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kays...weekend it almost here...u better be ready with ur update...i read the last update so many times..can't wait any longer
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Originally posted by: little.angel56


That is why you write so flawlessly!


thats probably the only part that hasnt suk in my brain! you see i pick up negative things very quickly not positive ones 
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Originally posted by: vishwa94

kays...weekend it almost here...u better be ready with ur update...i read the last update so many times..can't wait any longer


i'll try vishwa πŸ˜­ 

karina working on two essays due tomorrow

karina very tired 
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i'll try vishwa πŸ˜­ 

karina working on two essays due tomorrow

karina very tired 

aww...i will be easy on u this time bt not next time
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I still have two essays due for tomorrow and back pain, but I'm still updating!!!! Dare anyone say this is short or you will get a piece of me πŸ˜‘ JUST JOKING πŸ˜† And if you are mad/upset/sad that this is short blame in on KryRan14 (also know as Tanvi) πŸ€£ πŸ€£ πŸ€£ If you want me to continue this tell her to start being nice to me or I wont update anymore, she makes me cry πŸ˜­...I want plenty of likes and comments AND PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T RESERVE A COMMENT IF YOU'RE NOT GOING TO UNRESERVE IT (TANVI) 

chapter 19

She smiled with her eyes still closed.

j - "You're back"

v - "I'm back" he said hugging her and laying down on her chest.

v - "How was your day?"

j - "Fine we went to the mall and met Manvi there. By the way Zaaine wants to go buy his backpack with you. He said you promised him a new toy also"

v - "Oh gosh, yeah I forgot. So he didn't go with you?"

j - "Nope. He said he's going to wait till you come home" she said smiling still with her eyes shut

v - "We can take him before dinner or something. Let's go wake him up"

j - "Can you go please? I want to sleep another 10 minutes"

v - "Are you feeling okay? You usually don't sleep like this"

j - "Yeah, just a little drained out"

v - "Okay I'll go get him" he said kissing her cheek and then getting up.

By the time he went to Zaaine's room he saw him getting up from his bed. He went over and picked him up taking Zaaine by surprise.

z - "Daa you home"

v - "Yup, I'm home. How was your day. Is your head hurting?"

z - "Little little. Mommy said it be better soon"

v - "really? So what did you do today?"

z - "Mommy bought me shoes and clothes"

v - "Wow, how lucky are you"

z - "Daa you know my shoes have lights"

v - "Really? I want those shoes then"

z - "Nope, they for me only" he said laughing

v - "Okay fine they're for you only. Are you hungry?"

z - "Little"

v - "Okay lets go downstairs"

The both of them went downstairs and were in the kitchen. Zaaine was sitting on the counter-top as Viren was getting some food out.

z - '"daa where mommy?"

v - "She's upstairs sleeping"

z - "Me wake mommy up"

v - "No let her sleep a little bit. She's feeling tired"

z - "Why daa?"

v - "Because she's been working a lot thats why she's tired"

z - "Okay"

Viren started cooking dinner and looking at the time as Jeevika was still asleep. He put Zaaine in his chair and gave him his plate. He went near the stairs and yelled out Jeevika's name but she didn't respond.

v - "Zaaine finish eating, I'll be right back"

z - "Okay daa"

Viren went upstairs and saw Jeevika in bed still. He went down on her side and kneeled down next to her.

v - "Jeevs aren't you hungry?"

j - "No, you go eat I'm coming down in ten minutes"

v - "Are you sure you're okay?"

j - "Yeah, I don't know why I'm just really tired right now"

v - "How about you just lay down and I'll take Zaaine out for sometime. There's food downstairs in the kitchen so you can eat anytime you wake up"

j - "No, its fine. I'll come with you guys. Just give me 10 minutes"

v - "Okay, I'm waiting downstairs"

Jeevika nodded her head and smiled. She got up and freshened up in the bathroom. She went downstairs and saw Viren helping Zaaine wash his hands.

v - "Here you want to eat first?"

j - "I'm not hungry. Can we just pick up some coffee from Starbucks please"

v - "Yeah, let's go. Zaaine go put your shoes on"

Zaaine went over near the front door and sat down putting his shoes on by himself. Jeevika walked towards Viren and hugged him tightly. He hugged her back putting his arms around her waist. He  pat her head and just hugged her sweetly.

z - "Daa me hug also" he said cutely standing near his parents.

