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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drishti112

GOD DAMMIT ! ur story is flawless...dats perfect !! can i damn know d reason y r u not updatin it !😡 i just cant live widout readin it !! i read it again n again becz i feel great... just cant tell you ! please update !


I KNOW SHE IS A MEANIE
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you are my inspiration 😆
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Originally posted by: Kays94


you are my inspiration 😆


That is why you write so flawlessly!
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Posted: 12 years ago
kays...weekend it almost here...u better be ready with ur update...i read the last update so many times..can't wait any longer
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Originally posted by: little.angel56


That is why you write so flawlessly!


thats probably the only part that hasnt suk in my brain! you see i pick up negative things very quickly not positive ones
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vishwa94

kays...weekend it almost here...u better be ready with ur update...i read the last update so many times..can't wait any longer


i'll try vishwa 😭

karina working on two essays due tomorrow

karina very tired
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Originally posted by: Kays94


i'll try vishwa 😭

karina working on two essays due tomorrow

karina very tired

aww...i will be easy on u this time bt not next time
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I still have two essays due for tomorrow and back pain, but I'm still updating!!!! Dare anyone say this is short or you will get a piece of me 😡 JUST JOKING 😆 And if you are mad/upset/sad that this is short blame in on KryRan14 (also know as Tanvi) 🤣 🤣 🤣 If you want me to continue this tell her to start being nice to me or I wont update anymore, she makes me cry 😭...I want plenty of likes and comments AND PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T RESERVE A COMMENT IF YOU'RE NOT GOING TO UNRESERVE IT (TANVI)

chapter 19

She smiled with her eyes still closed.

j - "You're back"

v - "I'm back" he said hugging her and laying down on her chest.

v - "How was your day?"

j - "Fine we went to the mall and met Manvi there. By the way Zaaine wants to go buy his backpack with you. He said you promised him a new toy also"

v - "Oh gosh, yeah I forgot. So he didn't go with you?"

j - "Nope. He said he's going to wait till you come home" she said smiling still with her eyes shut

v - "We can take him before dinner or something. Let's go wake him up"

j - "Can you go please? I want to sleep another 10 minutes"

v - "Are you feeling okay? You usually don't sleep like this"

j - "Yeah, just a little drained out"

v - "Okay I'll go get him" he said kissing her cheek and then getting up.

By the time he went to Zaaine's room he saw him getting up from his bed. He went over and picked him up taking Zaaine by surprise.

z - "Daa you home"

v - "Yup, I'm home. How was your day. Is your head hurting?"

z - "Little little. Mommy said it be better soon"

v - "really? So what did you do today?"

z - "Mommy bought me shoes and clothes"

v - "Wow, how lucky are you"

z - "Daa you know my shoes have lights"

v - "Really? I want those shoes then"

z - "Nope, they for me only" he said laughing

v - "Okay fine they're for you only. Are you hungry?"

z - "Little"

v - "Okay lets go downstairs"

The both of them went downstairs and were in the kitchen. Zaaine was sitting on the counter-top as Viren was getting some food out.

z - '"daa where mommy?"

v - "She's upstairs sleeping"

z - "Me wake mommy up"

v - "No let her sleep a little bit. She's feeling tired"

z - "Why daa?"

v - "Because she's been working a lot thats why she's tired"

z - "Okay"

Viren started cooking dinner and looking at the time as Jeevika was still asleep. He put Zaaine in his chair and gave him his plate. He went near the stairs and yelled out Jeevika's name but she didn't respond.

v - "Zaaine finish eating, I'll be right back"

z - "Okay daa"

Viren went upstairs and saw Jeevika in bed still. He went down on her side and kneeled down next to her.

v - "Jeevs aren't you hungry?"

j - "No, you go eat I'm coming down in ten minutes"

v - "Are you sure you're okay?"

j - "Yeah, I don't know why I'm just really tired right now"

v - "How about you just lay down and I'll take Zaaine out for sometime. There's food downstairs in the kitchen so you can eat anytime you wake up"

j - "No, its fine. I'll come with you guys. Just give me 10 minutes"

v - "Okay, I'm waiting downstairs"

