virman ss : naa jaane kyun... LAST PART pg 57 - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update naina
so you came back to present huh
loved the virman nok jhok
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm update aftr long gap... its alwys pleasant to read virman nok jokh.. do continue dear.. i knw u r having many to update with nd its difficult to update regularly.. i can understnd.. but wen ever u update bless us with long updates dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loveeed the last Virman Nok-Jhok :)
I hope you will be adding Virika scenes in the Roka right?!? Pleasee :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awwwsum...update i hv forgot dis story so
now i hv again read all d parts nd now m
still feelinggg super excited update
soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update. .its nice to read virman nok jhok. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
naina this is a real good story and yu are good writer must say 😊
cnt wait to knw wat happpens next pls update soon nd do pm me pls 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
As always naina a nice update ! would love to see what makes them realise and fall for each other! waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon and plz PM me when u will update waiting for ur update
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 12
manvi got freshened up, laid lazily on the bed n surfed the channels of the tv. but nothing seemed to appeal her so she decided to look for jeevika. she was looking for jeevika and found her sitting with swamini bua and she like always giving lecture about why she chose jeevika for viren. manvi got irritated by swamini and her constant irritating and boring lectures, so she decided to go back to her room. she saw virat's room... oh yes... his room was just beside hers...
manvi : how did i not think of it...??? when virat is here not to fear... he is my entertainment channel...
manvi opened the door and got in. she scanned the whole room and thought " its too big for one person... and the mess... let it be... "
manvi : virat...???
there came no reply...
manvi again called him but still no reply...
manvi : where the hell is he...??? and look at the mess he has created in his bedroom... it looks more like a storeroom... ufff... these guys... they all are just too messy n unorganised...
manvi saw that virat's clothes were all scattered on the bed, so she decided to clean it up for her friend... her partner... she started folding his shirts and organised in a pile. she placed it on one corner of the bed. while she was doing this, her eyes rested on the novels that were on the corner table. she organised that pile properly so that they dont fall. then she looked at his jacket which was laying on the sofa.
manvi : ufff...
manvi took the jacket in her hands and was about to pick it up when something fell from it. manvi heard a sound and her eyes started searching for the source of the sound. her eyes lightened as she saw the ring that was lying near the carpet. she bent down and see looked at the ring closely. the moment she saw it from so close, her smile faded. that was the same ring, that was the ring which he...
just then she heard the sound of some door opening, so she hurriedly picked up the ring and hided behind the sofa chair. her eyes popped out on seeing virat coming out of the bathroom wearing just his jeans with a towel around his neck and water dripping from his wet hair. he came out whistling and lost in himself... he stood in front of the mirror and dried his wet hair with the towel and then his broad chest n chisselled abs. he examined himself and then made his hair unaware that a pair of brown eyes were gazing at him awestruck thinking how can one be so hot. manvi smiled at this very thought of her and mentally slapped herself. just then she realised that she was in his bedroom and she was literally checking him out.
virat went to his wardrobe and chose a tee to wear. he threw the towel on the sofa chair which landed on manvi's head by chance, he wore the tee and went out of the room.

manvi took the towel from her head and blushed... she had no idea why did she blush... but she did... manvi went out of his room and went to her room.

manvi locked the door and sat on the bed and slowly opened her fist to look at the ring she was holding tightly. manvi again looked at the ring and it took her back into the memory lane. she was reminded of the time when she first saw that ring.
flash back
manvi : wowww... its so beautiful...!!! kiski hai...???
virat : meri...
manvi : what...??/ you dumbo, this is a ladies ring... to be precise, its the most elegant engagemnet ring one can give to his girlfriend or fiance...
virat : exactly my point ded futiya... this is for the girl whom i will marry...
manvi : woww... then marry me... i really love this ring...
virat : oh forget it... its not for u... its for someone special... the one who is made for me... not for a bandariya like you...
manvi : you arrogant monkey... chep kahin ka...
virat : but tell me honestly... its fab... right...???
manvi : yes its fab... i am being honets... trust me...
flashback ends
back to present
manvi : do u love someone virat...?? are you love...?? i mean... do u have that special girl in your life...?? but you said taht you love me... did you lie to me...??? dont you love me virat...??? how could you virat... how could you...?? why the thought of you being with somebody else killing me...??? why am i reacting like this...??? why do i want to be the only girl in your life... why virat...???
virat went to viren's room and saw him looking dreamily at his mobile.
virat : bhai...
viren : hmm..
virat : u really love her na...
viren : hmm...
virat : you want to go out with bhabhi...???
viren : hmm...
virat : you dont want to marry her...???
viren : hmm... no... no i want to marry her virat...
virat : hehe.. .you are in love bro... ocngrats...!!!! carry on...
viren : shut up virat...
virat : arrey u carry on i am going to tease your to be aadhi gharwali... she is a full on entertainment...
virat was going to manvi's room when he realised that he forgot the ring in the room itself... there was not even a single time, he forgot to carry the ring with himself but how did he today... he hurried to his room and saw that the room was in a better condition. he searched for his jacket and checked its pocket. to his surprise, the ring wasnt there but how could it be possible... this simply means that someone came in his room without his permission but who could it be...

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HAVE TYPED IT LONG BACK... I KNOW ITS SHORT BUT STILL THOUGHT OF POSTING IT AS I KNOW YOU ARE MISSING ME... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry... dont have tym for sending pms...
if anybody can do me a favour, send pms to some of ur frnds who might be interested in my wrks...
love u all...

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