent actress, but I see that you are very dedicated and you have taken your role very seriously, am proud of you" Maan teased.

It took time for the words to register in Geet's mind, for once she looked totally confused and had no clue as to what Maan actually was referring to. And then it registered that he was actually taking a jibe at her, she gave him one of her glares that shot daggers at him. For once she thought of using her trump card and the very moment a wickedly naughty smile flitted across her face but then she decided against it saving it for better times.

Instead she said, "ya just like you have taken your role of comedian seriously, that too isn't easy you see" .

Seeing a haughty Geet was a bit unusual for Maan, and that smile, it was bit strange for her to smile that way, but that made his heart skip a beat! She still hadn't given up and was ready for a war, Maan thought with a sexy smirk adorning his face.

"so it seems like my company is having some great effect upon you, your sense of humor seems to have improved, in fact it's great, and by the way I forgot to tell you but you look really sizzling in the sari, my choice is great isn't it"

He was hellbent upon peeving her and was pushing her to the edge, the last comment had left her cheeks red and she now looked adorable.

For a moment get thought of something very witty to say but the next moment she decided against it because she could see Maan was having filed day with her replies. Whatever she said he always came up with something smarter. So she simply nodded in his direction as if she agreed to what he just said.

After a fiery opening her docile reply didn't go don too well with Maan but he knew there was a long evening ahead of them and he planned to enjoy and hence he left the rest for the evening.

That's part 10 for you all

It's not long enough I know, neither is it that good, infact am a bit disappointed with the part

I know may of you have a lot of doubts about maan's feelings but that will be out very soon and you'll know what he had thought about when he had gone into the study.

The date will be up in the next part

I know it's disappointing for all of you, but guys am very sorry my jaundice has relapsed and I have been strictly advised to stick to my bed and not strain myself, and that is the reason for my delay and the short part

I'll try and update the next part as soon as possible, all I need is your support and help

Please be by my side and do like and comment and suggest me as to how I can improve on my writing and if you have requests please feel free to share

Am open to your criticisms, please do let me know if you don't like anything

Thanks a ton to all those who loved the previous part and showered my ss with likes and comments, I'll be indebted to you lovely readers. All your comments and likes are very precious to me, I literally thrive on your love! Please forgive me for the short part.

I'll give you all along and satisfying update next time and make up for the loss.

Edited by doublecross - 12 years ago

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