Jeevika nodded her head and smiled. She got up and freshened up in the bathroom. She went downstairs and saw Viren helping Zaaine wash his hands.

v - "Here you want to eat first?"

j - "I'm not hungry. Can we just pick up some coffee from Starbucks please"

v - "Yeah, let's go. Zaaine go put your shoes on"

Zaaine went over near the front door and sat down putting his shoes on by himself. Jeevika walked towards Viren and hugged him tightly. He hugged her back putting his arms around her waist. He pat her head and just hugged her sweetly.

z - "Daa me hug also" he said cutely standing near his parents.

Both Viren and Jeevika broke their hug a bit and smiled at him. Viren picked him up and then hugged him also.

v - "Okay ready now?"

z - "Yes, but mommy no eat dinner"

j - "No, I'm not hungry Zaaine"

z - "Why mommy?"

j - "Because I ate too much at lunch time"

z - "Mee eat a lot also"

j - "I know but Zaaine is a growing so he needs to eat his food"

z - "Okay mommy"

They drove away from home and Viren stopped at Starbucks to get Jeevika some coffee.

z - "Daa me want cookie"

j - "Zaaine you already had your coffee today. No more please"

z - "Please mommy. Please daa. Just little bit"

j - "No Zaaine. Tomorrow you can have"

v - "Okay l'll be right back"

Zaaine was a little sad because he wanted Starbucks again but Jeevika wouldn't let him.

Viren came back with two coffees.

z - "Daa me?" he said as Jeevika looked at him

v - "You'll get your cookies before you sleep"

z - "Thank You" he said with the biggest smile on his face

v - "Are you still sleepy" he said placing his hand on Jeevika's hand while his other hand was on the steering

j - "Yeah, but I have lots to do tonight"

v - "charts?"

j - "Charst and studying"

v - "Studying for what?"

j - "Final general sugery exam"

v - "So you decided for sure then?"

j - "Yeah I mean I had to"

v - "Had to? What do you mean?"

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Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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She smiled with her eyes still closed.
This is like I started imagining Jeevika with her eyes closed and how sweet she will be looking!

j - "You're back"

v - "I'm back" he said hugging her and laying down on her chest.

v - "How was your day?"

j - "Fine we went to the mall and met Manvi there. By the way Zaaine wants to go buy his backpack with you. He said you promised him a new toy also"

v - "Oh gosh, yeah I forgot. So he didn't go with you?"

j - "Nope. He said he's going to wait till you come home" she said smiling still with her eyes shut

v - "We can take him before dinner or something. Let's go wake him up"

Aww, Viren on her chest and they discussing their daily routine sleepy heads! How cute can this couple get, I love the way this is put in foreign land, it makes me more attached to it ❤️

j - "Can you go please? I want to sleep another 10 minutes"

v - "Are you feeling okay? You usually don't sleep like this"

j - "Yeah, just a little drained out"

v - "Okay I'll go get him" he said kissing her cheek and then getting up.

Viren, is such a spotting husband! Aww, kishie on cheeks ☺️

By the time he went to Zaaine's room he saw him getting up from his bed. He went over and picked him up taking Zaaine by surprise.

z - "Daa you home"

v - "Yup, I'm home. How was your day. Is your head hurting?"

z - "Little little. Mommy said it be better soon"

v - "really? So what did you do today?"

z - "Mommy bought me shoes and clothes"

v - "Wow, how lucky are you"

z - "Daa you know my shoes have lights"

v - "Really? I want those shoes then"

z - "Nope, they for me only" he said laughing

v - "Okay fine they're for you only. Are you hungry?"

z - "Little"

v - "Okay lets go downstairs"

This is the best part, how Viren becomes a bachu like Zaaine, but still Zaaine is my favorite, I will take him to my home today.. Shoes with light, awa! Keeni, i loved this actually, because it is so common to observe! 😊

The both of them went downstairs and were in the kitchen. Zaaine was sitting on the counter-top as Viren was getting some food out.

z - '"daa where mommy?"

v - "She's upstairs sleeping"

z - "Me wake mommy up"

v - "No let her sleep a little bit. She's feeling tired"

z - "Why daa?"

v - "Because she's been working a lot thats why she's tired"

z - "Okay"

Viren started cooking dinner and looking at the time as Jeevika was still asleep. He put Zaaine in his chair and gave him his plate. He went near the stairs and yelled out Jeevika's name but she didn't respond.