Both Viren and Jeevika broke their hug a bit and smiled at him. Viren picked him up and then hugged him also.

v - "Okay ready now?"

z - "Yes, but mommy no eat dinner"

j - "No, I'm not hungry Zaaine"

z - "Why mommy?"

j - "Because I ate too much at lunch time"

z - "Mee eat a lot also"

j - "I know but Zaaine is a growing so he needs to eat his food"

z - "Okay mommy"

They drove away from home and Viren stopped at Starbucks to get Jeevika some coffee.

z - "Daa me want cookie"

j - "Zaaine you already had your coffee today. No more please"

z - "Please mommy. Please daa. Just little bit"

j - "No Zaaine. Tomorrow you can have"

v - "Okay l'll be right back"

Zaaine was a little sad because he wanted Starbucks again but Jeevika wouldn't let him.

Viren came back with two coffees.

z - "Daa me?" he said as Jeevika looked at him

v - "You'll get your cookies before you sleep"

z - "Thank You" he said with the biggest smile on his face

v - "Are you still sleepy" he said placing his hand on Jeevika's hand while his other hand was on the steering

j - "Yeah, but I have lots to do tonight"

v - "charts?"

j - "Charst and studying"

v - "Studying for what?"

j - "Final general sugery exam"

v - "So you decided for sure then?"

j - "Yeah I mean I had to"

v - "Had to? What do you mean?"

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She smiled with her eyes still closed. 
This is like I started imagining Jeevika with her eyes closed and how sweet she will be looking!

j - "You're back"

v - "I'm back" he said hugging her and laying down on her chest. 

v - "How was your day?"

j - "Fine we went to the mall and met Manvi there. By the way Zaaine wants to go buy his backpack with you. He said you promised him a new toy also"

v - "Oh gosh, yeah I forgot. So he didn't go with you?"

j - "Nope. He said he's going to wait till you come home" she said smiling still with her eyes shut

v - "We can take him before dinner or something. Let's go wake him up"

Aww, Viren on her chest and they discussing their daily routine sleepy heads! How cute can this couple get, I love the way this is put in foreign land, it makes me more attached to it β€οΈ

j - "Can you go please? I want to sleep another 10 minutes"

v - "Are you feeling okay? You usually don't sleep like this"

j - "Yeah, just a little drained out"

v - "Okay I'll go get him" he said kissing her cheek and then getting up. 

Viren, is such a spotting husband! Aww, kishie on cheeks β˜ΊοΈ

By the time he went to Zaaine's room he saw him getting up from his bed. He went over and picked him up taking Zaaine by surprise. 

z - "Daa you home"

v - "Yup, I'm home. How was your day. Is your head hurting?"

z - "Little little. Mommy said it be better soon"

v - "really? So what did you do today?"

z - "Mommy bought me shoes and clothes" 

v - "Wow, how lucky are you"

z - "Daa you know my shoes have lights"

v - "Really? I want those shoes then"

z - "Nope, they for me only" he said laughing

v - "Okay fine they're for you only. Are you hungry?"

z - "Little"

v - "Okay lets go downstairs"

This is the best part, how Viren becomes a bachu like Zaaine, but still Zaaine is my favorite, I will take him to my home today.. Shoes with light, awa! Keeni, i loved this actually, because it is so common to observe! πŸ˜Š

The both of them went downstairs and were in the kitchen. Zaaine was sitting on the counter-top as Viren was getting some food out. 

z - '"daa where mommy?"

v - "She's upstairs sleeping"

z - "Me wake mommy up"

v - "No let her sleep a little bit. She's feeling tired"

z - "Why daa?"

v - "Because she's been working a lot thats why she's tired" 

z - "Okay"

Viren started cooking dinner and looking at the time as Jeevika was still asleep. He put Zaaine in his chair and gave him his plate. He went near the stairs and yelled out Jeevika's name but she didn't respond. 

