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For those who are waiting here...
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-Anu

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Part 54
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Geet was feeling utterly bad whole night because she had stopped Maan. What had brought this change in her that she could deny Maan, how could she keep her wishes above his? Her all happiness lied in him then how could she think of her wish individually above his'.

No she did not like this change and she will never let this change over come her. Yes she was little upset that he left her all alone but she knew he himself was feeling so bad for it. It's her job to make him feel good rather then pampering her own pain. His love was so powerful on her that it can cover up for all those lonliness. Then instead of embracing his love why was she pushing it away, giving both of them pain.

Geet had slept late night, so when she woke up in morning Maan had done his jogging, fed Maanya and with help of Nakul got her ready too.It was Sunday so he was in kitchen when Geet woke up.

"Maan" he heard her when he was busy making her favorite sandwitch. Geet hugged him tight from back.

"I am sorry" Geet said in low voice. Maan turned and hugged her "hey for what, sleeping so late?"

"woo, last night' I " he placed is finger on her lips "shhh" Geet hid her face on his chest

"Well sleeping beauty, get freshen up fast and breakfast in just coming'" Maan did not want to discuss anything that made her feel guilty because he knew he was at fault that had hurt her so much.

But before she could talk to Maan, her misery increased with the knock and his parents entered. She knew they will say more things to him, putting him on more guilty side. She hated everyone blaming Maan but what could she say. It was them who had supported her in Maan's absence when her own family went against her decision, they have showered their all love on her and they were his parents, she could say nothing. They could say anything to their son, how could she interrupt but again and again blame on him?

"Maan, we were missing Maanya and Geet" his father announced making it very clear while his mother's eyes filled with tears. Mother is a mother, seeing her son after two years and he not allowed staying with them'. But she was trying to be strong because of his father's decision.

Maan quietly took his mother aside while his dad got busy with Maanya' Geet was standing like spectator, observing Maan. Maan took blessings of his mother, she hugged him, kissed him on his forehead and complained to him in her own motherly way. Maan acceptedd all the blames, held his ears when Man heard a loud strong voice of his dad

"Maan" and then he announced that thye will take Maanya with them for few days

"But why dad" "why means, she is our granddaughter and we are used to her and we are missing her."

Maan looked confused with sudden announcement, but his head was so much loaded with guilt that he was in no place to argue.

"dad its just few days I have been with her, I have just known she exist in my life' dad please understand."

Geet felt like crying at Maan's condition, only had she forgiven him in this one week's time, his head would not have been so low.

"Today suddenly we have no right to spend few days with her." Maan could not say anything but the thought of staying away from Maanya at this point seemed impossible for Maan.

Geet was on other side blaming herself for Maan's condition, where he could say nothing.

His dad signaled his mom. "Maan come with me beta"

In the room "Maan you know your dad, he is angry with you and he will not talk straight with you"

"But mom, Maanya" "Beta, we want you and Geet to spend some time alone. We are elders dear, we see things in other way than you. Geet needs complete you for some days. We have felt how she has longed for you. It makes no difference son, if Maanya stays with you or us, OK. Go plan your honeymoon for as many days and bring your old Geet back. We have observed her craving for you and only you can bring her back."

They took Maanya with them, while Maan knew the reason, Geet felt bad that Maan was not in condition to speak for his own daughter

"It's all my fault. No I can't let Maan's head bent low with guilt. I can't, I can't think of myself above Maan, no never."

When later on Geet went to Maan, he was busy on his lappy'.

"Maan woo'." Maan smiling turned to her, he softly pulled her and made her sit on his lap. Geet laid her cheeks on his chest

"Earlier you used scold me and teach me for my mistake, now you don't even complain. You have changed"

Maan hugged her tighter "you were my baby then, now my baby is grown up MOM" Geet could feel pain in his voice though he tried to sound teasing, the pain that she has changed.

"I always want to stay as your princess Maan"

Maan changed the topic.. "OK, as Maanya is gone with Mom n Dad, do you wish to go somewhere out with me for few days."

Geet looked up "why you are asking, you plan for us always."