Why does Zaaine asks so many questions? I don't remember if as a child I did that

v - "Zaaine finish eating, I'll be right back"

z - "Okay daa"

Viren went upstairs and saw Jeevika in bed still. He went down on her side and kneeled down next to her.

v - "Jeevs aren't you hungry?"

j - "No, you go eat I'm coming down in ten minutes"

v - "Are you sure you're okay?"

j - "Yeah, I don't know why I'm just really tired right now"

v - "How about you just lay down and I'll take Zaaine out for sometime. There's food downstairs in the kitchen so you can eat anytime you wake up"

j - "No, its fine. I'll come with you guys. Just give me 10 minutes"

v - "Okay, I'm waiting downstairs"

Jeevika nodded her head and smiled. She got up and freshened up in the bathroom. She went downstairs and saw Viren helping Zaaine wash his hands.

Viren? Why the hell are you so cute? 😳
You know a man like yo
u can make us girls drool over you! I will take Viren too! Okay? I know why is she tired, ha ha, i know i know 🤪

v - "Here you want to eat first?"

j - "I'm not hungry. Can we just pick up some coffee from Starbucks please"

v - "Yeah, let's go. Zaaine go put your shoes on"

Zaaine went over near the front door and sat down putting his shoes on by himself. Jeevika walked towards Viren and hugged him tightly. He hugged her back putting his arms around her waist. He pat her head and just hugged her sweetly.

Sudden hug? Jeevika loved this, you should be like this with Viren always, haha, seriuosly this was cute ☺️

z - "Daa me hug also" he said cutely standing near his parents.

Both Viren and Jeevika broke their hug a bit and smiled at him. Viren picked him up and then hugged him also.

Family hug timee!! 😳

v - "Okay ready now?"

z - "Yes, but mommy no eat dinner"

j - "No, I'm not hungry Zaaine"

z - "Why mommy?"

j - "Because I ate too much at lunch time"

z - "Mee eat a lot also"

j - "I know but Zaaine is a growing so he needs to eat his food"

z - "Okay mommy"

They drove away from home and Viren stopped at Starbucks to get Jeevika some coffee.

z - "Daa me want cookie"

j - "Zaaine you already had your coffee today. No more please"

z - "Please mommy. Please daa. Just little bit"

j - "No Zaaine. Tomorrow you can have"

v - "Okay l'll be right back"

Zaaine was a little sad because he wanted Starbucks again but Jeevika wouldn't let him.

Viren came back with two coffees.

HAAH, Jeevika and Viren are so strict as parents, like they are perfect, they know how to control and discipline their little one, Zaaine, but give zaaine a piece of cookie too

z - "Daa me?" he said as Jeevika looked at him

v - "You'll get your cookies before you sleep"

z - "Thank You" he said with the biggest smile on his face

YEYEYEYEY! Zaaine gets a cookie, Aly dances aly smiles!

v - "Are you still sleepy" he said placing his hand on Jeevika's hand while his other hand was on the steering

Is this auto gear car? BDW, I loved it ❤️

j - "Yeah, but I have lots to do tonight"

v - "charts?"

j - "Charst and studying"

v - "Studying for what?"

j - "Final general sugery exam"

v - "So you decided for sure then?"

j - "Yeah I mean I had to"

v - "Had to? What do you mean?"

What does Jeevika mean? Reveal fast fast! Am waiting like hell an impatient kid! 🥱

THE UPDATE WAS SERIOUSLY ONE OF MY FAVORITES
I HAVE READ THIS 20 TIMES! ❤️

Edited by little.angel56 - 12 years ago
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Sorry kays...i forgot that i hv res this post...i posted my comments on pg151😊
Edited by vishwa94 - 12 years ago

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