Why does Zaaine asks so many questions? I don't remember if as a child I did that

v - "Zaaine finish eating, I'll be right back"

z - "Okay daa" 

Viren went upstairs and saw Jeevika in bed still. He went down on her side and kneeled down next to her. 

v - "Jeevs aren't you hungry?"

j - "No, you go eat I'm coming down in ten minutes" 

v - "Are you sure you're okay?"

j - "Yeah, I don't know why I'm just really tired right now"

v - "How about you just lay down and I'll take Zaaine out for sometime. There's food downstairs in the kitchen so you can eat anytime you wake up"

j - "No, its fine. I'll come with you guys. Just give me 10 minutes" 

v - "Okay, I'm waiting downstairs" 

Jeevika nodded her head and smiled. She got up and freshened up in the bathroom. She went downstairs and saw Viren helping Zaaine wash his hands. 

Viren? Why the hell are you so cute? πŸ˜³
You know a man like yo
u can make us girls drool over you! I will take Viren too! Okay? I know why is she tired, ha ha, i know i know πŸ€ͺ

v - "Here you want to eat first?"

j - "I'm not hungry. Can we just pick up some coffee from Starbucks please"

v - "Yeah, let's go. Zaaine go put your shoes on" 

Zaaine went over near the front door and sat down putting his shoes on by himself. Jeevika walked towards Viren and hugged him tightly. He hugged her back putting his arms around her waist. He  pat her head and just hugged her sweetly. 

Sudden hug? Jeevika loved this, you should be like this with Viren always, haha, seriuosly this was cute β˜ΊοΈ

z - "Daa me hug also" he said cutely standing near his parents. 

Both Viren and Jeevika broke their hug a bit and smiled at him. Viren picked him up and then hugged him also. 

Family hug timee!! πŸ˜³

v - "Okay ready now?" 

z - "Yes, but mommy no eat dinner"

j - "No, I'm not hungry Zaaine"

z - "Why mommy?"

j - "Because I ate too much at lunch time" 

z - "Mee eat a lot also"

j - "I know but Zaaine is a growing so he needs to eat his food" 

z - "Okay mommy"

They drove away from home and Viren stopped at Starbucks to get Jeevika some coffee. 

z - "Daa me want cookie"

j - "Zaaine you already had your coffee today. No more please"

z - "Please mommy. Please daa. Just little bit"

j - "No Zaaine. Tomorrow you can have"

v - "Okay l'll be right back"

Zaaine was a little sad because he wanted Starbucks again but Jeevika wouldn't let him. 

Viren came back with two coffees. 

HAAH, Jeevika and Viren are so strict as parents, like they are perfect, they know how to control and discipline their little one, Zaaine, but give zaaine a piece of cookie too 

z - "Daa me?" he said as Jeevika looked at him

v - "You'll get your cookies before you sleep"

z - "Thank You" he said with the biggest smile on his face

YEYEYEYEY! Zaaine gets a cookie, Aly dances aly smiles! 

v - "Are you still sleepy" he said placing his hand on Jeevika's hand while his other hand was on the steering

Is this auto gear car? BDW, I loved it β€οΈ

j - "Yeah, but I have lots to do tonight"

v - "charts?"

j - "Charst and studying"

v - "Studying for what?"

j - "Final general sugery exam"

v - "So you decided for sure then?"

j - "Yeah I mean I had to"

v - "Had to? What do you mean?"