"Geet you are my wife, I need to ask your wish before making any decision" "Anyways Geet, I failed in decision making. I failed big time and you are a grown up now, you are my wife, my partner, we take decision together from now OK."

Geet hugged him tighter "Maan your decision is my decision and you can never be wrong for me' whatever happened just happened. You are my strength, my belief, my existence."

She then held his collar "Dare you say you anything against yourself."

"per tumhee to naraz ho mujhse" "woo mera haq hai aapka nahi"

After a little nok jhok they decided, parents are right, they need to spend few days exclusively for themselves after this two years of separation.

They later went to KM to see Maanya. It was very emotional moment for Maan and family. His dad allowed him to visit KM and though he himself refrained from showing any emotion to Maan he let free everyone. Viccky already saw him in office daily but it as Annie and Dadima who made him emotional. Maan's dad announced that they are not getting Maanya for whole one month. That was tough, very tough but even they realized this was needed. They hugged and kissed Maanya and promised to video chat her regularly till this one month time frame which she did not understand at all.

Maan's dad then gave key to Maan "I bought this exclusively for your mom but for our Geet have it."

Later:

Geet wanted to know where Maan had decided to take her, while Maan just mischiviously smiled when she asked. He was not being able to keep his hand off her, he would always pull her towards him and touch her in all different ways but kept his limit when at last Geet got irritated'

Geet pulled him at last ' "Dare you wait for my permission now. Yesterday I said NO uske liye sorry, are you going to punish me for that"

Maan pulled her closer in jerk and nuzzled his nose on her shoulder between her hairs and in his husky voice said

"No, I am holding for our honeymoon, thinking how you will handle this Maan then."

"how my delicate princess will handle the craziness going within me" and he rolled his hand sensuously on her back making Geet completely blush. The way he said all, she hid her face in his chest

"This delicate princess can take anything from you, I am ready" she said in low voice

"and" she stopped "and what" "and I don't like this holding of yours" she was going crazy with his sensoual touches and then his holding after that.

With this Maan's patience went loose, he pulled her even closer and tighter, roughly and next second their lips were glued and in and in their toung were fighting to explore each other. Their hands roaming behind others back senselessly. Maans hand went inside her shirt while Geet's fingers started playing crazily with his buttons fighting to open it. Their lips still glued, Maan helped her.

Soon they were lying on couch, their shirts on floor, and they were feeling, kissing, and nibbling each other hungrily like a person stranded on an island without food for years. It was evening and they were glued skin to skin with each other.Maan's hand was still running along and soft skin sending shivers thru her veins yet making her feel so complete. At this moment she didn't even want to think of her pain, why would she if her happiness is with her. He was with her, that's it. Maan was her life she knew, only if he is every second with her all her life, she don't want to complain of anything.

Geet pouted her lips and Maan kissed it. He knew, he have to completely be with her and his princess will be back to him.

"I have saved it for honeymoon baby. I want to make it special for you after so long. You know how hard it is for me to hold" he said giving tight passionate squeeze on her waist.

"But where are we going" she said as her fingers roamed on his face. She was not getting enough of him.

"Miami" "Miami?" Geet asked surprised. Maan showed her the keys his dad has given him.

Next: Miami

Hi All,

I know many of you want punishment for Maan. But this is a love story and Geet's selfless crazy love for Maan. And we don't give tit for tat treatment to our loved ones . Their happiness is alwyas beyond us so my apology to all who are waiting for Maan's punishment.

Hope you all like the update. Please comment and likes to motivate.

-Anu

Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm ...innocent love
So true
Lovely update.
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this par was simply great
maan parents made the right decision
geet love for only made her forget everything
waiting for next
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Lovely update dear :D
Both are feeling guilty. And if maan gets a punishment geet will also suffer coz he means the world to her.
I guess maan already got his punishment by staying away from hi family and now from maanya.
Miami. Wow sounds interesting ;)
Cant wait for more :D
Forgot to add : loved this line : " i always want to stay as your princess maan" beautiful. Geet wants to remain his baby. She doesnt want to take decision. 😳 👏
Edited by sonu4ever - 12 years ago

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