What does Jeevika mean? Reveal fast fast! Am waiting like hell an impatient kid! πŸ₯±

THE UPDATE WAS SERIOUSLY ONE OF MY FAVORITES
I HAVE READ THIS 20 TIMES! β€οΈ

Edited by little.angel56 - 11 years ago
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Sorry kays...i forgot that i hv res this post...i posted my comments on pg151😊Edited by vishwa94 - 11 years ago
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outstanding update...loved it...
zaaine β€οΈ β€οΈ β€οΈ 

when viren came back n hugged her n layed down on her chest i was like β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ
sooo romantic...
 
zaaine is sooo cute that he wanted to buy backpack with his daa n mommy both...😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š 

just love father-son duo...viren becomes child with his child sooo awesome...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

v - "Really? I want those shoes then"

z - "Nope, they for me only" he said laughing

zaaine ask soo much questions πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

viren is just perfect...A caring husband n loving father...

loved the part when virika were hugging n zaaine came n ask them to hug him also awww that was tooo adorable... 
brilliant update as a whole...loved it...

continue soon...
Edited by sweetdollashita - 11 years ago
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As soon as i started reading i knew this was going to be a amazing update(obviously the beginning of the story and not the part where your bitching about me)!!!!
Awesome!!!!
I can literally imagine everything as i read!!!!
There is a beautiful flow in your story which is sometimes even missing in novels!!!!

Awww the first virika scene!!! Viren lying on her chest and they discussing their day!!!😳
Viren is such a caring husband!! 
Virika is the most perfect couple yet so realistic!!!
Viren giving jeevika kissie on cheek☺️

Zaaine and viren are the best father and son duo ever!!! Both are so adorable!!!
Viren becomes a kid when he is around zaaine!!!
Love it whenever zaaine calls viren daa!!! I so want to pull zaaine's cheek!!!
Cutest kid ever!!! The shoes having light convo!!!
I have actually seen my nephew and cousin bro having such convos!!! Zaaine is so caring!!! The way he inquired about his mommy!!! awww...

Viren is so cute!!!! I feel like pulling his cheeks tooπŸ˜†
He is the best husband!!!! 

Jeevika hugged vien tightly!!!☺️ Mommy is also as cute as zaaine and viren!!!
The cutest family!!!

I wonder why is she having such mood swings? Is viren to be blamed for it?🀣
Loved the family hug!!! That made me smile like an idiot!!!πŸ˜ƒ

Jeevika is the strict mommy and viren is pampering father!!! Thats what is the case in most of the families around!!! Viren so knows how to cheer our little zaaine up!!!
I got so happy for zaaine when i heard he is getting a cookie like i was getting one!!!πŸ˜†

Awww viren holding jeevika's hand while driving!!!! How adorable can they get?😊

They are the cutest , most adorable and the most perfect family ever!!!❀️

Was it compulsory for you to stop at such a point! I can never bear such suspense!! This makes me so restless!!!
grrr...😑

I can just go on and on praising this update but then my comment might become longer than your update!!

BTW This update was so small!!!🀣
And i never make you cry!!!πŸ˜•

Karina your a born writer!!! 
Your writing skills are very good!! πŸ‘
I am telling forget about becoming a doc and become a writer!!!! You will do great!!!πŸ˜†
Actually become a writer who is even a detective!!! πŸ€£
I love you so much dumbo!!!❀️

❀️❀️



p.s- Can you stop portraying me as a baddie in front of everyone!!😑 


Edited by KryRan14 - 11 years ago
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karina i love u ... love u love u love u.. sry being pagl but really surprised but really really thanks for updating just love it... and how is ur back pain ???? best of luck for ur essay i noe you will do it superbbly... bcoz u r awesome ... <3 <3 <3 <3 
thnks for the PM tooo 

tusi great hooo... 

a joke for u please read it:
Sardar : murgi kitne ka? Murgiwala 70 50 10.
Sardar Rs 10? itna sasta kyon? 
Murgiwala : Sir,isko aids hai,
Sardar : koi baat nehi,dedo kahna hai sona thodi hai.
Edited by nishyrelan - 11 years ago